Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXR7NZ0SG7H9TRQ6ASNN80

Run Details

Duration:
18.7s
Cost:
$0.007520
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory squeezed the handlebars of her bicycle until the rubber grips groaned. The tires hissed over a carpet of damp oak leaves, the only sound in the suffocating stillness of Richmond Park. Behind her, the orange glow of London’s light pollution bled out against the horizon. Ahead, the trees knit together into a wall of impenetrable velvet. The Heartstone Pendant against her sternum burned. It wasn’t the comforting heat of a hand-warmer, but a frantic, rhythmic throbbing that mimicked a panicked heart. She reached beneath her windbreaker, pressing her palm against the crimson gem. It pulsed through her shirt, a warning written in heat. Why did I agree to this? Yu-Fei had been specific. The delivery address wasn't a house number or a street name, just a set of coordinates scrawled on a grease-stained napkin and a heavy velvet pouch filled with gold coins. *Deliver the box to the grove beyond the standing stones,* Yu-Fei had said, her eyes never lifting from the wok. *Do not look at the customer. Do not accept a tip. Do not linger.* Rory dismounted, the kickstand clicking like a skeletal finger. The air changed. The city’s distant hum—the sirens, the rhythmic pulse of tires on asphalt—vanished. A heavy, floral scent overthrew the smell of wet earth and exhaust. Bluebells crushed beneath her boots, though they had no business blooming in the biting chill of October. She marched toward the oak standing stones. They loomed ten feet tall, jagged pillars of wood petrified into something harder than granite. Bark spiraled up their lengths in patterns that suggested screaming faces caught in mid-unraveling. "Hello?" The word fell flat, swallowed by the moss. No echo returned. She crossed the threshold. The temperature plummeted. A mist crawled out from the roots of the trees, swirling around her ankles like white, grasping fingers. Every step felt heavier, as if the air itself had thickened into a viscous soup. A snap echoed from the treeline to her left. Rory spun. Her flashlight beam cut a jagged yellow hole in the dark. Empty trunks. Gnarled branches reached out, frozen in gestures of supplication. Nothing moved. Yet, the sensation of needles prickling the back of her neck intensified. I’m being measured. She tightened her grip on the delivery thermal bag. The weight inside shifted—not the slosh of soup or the slide of rice containers, but something dense and wet. "Is anyone here? I have the order from the Golden Empress." A rustle started in the canopy. It didn't sound like wind. It sounded like silk dragging over dry bone. Rory stepped deeper into the clearing. The wildflowers here glowed with a faint, bioluminescent pallor, casting the grove in an undersea light. Time felt elastic. Had she been walking for minutes? Her watch showed the second hand ticking, every movement sluggish, as if the cogs struggled against invisible sand. Something pale flickered behind a tree to her right. She swung the light. A flash of white—too long to be a rabbit, too fluid to be a person—disappeared behind an ancient oak. "I'm just leaving the bag on the stone. I'm leaving now." The Heartstone Pendant flared, a sudden white-hot spike of temperature that forced a gasp from her lungs. She stumbled, her boots catching on a root that felt remarkably like a human tibia. The silence broke. It started as a wet, rhythmic clicking from above. Rory looked up. The branches were thick with shadows that didn't align with the moonlight. High up, nestled in the crooks of the timber, things crouched. They were pale, spindly shapes with too many joints, their skin the color of a drowned man’s belly. They didn't have eyes—only deep, weeping pits that leaked dark fluid down the bark. They weren't looking at her. They were smelling her. The clicking intensified, a dozen throats mimicking the sound of a ticking clock. Rory backed away, her heart hammering against the pendant. "The food is here." She dropped the thermal bag onto a flat, mossy altar in the center of the grove. The bag hit the stone with a dull thud. From the shadows of the furthest trees, a figure detached itself. It walked with a hitched, unnatural gait, its limbs swinging a fraction of a second out of sync with its torso. It wore a tattered gown of moth wings, the fabric shimmering with a thousand iridescent eyes that blinked in unison. The customer didn't have a face. Where features should have been, there was only a smooth expanse of porcelain-white flesh, save for a vertical slit that ran from the hairline to the chin. Rory’s breath hitched. Her hand flew to the scar on her left wrist, her fingers tracing the crescent shape as she retreated. The creature reached the bag. It didn't open the zipper. It pressed its palm against the fabric, and the bag began to wither, the plastic melting away as if dipped in acid. Inside were not containers, but a pile of raw, pulsing hearts, still slick with heat. The vertical slit on the