| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.12% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1008 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1008 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "sense of" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "sanctuary" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "echo" | | 12 | "flicker" | | 13 | "fleeting" | | 14 | "throbbed" | | 15 | "pounding" | | 16 | "stomach" | | 17 | "churn" | | 18 | "could feel" | | 19 | "gloom" | | 20 | "searing" | | 21 | "symphony" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 45.01% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1006 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 980 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.61 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 6 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Chloe | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Chloe" | | 3 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "sound that seemed to emanate from the very air, a subtle vibration that made the fine hairs on her arms stand on end" | | 1 | "felt like home" | | 2 | "oak that seemed to twist and writhe as if alive" | | 3 | "felt like distant fairy tales" |
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| 1.19% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.988 | | wordCount | 1006 | | matches | | 0 | "not from exertion, but from the unsettling stillness" | | 1 | "not of leaves, but of something dry" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 88.02% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 14 | | mean | 71.86 | | std | 32.92 | | cv | 0.458 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 100 | | 1 | 127 | | 2 | 85 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 81 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 83 | | 7 | 89 | | 8 | 61 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 60 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 126 |
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| 90.84% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "was swallowed" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "being dragged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 152 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "This wasn't the clean scent of nature; it was the sickly perfume of decay, masked by a deceptive bloom." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 261 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 8 | | adverbRatio | 0.03065134099616858 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0038314176245210726 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 74 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 74 | | mean | 13.59 | | std | 7.7 | | cv | 0.566 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 47.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3108108108108108 | | totalSentences | 74 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 98.04% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Only an encroaching dread that" | | 1 | "Just shadows that writhed with" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 43.53% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath hitched, not from" | | 1 | "She’d come here seeking Chloe," | | 2 | "It was a sound that" | | 3 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 4 | "She hadn't understood its purpose" | | 5 | "It wasn't a warmth that" | | 6 | "She took a tentative step" | | 7 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 8 | "She told herself it was" | | 9 | "she called out, her voice" | | 10 | "It was swallowed by the" | | 11 | "Her eyes darted to the" | | 12 | "It was gone before she" | | 13 | "Her childhood crescent scar on" | | 14 | "She began to walk, her" | | 15 | "She remembered something her father" | | 16 | "It was a gurgle, a" | | 17 | "Her voice cracked, laced with" | | 18 | "She could feel the subtle" | | 19 | "She found herself moving towards" |
| | ratio | 0.441 | |
| 40.88% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The rough bark of the" | | 1 | "Her breath hitched, not from" | | 2 | "This was the Fae Grove," | | 3 | "She’d come here seeking Chloe," | | 4 | "A low hum, like the" | | 5 | "It was a sound that" | | 6 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 7 | "Dymas's gift, or so the" | | 8 | "She hadn't understood its purpose" | | 9 | "It wasn't a warmth that" | | 10 | "Chloe had spoken of a" | | 11 | "Rory looked around." | | 12 | "She took a tentative step" | | 13 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 14 | "Rory froze, her senses locking" | | 15 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 16 | "She told herself it was" | | 17 | "Hel portal, it pulsed, a" | | 18 | "she called out, her voice" | | 19 | "It was swallowed by the" |
| | ratio | 0.838 | |
| 73.53% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, they were terrifyingly real." |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath hitched, not from exertion, but from the unsettling stillness that had fallen the moment she’d stepped beyond the crumbling stone markers." | | 1 | "She’d come here seeking Chloe, her younger sister, who had, according to the garbled message left on her phone, found her way to this secluded corner of Richmon…" | | 2 | "It wasn't a warmth that soothed, but one that prickled with a nascent alarm, a subtle warning her instincts had been screaming since she'd left the familiar, gr…" | | 3 | "Only an encroaching dread that tightened its icy grip around her chest." | | 4 | "She took a tentative step forward, her boots crunching on fallen leaves that felt strangely dry, unnaturally brittle, given the time of year." | | 5 | "She told herself it was a deer, or a fox, an animal that had strayed too close to this unnatural sanctuary." | | 6 | "A pale shape, darting from behind an ancient oak that seemed to twist and writhe as if alive." | | 7 | "It was gone before she could properly focus, a fleeting glimpse of something that wasn't quite right, not quite natural." | | 8 | "The air grew heavy, perfumed with a cloying sweetness, like dying flowers, that made her stomach churn." | | 9 | "She remembered something her father had told her once, about certain lilies that could lure unsuspecting prey with their fragrance before closing in." | | 10 | "It was a gurgle, a wet, struggling sound that ended abruptly, leaving behind only the insistent hum." | | 11 | "The Heartstone pulsed violently, a searing heat that made her gasp." | | 12 | "It was tall, impossibly thin, with limbs that moved with a disturbing, jerky grace." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice barely a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |