Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXSEWFWZZX679JW8XKW5BZ

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27.4s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest smelled exactly as Aurora remembered it. Mahogany and whisky and something else underneath, something older. Smoke that had seeped into the walls so thoroughly that no ventilation system could ever purge it completely. She pushed through the heavy oak door, a stack of takeaway containers balanced against her hip. Three orders for the regulars who drank more than they ate. Silas had called the restaurant an hour ago, mentioned it casually like he always did, like he wasn't the reason she'd taken this delivery route in the first place. The bar was half full for a Tuesday night. She recognised most faces. The accountant in the corner with his laptop and cider. The two art students who came in every other evening and occupied a table as though they owned the lease. The businessman with the wedding ring he kept turning round and round his finger like a prayer wheel. Then she saw him. He sat at a table near the back, alone, nursing a gin and tonic with the kind of attention most people reserved for religious texts. Taller than she remembered. The easy slouch she'd known had been replaced with something straighter, more deliberate. His hair had darkened to a proper auburn, the boyish dishevelment replaced by something styled. Expensive. His suit was definitely expensive. Rory's feet stopped moving. "Christ, Rory, I'll take those now before they go cold." Silas materialised from behind the bar like he'd summoned him through sheer force of recognition. His hazel eyes tracked her gaze immediately. They moved from her face to the corner table. Something flickered there, something knowing. "You knew," she said. "He came in three hours ago. Asked about you." She thrust the containers at him harder than necessary. He took them without complaint, his silver signet ring catching the amber light. The limp was more pronounced today, the one he never discussed and she'd learned not to ask about. "What did you tell him?" "The truth. That you work here. That you're doing well." "I'm delivering food for a living, Si." "And thriving." He disappeared into the kitchen before she could argue further. Silas had a talent for tactical retreats. The man looked up then. Not at her directly, but past her, the way you might notice a change in air pressure. Then his eyes swung back and found her, and the gin glass froze halfway to his lips. Marcus Webb had been her best friend for sixteen years. They'd met in primary school when he'd punched a boy who'd been calling her names. By university they'd done everything together. He'd held her hair back through terrible hangovers, walked her through the end of her terrible engagement to Evan, promised he'd always be there. Then he'd moved to Singapore for a position at some investment firm, and they'd become the kind of friends that said they'd keep in touch and slowly discovered that they preferred to be ghosts to each other. She watched recognition bloom across his face in real time. "Rory?" She didn't move. He stood instead, nearly knocking over the gin glass, and suddenly there was a physical distance between them that hadn't existed five seconds ago. "It is you. Jesus. I wasn't sure when I walked in. Silas said you worked here, and I thought maybe it was coincidence, but then you came through the door and I recognised the walk before the face and I'm—" He stopped, laughed, the sound too bright for the dimly lit bar. "I'm rambling. Sorry. It's been." "Years," she said. "Has it? I mean, yes, obviously it has. I can see it has. You're... different." She was different. That much was evident in the way he was looking at her, as though she'd rearranged herself while he wasn't watching. As though the Aurora he'd left behind would have stayed the same, preserved in amber, waiting for him to decide when he was ready to come home. "Come sit." It wasn't a question, the way he phrased it. The soft command of someone accustomed to being obeyed. She pulled out the chair opposite him and sat anyway. "How long has it been?" he asked again, buying time, trying to recover from whatever he'd been expecting and finding instead this version of her. "Five years. Nearly six." "Right. Right. Singapore, then Hong Kong, then the London transfer. I meant to write. I did write, actually. Had a message half-finished a dozen times. But work was... you know how it gets." She did know. Or rather, she'd known him when they were both pretending that work mattered more than friendship, that opportunity justified abandonment. She'd been different then. So had he, apparently, though in his case it was an improvement. The suit alone probably cost more than her rent. "You look well," she offered. "So do you. Really well, actually. I wasn't expecting—the bar's nice. Silas is a character. I didn't know that was possible, but he somehow runs the place like it's a diplomatic embassy. Has he always been like that?" "Mostly." She traced the rim of her water glass, watching the condensation bead against her fingertip. "He's been kind to me." The implication hung there between them, unspoken but present. Kind in the way Marcus hadn't been able to manage from six thousand miles away. "I've thought about you," he said abruptly. "More often than I probably should admit. Wondered how you were, if you were happy, if you'd made it through all that business with Evan." "I did." "Good. That's good. I was worried, you know. When you called that night, so late, talking about leaving Cardiff and needing to disappear. I wanted to come with you, actually. Suggested it. You said it was something you needed to do alone." She had said that. She remembered the phone call, remembered the weight of it, the way her voice had sounded like someone else's. He'd offered and she'd refused because she'd still believed then that people came back if you asked them to. That love required suffering through it solo, that the reunion would make it worthwhile. "It was something I needed to do alone," she said. Marcus nodded slowly, recognising the finality in the sentence. His gin glass emptied. He didn't signal for another. "I got promoted last month," he ventured. "Senior analyst. The position came with a relocation. Back to London. I start in two weeks." Something twisted in her chest, something she couldn't quite name. "That's excellent. Congratulations." "I was going to look you up. Properly, I mean. Not like this. I thought I'd try social media first, see if you'd been searchable, and when you weren't I figured maybe you'd moved on. Different life, different people. And then I came in here and Silas said your name like it was the most natural thing in the world, and I thought maybe the universe was giving me a second attempt." "The universe is indifferent," she said quietly. "I didn't believe that when we were twenty." "We believed a lot of things when we were twenty." He looked at her then with the full weight of his attention, and she could see him searching, trying to find the girl he'd known in the woman across from him. Rory had spent enough time becoming unrecognisable to understand what that felt like from both sides. "I'm sorry," he said. "For losing you." She didn't soften. Sympathy was a trap she'd learned to avoid, especially from people who meant well. She'd learned that apologies were often just requests for