Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXS8VERFE7GC0WFANBXQTS

Run Details

Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.009452
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung inward on its last deadbolt and the corridor light spilled into the flat like a spotlight on a stage, catching dust motes and the spines of a dozen books. He filled the doorway—tailored charcoal cut against the cramped room, ivory-handled cane under one arm like a question mark. One eye took the light and held it amber; the other drank the shadows and offered nothing. "Lucien." She didn't say it like a greeting. The single-syllable landed sharp and small, a stone dropped into the pool they had both been avoiding. Her hand hovered on the doorframe, fingers curled around the chipped paint where she had once argued with Eva about leaving home. His mouth twitched. He stepped forward, boots muffled on the threadbare runner, and the flat seemed suddenly too small for two sets of history. "I knocked," he said. The word sat between them like an accusation. He had not called. He had not warned her. The cat—Ptolemy—cut a slow arc from the armchair and rubbed his flank against Lucien's ankle, vibrating like a tuning fork. Ptolemy draped himself across Lucien's shoe and blinked. Lucien bent, gloved fingers brushing the tabby's head. He did not step back. "You can't just open my door," Rory said. She let the shirt sleeve slip, revealing the faint crescent scar on her left wrist like a punctuation mark she had grown used to. "There are three deadbolts for a reason." He looked at the scar the way someone might regard a familiar bruise. No pity. Only calculation. He tightened his grip on the cane so his knuckles whitened. "I know how to pick deadbolts," he said. The room hummed with everything unsaid. Books leaned against one another like teetering witnesses. Scrolls unfurled on the table as if someone had been interrupted mid-argument. Coffee cooled in a mug rimmed with lipstick. The flat smelled of old paper and lemon soap and something jagged beneath the surface—demon-scent, faint and cold, like iron left in the rain. Rory closed the door behind her and thumbed at the locks, the familiar motion grounding. "Why are you here, Lucien?" He glanced around once, taking in the narrow kitchen, the stack of law textbooks under the bed, the string of fairy lights that Eva had insisted would make the place feel less temporary. He let a half-smile curl, then dropped it. "Needed to speak with you." She crossed the tiny room in three large strides and planted herself on the edge of the sofa, fingers pressed flat into the fabric. Her pulse thudded under her ribs like an impatient drummer. "You could have written." "I don't wear paper well tonight." He unbuttoned his coat with deliberate slowness and let it fall open. A thin hint of smoke rose with it, and for a second Rory imagined her wrists wrapped in his hands and the world reduced to heat. "Can I sit?" The question was courtesy, not permission. He eased onto the armchair opposite, the cane laid across his knees like a boundary. He watched her with a kind of candid attention that used to make her feel seen and exposed, and it cut deeper than anything he might have thrown at her in anger. "You left," she said then. The words came pointed, sharp as glass. "You were supposed to keep watch. You were supposed to be here." His jaw moved. He kept his voice level. "I got pulled." "Pulled where? Away from me?" She leaned forward. Her voice narrowed to a knife. "You promised." He laughed, a short bark that had no humour in it. "Promise isn't a coin you spend without consequence, Rory." "You promised me the truth." The room flared hot and then cold. She had never called him Lucien like that before; the formal name made the memory of their last night together feel official and recorded. She had lain awake afterwards, waiting for the endless list of excuses. He had given her none. He had left a place in her bed and in her life that slid into every empty hour like a missing verse. He reached into his coat and drew out a folded scrap of paper. He held it up between long fingers as though it might explain itself. "You left this on my table," she said, the edge of sarcasm cutting the edge of something raw. "No signature. No explanation why you vanished for three weeks." He shook his head once, slow. "There's always a signature, Rory." "Then sign it," she said, and the air between them sizzled because the easy banter had been a map to better days and now it showed nothing but borders. "Tell me why you left." Lucien set the scrap down and let his gaze slide to the ceiling, then back to the plaster above the bookcase where a small water stain looked like a map of an island. "If I had walked away without cause, you would be right to hate me. But I didn't walk away." "Then explain," she said. Her arms folded across her chest as if to guard something inside. She wanted to be vicious; she wanted to be small. She wanted him to fix the broken things with words. He had always been able to find the seams with his eyes. He had never been good at mending them. He reached out and tapped the scar on her wrist with the tip of his cane like someone testing a string to see if it would snap. The touch was precise, clinical. It made heat pool in her palms. "You were in danger," he said. "Someone was watching the flat. I found out too late." "You found out too late," she echoed. Rage flared and died like a match in a jar. "You could have told me." "I tried." He said it like a confession and then licked his lips. "I tried to get you out. But there were others. Choices are ugly." "Choices are always ugly for me," she said. The words landed like a verdict. She had left Evan because each choice had twisted into a chain. She had chosen law school because it looked like a straight road. Lucien's 'choices' had been another bind. "You were never an option when I needed protection. You were always the one to leave." Ptolemy climbed onto the coffee table and scattered a pile of loose research notes. One fell at Lucien's boot where his cane had left a semi-circle on the rug. He nudged the paper with his polished shoe as if assessing its usefulness and then folded his hands on his knee. "You left because of what I am," he said finally. That was the