Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXR2XH0Z2SR7C7JD1SY3TM

Run Details

Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.022492
Provider:
Fireworks

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the Soho pavement into mirrors that reflected fractured neon. Quinn's boots struck wet concrete with metronomic regularity, eighteen years of Metropolitan Police service converting her pursuit into mechanical efficiency. Her leather watch strap clung to her left wrist, saturated, the worn leather darkened almost to black. The dial caught the distinctive green neon of The Raven's Nest sign as she passed the bar doorway—she noted it, filed it, didn't slow. Three years since DS Morris died in that warehouse, surrounded by symbols that dissolved under forensic lights and a smell like burning hair. She pushed the memory down. Focused on the man ahead, his short curly hair plastered dark against his skull, his olive skin gleaming under streetlamps as he vaulted a railing toward Camden High Street. Tomás Herrera. Twenty-nine years old. Born Seville. Former NHS paramedic. Current ghost in her case files regarding the clique's criminal activity. "Tommy!" Her voice cracked against the rain and traffic noise. "Metropolitan Police. Stop." He didn't turn. The Saint Christopher medallion bounced against his chest with each stride. He dodged left between parked cars, his scarred left forearm—a knife attack from his Seville youth, according to his redacted NHS records—flashing pale under sodium vapor lights. Quinn sprinted, her salt-and-pepper hair cropped tight against her scalp in military fashion, dripping rainwater into her brown eyes. She cleared the railing with a precision that spoke of drilled muscle memory, her sharp jaw set hard against the November chill. Herrera had lost his medical license after administering unauthorized treatments to patients who didn't exist in standard databases—patients with impossible injuries. Now he ran toward the one location her confidential informants whispered about when drunk, the place that relocated every full moon beneath forgotten parts of the city. Her fingers grazed the radio at her shoulder. Static. Dead zone already, though she stood only blocks from active transmitters. The rain interfered, or something else did, something that turned technology to scrap. Herrera reached the chained entrance of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Rusted links and yellow hazard tape marked the stairwell as condemned. He slipped through a gap between the barriers with the ease of repetition—he'd done this before, many times. Quinn followed, her breath controlled despite the burn in her thighs, maintaining the tactical spacing she'd learned in her early service years. The stairwell swallowed streetlight. Darkness pressed against her retinas, thick as velvet, smelling of mold and ozone. At the bottom, a tunnel extended into the earth. Bioluminescence flickered ahead—impossible blues and violets painting the Victorian tiles, casting shadows that moved independently of the light source. The air shifted, heavy with the scent of copper, myrrh, and something sweet like rotting pears. She slowed, her hand hovering near her service weapon. The walls bore graffiti that seemed to writhe when viewed peripherally, symbols almost matching those from Morris's death scene. Herrera stood at the platform's edge, breathing hard, his back to her. Beyond him, the abandoned station had transformed. Stalls constructed from human bone and black velvet lined the railway tracks. Merchants in hooded cloaks exchanged goods that glowed with internal fire—crystal vials containing alchemical substances that shifted between liquid and smoke, enchanted blades that sang discordant notes when touched, bundles of information brokered in whispers too low to catch but loud enough to make her molars ache. The Veil Market. Morris had mentioned it the week before he died, his voice tight with fear she'd mistaken for drug-induced paranoia. "Turn around, Tommy." Her command cut through the damp air, steady despite her racing pulse. "You're obstructing a police investigation. The clique's activities end tonight." He pivoted. Warm brown eyes met hers, calculating, devoid of the panic she'd expected. "You don't have the token, Detective Quinn. You cannot pass the threshold." "I don't require permission to enforce the law." "Law?" He laughed, sharp and humorless, gesturing at the commerce surrounding them. "Down here, your eighteen years of decorated service mean less than dust. Your military precision won't help you navigate exchange rates measured in blood and memory." He pointed to the tunnel mouth where a figure in a hooded robe watched, silent as ancient stone. "Turn back. DS Morris didn't respect the boundaries. Look what found him in that warehouse." Her fingers whitened on her weapon grip. The leather watch on her left wrist ticked audibly, counting seconds she couldn't afford to lose. The robed figure—guard or gatekeeper—raised a skeletal hand, revealing a token carved from actual bone, etched with precise lunar phases. The entry requirement. She lacked it. Herrera stepped backward into the gloom, his medallion catching the strange bioluminescent light. "Your bearing is impressive, Quinn. But discipline means nothing to entities that don't obey physics. Step into the Veil without the bone token, and you forfeit more than your badge. You forfeit your reflection, your name, your linear time." She advanced to the platform's edge. Rainwater from the world above pooled at her boots, bleeding into the limestone dust of the abandoned station. The market breathed behind him—the clink of alchemical glass containing banned substances, the rustle of enchanted fabrics that changed color with the viewer's intent, whispered negotiations in languages that existed before human speech. Three years of unanswered questions about Morris's death coiled in her chest, heavy as lead, hot as anger. The hooded guard spoke, voice like grinding tectonic plates shifting against each other. "Entry requires sacrifice, detective. Blood or bone. Payment precedes passage. Choose your forfeiture, or retreat to the rain-soaked streets where your jurisdiction holds meaning." Herrera vanished into the crowd of shadows and alchemical smoke, a ghost returning to the machine. Quinn stared at the bone token glinting in the robed figure's palm. She checked her watch. The hour hand trembled toward midnight. Above, thunder rolled across Camden, distant and safe, belonging to the world of paperwork and procedure and criminals who carried knives instead of curses. She could retreat. File another unexplained incident. Return to the Metropolitan Police headquarters where Morris's death remained a cold case marked "unsolved" rather than "consumed by the supernatural." Or she could descend into the dark and discover what banned substance had actually dissolved her partner from the inside out, what alchemical fire had burned those symbols into the warehouse floor. Her fingers hovered at the gap between her world and theirs. The rain-soaked streets of London waited behind her, predictable, governed by laws she understood. The bone token gleamed before her, promising answers wrapped in danger. She stood at the threshold, military precision holding her rigid against the pull of the unknown.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1111
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1111
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"mechanical"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"standard"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count2
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"constructed"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count1
9
word"racing"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"calculating"
count1
12
word"navigate"
count1
13
word"measured"
count1
14
word"etched"
count1
15
word"gloom"
count1
16
word"glinting"
count1
17
word"trembled"
count1
18
word"predictable"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"mechanical"
2"gleaming"
3"chill"
4"standard"
5"velvet"
6"flickered"
7"constructed"
8"crystal"
9"racing"
10"pulse"
11"calculating"
12"navigate"
13"measured"
14"etched"
15"gloom"
16"glinting"
17"trembled"
18"predictable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences70
matches
0"t with fear"
61.22% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences70
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1095
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount948
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Metropolitan2
Police2
Raven1
Nest1
Morris5
Camden3
High1
Street1
Herrera6
Seville2
Saint1
Christopher1
November1
Tube1
Victorian1
Veil1
Market1
London1
Quinn4
persons
0"Police"
1"Raven"
2"Morris"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"November"
7"Victorian"
8"Market"
9"Quinn"
places
0"Soho"
1"Metropolitan"
2"Camden"
3"High"
4"Street"
5"Seville"
6"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"graffiti that seemed to writhe when viewed peripherally, symbols almost matching those from Morris's death scene"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1095
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean47.61
std30.67
cv0.644
sampleLengths
0129
121
213
341
489
533
680
772
8100
925
1026
118
1271
1349
1452
1575
1637
1716
1846
1928
2032
2136
2216
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs166
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences77
ratio0.104
matches
0"The dial caught the distinctive green neon of The Raven's Nest sign as she passed the bar doorway—she noted it, filed it, didn't slow."
1"He dodged left between parked cars, his scarred left forearm—a knife attack from his Seville youth, according to his redacted NHS records—flashing pale under sodium vapor lights."
