| 68.42% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 32 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said then [then]" | | 1 | "he said finally [finally]" | | 2 | "he asked quietly [quietly]" | | 3 | "he said then [then]" | | 4 | "she said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 76 | | tagDensity | 0.421 | | leniency | 0.842 | | rawRatio | 0.156 | | effectiveRatio | 0.132 | |
| 95.61% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2279 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 82.45% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2279 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "navigated" | | 4 | "glinting" | | 5 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 150 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 150 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 194 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2263 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 44 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1617 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.62 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 2 | | Ptolemy | 5 | | Lucien | 10 | | Rory | 5 | | Rage | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Avaros | 1 | | London | 1 | | Brick | 3 | | Lane | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Rage" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Avaros" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Brick" | | 3 | "Lane" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 53.85% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a map of an island" | | 1 | "looked like a straight road" | | 2 | "as if assessing its usefulness and then folded his hands on his knee" | | 3 | "sound that seemed to cost him" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.442 | | wordCount | 2263 | | matches | | 0 | "not on the scar or the books or the trail of notes Ptolemy had left, but on the small, unconscious movements she made" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 194 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 74 | | mean | 30.58 | | std | 18.62 | | cv | 0.609 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 1 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 58 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 53 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 70 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 52 | | 28 | 56 | | 29 | 39 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 60 | | 34 | 50 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 54 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 35 | | 42 | 74 | | 43 | 42 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 37 | | 46 | 29 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 39 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 295 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 194 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "He filled the doorway—tailored charcoal cut against the cramped room, ivory-handled cane under one arm like a question mark." | | 1 | "One eye took the light and held it amber; the other drank the shadows and offered nothing." | | 2 | "The cat—Ptolemy—cut a slow arc from the armchair and rubbed his flank against Lucien's ankle, vibrating like a tuning fork." | | 3 | "The flat smelled of old paper and lemon soap and something jagged beneath the surface—demon-scent, faint and cold, like iron left in the rain." | | 4 | "She had never called him Lucien like that before; the formal name made the memory of their last night together feel official and recorded." | | 5 | "She wanted to be vicious; she wanted to be small." | | 6 | "He had never hid his heritage—half-demon, with a father from Avaros—but he had navigated it like fog, making lines where he could." | | 7 | "Memory crashed in—his voice in the dark, curses thrown like rope, the slam of a car door." | | 8 | "The memory was a smell—salt and gasoline and the wicked tang of fear." | | 9 | "He watched her with a look that was not pity; it was appraisal." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1312 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.022103658536585365 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.001524390243902439 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 194 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 194 | | mean | 11.66 | | std | 8.11 | | cv | 0.696 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 32 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 39.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.2422680412371134 | | totalSentences | 194 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 26.88% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead he leaned forward, and" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | | 0 | "He filled the doorway—tailored charcoal" | | 1 | "She didn't say it like" | | 2 | "Her hand hovered on the" | | 3 | "His mouth twitched." | | 4 | "He stepped forward, boots muffled" | | 5 | "He had not called." | | 6 | "He had not warned her." | | 7 | "He did not step back." | | 8 | "She let the shirt sleeve" | | 9 | "He looked at the scar" | | 10 | "He tightened his grip on" | | 11 | "He glanced around once, taking" | | 12 | "He let a half-smile curl," | | 13 | "She crossed the tiny room" | | 14 | "Her pulse thudded under her" | | 15 | "He unbuttoned his coat with" | | 16 | "He eased onto the armchair" | | 17 | "He watched her with a" | | 18 | "she said then" | | 19 | "His jaw moved." |
| | ratio | 0.621 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 118 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung inward on" | | 1 | "He filled the doorway—tailored charcoal" | | 2 | "She didn't say it like" | | 3 | "The single-syllable landed sharp and" | | 4 | "Her hand hovered on the" | | 5 | "His mouth twitched." | | 6 | "He stepped forward, boots muffled" | | 7 | "The word sat between them" | | 8 | "He had not called." | | 9 | "He had not warned her." | | 10 | "The cat—Ptolemy—cut a slow arc" | | 11 | "Ptolemy draped himself across Lucien's" | | 12 | "Lucien bent, gloved fingers brushing" | | 13 | "He did not step back." | | 14 | "She let the shirt sleeve" | | 15 | "He looked at the scar" | | 16 | "He tightened his grip on" | | 17 | "The room hummed with everything" | | 18 | "Books leaned against one another" | | 19 | "Scrolls unfurled on the table" |
| | ratio | 0.952 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 99.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "He nudged the paper with his polished shoe as if assessing its usefulness and then folded his hands on his knee." | | 1 | "Instead he leaned forward, and for a moment his face was a map of lines that told the rest of his story without words." | | 2 | "He crossed the room in a handful of steps and stopped at the kitchen counter, setting the cane against the microwave as if to anchor himself somewhere solid." | | 3 | "He inclined his head, the briefest of bows that carried with it more apology than any paragraph could hold." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 32 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, the edge of sarcasm cutting the edge of something raw" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 29 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 76 | | tagDensity | 0.382 | | leniency | 0.763 | | rawRatio | 0.034 | | effectiveRatio | 0.026 | |