Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXS50THYPN1ZBBNBZJ3PSM

Run Details

Duration:
48.8s
Cost:
$0.045114
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Frost coated the tumbledown brick of the Richmond Park perimeter wall, stinging Rory's palms as she hastened her climb. She hooked a leg over the coping, rubber sole slipping against damp moss, and vaulted into the abyssal gloom of the park. Her landing crunched loud and violent in the stillness, the sound of boots hitting dead leaves echoing like a gunshot. She crouched, lungs burning from the bike ride over from the Golden Empress. The smell of stale lo mein and fryer grease clung to her jacket, a mundane anchor to the reality she had just left behind. Here, the air tasted of wet earth and decay. Rory scanned the tree line. Nothing moved. She stood, brushing dirt from her jeans. The silver chain around her neck felt heavy, the Heartstone pendant beneath her layers radiating a feverish heat against her sternum. It had started pulsing an hour ago, a rhythmic throb that synced uncomfortable with her heartbeat, forcing her out of her warm flat above Silas’ bar and into the freezing London night. "Alright. I'm here. Stop burning a hole in my chest." The pendant didn't listen. It flared hotter, urging her forward. She clicked on her torch. The beam cut a weak, milky cone through the mist rising from the bracken. Richmond Park at night wasn't just a closed public space; it was a yawning void in the middle of the city, ancient and indifferent. Rory marched off the path, wading into the knee-high grass. The pendant’s heat intensified with every step toward the dense cluster of oaks in the distance. The wind died the moment she stepped past the first line of gnarled trees. The distant, comforting hum of the A3 traffic vanished, severed as if someone had cut a wire. Silence pressed against her ears, thick and physical. She adjusted her grip on the torch, the metal slick in her sweating hand. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched, phantom nerve pain flaring in the cold. It always did that when the pressure dropped. The trees here grew wrong. Branches twisted at acute angles, resembling broken fingers snapping back toward the trunk. The bark looked slick, wet with something darker than rain. "Isolde?" Her voice sounded distinct, foreign in the vacuum. It didn't travel; the mist swallowed the sound instantly. No answer. Rory pushed deeper. The ground beneath her boots changed from firm mulch to something spongy, yielding too much. The scent of ozone and rot gave way to a sickly-sweet perfume. Heavy. Floral. The beam of her light swept across the ground and caught a splash of color. Violacious blues, blood-reds, bright yellows. Wildflowers. Thousands of them, blooming in the dead of a British winter, their petals wide and eager in the dark. She stepped over a patch of foxgloves that stood taller than her waist. The Heartstone seared her skin now, a steady, demanding burn. This was the spot. The boundary. Ancient oak standing stones loomed out of the fog, ragged pillars of wood that mocked the concept of decay. They hadn't rotted; they had petrified into grey iron-hard sentinels. Rory entered the circle. "I didn't come for a nature walk. If you have something to say, say it." The silence stretched, turning elastic. Then, a sound. *Snap.* Behind her. Not a twig breaking under a hoof, but the wet, distinct crack of weight shifting on bone. Rory spun, swinging the light. Shadows lengthened and retracted between the trees, dancing in the peripheral spill of the beam. A majestic stag stood twenty yards away, its antlers a chaotic bramble against the grey mist. She exhaled, shoulders dropping an inch. "Just a deer. Jesus, Rory. Get a grip." The stag didn't move. It didn't graze. It didn't twitch an ear. It stared directly at her light, its eyes reflecting nothing. No retinas flared back in the LED beam. Just empty, matte black sockets. A cold prickle started at the base of her spine. The stag took a step. It moved silently, hoof striking the ground without a sound, defying the physics of the dry leaves littering the floor. Rory took a step back. "Go on. Shoo." The stag tilted its head. The neck bent too far, twisting past the point of bone structure, until the snout pointed almost vertically at the sky, the black eyes still locked on her. Its jaw unhinged, dropping open to reveal rows of flat, human teeth. Rory didn't scream. Her brain switched gears, the analytical part of her mind that dissected legal briefs and escape routes taking the wheel. Fear was useless; action was survival. She backed away, keeping the light trained on the thing. She didn't turn to run. You don't turn your back on a predator. The creature didn't give chase. It melted. The form lost cohesion, the fur dissolving into the mist, the antlers turning back into low-hanging branches. It hadn't been there. Or it had, and it chose to become the forest again. Her breath hitched, coming in sharp, shallow rattles. Hallucination. The gases in these pockets of reality messed with perception. Silas had warned her about the bleed-through. She retreated toward the edge of the stone circle, her boots tangling in vines that hadn't been there a moment ago. The vines felt warm. Something brushed her ear. A strand of hair? A cobweb? She swatted it away. *“Aurora.”* The whisper came from inside her ear canal, wet and intimate. Rory whirled, swinging the flashlight in a frantic arc. Empty air. The heavy scent of flowers clogged her throat, tasting like funeral lilies. She checked her watch. The hands spun wildly, the second hand ticking backward, then vibrating in place. "Okay. Message received. I'm leaving." She turned to where the path should be. A wall of brambles blocked the way. Thorns the size of shark teeth interlocked in a rigid, impenetrable weave. "That wasn't there." She checked behind her. The stone markers were gone. The wildflowers had closed, their heads drooping like sleeping bats. The clearing had shrunk, the tree line crowding in, suffocating the open space. Rory gripped the flashlight like a club. She approached the bramble wall. "Move." She kicked the thickest root. It didn't budge, but a shudder ran through the entire thicket, leaves rustling in a wave of agitation. From the darkness to her left, the crunch of footsteps returned. Two-legged footsteps. Heavy. Deliberate. They paced her, staying just outside the reach of her light. She shifted her stance, pivoting to track the sound. *Crunch. Crunch. Crunch.* It stopped when she faced it. She waited. *Crunch.* It was behind her now. She spun again. Nothing but the grey trunks of the oaks, looking more like solidified smoke than wood. "Show yourself!" A laugh drifted through the grove. It wasn't menacing; it was worse. It was polite. A soft, muffled chuckle, like someone amused by a child's mistake. Rory’s heart hammered a frantic rhythm against her ribs. The pendant had gone cold, dragging down her neck like a block of ice. The guidance was gone. The trap had sprung. She looked for a gap in the canopy, a star, a reference point. The branches above had woven together into a solid ceiling of black lattice. The footsteps started again, faster this time. Closing the distance. She ran. She bolted toward a thinner patch of darkness between two massive yews, shielded her face with her forearm. Brambles tore at her jeans, snagging the fabric, slicing skin. She didn't feel it. She burst through the gap and slammed into something hard. Rory recoiled, beam flashing up. It was a tree. But it felt like warm leather. She stumbled back, lungs heaving. The bark pulsed under her hand before she pulled away. A heartbeat. The tree had a heartbeat. The damp fog thickened, swirling around her ankles, rising to her knees. It felt substantial, heavy as water. She needed a weapon. The flashlight wasn't enough. She patted her jacket pockets, fingers grazing her house keys. Useless. Review. Assess. Think. The Grove responded to intent. It was Fae-touched. It fed on panic. Rory forced herself to stop. She planted her feet, ignoring the frantic urge to sprint blindly into the dark. She closed her eyes, shutting out the shifting shadows. "I am not playing." She opened her eyes. The darkness ten feet in front of her coalesced. The mist gathered, twisting, densifying until it formed a silhouette. It was tall, impossibly thin, wearing the shape of a man like a loose suit. "You have something of ours," a voice said. It didn't come from the figure; it vibrated up through the soles of her feet. Rory’s hand went to the pendant. The metal bit into her palm with its icy chill. "Come and take it." The figure elongated, limbs stretching, joints popping with the sound of snapping timber. It stepped into the light. It had no face. Just a smooth surface of pale, polished wood where features should be. But she could feel it smiling. More shapes peeled away from the trees behind it. Three. Four. They moved firmly, boxing her in, blocking the exits that didn't exist anymore. Rory shone the light in the leader’s face. The beam passed right through the head, illuminating the trunk behind it. The figure wasn't solid. It was a projection. A lure. The real threat was the cold breath she suddenly felt on the back of her neck. Slowly, Rory lowered the flashlight. The air pressure plunged, popping her ears. The silence that followed was absolute, erasing even the sound of her own blood rushing in her head. A hand, long-fingered and cold as the grave, settled on her shoulder.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1620
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1620
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"abyssal"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"throb"
count1
6
word"comforting"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"loomed"
count1
9
word"sentinels"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"dancing"
count1
12
word"chaotic"
count1
13
word"structure"
count1
14
word"predator"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"footsteps"
count3
17
word"pulsed"
count1
18
word"vibrated"
count1
19
word"chill"
count1
20
word"could feel"
count1
21
word"firmly"
count1
22
word"grave"
count1
highlights
0"abyssal"
1"gloom"
2"echoing"
3"scanned"
4"rhythmic"
5"throb"
6"comforting"
7"silence"
8"loomed"
9"sentinels"
10"weight"
11"dancing"
12"chaotic"
13"structure"
14"predator"
15"whisper"
16"footsteps"
17"pulsed"
18"vibrated"
19"chill"
20"could feel"
21"firmly"
22"grave"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences187
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences187
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences199
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords6
totalWords1611
ratio0.004
matches
0"Snap."
