Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXSP3NX2PF7PZM618Q0WXS

Run Details

Duration:
1m 38s
Cost:
$0.007753
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ambulance lights carved red and blue wounds through the fog rolling off the Thames. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped under the police tape, her worn leather watch catching the damp air as she lifted the barrier. The river's stench mingled with something else tonight—copper and ozone, a combination that set her teeth on edge. "Thought you'd want to see this one yourself, guv." PC Lestrade stood by the entrance to the defunct pumping station, his young face pale beneath the streetlamps. He'd been the first responder. Three months out of training, and he looked ready to reconsider his career choice. "Who called it in?" "Anonymous. Tips line got a recording at 0347. Male voice, no accent I could place. Just said there was a body at the old Jenner facility, then hung up." Quinn studied the building. The Jenner pumping station had been decommissioned since the eighties, its Victorian brickwork now more moss than mortar. Boarded windows. Rust-eaten doors. The kind of place kids dared each other to explore, the kind of place junkies used when the shelters filled up. Not the kind of place that saw much else. "Who's inside?" "DCS Mercer. He's been here twenty minutes." Of course he had. Quinn kept her expression neutral. Mercer had made his opinion of her clear after the Morris investigation—too many questions, not enough answers, and a stubborn refusal to close a case that everyone else wanted buried. She crossed the threshold, and the temperature dropped. Not unusual for a stone building by the river in October, but this cold had teeth. It bit at her exposed neck, settled into the joints of her shoulders. The main chamber stretched ahead, its ceiling lost in shadow. Industrial pipework crawled along the walls like veins. Emergency lamps had been set up around a central point, their harsh light pooling on the concrete floor. And in that pool lay the body. Quinn approached with measured steps. Military precision, her ex-husband used to call it, usually with complaint. But precision meant survival in places like this. The victim was male, mid-thirties, dressed in a suit that cost more than her monthly salary. Italian leather shoes. No visible wounds. No blood. He could have been sleeping, save for the wrongness in his posture—limbs bent at angles that suggested he'd collapsed rather than lay down. "Harlow." Mercer's voice echoed off the brick. He stood by the far wall, arms crossed, his grey suit immaculate despite the hour. Dawn wouldn't break for another two hours, yet he looked ready for a press conference. "Sir." "Heart attack, far as we can tell. Young for it, but not impossible. Stress, maybe. Undiagnosed condition. The ME will confirm." Quinn crouched beside the body. The man's face held an expression she'd seen before—not peace, not pain. Surprise. His eyes stared upward, clouded over, fixed on something beyond the ceiling. "No signs of struggle?" "None. We checked his pockets—wallet, phone, keys. Cards identify him as one Marcus Webb, addresses in Kensington and the Cayman Islands. Preliminary search suggests financial services. Banking, possibly." Quinn studied the man's hands. Clean. Manicured. No defensive wounds beneath the fingernails. She leaned closer, and that ozone smell intensified, sharp enough to taste. "Sir, did you notice—" "The smell? Chemical residue. This place was used for industrial processing before they shut it down. Probably still leaching from the pipes." Quinn stood and circled the body. The concrete showed scuff marks, but old ones, layered with dust. No fresh footprints except those belonging to Lestrade and the medical examiner's team. Whoever had left the tip hadn't stuck around. She moved toward the wall where Mercer waited. The pipework here was different—older, the metal discolored in ways that had nothing to do with rust. She ran her finger along one pipe, and it came away with a residue that shimmered faintly green before fading. "Sir, I don't think this was natural causes." Mercer's jaw tightened. "The ME hasn't finished the preliminary." "Look at his position. He fell where he stood, but there's no indication he was running or fighting. No clutching at his chest, no reaching for support. He was walking normally, then he just—" She snapped her fingers. "Stopped." "People drop dead without warning all the time. Thrombosis. Aneurysm. His medical history will tell us." "And the call? Someone knew he was here. They didn't report a man collapsing—they reported a body. How did they know he was dead unless they saw it happen or they were the ones who—" She stopped. Mercer's expression had shifted. Not anger. Something more careful. "We're pursuing all leads, Detective. But I'll remind you that anonymous tips are common, and speculating about the caller's involvement without evidence is premature." Quinn turned back to the body. The medical examiner's team waited for the all-clear to move it. She crossed to them, to the man with the kit bag who looked like he hadn't slept in a week. "Can you check his eyes? Specifically, the retinas." The examiner raised an eyebrow. "Standard procedure—" "More thorough. Look for haemorrhaging. Petechial patterns." "You think he was suffocated?" Quinn shook her head slowly. "I think something else happened here. Something that doesn't show up on a standard tox screen." She returned to Mercer, who had produced a notebook and was pretending to review his