creature's face peeled open. It didn't reveal teeth. It revealed rows of tiny, vibrating needles. "Wait." The voice didn't come from the creature's mouth. It echoed inside Rory’s skull, cold and sharp as a winter gale. "You smell of the barrister's blood. And the teacher's ink." Rory’s boots skidded on the bluebells. She felt the boundary of the standing stones behind her, but the air there felt solid, a wall of cold glass preventing her exit. "I just deliver the food. That's all." The clicking in the trees stopped. Every one of the pale, multi-jointed things leaned down, their long shadows stretching across the grove until they touched her toes. "The Heartstone burns for you, little Malphora. Do you know why?" The creature took a step. Its movement was a blur, a glitch in reality that placed it three feet closer in the blink of an eye. The smell of rot and honey filled Rory’s nose. "The portal is hungry. It has been fed flesh, but it prefers a soul that knows its name." The Pendant was no longer just warm; it was searing a mark into her chest. Rory reached for her pocket, her fingers fumbling for the small iron key Silas had given her for the bar. Iron. Fae hated iron. "Get back." She held the key out like a talisman. The creature paused, its moth-wing gown shivering. The needles in its face vibrated higher, producing a sound that made Rory's ears bleed—a thin, crimson trickle down her lobes. "Iron is such a heavy burden for a creature of light." The creature tilted its head. Behind it, the pale things began to descend from the trees, sliding down the trunks like grease. They moved toward her in a tightening circle, their elongated fingers scratching grooves into the dirt. A branch snapped behind Rory. She didn't turn. She couldn't. The creature in the gown held her gaze with its featureless face, pinning her in place with the sheer weight of its malice. The fog thickened, swallowing the standing stones. The path back to the park, back to the bicycle and the city and the safety of Silas’ bar, vanished. "You aren't leaving, Aurora. The grove keeps what the city discards." The things from the trees were inches away now. She could hear their breath—a series of wet, whistling gasps. One reached out, a grey finger brushing the hem of her windbreaker. The fabric disintegrated instantly. Rory squeezed the iron key until the metal bit into her palm. She didn't scream. She forced her mind to work, to find the gap in the logic of this nightmare. The grove was a pocket. A pocket had a seam. The Heartstone flared one last time, a blinding crimson light that turned the fog into a cloud of blood. In that flash, she saw it. The shadows cast by the trees weren't falling away from the moon. They were all pointing toward her. "The light doesn't come from the sky," she whispered. She didn't look at the creature. She looked at the pendant. The crimson gem wasn't reflecting the moon; it was generating the world around her. The creature shrieked—a sound of tearing metal. It lunged, its needle-filled mouth stretching wide enough to swallow her head. Rory didn't run. She dropped the key and grabbed the pendant with both hands, ripping the silver chain from her neck. The moment the silver snapped, the grove groaned. The trees bent inward, their wood cracking with the sound of a thousand breaking bones. The pale things vanished into puffs of grey soot. The creature in the moth-wing gown froze, its fingers inches from her throat. Its form began to pixelate, its edges fraying into darkness. "You don't know what you've unlatched," the voice hissed in her head, fading into a dry rasp. The red light of the Heartstone died. Total darkness. Rory stood in the pitch black, her lungs burning, the silence of the park returning with the force of a physical blow. The smell of bluebells was gone, replaced by the scent of damp earth and distant car exhaust. She fumbled for her flashlight on the ground and flicked it on. The standing stones were gone. The altar was gone. She was standing in a regular clearing, surrounded by ordinary oaks. Her bicycle leaned against a tree twenty yards away. She looked down at her hand. The Heartstone Pendant was gone. In its place, burned into the palm of her hand, was a perfect, crimson circle, still glowing with a faint, dying ember. A twig snapped behind her. She turned the light toward the sound. A pair of glowing eyes reflected the beam from the thicket—wide, unblinking, and positioned much too high off the ground for any animal. "Rory?" The voice sounded like Eva’s. But Eva was back at the flat. And the voice was coming from the center of a dense thorn bush where no human could stand. "Rory, come here. I found something." The voice drifted closer, but the eyes stayed perfectly still. Rory backed toward her bike, her boots heavy. She didn't look away from the eyes. She reached for the handlebars, her fingers trembling so hard she could barely grip the metal. The thing in the bushes stepped forward. It wasn't Eva. It was a silhouette made of shadows, wearing Eva’s voice like a stolen coat. "Don't you want your tip, Rory?"
created_at"2026-02-19T12:24:46.021Z" 2/19/2026, 12:24:46 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1761
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1761
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"velvet"
count2
1
word"comforting"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count3
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"loomed"
count1
7
word"unraveling"
count1
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count2
10
word"measured"
count1
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"silk"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"silence"
count2
15
word"porcelain"
count1
16
word"tracing"
count1
17
word"searing"
count1
18
word"vibrated"
count1
19
word"flicked"
count1
20
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"comforting"
2"rhythmic"
3"pulsed"
4"pulse"
5"chill"
6"loomed"
7"unraveling"
8"echo"
9"echoed"
10"measured"
11"weight"
12"silk"
13"flickered"
14"silence"
15"porcelain"
16"tracing"
17"searing"
18"vibrated"
19"flicked"
20"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blink of an eye"
count1
highlights
0"in the blink of an eye"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences156
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences171
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords24
totalWords1741
ratio0.014
matches
0"Deliver the box to the grove beyond the standing stones,"
1"Do not look at the customer. Do not accept a tip. Do not linger."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1614
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Heartstone5
Pendant4
Yu-Fei2
Rory17
October1
Silas1
Eva4
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.973
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences113
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like silk dragging over dry bone"
85.12% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.149
wordCount1741
matches
0"not the slosh of soup or the slide of rice containers, but something dense"
1"not containers, but a pile of raw, pulsing hearts, still slick with heat"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences171
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean23.85
std16.95
cv0.711
sampleLengths
057
147
26
368
453
536
61
711
840
99
1038
113
1228
1311
1468
159
1623
1711
1832
193
2067
219
2222
234
2425
2552
2633
2722
2847
2920
301
3120
3210
3330
347
3527
3611
3735
3818
3939
402
4136
4211
4338
4433
4527
4611
4735
4841
4943
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences156
matches
0"was gone"
1"were gone"
2"was gone"
3"was gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs264
matches
0"weren't looking"
1"were smelling"
2"was searing"
3"weren't falling"
4"was generating"
5"was standing"
6"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences171
ratio0.058
matches
0"The city’s distant hum—the sirens, the rhythmic pulse of tires on asphalt—vanished."
1"The weight inside shifted—not the slosh of soup or the slide of rice containers, but something dense and wet."
2"A flash of white—too long to be a rabbit, too fluid to be a person—disappeared behind an ancient oak."
3"They didn't have eyes—only deep, weeping pits that leaked dark fluid down the bark."
4"The Pendant was no longer just warm; it was searing a mark into her chest."
5"The needles in its face vibrated higher, producing a sound that made Rory's ears bleed—a thin, crimson trickle down her lobes."
6"She could hear their breath—a series of wet, whistling gasps."
7"The crimson gem wasn't reflecting the moon; it was generating the world around her."
8"The creature shrieked—a sound of tearing metal."
9"A pair of glowing eyes reflected the beam from the thicket—wide, unblinking, and positioned much too high off the ground for any animal."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1151
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"sudden white-hot spike"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.014769765421372719
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005212858384013901
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences171
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences171
mean10.18
std6.2
cv0.609
sampleLengths
012
120
214
311
47
518
612
710
86
94
1030
1120
126
135
143
159
163
1712
1812
1917
207
2115
2214
231
248
253
264
273
2818
2915
309
312
3211
332
349
352
3612
373
389
3919
4011
416
425
438
446
4516
463
476
4818
499
34.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats26
diversityRatio0.25146198830409355
totalSentences171
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences149
matches
0"It wasn’t the comforting heat"
1"She reached beneath her windbreaker,"
2"It pulsed through her shirt,"
3"She marched toward the oak"
4"They loomed ten feet tall,"
5"She crossed the threshold."
6"Her flashlight beam cut a"
7"I’m being measured."
8"She tightened her grip on"
9"It didn't sound like wind."
10"It sounded like silk dragging"
11"Her watch showed the second"
12"She swung the light."
13"She stumbled, her boots catching"
14"It started as a wet,"
15"They were pale, spindly shapes"
16"They didn't have eyes—only deep,"
17"They weren't looking at her."
18"They were smelling her."
19"She dropped the thermal bag"
ratio0.342
30.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount128
totalSentences149
matches
0"Rory squeezed the handlebars of"
1"The tires hissed over a"
2"The Heartstone Pendant against her"
3"It wasn’t the comforting heat"
4"She reached beneath her windbreaker,"
5"It pulsed through her shirt,"
6"Yu-Fei had been specific."
7"The delivery address wasn't a"
8"Rory dismounted, the kickstand clicking"
9"The air changed."
10"The city’s distant hum—the sirens,"
11"A heavy, floral scent overthrew"
12"Bluebells crushed beneath her boots,"
13"She marched toward the oak"
14"They loomed ten feet tall,"
15"Bark spiraled up their lengths"
16"The word fell flat, swallowed"
17"She crossed the threshold."
18"The temperature plummeted."
19"A mist crawled out from"
ratio0.859
33.56% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences149
matches
0"Yet, the sensation of needles"
ratio0.007
60.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences69
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"It wasn’t the comforting heat of a hand-warmer, but a frantic, rhythmic throbbing that mimicked a panicked heart."
1"Her watch showed the second hand ticking, every movement sluggish, as if the cogs struggled against invisible sand."
2"The Heartstone Pendant flared, a sudden white-hot spike of temperature that forced a gasp from her lungs."
3"Where features should have been, there was only a smooth expanse of porcelain-white flesh, save for a vertical slit that ran from the hairline to the chin."
4"Its movement was a blur, a glitch in reality that placed it three feet closer in the blink of an eye."
5"The needles in its face vibrated higher, producing a sound that made Rory's ears bleed—a thin, crimson trickle down her lobes."
6"The trees bent inward, their wood cracking with the sound of a thousand breaking bones."
7"Rory stood in the pitch black, her lungs burning, the silence of the park returning with the force of a physical blow."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
32.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"the voice hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.235
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.235
75.1176%