Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXREYZZRFXE23D97P4ZFJ0

Run Details

Duration:
50.3s
Cost:
$0.116325

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bone token clattered onto the grimy platform tiles, its hollow echo swallowed by the abandoned tunnel's darkness. Detective Harlow Quinn crouched beside the body, her weathered hands steady as she photographed the scene from every angle. The corpse lay sprawled across the threshold of what should have been a solid brick wall, but instead gaped open like a wound in the station's anatomy. "Time of death approximately three hours ago." The forensics officer shifted his weight, boots scraping against decades of accumulated grime. "Blunt force trauma to the back of the skull. No defensive wounds." Quinn's brown eyes tracked the blood spatter pattern. Wrong angle. Wrong distribution. The arc suggested impact from below, not behind. She stood, her military bearing evident in the precise way she moved through the crime scene. "You're seeing this backwards, Tennison." She pointed to the fractured skull. "Look at the compression pattern. Someone didn't hit him—he fell. Hard." Tennison frowned behind his mask. "From where? The ceiling's intact." Quinn turned her attention to the impossible doorway. Beyond it stretched a corridor that shouldn't exist, lit by gas lamps that hadn't burned in Camden's tunnels for over a century. The victim's fingers still clutched something small and brass. "What's that in his hand?" "Some kind of compass." Tennison bagged it without looking closely. "Probably just pocket junk." Quinn intercepted the evidence bag, holding it up to the harsh LED lights they'd strung across the platform. The compass face bore etchings that made her vision blur if she stared too long. The needle spun lazily, pointing not north but directly at the doorway. "This isn't pocket junk." She turned the bag, watching the needle track. "It's pointing at that opening." "So he was lost down here, looking for a way out." Tennison scribbled notes. "Homeless, maybe. Lots of them shelter in the old stations." Quinn examined the victim's clothes—tailored wool coat, leather shoes that cost more than her monthly salary. His manicured nails and the faint scent of expensive cologne marked him as anything but homeless. "Check his pockets again." Tennison sighed but complied. "Wallet's gone. No identification. Just this." He produced a small leather pouch containing what looked like carved bone discs. Quinn's jaw tightened. Three years ago, Morris had been clutching something similar when they found his body. The memory hit like cold water—her partner's vacant eyes, the impossible claw marks, the way the other officers refused to acknowledge what they'd all seen. "Sir?" A constable appeared at the platform entrance. "We've got another one. Female, late twenties. Found her two levels up near the ventilation shaft." Quinn's leather watch caught the light as she checked the time. "Same injuries?" "No, sir. This one's... different. You'll want to see for yourself." The climb up the maintenance ladder left Tennison wheezing, but Quinn's breathing remained steady. The second body lay crumpled in an access corridor, red hair spilling across the concrete like spilled wine. "Jesus." Tennison covered his nose. "What's that smell?" Sulfur and ozone, with an underlying sweetness that reminded Quinn of rotting flowers. She'd smelled it once before, three years ago. The woman's body showed no obvious wounds, but her skin bore strange markings—symbols that seemed to shift when viewed peripherally. "Get photos of these marks." Quinn gestured to the constable. "Every angle. Use the UV light too." "Why UV?" Tennison pulled out his phone. "Protocol doesn't—" "Just do it." Under ultraviolet light, the symbols blazed with phosphorescent clarity. Quinn recognized some from the compass face. Others matched the carvings she'd seen in evidence photos from Morris's case—photos that had mysteriously vanished from the files. "Her satchel's missing." Quinn noted the worn marks on the woman's shoulder where a strap had rested. "But she kept this." A folded paper protruded from the victim's coat pocket. Quinn unfolded it carefully, revealing a hand-drawn map of the London Underground. But this version showed tunnels that didn't exist on any official chart. Red ink marked a location beneath Camden with a single word: "Market." "Both victims were heading somewhere specific." Quinn paced the narrow corridor. "The man had tokens and a compass. She had a map. They weren't lost—they were shopping." "Shopping?" Tennison's voice pitched higher. "In an abandoned Tube station?" Quinn studied the map again. Tonight was the full moon. If the markings were accurate, whatever operated down here would be moving soon. The brass compass in evidence pointed toward answers she'd been seeking for three years. "Call it in. I want this entire station locked down." She pocketed the map. "Nobody goes below platform level without my authorization." "What about the doorway?" "Post two officers. Nobody goes through." Tennison's phone buzzed. "Forensics found something else. The male victim had a business card in his shoe." Quinn took the offered evidence bag. The card bore only a name and address: Eva Kowalski, British Museum. The same distinctive handwriting that had drawn the map. "They knew each other." Quinn felt the pieces clicking together. "She drew the map. He had the tokens. They were working together." "To do what?" Quinn stared down the maintenance shaft toward the impossible doorway below. Whatever market operated in these tunnels, it had killed before. Morris had stumbled onto something three years ago, and now two more bodies suggested the operation had grown bolder. "To find something worth dying for." She checked her watch again. "Or worth killing to protect."
total_cost0.116325

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.405
leniency0.81
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount906
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount906
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"weight"
2"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
72.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences61
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords899
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
10.47% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount645
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.79
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn18
Tennison9
Camden2
Morris3
Sulfur1
London1
Underground1
Eva1
Kowalski1
British1
Museum1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tennison"
3"Morris"
4"Eva"
5"Kowalski"
places
0"Camden"
1"London"
globalScore0.105
windowScore0.167
38.89% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like carved bone discs"
1"symbols that seemed to shift when viewed peripherally"
88.77% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.112
wordCount899
matches
0"not north but directly at the doorway"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean23.05
std14.37
cv0.623
sampleLengths
064
132
236
322
410
539
65
714
845
917
1024
1132
124
1323
1442
1524
1613
1711
1832
198
2041
2117
229
233
2435
2521
2645
2727
2810
2937
3022
314
326
3317
3427
3522
363
3740
3816
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs113
matches(empty)
9.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences86
ratio0.047
matches
0"Quinn examined the victim's clothes—tailored wool coat, leather shoes that cost more than her monthly salary."
1"The memory hit like cold water—her partner's vacant eyes, the impossible claw marks, the way the other officers refused to acknowledge what they'd all seen."
2"The woman's body showed no obvious wounds, but her skin bore strange markings—symbols that seemed to shift when viewed peripherally."
3"Others matched the carvings she'd seen in evidence photos from Morris's case—photos that had mysteriously vanished from the files."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount650
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.027692307692307693
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.012307692307692308
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean10.45
std5.69
cv0.544
sampleLengths
018
119
227
320
412
58
62
72
88
916
1011
1111
125
135
148
1522
169
175
1810
194
2018
2115
2212
2312
245
2514
2610
2716
2816
294
304
3119
323
3314
3425
358
3616
3711
382
3911
4014
4118
425
433
4413
458
4620
4710
487
497
95.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.627906976744186
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners54
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences59
matches
0"She stood, her military bearing"
1"She pointed to the fractured"
2"She turned the bag, watching"
3"His manicured nails and the"
4"He produced a small leather"
5"She'd smelled it once before,"
6"She pocketed the map"
7"She checked her watch again"
ratio0.136
10.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences59
matches
0"The bone token clattered onto"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn crouched beside"
2"The corpse lay sprawled across"
3"The forensics officer shifted his"
4"Quinn's brown eyes tracked the"
5"The arc suggested impact from"
6"She stood, her military bearing"
7"She pointed to the fractured"
8"Tennison frowned behind his mask."
9"Quinn turned her attention to"
10"The victim's fingers still clutched"
11"Tennison bagged it without looking"
12"Quinn intercepted the evidence bag,"
13"The compass face bore etchings"
14"The needle spun lazily, pointing"
15"She turned the bag, watching"
16"Tennison scribbled notes"
17"Quinn examined the victim's clothes—tailored"
18"His manicured nails and the"
19"Tennison sighed but complied."
ratio0.898
84.75% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"If the markings were accurate,"
ratio0.017
5.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Beyond it stretched a corridor that shouldn't exist, lit by gas lamps that hadn't burned in Camden's tunnels for over a century."
1"The compass face bore etchings that made her vision blur if she stared too long."
2"Quinn examined the victim's clothes—tailored wool coat, leather shoes that cost more than her monthly salary."
3"Sulfur and ozone, with an underlying sweetness that reminded Quinn of rotting flowers."
4"Others matched the carvings she'd seen in evidence photos from Morris's case—photos that had mysteriously vanished from the files."
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"The forensics officer shifted, boots scraping against decades of accumulated grime"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn noted (note)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.024
leniency0.048
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.048
79.5039%