| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.176 | | leniency | 0.353 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 97.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1761 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.34% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1761 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "comforting" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "loomed" | | 7 | "unraveling" | | 8 | "echo" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "measured" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "silk" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "silence" | | 15 | "porcelain" | | 16 | "tracing" | | 17 | "searing" | | 18 | "vibrated" | | 19 | "flicked" | | 20 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blink of an eye" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "in the blink of an eye" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 156 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 156 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 171 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 24 | | totalWords | 1741 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "Deliver the box to the grove beyond the standing stones," | | 1 | "Do not look at the customer. Do not accept a tip. Do not linger." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1614 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.05 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 4 | | Yu-Fei | 2 | | Rory | 17 | | October | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Eva | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Yu-Fei" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.973 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like silk dragging over dry bone" |
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| 85.12% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.149 | | wordCount | 1741 | | matches | | 0 | "not the slosh of soup or the slide of rice containers, but something dense" | | 1 | "not containers, but a pile of raw, pulsing hearts, still slick with heat" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 171 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 73 | | mean | 23.85 | | std | 16.95 | | cv | 0.711 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 68 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 67 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 52 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 35 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 39 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 36 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 38 | | 44 | 33 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 35 | | 48 | 41 | | 49 | 43 |
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| 96.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 156 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "were gone" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 264 | | matches | | 0 | "weren't looking" | | 1 | "were smelling" | | 2 | "was searing" | | 3 | "weren't falling" | | 4 | "was generating" | | 5 | "was standing" | | 6 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 171 | | ratio | 0.058 | | matches | | 0 | "The city’s distant hum—the sirens, the rhythmic pulse of tires on asphalt—vanished." | | 1 | "The weight inside shifted—not the slosh of soup or the slide of rice containers, but something dense and wet." | | 2 | "A flash of white—too long to be a rabbit, too fluid to be a person—disappeared behind an ancient oak." | | 3 | "They didn't have eyes—only deep, weeping pits that leaked dark fluid down the bark." | | 4 | "The Pendant was no longer just warm; it was searing a mark into her chest." | | 5 | "The needles in its face vibrated higher, producing a sound that made Rory's ears bleed—a thin, crimson trickle down her lobes." | | 6 | "She could hear their breath—a series of wet, whistling gasps." | | 7 | "The crimson gem wasn't reflecting the moon; it was generating the world around her." | | 8 | "The creature shrieked—a sound of tearing metal." | | 9 | "A pair of glowing eyes reflected the beam from the thicket—wide, unblinking, and positioned much too high off the ground for any animal." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1151 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "sudden white-hot spike" |
| | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.014769765421372719 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005212858384013901 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 171 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 171 | | mean | 10.18 | | std | 6.2 | | cv | 0.609 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 34.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 26 | | diversityRatio | 0.25146198830409355 | | totalSentences | 171 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.09% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t the comforting heat" | | 1 | "She reached beneath her windbreaker," | | 2 | "It pulsed through her shirt," | | 3 | "She marched toward the oak" | | 4 | "They loomed ten feet tall," | | 5 | "She crossed the threshold." | | 6 | "Her flashlight beam cut a" | | 7 | "I’m being measured." | | 8 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 9 | "It didn't sound like wind." | | 10 | "It sounded like silk dragging" | | 11 | "Her watch showed the second" | | 12 | "She swung the light." | | 13 | "She stumbled, her boots catching" | | 14 | "It started as a wet," | | 15 | "They were pale, spindly shapes" | | 16 | "They didn't have eyes—only deep," | | 17 | "They weren't looking at her." | | 18 | "They were smelling her." | | 19 | "She dropped the thermal bag" |
| | ratio | 0.342 | |
| 30.47% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 128 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory squeezed the handlebars of" | | 1 | "The tires hissed over a" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant against her" | | 3 | "It wasn’t the comforting heat" | | 4 | "She reached beneath her windbreaker," | | 5 | "It pulsed through her shirt," | | 6 | "Yu-Fei had been specific." | | 7 | "The delivery address wasn't a" | | 8 | "Rory dismounted, the kickstand clicking" | | 9 | "The air changed." | | 10 | "The city’s distant hum—the sirens," | | 11 | "A heavy, floral scent overthrew" | | 12 | "Bluebells crushed beneath her boots," | | 13 | "She marched toward the oak" | | 14 | "They loomed ten feet tall," | | 15 | "Bark spiraled up their lengths" | | 16 | "The word fell flat, swallowed" | | 17 | "She crossed the threshold." | | 18 | "The temperature plummeted." | | 19 | "A mist crawled out from" |
| | ratio | 0.859 | |
| 33.56% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, the sensation of needles" |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 60.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t the comforting heat of a hand-warmer, but a frantic, rhythmic throbbing that mimicked a panicked heart." | | 1 | "Her watch showed the second hand ticking, every movement sluggish, as if the cogs struggled against invisible sand." | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant flared, a sudden white-hot spike of temperature that forced a gasp from her lungs." | | 3 | "Where features should have been, there was only a smooth expanse of porcelain-white flesh, save for a vertical slit that ran from the hairline to the chin." | | 4 | "Its movement was a blur, a glitch in reality that placed it three feet closer in the blink of an eye." | | 5 | "The needles in its face vibrated higher, producing a sound that made Rory's ears bleed—a thin, crimson trickle down her lobes." | | 6 | "The trees bent inward, their wood cracking with the sound of a thousand breaking bones." | | 7 | "Rory stood in the pitch black, her lungs burning, the silence of the park returning with the force of a physical blow." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 32.35% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "the voice hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.118 | | leniency | 0.235 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.235 | |