Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXRHPSG2KQSFKWWHF3PR6C

Run Details

Duration:
1m 28s
Cost:
$0.006829
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck, as it always did in humid weather. Aurora wrestled with it, her other hand clutching the takeaway bag from Golden Empress. The scent of sesame oil and ginger curled through the narrow hallway of Eva's building, and somewhere below, the curry house's extraction fans hummed their eternal drone. She finally wrenched the bolt free and shouldered the door open. Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor, one hand resting on his ivory-handled cane, the other tucked into the breast pocket of his charcoal suit jacket. The fluorescent strip light above him flickered, casting his platinum hair in sickly pale relief. His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—tracked the movement of her hand as she reached instinctively for the umbrella propped beside the door frame. "Put down the umbrella, Rory. If I wanted you dead, you wouldn't have heard me knock." She didn't move. Her pulse hammered against her throat, and she hated herself for it. Three months. Three months of silence, of unanswered texts sliding into the void, of passing his favourite café on Charing Cross Road and refusing to look through the window. And now he stood here as though he'd simply stepped out for cigarettes. "You're not supposed to be here." "And yet." He gestured to the threshold with an open palm. "May I?" "No." Ptolemy chose that precise moment to wind between Aurora's ankles and bolt past her into the corridor. The tabby threaded himself between Lucien's polished Oxfords, tail high, purring loud enough to hear from where she stood. "Traitor," Aurora muttered. Lucien glanced down at the cat, the corner of his mouth lifting. "At least someone remembers me fondly." "Someone should." His gaze snapped back to her face. The amber eye caught the hallway light; the black one swallowed it whole. She couldn't read him. Never could. That was part of the problem—or all of it, depending on which 3 AM spiral she found herself in. "Three months," she said. "Three months, Lucien. You vanish without a word, and now you show up at Eva's door like—" "Like what? A friend? An ally?" He stepped forward, and she retreated on instinct, the takeaway bag crinkling against her chest. He stopped at the threshold, close enough now that she caught the scent of sandalwood and something else beneath it—smoke, the particular acrid bite of Avaros. He'd been travelling. "I received your messages, Aurora. Every single one." "And you couldn't be bothered to reply?" "I couldn't risk the compromise." "Compromise." She laughed, the sound scraping her throat. "Right. Because that's what this is. Compromise. Not cowardice, not running away, not—" "I was protecting you." The words landed between them, heavy and absolute. Ptolemy meowed, insistent, and wound back toward the open door. Neither of them moved to let him through. "Protecting me." Aurora shook her head. "That's rich, coming from the man who told me I could handle myself. Who said I wasn't some damsel who needed saving. Who—" "You're not." Lucien's voice dropped, and something shifted behind his eyes. "Which is precisely why I couldn't tell you where I was going. What I was doing." He exhaled, and she saw it then—the tension in his jaw, the slight tremor in the hand that gripped his cane. He'd hidden it well. He always did. But three months in whatever hole he'd crawled into had worn grooves into his composure. "If he knew you meant something to me, Rory, he would have used you. And you would have let him, because you're brave and stubborn and you never learned when to stop fighting." She wanted to stay angry. The fury had carried her through the first weeks—through the unanswered calls, the checking of his flat in Islington, the conversation with Silas where she'd pieced together enough to know he'd gone back to Avaros. But anger required distance, and he stood close enough now that she could see the faint silver scarring at his temple, half-hidden by his hair. New wounds. Fresh ones. "You look terrible," she said. A breath of laughter escaped him. "You should see the other fellow." "Did you?" His silence answered for him. Ptolemy yowled, demanding entrance, and Aurora stepped aside. The cat shot past, leaving Lucien in the doorway with his hand still raised to knock on nothing. He looked wrong like this—uncertain, off-balance. The Lucien she knew commanded every room he entered, bent the attention of everyone in it toward him like light around a star. This man looked like he'd forgotten the script. "Are you coming in, then?" Relief flickered across his features before he schooled them back to neutrality. "I wouldn't want to impose." "Since when?" He stepped over the threshold, and the flat seemed to shrink around him. Books lined every wall, stacked in towers that swayed precariously whenever Ptolemy leapt. Scrolls spilled from open folders on the kitchen counter, and Eva's research notes formed a drift against the sofa cushions. The air smelled of old paper and the remnants of that morning's tea. Lucien navigated the obstacle course with practised ease, and Aurora wondered how many times he'd done this before—shown up unannounced, slipped into spaces she thought were hers alone. He settled into the armchair by the window, the one with the view of Brick Lane's constant foot traffic, and set his cane against the radiator. She dropped the takeaway bag on the counter and busied herself with plates. Anything to avoid looking at him. Anything to avoid the question sitting heavy on her tongue. "You're bleeding." She froze, her hand halfway to the cabinet. "What?" "Your wrist. The crescent scar—it's fresh." Aurora glanced down. The old mark from her childhood accident sat beside a newer cut, thin and pink where she'd caught it on a broken bottle last week. She'd bandaged it, but the adhesive had given up sometime during her shift. "It's nothing." "Rory." "Don't." She pulled down two plates, harder than necessary, and one of them clattered against the counter. "Don't act like you have the right to worry about me. Not after you walked away." "I didn't walk." His voice came quieter now, almost gentle. "I ran. There's a difference." She turned. He sat forward in the armchair, elbows on his knees, hands clasped together. The posture made him look younger somehow—or maybe just exhausted. The shadows under his eyes had deepened since she'd last seen him, and the lines around his mouth had carved themselves into something approaching pain. "Why did you come back?" "Because I finished what I started." He met her gaze. "Because he can't hurt you anymore. And because—" He stopped, jaw working, and she watched the words collect and scatter behind his teeth. "Because I told myself for three months that staying away was the right thing to do. The noble thing. And then I walked past your building on the way from the Tube, and I realised I'd been lying to myself since the moment I left." Aurora's throat tightened. She set the plates down. "That's not an apology." "No." He rose from the chair, movements fluid despite the weariness etched into his frame. "It's an explanation. The apology comes after, if you're willing to hear it." Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill and began to wash, indifferent to the tension crackling through the small space. Outside, a siren wailed past, and the streetlamps flickered on as dusk settled over East London. Aurora crossed her arms. "You have five minutes." "Fair enough." Lucien reached into his jacket pocket and withdrew a small object, which he set on the kitchen counter between them. A keys—old iron, intricate, nothing like the modern Yale locks on Eva's door. "This is for you." "I don't want your gifts." "It's not a gift. It's a key to my flat in Islington. The wards will recognise you now." He slid it across the surface toward her. "I spent three months in Avaros tracking down the demon who owned my father's debt. I killed him. And I renegotiated the terms of my own existence." A pause. "That includes you. Anyone who wants to reach me goes through you first. That's the bargain I made." She stared at the iron key. It looked ancient, heavy with significance she couldn't parse. "You renegotiated your soul and added me as a clause?" "I added you as a condition." He smiled, and for once it reached his eyes. "There's a difference." Aurora picked up the key. It sat cool in her palm, and something hummed through it—a distant vibration, like a heartbeat heard through water. She thought of every unanswered call, every night she'd stared at the ceiling and wondered if he was dead, every moment she'd hated him and wanted him in equal measure. "You're still a bastard." "I know." "And you still owe me an explanation. A real one." "I know." "And you're buying dinner next time. Actual dinner, not takeaway stolen from my delivery route." Lucien's smile widened. "I thought this was dinner." "This is a peace offering. Dinner involves tablecloths and wine and you telling me exactly what happened in Avaros." She pocketed the key and grabbed the takeaway bag. "Now sit down before Ptolemy tries to eat your shoes." He settled back into the armchair, and she joined him on the sofa, balancing a plate on her knee. They ate in silence for a while, the familiar rhythm of it settling over them like a second skin. Outside, Brick Lane carried on its evening business—tourists hunting for street art, locals heading home from work, the eternal hum of the city that never quite slept. Aurora watched him from the corner of her eye. Three months hadn't changed the way he held his fork, precise and European, or the way he surveyed every room like he was cataloguing exits. But something had shifted. He looked lighter somehow, as though a weight had lifted from his shoulders. She wasn't ready to forgive him. Might never be ready. But he'd come back, and he'd brought her a key to his life, and right now, in this cramped flat full of books and research and the smell of cooling noodles, that was enough. "Next time," she said, "call." Lucien glanced up. "Next time, I will." Ptolemy finished his bath and hopped onto the sofa between them, clearly expecting tribute. Aurora tore off a piece of prawn and placed it on the cushion. The cat ate. The city hummed. And Lucien Moreau, demon-born fixer and impossible man, sat in her best friend's flat and looked at her as though she were the only fixed point in an uncertain world.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:24:56.286Z" 2/19/2026, 12:24:56 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.297
leniency0.594
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1788
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1788
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"flickered"
count3
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"tension"
count2
4
word"impose"
count1
5
word"navigated"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"tension"
4"impose"
5"navigated"
6"etched"
7"intricate"
8"familiar"
9"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences106
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1771
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1283
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Eva3
Moreau2
Charing1
Cross1
Road1
Ptolemy6
Aurora12
Lucien11
Oxfords1
Avaros2
Islington1
Silas1
Brick2
Lane2
East1
London1
Yale1
European1
Three3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Aurora"
4"Lucien"
5"Silas"
6"Yale"
places
0"Golden"
1"Charing"
2"Cross"
3"Road"
4"Avaros"
5"Islington"
6"Brick"
7"Lane"
8"East"
9"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like he'd forgotten the script"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1771
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean24.94
std23.64
cv0.948
sampleLengths
052
111
263
316
457
56
613
71
836
93
1018
112
1245
1321
1458
157
165
1721
184
1926
2029
21103
2265
234
245
2512
262
275
2863
295
3017
312
3259
3354
3429
352
369
376
3841
392
401
4133
4215
4350
445
4578
468
474
4828
4934
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs221
matches
0"was cataloguing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences150
ratio0.08
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—tracked the movement of her hand as she reached instinctively for the umbrella propped beside the door frame."
1"The amber eye caught the hallway light; the black one swallowed it whole."
2"That was part of the problem—or all of it, depending on which 3 AM spiral she found herself in."
3"He stopped at the threshold, close enough now that she caught the scent of sandalwood and something else beneath it—smoke, the particular acrid bite of Avaros."
4"\"Which is precisely why I couldn't tell you where I was going. What I was doing.\" He exhaled, and she saw it then—the tension in his jaw, the slight tremor in the hand that gripped his cane."
5"The fury had carried her through the first weeks—through the unanswered calls, the checking of his flat in Islington, the conversation with Silas where she'd pieced together enough to know he'd gone back to Avaros."
6"He looked wrong like this—uncertain, off-balance."
7"Lucien navigated the obstacle course with practised ease, and Aurora wondered how many times he'd done this before—shown up unannounced, slipped into spaces she thought were hers alone."
8"The posture made him look younger somehow—or maybe just exhausted."
9"A keys—old iron, intricate, nothing like the modern Yale locks on Eva's door."
10"It sat cool in her palm, and something hummed through it—a distant vibration, like a heartbeat heard through water."
11"Outside, Brick Lane carried on its evening business—tourists hunting for street art, locals heading home from work, the eternal hum of the city that never quite slept."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1299
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.02386451116243264
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005388760585065435
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean11.81
std9.14
cv0.774
sampleLengths
011
114
227
311
425
515
623
716
83
912
102
1127
1213
136
1411
152
161
1717
1819
193
2012
216
222
237
2413
254
262
2719
284
2917
3021
3126
323
338
347
355
368
3713
384
398
4010
418
426
4323
4411
4537
464
473
4815
4933
51.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.35333333333333333
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners53
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences96
matches
0"She finally wrenched the bolt"
1"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one"
2"She didn't move."
3"Her pulse hammered against her"
4"He gestured to the threshold"
5"His gaze snapped back to"
6"She couldn't read him."
7"He stepped forward, and she"
8"He stopped at the threshold,"
9"He'd been travelling."
10"She laughed, the sound scraping"
11"He exhaled, and she saw"
12"He'd hidden it well."
13"He always did."
14"She wanted to stay angry."
15"His silence answered for him."
16"He looked wrong like this—uncertain,"
17"He stepped over the threshold,"
18"He settled into the armchair"
19"She dropped the takeaway bag"
ratio0.417
17.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences96
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck, as"
1"Aurora wrestled with it, her"
2"The scent of sesame oil"
3"She finally wrenched the bolt"
4"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
5"The fluorescent strip light above"
6"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one"
7"She didn't move."
8"Her pulse hammered against her"
9"He gestured to the threshold"
10"Ptolemy chose that precise moment"
11"The tabby threaded himself between"
12"Lucien glanced down at the"
13"His gaze snapped back to"
14"The amber eye caught the"
15"She couldn't read him."
16"That was part of the"
17"He stepped forward, and she"
18"He stopped at the threshold,"
19"He'd been travelling."
ratio0.885
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"But he'd come back, and he'd brought her a key to his life, and right now, in this cramped flat full of books and research and the smell of cooling noodles, tha…"
1"And Lucien Moreau, demon-born fixer and impossible man, sat in her best friend's flat and looked at her as though she were the only fixed point in an uncertain …"
98.68% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She laughed, the sound scraping her throat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.078
leniency0.156
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.063
82.5374%