Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXS7603876GJ0MTFSVJ99Z

Run Details

Duration:
3m 22s
Cost:
$0.004779
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door buzzed with a low, electric hum that vibrated in the teeth. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air hung heavy with the scent of polished wood and stale lager. Maps covered the walls, yellowed edges curling away from the plaster, pinned beneath black-and-white photographs of faces long forgotten. Aurora Carter sat at the far end of the bar, her fingers tracing the rim of a half-empty pint glass. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the dim light as she rotated the glass. Silas Blackwood moved behind the counter, his left leg dragging slightly with each step. He wiped a spot on the mahogany surface with a rag, his hazel eyes scanning the room without really seeing it. The silver signet ring on his right hand clicked against a bottle neck as he set it down. The door opened. A gust of cold London air swept through the room, carrying the smell of rain and exhaust. A woman stepped inside. She shook a wet umbrella, water droplets flying onto the worn floorboards. Her coat was expensive wool, cut sharp at the shoulders. She scanned the room, eyes adjusting to the gloom. When her gaze landed on the figure at the end of the bar, she froze. Aurora looked up. The bright blue eyes narrowed. Eva walked over. Her heels clicked on the wood, a sharp contrast to the soft jazz playing from the corner speakers. She stopped two stools away from Aurora. Rory. Aurora did not smile. She took a sip of her beer. Eva pulled out the stool and sat. The movement was stiff. She placed her hands on the bar, palms down. Her nails were manicured, pale pink. Aurora's hands were rough, cuticles short and clean but skin weathered from handling delivery boxes and motorcycle grips. Silas approached. He looked at Eva, then at Aurora. The usual? Aurora nodded. Eva looked at Silas. Gin and tonic. Lime. Silas turned to the back shelf. The glass bottles clinked. Ice cracked in the scoop. You look different. Aurora set the glass down. The liquid rippled. Time passes. Three years. Something like that. Eva turned on the stool to face her fully. The neon light from the window cast a green tint across her cheekbones. She looked older. The softness around her jaw had hardened. I looked for you. After you left Cardiff. Aurora picked at a label on the beer glass. It peeled away in a strip. You looked in Cardiff. I moved to London. I called your parents. And? They said you didn't want to be found. Aurora lifted the glass again. The condensation wet her fingertips. They told the truth. Silas placed the gin and tonic in front of Eva. He slid a napkin under the base. He did not speak. He moved back to the other end of the bar, picking up a cloth to polish a tap. The limp was more pronounced when he turned away. Eva wrapped her hands around the cold glass. She did not drink. I heard about Evan. Aurora's hand stopped on the glass. The blue eyes locked onto Eva. What did you hear? That it was bad. Before you left. It was. I should have done something. When you came to uni that last semester. You wore long sleeves in July. Aurora took a long drink. She swallowed hard. You were busy. Exams. Your own life. Don't do that. Do what? Make it sound like I had a choice. You did. Everyone does. Eva flinched. She took a sip of the gin, the ice clinking against her teeth. I was scared. Of him. Of what he might do if I intervened. And now? Now I'm here. Aurora laughed. It was a dry sound, devoid of humour. It echoed off the maps on the wall. You're here because you're visiting. Or passing through. I live above this place. Eva looked around the room. She studied the photographs, the shadows in the corners. You live in a bar? I live in a flat. The bar is downstairs. It's dark. It's quiet. Silas moved back toward them. He refilled Aurora's water glass without being asked. He caught Aurora's eye. She gave a slight shake of her head. He nodded and moved away, the silver ring flashing under the low lights. Your mother worries. She shouldn't. She's your mother. She's a teacher. She teaches children to follow rules. I broke a few. You left law school. Pre-law. I never started the actual law. You were going to be a barrister. Like your father. I'm a delivery person. For a Chinese restaurant in Soho. Golden Empress. Eva stared at her. The judgment hung in the air, unspoken but heavy. You were brilliant. Top of the cohort. I was tired. You ran away. I left. Same thing. Aurora stood up. The stool scraped against the floor. She towered over Eva by an inch in her boots. She walked to the window. The green neon sign reflected in the glass, overlaying her face. Outside, rain streaked the pane. Running implies fear. I walked out the door. I took a train. I found a job. I found a place to sleep. You found a hiding spot. Aurora turned back. Her black hair fell straight around her shoulders. Safety costs money. Hiding costs nothing. Eva stood up as well. She smoothed the front of her coat. The wool whispered against itself. I'm getting married. Next month. Aurora walked back to the bar. She sat down again. Congratulations. He's a solicitor. In Cardiff. Safe. He's good. Good. Eva picked up her drink. Her hand shook slightly. She set it down before taking a sip. Come back. For the wedding. I work. Take a day off. Deliveries don't stop for weddings. I'll pay for the ticket. I don't need charity. It's not charity. It's family. We aren't family. We were. Aurora looked at her left wrist. She rubbed the scar with her thumb. The skin was smooth but the memory of the impact remained. People change. You stayed there. I came here. You wear wool coats. I wear leather jackets that smell like grease. You marry solicitors. I live above a spymaster. Eva's eyes widened. She looked at Silas. He stood in the shadows, cleaning a glass. He did not look up. What? Nothing. You said spymaster. Figure of speech. He owns the bar. He looks like... Like what? Like someone who knows things. He knows how to pour a drink. That's enough for me. Eva leaned in. The scent of her perfume was floral, cloying. It fought with the smell of beer. I miss you. Aurora looked at the door. The green neon buzzed. You miss who I was. I miss my friend. She died in Cardiff. That's not fair. Life isn't fair. Evan taught me that. You taught me that silence is easier than speech. I didn't teach you that. You practiced it. Every time I showed up with a bruise and you asked about the weather instead. Eva opened her mouth. She closed it. She reached for her bag on the stool. I have to go. My train leaves in an hour. Okay. Will you call? Aurora picked up her beer. She drained the last of it. She set the glass down with a solid thud. I have shifts. Just think about it. The wedding. I'll think about it. Eva slid off the stool. She hesitated. She reached out a hand toward Aurora's shoulder. She stopped mid-air. She pulled her hand back and adjusted her coat instead. Take care, Rory. You too, Eva. Eva walked to the door. She opened it. The bell above the frame chimed. The cold air rushed in again, swirling the dust motes near the floor. She stepped out into the rain. The door closed. Silas walked over. He picked up the empty gin glass. He looked at the door, then at Aurora. She looked rich. She looked trapped. You looked tired. I am tired. He poured another inch of beer into her glass. On the house. Aurora ran her thumb over the scar on her wrist. She looked at the reflection in the mirror behind the bar. The maps stared back. The faces in the photographs watched. Keep it. I'm working in twenty. Yu-Fei will wait. Yu-Fei doesn't pay me to sit. Yu-Fei pays you to deliver. You're still here. Aurora stood up. She pulled on her helmet from the hook under the counter. The straps hung loose. Difference between sitting and waiting. She walked toward the back room. The bookshelf stood against the wall, slightly ajar. She pushed it open. The hidden room behind it was dark. Where are you going? To check the route. The rain is heavy. The roads are empty. Silas leaned on the bar. His knee bent stiffly. Don't rush. Aurora paused in the doorway. The light from the bar cut across her face, leaving one eye in shadow. If I rush, I get there sooner. If you rush, you crash. Aurora stepped into the dark room. The bookshelf swung shut behind her, cutting off the light from the bar. The neon buzz continued on the other side of the wood.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
87.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1547
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1547
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"vibrated"
2"tracing"
3"scanning"
4"scanned"
5"gloom"
6"echoed"
7"unspoken"
8"silence"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences285
matches
0"was scared"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences285
filterMatches
0"look"
1"hear"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences285
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1539
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions102
wordCount1539
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.75
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Blackwood1
London2
Aurora27
Eva20
Silas9
Cardiff4
Evan2
July1
Chinese1
Soho1
Empress1
Rory2
You22
Like3
Yu-Fei3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Blackwood"
2"Aurora"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
5"Evan"
6"Rory"
7"You"
8"Yu-Fei"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"July"
4"Soho"
globalScore0.623
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1539
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences285
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs150
mean10.26
std12.3
cv1.199
sampleLengths
090
153
220
350
48
528
61
711
844
99
102
112
124
134
1415
153
168
172
182
193
2032
218
2215
238
244
251
268
2710
284
2948
3012
314
3212
334
347
352
3619
378
387
393
402
418
424
4315
4413
452
463
4718
4813
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences285
matches
0"were manicured"
1"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs322
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences285
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1548
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.021963824289405683
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.005813953488372093
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences285
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences285
mean5.4
std3.78
cv0.701
sampleLengths
018
117
219
320
416
514
621
718
83
917
104
1112
1210
139
1415
153
165
173
1818
197
201
214
227
237
244
259
266
2718
282
297
302
312
324
333
341
356
364
375
383
395
403
412
422
433
449
4513
463
477
484
494
37.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats36
diversityRatio0.256140350877193
totalSentences285
uniqueOpeners73
13.77% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences242
matches
0"Just think about it."
ratio0.004
18.35% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount122
totalSentences242
matches
0"He wiped a spot on"
1"She shook a wet umbrella,"
2"Her coat was expensive wool,"
3"She scanned the room, eyes"
4"Her heels clicked on the"
5"She stopped two stools away"
6"She took a sip of"
7"She placed her hands on"
8"Her nails were manicured, pale"
9"He looked at Eva, then"
10"You look different."
11"She looked older."
12"I looked for you."
13"It peeled away in a"
14"You looked in Cardiff."
15"I moved to London."
16"I called your parents."
17"They said you didn't want"
18"They told the truth."
19"He slid a napkin under"
ratio0.504
13.72% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount216
totalSentences242
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Maps covered the walls, yellowed"
2"Aurora Carter sat at the"
3"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
4"Silas Blackwood moved behind the"
5"He wiped a spot on"
6"The silver signet ring on"
7"The door opened."
8"A gust of cold London"
9"A woman stepped inside."
10"She shook a wet umbrella,"
11"Her coat was expensive wool,"
12"She scanned the room, eyes"
13"Aurora looked up."
14"The bright blue eyes narrowed."
15"Eva walked over."
16"Her heels clicked on the"
17"She stopped two stools away"
18"Aurora did not smile."
19"She took a sip of"
ratio0.893
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences242
matches
0"Before you left."
1"Now I'm here."
2"To check the route."
3"If I rush, I get"
4"If you rush, you crash."
ratio0.021
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The green neon sign above the door buzzed with a low, electric hum that vibrated in the teeth."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.7064%