center of everything. He had never hid his heritage—half-demon, with a father from Avaros—but he had navigated it like fog, making lines where he could. Rory had once told him she admired the way his demonic edge made him honest. She had said it like a compliment and like a dare. "What I am doesn't make me a coward," he said. "It makes me a target." Rory's laugh came out small and brittle. "And leaving is the brave thing? Taking the path that inconveniences me?" "It wasn't about inconvenience," he said. He turned the cane in his hands, the ivory glinting. "It was about survival. About buying you time you didn't know you needed." "You don't get to tell me what I need." He exhaled, a soft sound that seemed to cost him. "I didn't tell you. I ordered a cab and a burner phone and a roof with a view. You slept. You thought you were alone." Her throat tightened. Memory crashed in—his voice in the dark, curses thrown like rope, the slam of a car door. The taste of copper in the air from when she'd bitten her lip raw. "You talk like you were my guardian angel," she said. "You weren't there to sign my birthday card, Lucien. You weren't there when I called Evan's bluff. You vanished when I needed someone who would answer a door at night." He didn't rush to defend himself. Instead he leaned forward, and for a moment his face was a map of lines that told the rest of his story without words. The amber eye softened. The black one remained a cold cliff, depthless. "Do you remember the night in Marseille?" he asked quietly. Her jaw tensed. They had not spoken about that evening in years. It had been before London, before Brick Lane and before Evan's bruises. It had been when they were younger, worse at keeping demons at bay. "You left me in Marseille," she said. The memory was a smell—salt and gasoline and the wicked tang of fear. "You said you'd be back before sunrise. You weren't." "I didn't leave you," he said then, and it wasn't a defence so much as a correction. "I was taken. I was taken and I fought. I cut my way out." She stared at him, the past unfurling. His hands were steady on the cane, knuckles knotted like someone who had seen too much. "You were taken by them," she said. "The Avaros people." He nodded once. "They wanted leverage. I escaped them. But the cost of that escape was stepping into other people's paths. Sometimes you step into a room and gravity changes. You have no idea why until you feel it." "Then you should have told me," she said. "This patronising 'for your own good' line—save it for someone who hasn't been keeping a ledger of how often you decide my life for me." Lucien's face cooled. "You keep a ledger, Rory. I keep a ledger. They don't add up." She pushed off the sofa and paced the narrow span between the kitchenette and the bookshelf like a metronome setting a tempo. "I don't know if I can trust you," she said. The admission felt final and fragile, like a plate put on a shelf. "Not after you walked." He watched her with a look that was not pity; it was appraisal. "Trust is built," he said. "Not found in the pocket of a coat." "Then start building." He folded his hands and let silence swell. Outside, a tram sighed down Brick Lane and voices from the street threaded through the thin walls. In the flat, time felt smaller, focused on two people whose histories boxed one another in like lines on a map. Lucien stood and put his cane upright. He crossed the room in a handful of steps and stopped at the kitchen counter, setting the cane against the microwave as if to anchor himself somewhere solid. "There's a reason I'm here," he said. "And it's not only to rummage through old debts." She halted. The word 'reason' had both hope and threat braided through it. "Then say it." He looked at her then, and his gaze settled not on the scar or the books or the trail of notes Ptolemy had left, but on the small, unconscious movements she made when she tried to be larger than the space she occupied. "I've been followed," he said. "For the last week. People who used to be content to pull strings in Avaros have moved their gaze to Earth. I need to know you are safe. I need to make sure the place you sleep isn't a map to your wrists." Her laugh was a short exhale. "So you're back because you're worried about me. How very noble." "I'm not noble," he said. "I just know what their patience costs." "You don't get to decide that for me," she said again, but the edge had tempered. It was a claim of ownership, not of anger. She had practised it in solitude. Lucien walked back to the armchair and sat. The cane clicked against the floor. He folded his fingers over the handle and met her eyes full on, an offer and a challenge in equal measure. "Stay with Eva tonight," he said. "She has three deadbolts and a cat who will report suspicious scents. Let me station outside for as long as I have to." She stared at him. The image of him standing in the rain outside her window had been something she had conjured alone at night, a silhouette with one amber eye bright as a coin. The idea of him watching over her made her bristle in ways she didn't like. "And if I refuse?" He smiled then, and it was both rue and something softer. "Then I'll wake you at three a.m. with pounded fists on your door, and you'll be furious enough to let me in." She opened her mouth to retort, and the cat leaped onto her knee, urgent and insistent. Ptolemy's purr rumbled against her thigh like a small engine, and the familiar noise broke the moment into something less brittle. "Fine," she said at last. "Tonight. But no more ghosting." "You get one night of official bodyguard service," he said. "Then we renegotiate." She looked at him and found she couldn't pull her catalogue of grievances into a weapon sharp enough for what she felt. The room softened at the corners. Books seemed less like witnesses and more like shelter. Outside, Brick Lane carried on without regard for their reconciliation. "One night," she repeated. The phrase was both surrender and beginning. He inclined his head, the briefest of bows that carried with it more apology than any paragraph could hold. He picked up his cane. The ivory caught the light and flared like a promise.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
68.42% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags32
