| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.31% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 899 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "tightly" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.57% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 899 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "oppressive" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "magnetic" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "gleaming" | | 9 | "tangible" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "wavered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.62% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 894 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 9 | | wordCount | 818 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.49 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 4 | | Multiple | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Multiple" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 88.14% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.119 | | wordCount | 894 | | matches | | 0 | "not as sound but as pressure" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 33.11 | | std | 19.56 | | cv | 0.591 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 53 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 21 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 135 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 12.99% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 66 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "The rational part of her mind catalogued escape routes—three gaps between the standing stones that could serve as exits." | | 1 | "The response came not as sound but as pressure—a weight settling over her shoulders like invisible hands." | | 2 | "\"The pendant remembers this place,\" the voice continued, and now she could see the speaker—or speakers." |
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| 99.91% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 823 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.040097205346294046 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013365735115431349 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 66 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 66 | | mean | 13.55 | | std | 6.37 | | cv | 0.47 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 74.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.48484848484848486 | | totalSentences | 66 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 58.48% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Too large, too bright, too" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd come here following whispers" | | 1 | "Her voice cracked the quiet" | | 2 | "She took another step deeper" | | 3 | "They led in a perfect" | | 4 | "she whispered, remembering what little" | | 5 | "She wasn't alone." | | 6 | "Her fingers found the pendant," | | 7 | "She looked down to find" | | 8 | "She shook her head, trying" | | 9 | "They watched her with the" | | 10 | "It was the only thing" |
| | ratio | 0.193 | |
| 82.81% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks loomed against" | | 1 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant hung heavy" | | 3 | "She'd come here following whispers" | | 4 | "Something about answers hidden in" | | 5 | "The pendant had pulsed stronger" | | 6 | "The wildflowers that supposedly bloomed" | | 7 | "The silence pressed against her" | | 8 | "Her voice cracked the quiet" | | 9 | "The pendant's warmth increased, becoming" | | 10 | "She took another step deeper" | | 11 | "Footprints marked the soft earth" | | 12 | "They led in a perfect" | | 13 | "she whispered, remembering what little" | | 14 | "The rational part of her" | | 15 | "The pendant's glow intensified with" | | 16 | "A branch snapped somewhere behind" | | 17 | "Rory spun around, her breath" | | 18 | "Nothing moved among the trees." | | 19 | "The standing stones stood empty" |
| | ratio | 0.754 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 17.86% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter as she stepped between the massive standing stones that marked the boundary of Isolde's grove, her trainers silent against the mo…" | | 1 | "She'd come here following whispers in her dreams, fragments of memory that weren't quite her own." | | 2 | "But even as she spoke, her words seemed to die mere inches from her lips, swallowed by the thick air that tasted of copper and forgotten things." | | 3 | "Bare feet, larger than her own, with elongated toes that ended in what looked suspiciously like claw marks." | | 4 | "But her feet carried her forward, following the strange prints as if pulled by invisible threads." | | 5 | "The pendant's glow intensified with each step, casting crimson shadows that danced and writhed across the oak bark." | | 6 | "Something watched her from the darkness between the oaks, something that breathed without sound and moved without disturbing the fallen leaves." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She shook, trying to clear the growing haze" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "the voice continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |