Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXRS0WAVNFX0J85CAWY6KT

Run Details

Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.064435
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last bus had dropped her at the Richmond Park gate twenty minutes ago, and already Rory questioned every decision that had led her here. She shifted her backpack higher on one shoulder and followed the gravel path that cut south through the park's interior, her trainers crunching too loud against the silence. The instructions had been specific: reach the grove by midnight. The folded note, slipped under her door that morning with no return address, had used the old name — Isolde's grove — a name she'd only heard once before, from Eva, years ago in a Cardiff pub, half-drunk and grinning and spinning stories Rory hadn't believed. She believed them now. The Heartstone Pendant sat warm against her sternum, a thumbnail-sized coal burning through her shirt. It had been pulsing since she'd crossed the park's boundary fence, a slow metronomic throb she felt in her teeth. The path ahead dissolved into grass. Rory pulled out her phone. No signal. The screen's blue glow painted her knuckles white, and she switched on the torch function and swept it across the dark. Ancient oaks loomed at the far edge of the beam, their bark twisted into shapes that looked deliberate — columns, almost, or sentinels standing shoulder to shoulder. The standing stones. She'd found them faster than she expected. Faster than the note's hand-drawn map had suggested. She stopped. The wind had died. Not faded — died, suddenly, as if someone had sealed the night in glass. The leaves overhead, which had been rustling thirty seconds ago, hung motionless. Her breath came out in a thin ribbon of vapor, though it was late June and the afternoon had been sweltering. "Right," she muttered. "Fine." She stepped between the two nearest oaks and the temperature dropped five degrees in the space of a single stride. The torch flickered. Rory smacked the side of her phone with her palm and the light steadied, finding a floor of wildflowers — campion, foxglove, something pale and star-shaped she didn't recognize — blooming in impossible profusion across the clearing. Their petals were open despite the darkness. Some of them swayed, though there was no wind to move them. The grove was smaller than she'd imagined. Forty feet across, maybe fifty. The oaks ringed it completely, their canopy knitting together overhead into a lattice that blocked the sky. She could see no stars. No moon. Just the black weave of branches and the sense of a ceiling pressing down. She walked to the center of the clearing and crouched, setting her backpack on the ground. The note had said to wait. So she'd wait. A minute passed. Two. Five. Rory became aware of a sound she couldn't place. Low, rhythmic, organic. She held her breath to isolate it. Not her heartbeat — the rhythm was wrong, too slow, too deliberate, like something large drawing air through a passage that was almost, but not quite, sealed. Breathing. Something in the grove was breathing. She swept the torch in a full circle. Oaks. Flowers. Empty space between the trunks. Nothing. The breathing didn't stop. It came from no fixed direction, seeming to rise from the ground itself, from the flowers, from the air between the petals. She stood and turned again, slower this time, letting the beam linger on each gap between the trees. The fourth gap held something that made her fingers tighten on the phone. A shape. Upright. Thin. Standing just beyond the tree line, half-hidden by an oak trunk. She'd swept past it on the first rotation and it hadn't been there. "Hello?" The shape didn't move. Didn't respond. It had the proportions of a person — narrow shoulders, a suggestion of a head — but the posture was wrong. Too still. Too vertical, as if it had been hung from a wire rather than standing on its own feet. "I got the note," Rory said, her voice coming out steadier than she felt. "If you're the one who left it, you could stop lurking and actually talk to me." The shape remained. The breathing continued, unchanged. Rory aimed the torch directly at it. The light hit bark, shadows, the suggestion of a face that resolved into a knot in the wood. A trick of depth and darkness. She exhaled through her nose and turned back toward her backpack. The flowers nearest her feet had closed. A circle of them, maybe three feet in diameter, their petals folded tight as fists. Beyond that circle, every other flower in the grove remained open. She hadn't stepped on them. Hadn't brushed them. They'd simply sealed themselves shut in the exact spot where she'd been standing. The pendant flared hot against her chest. Not the slow pulse she'd grown accustomed to — a sharp, sudden burn, like touching a pan handle bare. Rory hissed and pulled the chain away from her skin, letting the crimson stone swing free. Its inner glow had brightened from its usual faint ember to something vivid, something that threw red light across her fingers and the pale flowers below. She turned toward the gap between the trees again. The shape was closer. One full oak-span closer, standing now at the very edge of the clearing where grass met root. She hadn't heard it move. The breathing — the groundless, directionless breathing — hitched once, then resumed at a fractionally faster pace. Rory's hand found the crescent scar on her left wrist without thinking, her thumb pressing into the familiar ridge of tissue. A grounding gesture. Something she'd done since childhood whenever the world threatened to slip out from under her. "I can see you," she said. The shape tilted. The motion was small — a few degrees of lateral inclination, like a dog hearing a new sound — but it was unmistakably deliberate. Whatever stood at the edge of Isolde's grove was listening to her. And then the flowers began to close. Not the ring around her feet, which had already sealed, but the rest of them, progressing outward from the center of the grove in a slow, expanding wave. Each bloom folded with a faint sound, something between a whisper and the tick of a clock, and together they built into a ripple of soft clicks that spread toward the tree line. The grove was shutting down, petal by petal, and in the diminishing color Rory realized that the wildflowers had been the clearing's only true light source. A foxglove sealed. A campion curled inward. The pale star-shaped flowers went last, winking out like snuffed candles, and the darkness thickened around her until the only light left was the red pulse of the Heartstone and the weakening beam of her phone. Her torch died. The screen went black in her hand. She tapped it. Pressed the power button. Nothing. The glass was cold against her thumb, refrigerator cold, and she shoved the dead phone into her jacket pocket. The Heartstone's glow remained. She cupped it in her palm and held it up, a coal-red lantern that threw perhaps three feet of usable light. Enough to see the nearest flowers, all closed now. Enough to see the grass. Not enough to see the trees. The breathing stopped. The silence that replaced it was worse. It was not the ordinary silence of a park at night — there had been that, earlier, on the gravel path, a silence made of distant traffic and the hum of the city sleeping. This was absence. A void where sound should have been, as if the grove had been excised from the world entirely and placed somewhere that noise could not reach. Rory's own breathing sounded obscene in it. She forced herself to slow it down. In through the nose. Out through the mouth. Controlled. Think. The note said midnight. She didn't know what time it was anymore — the phone was dead and she didn't wear a watch — but she knew the grove's reputation. Time moved differently here. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside. She might have been standing in this clearing for thirty seconds or three hours. A sound broke the silence. Not breathing this time, but footsteps. Soft, unhurried, circling the grove's perimeter just beyond the reach of the pendant's light. Footsteps on dead leaves, except there were no dead leaves — the grove floor was living grass and living flowers — and Rory tracked the sound as it moved behind her left shoulder, around to her back, past her right side, forward. She pivoted to follow it. The Heartstone's light caught nothing. The footsteps continued their circuit, steady and patient, and Rory realized they were spiraling. Each pass brought them marginally closer. She could hear the difference — the sound gaining resolution, gaining texture, the way a radio tunes from static into voice. She heard the weight in each step now, the slight drag of something trailing on the ground behind the walker, something soft and long that brushed the closed petals with a sound like silk on silk. "You wrote the note," Rory said. Not a question. The footsteps stopped. Directly in front of her. Close. Close enough that she should have been able to see whatever stood there, but the pendant's light found only empty air and the sealed faces of flowers. She held the stone higher. Shadows shifted. The space before her looked wrong — not occupied, but thickened, as if the darkness there had more mass than the darkness elsewhere, as if it would resist her hand if she pushed it forward. She didn't push her hand forward. "Tell me what you want," she said. The grove exhaled. She felt it on her face — a gust of warm, sweetly rotten air that carried the scent of turned earth and something underneath it, something mineral and deep, like the smell at the mouth of a cave. The pendant's crimson glow stuttered, pulsing fast and shallow, the heartbeat of a small frightened animal. Then a voice. It came from everywhere — from the oaks, from the closed flowers, from the dense air in front of her. A voice like wet wood splintering. "Closer." Rory held her ground. The scar on her wrist throbbed. The pendant burned. Somewhere beyond the canopy, in a world she might still belong to, a fox screamed — distant, muffled, a sound traveling through water — and the grove swallowed it whole.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:25:03.781Z" 2/19/2026, 12:25:03 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1722
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"sweetly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"completely"
2"very"
3"sweetly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1722
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"silence"
count5
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"sentinels"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"sense of"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"resolved"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count4
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"silk"
count2
14
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"throb"
2"loomed"
3"sentinels"
4"flickered"
5"sense of"
6"rhythmic"
7"resolved"
8"pulse"
9"familiar"
10"whisper"
11"footsteps"
12"weight"
13"silk"
14"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences157
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences161
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1739
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1702
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory15
Isolde2
Eva1
Cardiff1
Heartstone4
Pendant1
June1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Isolde"
2"Eva"
3"Heartstone"
4"Pendant"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something between a whisper and the tick of a c"
27.49% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.725
wordCount1739
matches
0"Not the ring around her feet, which had already sealed, but the rest of them, progressing outward from the center of the"
1"Not breathing this time, but footsteps"
2"not occupied, but thickened, as if the darkness there had more mass than the d"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences161
matches
0"realized that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean38.64
std30.57
cv0.791
sampleLengths
025
184
239
379
42
551
64
779
850
925
105
1153
1216
1357
1428
151
1647
1730
187
1942
2054
2168
229
2343
2439
256
2639
27137
283
2934
3045
313
3270
3381
3467
3587
369
373
3875
396
407
4157
4229
431
4443
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences157
matches
0"been hung"
1"been excised"
99.37% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs265
matches
0"was breathing"
1"was listening"
2"was shutting"
3"were spiraling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount25
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences17
totalSentences161
ratio0.106
matches
0"The folded note, slipped under her door that morning with no return address, had used the old name — Isolde's grove — a name she'd only heard once before, from Eva, years ago in a Cardiff pub, half-drunk and grinning and spinning stories Rory hadn't believed."
1"Ancient oaks loomed at the far edge of the beam, their bark twisted into shapes that looked deliberate — columns, almost, or sentinels standing shoulder to shoulder."
2"Not faded — died, suddenly, as if someone had sealed the night in glass."
3"Rory smacked the side of her phone with her palm and the light steadied, finding a floor of wildflowers — campion, foxglove, something pale and star-shaped she didn't recognize — blooming in impossible profusion across the clearing."
4"Not her heartbeat — the rhythm was wrong, too slow, too deliberate, like something large drawing air through a passage that was almost, but not quite, sealed."
5"It had the proportions of a person — narrow shoulders, a suggestion of a head — but the posture was wrong."
6"Not the slow pulse she'd grown accustomed to — a sharp, sudden burn, like touching a pan handle bare."
7"The breathing — the groundless, directionless breathing — hitched once, then resumed at a fractionally faster pace."
8"The motion was small — a few degrees of lateral inclination, like a dog hearing a new sound — but it was unmistakably deliberate."
9"It was not the ordinary silence of a park at night — there had been that, earlier, on the gravel path, a silence made of distant traffic and the hum of the city sleeping."
10"She didn't know what time it was anymore — the phone was dead and she didn't wear a watch — but she knew the grove's reputation."
11"Footsteps on dead leaves, except there were no dead leaves — the grove floor was living grass and living flowers — and Rory tracked the sound as it moved behind her left shoulder, around to her back, past her right side, forward."
12"She could hear the difference — the sound gaining resolution, gaining texture, the way a radio tunes from static into voice."
13"The space before her looked wrong — not occupied, but thickened, as if the darkness there had more mass than the darkness elsewhere, as if it would resist her hand if she pushed it forward."
14"She felt it on her face — a gust of warm, sweetly rotten air that carried the scent of turned earth and something underneath it, something mineral and deep, like the smell at the mouth of a cave."
15"It came from everywhere — from the oaks, from the closed flowers, from the dense air in front of her."
16"Somewhere beyond the canopy, in a world she might still belong to, a fox screamed — distant, muffled, a sound traveling through water — and the grove swallowed it whole."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1685
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"pale star-shaped flowers"
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.032640949554896145
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.008902077151335312
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences161
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences161
mean10.8
std9.96
cv0.922
sampleLengths
025
128
210
346
44
515
620
76
85
92
1021
1127
123
137
148
152
164
1714
1812
1921
203
211
2220
233
2437
257
2612
277
285
2917
305
312
3214
3316
346
353
363
371
381
399
403
417
4227
431
446
458
461
471
485
491
55.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.37888198757763975
totalSentences161
uniqueOpeners61
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences134
matches
0"Just the black weave of"
1"Too vertical, as if it"
2"Directly in front of her."
3"Then a voice."
4"Somewhere beyond the canopy, in"
ratio0.037
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences134
matches
0"She shifted her backpack higher"
1"She believed them now."
2"It had been pulsing since"
3"She'd found them faster than"
4"Her breath came out in"
5"She stepped between the two"
6"Their petals were open despite"
7"She could see no stars."
8"She walked to the center"
9"She held her breath to"
10"She swept the torch in"
11"It came from no fixed"
12"She stood and turned again,"
13"She'd swept past it on"
14"It had the proportions of"
15"She exhaled through her nose"
16"She hadn't stepped on them."
17"They'd simply sealed themselves shut"
18"Its inner glow had brightened"
19"She turned toward the gap"
ratio0.261
71.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences134
matches
0"The last bus had dropped"
1"She shifted her backpack higher"
2"The instructions had been specific:"
3"The folded note, slipped under"
4"She believed them now."
5"The Heartstone Pendant sat warm"
6"It had been pulsing since"
7"The path ahead dissolved into"
8"Rory pulled out her phone."
9"The screen's blue glow painted"
10"The standing stones."
11"She'd found them faster than"
12"The wind had died."
13"The leaves overhead, which had"
14"Her breath came out in"
15"She stepped between the two"
16"The torch flickered."
17"Rory smacked the side of"
18"Their petals were open despite"
19"Some of them swayed, though"
ratio0.776
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Ancient oaks loomed at the far edge of the beam, their bark twisted into shapes that looked deliberate — columns, almost, or sentinels standing shoulder to shou…"
1"Not her heartbeat — the rhythm was wrong, too slow, too deliberate, like something large drawing air through a passage that was almost, but not quite, sealed."
2"Its inner glow had brightened from its usual faint ember to something vivid, something that threw red light across her fingers and the pale flowers below."
3"Rory's hand found the crescent scar on her left wrist without thinking, her thumb pressing into the familiar ridge of tissue."
4"Not the ring around her feet, which had already sealed, but the rest of them, progressing outward from the center of the grove in a slow, expanding wave."
5"Each bloom folded with a faint sound, something between a whisper and the tick of a clock, and together they built into a ripple of soft clicks that spread towa…"
6"She cupped it in her palm and held it up, a coal-red lantern that threw perhaps three feet of usable light."
7"The space before her looked wrong — not occupied, but thickened, as if the darkness there had more mass than the darkness elsewhere, as if it would resist her h…"
8"She felt it on her face — a gust of warm, sweetly rotten air that carried the scent of turned earth and something underneath it, something mineral and deep, lik…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory said, her voice coming out steadier than she felt"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
79.2635%