forgiveness that relieved the apologiser without costing them anything real. "You didn't lose me," she said. "You left. I stayed. And then we both moved on." "Did we, though? Really?" The door to the kitchen opened. Silas emerged with fresh drinks, moving with his careful, measured gait. He set a vodka tonic in front of Rory without her having ordered it, placed a Hendrick's gin in front of Marcus, and vanished again before either of them could acknowledge him. Marcus turned the glass slowly, watching the ice catch the light. "I loved you," he said. "I don't think I ever properly told you that. Not in those terms." "I know." "And you loved me too." "I did." "But?" She looked at him across the table, this man who'd been her anchor, then her ghost, now suddenly present again and all wrong somehow. Too polished. Too distant despite his proximity. Too late. "But I had to love myself more," she said. Marcus flinched like she'd struck him. His phone buzzed in his pocket. He ignored it. It buzzed again. "I should probably—" He pulled out the device. The light from the screen washed his face blue. Whatever he saw there made him pocket it immediately. "Family. I'll deal with it later." "You should take it. I'm sure they're important." "Not more than—" "Yes," she said firmly. "They are." He stared at her for a long moment, and she watched him realise, finally, that this wasn't a reunion. It was a goodbye to something that had already ended years ago. He'd just finally arrived at the funeral. The phone buzzed again. This time when he reached for it, she stood, leaving the vodka untouched, and walked toward the bar where Silas waited with the particular patience of someone who understood that time hollowed people differently than people expected.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
40.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he asked again [again]"
1"he said abruptly [abruptly]"
2"she said quietly [quietly]"
3"she said firmly [firmly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.36
leniency0.72
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.16
74.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1568
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count3
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"completely"
1"slowly"
2"suddenly"
3"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1568
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"implication"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"traced"
2"implication"
3"unspoken"
4"weight"
5"measured"
6"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen72
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1566
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1090
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.55
worstName"Marcus"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Marcus"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora2
Tuesday1
Silas5
Webb1
Evan1
Singapore1
Marcus6
Rory3
Hendrick1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
4"Webb"
5"Evan"
6"Marcus"
7"Rory"
8"Hendrick"
places
0"Singapore"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"So had he, apparently, though in his case"
1"sounded like someone else's"
2"quite name"
3"felt like from both sides"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.639
wordCount1566
matches
0"Not at her directly, but past her, the way you might notice a change in air pressure"
40.40% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount5
totalSentences132
matches
0"discovered that they"
1"pretending that work"
2"solo, that the"
3"learned that apologies"
4"understood that time"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean22.7
std19.28
cv0.849
sampleLengths
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156
261
34
463
54
646
74
89
940
105
1110
127
1319
1439
1555
1637
1710
181
1927
2057
213
2215
2351
242
2528
2625
274
2833
2948
305
3138
3221
3324
3432
352
3642
3756
3810
3918
4023
4110
423
4372
447
458
4610
4747
487
4936
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"been replaced"
1"being obeyed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs207
matches
0"was looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences132
ratio0
matches(empty)
77.93% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1090
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount69
adverbRatio0.06330275229357799
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.022018348623853212
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean11.86
std10.79
cv0.91
sampleLengths
09
19
218
316
411
529
69
74
810
920
1018
114
1225
134
1413
1515
161
175
184
1925
207
219
225
234
249
259
2613
2718
285
2910
307
3112
327
335
3417
3517
3610
3715
386
3924
4037
4110
421
433
4424
4552
465
473
4815
493
54.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences88
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Then his eyes swung back"
2"Then he'd moved to Singapore"
3"Too distant despite his proximity."
ratio0.045
24.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences88
matches
0"She pushed through the heavy"
1"She recognised most faces."
2"He sat at a table"
3"His hair had darkened to"
4"His suit was definitely expensive."
5"His hazel eyes tracked her"
6"They moved from her face"
7"She thrust the containers at"
8"He took them without complaint,"
9"He disappeared into the kitchen"
10"They'd met in primary school"
11"He'd held her hair back"
12"She watched recognition bloom across"
13"She didn't move."
14"He stood instead, nearly knocking"
15"He stopped, laughed, the sound"
16"She was different."
17"It wasn't a question, the"
18"She pulled out the chair"
19"he asked again, buying time,"
ratio0.489
33.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences88
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled exactly"
1"Mahogany and whisky and something"
2"She pushed through the heavy"
3"Silas had called the restaurant"
4"The bar was half full"
5"She recognised most faces."
6"The accountant in the corner"
7"The two art students who"
8"The businessman with the wedding"
9"He sat at a table"
10"The easy slouch she'd known"
11"His hair had darkened to"
12"His suit was definitely expensive."
13"Rory's feet stopped moving."
14"Silas materialised from behind the"
15"His hazel eyes tracked her"
16"They moved from her face"
17"Something flickered there, something knowing."
18"She thrust the containers at"
19"He took them without complaint,"
ratio0.852
56.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"As though the Aurora he'd"
ratio0.011
55.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Then he'd moved to Singapore for a position at some investment firm, and they'd become the kind of friends that said they'd keep in touch and slowly discovered …"
1"That much was evident in the way he was looking at her, as though she'd rearranged herself while he wasn't watching."
2"As though the Aurora he'd left behind would have stayed the same, preserved in amber, waiting for him to decide when he was ready to come home."
3"She'd learned that apologies were often just requests for forgiveness that relieved the apologiser without costing them anything real."
4"This time when he reached for it, she stood, leaving the vodka untouched, and walked toward the bar where Silas waited with the particular patience of someone w…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.22
leniency0.44
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.3693%