2"Herrera had lost his medical license after administering unauthorized treatments to patients who didn't exist in standard databases—patients with impossible injuries."
3"He slipped through a gap between the barriers with the ease of repetition—he'd done this before, many times."
4"Bioluminescence flickered ahead—impossible blues and violets painting the Victorian tiles, casting shadows that moved independently of the light source."
5"Merchants in hooded cloaks exchanged goods that glowed with internal fire—crystal vials containing alchemical substances that shifted between liquid and smoke, enchanted blades that sang discordant notes when touched, bundles of information brokered in whispers too low to catch but loud enough to make her molars ache."
6"The robed figure—guard or gatekeeper—raised a skeletal hand, revealing a token carved from actual bone, etched with precise lunar phases."
7"The market breathed behind him—the clink of alchemical glass containing banned substances, the rustle of enchanted fabrics that changed color with the viewer's intent, whispered negotiations in languages that existed before human speech."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount963
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.016614745586708203
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007268951194184839
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean14.22
std9.63
cv0.677
sampleLengths
011
120
217
324
423
55
629
72
83
92
103
1111
1210
133
143
1511
1627
1719
1822
1921
2027
218
221
2311
2413
2512
2611
2718
2822
294
3013
319
3219
3316
349
3519
3612
377
3812
3947
403
4119
4215
4310
442
4512
4612
478
4812
4944
82.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5194805194805194
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences66
matches
0"Her leather watch strap clung"
1"She pushed the memory down."
2"Her voice cracked against the"
3"He didn't turn."
4"He dodged left between parked"
5"She cleared the railing with"
6"Her fingers grazed the radio"
7"He slipped through a gap"
8"She slowed, her hand hovering"
9"Her command cut through the"
10"He laughed, sharp and humorless,"
11"He pointed to the tunnel"
12"Her fingers whitened on her"
13"She lacked it."
14"She advanced to the platform's"
15"She checked her watch."
16"She could retreat."
17"Her fingers hovered at the"
18"She stood at the threshold,"
ratio0.288
88.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences66
matches
0"Quinn's boots struck wet concrete"
1"Her leather watch strap clung"
2"The dial caught the distinctive"
3"She pushed the memory down."
4"Her voice cracked against the"
5"He didn't turn."
6"The Saint Christopher medallion bounced"
7"He dodged left between parked"
8"Quinn sprinted, her salt-and-pepper hair"
9"She cleared the railing with"
10"Herrera had lost his medical"
11"Her fingers grazed the radio"
12"The rain interfered, or something"
13"Herrera reached the chained entrance"
14"He slipped through a gap"
15"Quinn followed, her breath controlled"
16"The stairwell swallowed streetlight."
17"Darkness pressed against her retinas,"
18"Bioluminescence flickered ahead—impossible blues and"
19"The air shifted, heavy with"
ratio0.742
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Now he ran toward the"
ratio0.015
9.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Three years since DS Morris died in that warehouse, surrounded by symbols that dissolved under forensic lights and a smell like burning hair."
1"She cleared the railing with a precision that spoke of drilled muscle memory, her sharp jaw set hard against the November chill."
2"Herrera had lost his medical license after administering unauthorized treatments to patients who didn't exist in standard databases—patients with impossible inj…"
3"Now he ran toward the one location her confidential informants whispered about when drunk, the place that relocated every full moon beneath forgotten parts of t…"
4"Bioluminescence flickered ahead—impossible blues and violets painting the Victorian tiles, casting shadows that moved independently of the light source."
5"Merchants in hooded cloaks exchanged goods that glowed with internal fire—crystal vials containing alchemical substances that shifted between liquid and smoke, …"
6"The market breathed behind him—the clink of alchemical glass containing banned substances, the rustle of enchanted fabrics that changed color with the viewer's …"
7"Above, thunder rolled across Camden, distant and safe, belonging to the world of paperwork and procedure and criminals who carried knives instead of curses."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.083
leniency0.167
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.167
83.1693%