observations. His posture said dismissal; his presence said something else entirely. "Sir, why did you respond to this call personally?" "I was available." "In the middle of the night, for what appears to be a straightforward natural death?" Mercer closed the notebook with deliberate care. "You aren't the only one who answers when the radio crackles, Harlow. Some of us still believe in leading from the front." The words carried an edge she recognized. He'd used similar language at Morris's memorial service, when he'd suggested she take extended leave. When he'd made it clear that further investigation into the circumstances would be met with resistance. She let the silence hang between them, then turned away. The walls of the pumping station held more than pipework. Quinn's flashlight traced the brickwork, searching for anything the initial sweep might have missed. Near the ceiling, half-hidden by shadows and decades of grime, she found it. A symbol. Etched into the stone. The lines were faint, but the shape was unmistakable—curved in ways that seemed to shift the longer she looked at it. She'd seen something similar before. Three years ago. In a basement in Whitechapel, where Morris had— "Find something?" Mercer's voice came from directly behind her. She hadn't heard him approach. "Just graffiti. Old, by the look of it." "Probably dates back to when the station was active. Workers marking their territory." Quinn turned to face him. His eyes held steady on hers, and in them, she saw something that looked almost like warning. "Sir, I'd like to keep this case open pending the full toxicology report." "Standard procedure already covers that." "I mean I'd like to lead the investigation. Personally." Mercer's mouth flattened. "You have active cases." "None that can't be reassigned." The silence stretched. Somewhere in the building, a pipe dripped, the sound magnified by the chamber's acoustics. "Very well," Mercer said at last. "But I want daily updates. And Harlow—" He stepped closer, lowering his voice. "Not everyone shares your interest in finding patterns where none exist. Some of us prefer evidence. Concrete, provable evidence." He walked past her toward the exit, pausing at the threshold. "This was a tragedy. A man died too young, and his family deserves answers. Don't make it into something it isn't." Quinn watched him disappear into the fog. Then she turned back to the symbol on the wall, pulling out her phone to photograph it before the light changed. The image on her screen confirmed what she'd suspected. The etching was fresh, the edges of the carved lines still sharp where they cut through decades of accumulated grime. Whatever Mercer believed, someone had been here recently. Someone who knew things that didn't appear in any police database. She pocketed her phone and knelt beside the body one final time. Marcus Webb, banker, Kensington address. A man with means, found in a place that had no business hosting him. And in his jacket pocket, barely visible where his body had folded, she glimpsed something that caught the lamplight. Quinn reached in with gloved fingers and withdrew a small object. Circular. Brass. Tarnished with verdigris. A compass. But when she opened it, the needle didn't point north. It spun, lazy and unhurried, before settling on a direction that made no sense—toward the wall with the symbol, the wall that should have been solid brick. She closed the compass and slipped it into an evidence bag. Outside, the Thames continued its ancient flow, and the fog closed around the pumping station like a secret kept too long.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1489
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1489
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"pumping"
count4
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"standard"
count3
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"etching"
count1
10
word"database"
count1
highlights
0"pumping"
1"measured"
2"echoed"
3"shimmered"
4"eyebrow"
5"standard"
6"silence"
7"traced"
8"etched"
9"etching"
10"database"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1476
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Marcus Webb, banker, Kensington address."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1025
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Thames2
Harlow1
Quinn13
Lestrade2
Jenner1
Victorian1
Morris3
October1
Mercer11
Whitechapel1
Webb1
Kensington1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Jenner"
3"Morris"
4"Mercer"
5"Webb"
places
0"Thames"
1"October"
2"Whitechapel"
3"Kensington"
globalScore0.866
windowScore0.833
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like he hadn't slept in a week"
1"ways that seemed to shift the longer she looked at it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.678
wordCount1476
matches
0"Not unusual for a stone building by the river in October, but this cold had teeth"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean20.5
std14.63
cv0.714
sampleLengths
054
19
237
34
429
556
62
77
839
937
1036
117
1224
1347
141
1536
161
1721
1830
194
2028
2125
224
2322
2438
2545
268
279
2839
2916
3037
319
3224
3337
348
357
367
375
3821
3926
409
413
4215
4329
4438
4510
4637
476
4837
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"been decommissioned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs189
matches
0"was pretending"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences141
ratio0.064
matches
0"The river's stench mingled with something else tonight—copper and ozone, a combination that set her teeth on edge."