1"“Aurora.”"
2"Crunch. Crunch. Crunch."
3"Crunch."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1541
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Rory16
Golden1
Empress1
Heartstone2
British1
Grove1
Fae-touched1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
globalScore0.981
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences103
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like warm leather"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.621
wordCount1611
matches
0"Not a twig breaking under a hoof, but the wet, distinct crack of weight shifting on bone"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences199
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs88
mean18.31
std14.08
cv0.769
sampleLengths
061
146
27
360
410
510
643
757
88
937
1028
111
1217
132
1432
1540
1629
1729
184
1915
205
213
221
2319
245
2531
2614
2735
2810
2925
308
3145
3229
3323
347
3532
3626
3725
3810
394
401
4111
4223
4317
445
458
4619
473
4832
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences187
matches
0"were gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs267
matches(empty)
56.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount6
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences199
ratio0.03
matches
0"Richmond Park at night wasn't just a closed public space; it was a yawning void in the middle of the city, ancient and indifferent."
1"It didn't travel; the mist swallowed the sound instantly."
2"They hadn't rotted; they had petrified into grey iron-hard sentinels."
3"Fear was useless; action was survival."
4"It wasn't menacing; it was worse."
5"It didn't come from the figure; it vibrated up through the soles of her feet."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount205
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.014634146341463415
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences199
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences199
mean8.1
std5.91
cv0.73
sampleLengths
019
122
220
313
424
59
65
72
87
921
1032
1110
124
136
145
1514
1624
1710
1816
1914
2017
218
2214
2315
248
255
2613
2710
281
298
309
312
323
3315
3412
351
361
3715
385
391
4019
4113
4210
434
442
4519
4610
474
4815
495
38.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats25
diversityRatio0.3065326633165829
totalSentences199
uniqueOpeners61
84.39% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences158
matches
0"Then, a sound."
1"Just empty, matte black sockets."
2"Just a smooth surface of"
3"Slowly, Rory lowered the flashlight."
ratio0.025
68.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences158
matches
0"She hooked a leg over"
1"Her landing crunched loud and"
2"She crouched, lungs burning from"
3"She stood, brushing dirt from"
4"It had started pulsing an"
5"It flared hotter, urging her"
6"She clicked on her torch."
7"She adjusted her grip on"
8"It always did that when"
9"Her voice sounded distinct, foreign"
10"It didn't travel; the mist"
11"She stepped over a patch"
12"They hadn't rotted; they had"
13"She exhaled, shoulders dropping an"
14"It didn't graze."
15"It didn't twitch an ear."
16"It stared directly at her"
17"It moved silently, hoof striking"
18"Its jaw unhinged, dropping open"
19"Her brain switched gears, the"
ratio0.38
10.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount142
totalSentences158
matches
0"Frost coated the tumbledown brick"
1"She hooked a leg over"
2"Her landing crunched loud and"
3"She crouched, lungs burning from"
4"The smell of stale lo"
5"Here, the air tasted of"
6"Rory scanned the tree line."
7"She stood, brushing dirt from"
8"The silver chain around her"
9"It had started pulsing an"
10"The pendant didn't listen."
11"It flared hotter, urging her"
12"She clicked on her torch."
13"The beam cut a weak,"
14"Richmond Park at night wasn't"
15"Rory marched off the path,"
16"The pendant’s heat intensified with"
17"The wind died the moment"
18"The distant, comforting hum of"
19"She adjusted her grip on"
ratio0.899
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences158
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Ancient oak standing stones loomed out of the fog, ragged pillars of wood that mocked the concept of decay."
1"Her brain switched gears, the analytical part of her mind that dissected legal briefs and escape routes taking the wheel."
2"She retreated toward the edge of the stone circle, her boots tangling in vines that hadn't been there a moment ago."
3"Brambles tore at her jeans, snagging the fabric, slicing skin."
4"The damp fog thickened, swirling around her ankles, rising to her knees."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.2926%