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"she said then [then]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
2"he asked quietly [quietly]"
3"he said then [then]"
4"she said again [again]"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0.156
effectiveRatio0.132
95.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2279
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2279
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"familiar"
count3
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"pulse"
2"echoed"
3"navigated"
4"glinting"
5"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences150
matches
0"r in anger"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences150
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences194
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2263
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions44
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1617
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Ptolemy5
Lucien10
Rory5
Rage1
Evan2
Avaros1
London1
Brick3
Lane3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
4"Rage"
5"Evan"
places
0"Avaros"
1"London"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like a map of an island"
1"looked like a straight road"
2"as if assessing its usefulness and then folded his hands on his knee"
3"sound that seemed to cost him"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.442
wordCount2263
matches
0"not on the scar or the books or the trail of notes Ptolemy had left, but on the small, unconscious movements she made"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences194
matches
0"lights that Eva"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean30.58
std18.62
cv0.609
sampleLengths
068
11
246
324
44
537
621
739
828
98
1058
1120
1241
135
1438
1547
1653
1724
1811
1916
2020
215
2270
2326
2428
2511
2634
2752
2856
2939
3016
3122
3226
3360
3450
3510
3654
3715
3819
3929
409
4135
4274
4342
4410
4537
4629
4731
4833
4939
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences150
matches
0"been interrupted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs295
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences194
ratio0.052
matches
0"He filled the doorway—tailored charcoal cut against the cramped room, ivory-handled cane under one arm like a question mark."
1"One eye took the light and held it amber; the other drank the shadows and offered nothing."
2"The cat—Ptolemy—cut a slow arc from the armchair and rubbed his flank against Lucien's ankle, vibrating like a tuning fork."
3"The flat smelled of old paper and lemon soap and something jagged beneath the surface—demon-scent, faint and cold, like iron left in the rain."
4"She had never called him Lucien like that before; the formal name made the memory of their last night together feel official and recorded."
5"She wanted to be vicious; she wanted to be small."
6"He had never hid his heritage—half-demon, with a father from Avaros—but he had navigated it like fog, making lines where he could."
7"Memory crashed in—his voice in the dark, curses thrown like rope, the slam of a car door."
8"The memory was a smell—salt and gasoline and the wicked tang of fear."
9"He watched her with a look that was not pity; it was appraisal."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1312
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.022103658536585365
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001524390243902439
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences194
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences194
mean11.66
std8.11
cv0.696
sampleLengths
032
119
217
31
47
517
622
73
821
94
108
114
125
1320
148
158
165
178
1824
197
2013
212
222
2311
248
256
268
2712
288
2924
3015
315
3233
338
345
3524
3610
374
3818
3926
403
416
4215
4332
445
457
4612
473
485
493
39.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.2422680412371134
totalSentences194
uniqueOpeners47
26.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences124
matches
0"Instead he leaned forward, and"
ratio0.008
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount77
totalSentences124
matches
0"He filled the doorway—tailored charcoal"
1"She didn't say it like"
2"Her hand hovered on the"
3"His mouth twitched."
4"He stepped forward, boots muffled"
5"He had not called."
6"He had not warned her."
7"He did not step back."
8"She let the shirt sleeve"
9"He looked at the scar"
10"He tightened his grip on"
11"He glanced around once, taking"
12"He let a half-smile curl,"
13"She crossed the tiny room"
14"Her pulse thudded under her"
15"He unbuttoned his coat with"
16"He eased onto the armchair"
17"He watched her with a"
18"she said then"
19"His jaw moved."
ratio0.621
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount118
totalSentences124
matches
0"The door swung inward on"
1"He filled the doorway—tailored charcoal"
2"She didn't say it like"
3"The single-syllable landed sharp and"
4"Her hand hovered on the"
5"His mouth twitched."
6"He stepped forward, boots muffled"
7"The word sat between them"
8"He had not called."
9"He had not warned her."
10"The cat—Ptolemy—cut a slow arc"
11"Ptolemy draped himself across Lucien's"
12"Lucien bent, gloved fingers brushing"
13"He did not step back."
14"She let the shirt sleeve"
15"He looked at the scar"
16"He tightened his grip on"
17"The room hummed with everything"
18"Books leaned against one another"
19"Scrolls unfurled on the table"
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He nudged the paper with his polished shoe as if assessing its usefulness and then folded his hands on his knee."
1"Instead he leaned forward, and for a moment his face was a map of lines that told the rest of his story without words."
2"He crossed the room in a handful of steps and stopped at the kitchen counter, setting the cane against the microwave as if to anchor himself somewhere solid."
3"He inclined his head, the briefest of bows that carried with it more apology than any paragraph could hold."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags32
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, the edge of sarcasm cutting the edge of something raw"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags29
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.382
leniency0.763
rawRatio0.034
effectiveRatio0.026
78.8822%