Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXR0Y5CEFYQHKK7WD3XPD6

Run Details

Duration:
32.0s
Cost:
$0.021663

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks loomed against the midnight sky like sentinels guarding secrets too old for mortal understanding. Rory pulled her jacket tighter as she stepped between the massive standing stones that marked the boundary of Isolde's grove, her trainers silent against the moss-covered ground. The Heartstone pendant hung heavy against her chest, its faint warmth the only comfort in the oppressive darkness. She'd come here following whispers in her dreams, fragments of memory that weren't quite her own. Something about answers hidden in the space between worlds, about truths that could only be found when the veil grew thin. The pendant had pulsed stronger with each step toward Richmond Park, drawing her like a lodestone toward magnetic north. But now, standing within the grove's embrace, every instinct screamed that she'd made a terrible mistake. The wildflowers that supposedly bloomed year-round lay withered and black, their petals scattered like ash across the clearing floor. No wind stirred the branches overhead, yet leaves fell in steady patterns around her, each one landing with a sound like brittle bone breaking. The silence pressed against her eardrums until she could hear her own heartbeat thundering in the stillness. "Right. Brilliant idea, Rory." Her voice cracked the quiet like gunfire. "Come alone to the magical murder grove. What could possibly go wrong?" But even as she spoke, her words seemed to die mere inches from her lips, swallowed by the thick air that tasted of copper and forgotten things. The pendant's warmth increased, becoming almost uncomfortable against her skin. She took another step deeper into the clearing and froze. Footprints marked the soft earth ahead of her. Fresh ones. Bare feet, larger than her own, with elongated toes that ended in what looked suspiciously like claw marks. They led in a perfect circle around the grove's centre, where a ring of mushrooms glowed with sickly phosphorescence. "Time moves differently here," she whispered, remembering what little she'd learned about this place. "Could be old prints. Could be from yesterday. Or next week." The rational part of her mind catalogued escape routes—three gaps between the standing stones that could serve as exits. But her feet carried her forward, following the strange prints as if pulled by invisible threads. The pendant's glow intensified with each step, casting crimson shadows that danced and writhed across the oak bark. A branch snapped somewhere behind her. Rory spun around, her breath misting in the suddenly frigid air. Nothing moved among the trees. The standing stones stood empty and impassive, their surfaces gleaming like polished bone in the pendant's light. But the wrongness in the air thickened, becoming almost tangible. She wasn't alone. The certainty settled in her chest like lead. Something watched her from the darkness between the oaks, something that breathed without sound and moved without disturbing the fallen leaves. Her fingers found the pendant, gripping it so tightly the silver chain bit into her neck. Another footstep. Closer this time. Then another. "I know you're there." The words tumbled out before she could stop them. "What do you want?" The response came not as sound but as pressure—a weight settling over her shoulders like invisible hands. The mushroom ring pulsed brighter, casting everything in hellish relief. In the shifting light, she caught glimpses of movement at the edge of her vision. Tall shapes that might have been trees, if trees could lean and sway with predatory intent. The footprints in the earth began to glow. Rory stumbled backward, her heel catching on something soft and yielding. She looked down to find more mushrooms sprouting from the ground where she'd stepped, their caps opening like tiny mouths lined with needle teeth. The spores they released shimmered in the air, and where they touched her skin, numbness spread. "No, no, no." She shook her head, trying to clear the growing haze. "This is wrong. All wrong." But the spores worked their way into her lungs with each breath, and the world began to tilt sideways. The standing stones wavered like reflections in disturbed water. The darkness between the trees took on substance, flowing toward her like thick oil. And in that darkness, eyes opened. Not human eyes. Too large, too bright, too hungry. They watched her with the patience of something that had waited centuries and could wait centuries more. The pendant burned against her chest now, hot enough to sear, but she couldn't let go. It was the only thing anchoring her to herself as the mushroom spores rewrote her perception of reality. "You came when called." The voice emerged from everywhere and nowhere, speaking words that bypassed her ears entirely and settled directly into her bones. "As we knew you would." Rory tried to run, but her legs moved as if through treacle. The grove stretched and contracted around her, distances becoming meaningless. The circle of mushrooms expanded until it surrounded her completely, their glow turning the air the colour of fresh blood. "The pendant remembers this place," the voice continued, and now she could see the speaker—or speakers. Multiple forms moved in the shadows, tall and angular, with too many joints in all the wrong places. "It was made here, in the time before time. And it calls its children home." The crimson light from her pendant met the phosphorescent glow of the mushrooms, and where they touched, reality cracked like glass.
total_cost0.021663

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount899
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"tightly"
2"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount899
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"oppressive"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"magnetic"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"gleaming"
count1
9
word"tangible"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"shimmered"
count1
12
word"wavered"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"warmth"
3"oppressive"
4"pulsed"
5"magnetic"
6"silence"
7"perfect"
8"gleaming"
9"tangible"
10"weight"
11"shimmered"
12"wavered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
47.62% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords894
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount818
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Isolde1
Heartstone1
Richmond1
Park1
Rory4
Multiple1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Rory"
2"Multiple"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite her own"
88.14% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.119
wordCount894
matches
0"not as sound but as pressure"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"screamed that she'd"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean33.11
std19.56
cv0.591
sampleLengths
062
156
216
360
423
537
610
747
825
953
106
1143
123
1345
147
1517
1658
178
1851
1918
2042
216
2260
2329
2442
2549
2621
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs135
matches(empty)
12.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences66
ratio0.045
matches
0"The rational part of her mind catalogued escape routes—three gaps between the standing stones that could serve as exits."
1"The response came not as sound but as pressure—a weight settling over her shoulders like invisible hands."
2"\"The pendant remembers this place,\" the voice continued, and now she could see the speaker—or speakers."
99.91% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount823
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.040097205346294046
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.013365735115431349
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean13.55
std6.37
cv0.47
sampleLengths
017
127
218
316
421
519
616
719
824
917
1011
1112
1227
1310
1410
158
162
1718
1819
1914
2011
2119
2216
2318
246
2511
265
2717
2810
293
308
3121
3216
332
343
352
3613
374
3817
3910
4015
4116
428
4311
4424
4516
4613
475
4819
499
74.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.48484848484848486
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners32
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Too large, too bright, too"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences57
matches
0"She'd come here following whispers"
1"Her voice cracked the quiet"
2"She took another step deeper"
3"They led in a perfect"
4"she whispered, remembering what little"
5"She wasn't alone."
6"Her fingers found the pendant,"
7"She looked down to find"
8"She shook her head, trying"
9"They watched her with the"
10"It was the only thing"
ratio0.193
82.81% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences57
matches
0"The ancient oaks loomed against"
1"Rory pulled her jacket tighter"
2"The Heartstone pendant hung heavy"
3"She'd come here following whispers"
4"Something about answers hidden in"
5"The pendant had pulsed stronger"
6"The wildflowers that supposedly bloomed"
7"The silence pressed against her"
8"Her voice cracked the quiet"
9"The pendant's warmth increased, becoming"
10"She took another step deeper"
11"Footprints marked the soft earth"
12"They led in a perfect"
13"she whispered, remembering what little"
14"The rational part of her"
15"The pendant's glow intensified with"
16"A branch snapped somewhere behind"
17"Rory spun around, her breath"
18"Nothing moved among the trees."
19"The standing stones stood empty"
ratio0.754
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Rory pulled her jacket tighter as she stepped between the massive standing stones that marked the boundary of Isolde's grove, her trainers silent against the mo…"
1"She'd come here following whispers in her dreams, fragments of memory that weren't quite her own."
2"But even as she spoke, her words seemed to die mere inches from her lips, swallowed by the thick air that tasted of copper and forgotten things."
3"Bare feet, larger than her own, with elongated toes that ended in what looked suspiciously like claw marks."
4"But her feet carried her forward, following the strange prints as if pulled by invisible threads."
5"The pendant's glow intensified with each step, casting crimson shadows that danced and writhed across the oak bark."
6"Something watched her from the darkness between the oaks, something that breathed without sound and moved without disturbing the fallen leaves."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She shook, trying to clear the growing haze"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"the voice continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.333
77.4704%