1"Mercer had made his opinion of her clear after the Morris investigation—too many questions, not enough answers, and a stubborn refusal to close a case that everyone else wanted buried."
2"He could have been sleeping, save for the wrongness in his posture—limbs bent at angles that suggested he'd collapsed rather than lay down."
3"The man's face held an expression she'd seen before—not peace, not pain."
4"The pipework here was different—older, the metal discolored in ways that had nothing to do with rust."
5"His posture said dismissal; his presence said something else entirely."
6"The lines were faint, but the shape was unmistakable—curved in ways that seemed to shift the longer she looked at it."
7"In a basement in Whitechapel, where Morris had—"
8"It spun, lazy and unhurried, before settling on a direction that made no sense—toward the wall with the symbol, the wall that should have been solid brick."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1036
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.029922779922779922
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007722007722007722
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean10.47
std7.61
cv0.727
sampleLengths
015
121
218
39
418
55
614
74
829
94
1018
112
122
1321
149
152
167
174
185
1930
208
2116
2213
2310
248
2518
267
275
2811
298
3016
313
323
332
3423
351
366
3715
3815
391
4021
415
4212
431
4412
454
4628
475
481
491
73.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.44680851063829785
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners63
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences93
matches
0"Of course he had."
1"Somewhere in the building, a"
2"Then she turned back to"
ratio0.032
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences93
matches
0"He'd been the first responder."
1"She crossed the threshold, and"
2"It bit at her exposed"
3"He could have been sleeping,"
4"He stood by the far"
5"His eyes stared upward, clouded"
6"She leaned closer, and that"
7"She moved toward the wall"
8"She ran her finger along"
9"She snapped her fingers"
10"She crossed to them, to"
11"She returned to Mercer, who"
12"His posture said dismissal; his"
13"He'd used similar language at"
14"She let the silence hang"
15"She'd seen something similar before."
16"She hadn't heard him approach."
17"His eyes held steady on"
18"He stepped closer, lowering his"
19"He walked past her toward"
ratio0.247
78.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences93
matches
0"The ambulance lights carved red"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped under"
2"The river's stench mingled with"
3"PC Lestrade stood by the"
4"He'd been the first responder."
5"Quinn studied the building."
6"The Jenner pumping station had"
7"The kind of place kids"
8"Quinn kept her expression neutral."
9"Mercer had made his opinion"
10"She crossed the threshold, and"
11"It bit at her exposed"
12"The main chamber stretched ahead,"
13"Emergency lamps had been set"
14"Quinn approached with measured steps."
15"Military precision, her ex-husband used"
16"The victim was male, mid-thirties,"
17"Italian leather shoes."
18"He could have been sleeping,"
19"Mercer's voice echoed off the"
ratio0.763
53.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Whoever had left the tip"
ratio0.011
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The river's stench mingled with something else tonight—copper and ozone, a combination that set her teeth on edge."
1"The victim was male, mid-thirties, dressed in a suit that cost more than her monthly salary."
2"He could have been sleeping, save for the wrongness in his posture—limbs bent at angles that suggested he'd collapsed rather than lay down."
3"The pipework here was different—older, the metal discolored in ways that had nothing to do with rust."
4"The lines were faint, but the shape was unmistakable—curved in ways that seemed to shift the longer she looked at it."
5"And in his jacket pocket, barely visible where his body had folded, she glimpsed something that caught the lamplight."
6"It spun, lazy and unhurried, before settling on a direction that made no sense—toward the wall with the symbol, the wall that should have been solid brick."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.05
leniency0.1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.05
87.3971%