Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXT45R98KKPW9TE9ACENPM

Run Details

Duration:
51.4s
Cost:
$0.005693
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance buzzed with a dying insect's rhythm, casting a sickly pallor over the wet pavement of Soho. Rain slicked the cobblestones, reflecting the fractured lights of passing taxis. Aurora pushed open the heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest, shaking water from her black hair before the smell of stale beer, lemon oil, and old tobacco wrapped around her. She scanned the room, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the dim interior where walls lined with faded maps and grainy black-and-white photographs seemed to lean inward. Silas stood behind the polished bar, polishing a glass with a rag that looked cleaner than most tablecloths in the city. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the low light as he turned, the neat beard framing a mouth that rarely smiled. A slight limp marked his movement as he shifted weight off his left leg, the old Prague injury making its presence known in the quiet shuffle of his boots. He paused, the glass hovering mid-air, his hazel eyes locking onto the woman standing in the doorway. "You're blocking the draft," Silas said, his voice a low rumble that cut through the jazz playing softly from a corner speaker. "And you're dripping on my floorboards." Aurora stepped forward, water pooling around her trainers. She offered a tight smile that didn't reach her eyes. "Evening, Si. Some things never change. Still playing the grumpy host?" "The rent doesn't pay itself, Rory." He set the glass down with a sharp clink. "I haven't seen you in three years. Not since you packed your life into two suitcases and vanished up to this flat above me." "Time flies when you're running away." She approached the bar, leaning her elbows on the dark wood. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist peeked out from her sleeve, a pale moon against her skin. "Pour me something that burns. Nothing fancy." Silas reached for a bottle of amber liquid, his silver signet ring glinting on his right hand as he poured a generous measure into a tumbler. He slid it across the surface. "You look different." "Do I?" Aurora wrapped her hands around the glass, absorbing the warmth. "Older?" "Tired." Silas leaned forward, resting his forearms on the bar. The movement brought the scent of sandalwood and gun oil—a phantom smell from his past life that never quite washed off. "The girl who used to argue constitutional law with me until sunrise didn't carry her shoulders like she expected the ceiling to collapse." "The girl who argued constitutional law is dead, Si. She died in Cardiff." Aurora took a long swallow, the whiskey biting her throat. "This one delivers noodles for Yu-Fei and tries not to think about tomorrow." "Yu-Fei treats you well?" "She pays me. That's enough." Aurora traced the rim of her glass. "How's the spy game? Still saving the world from behind a pint pump?" Silas let out a short, dry laugh. "The only thing I save these days is the bottom shelf whiskey from students who think they're tough. The field retired me, remember? Knee gave out. Mind followed shortly after." "You never retired from anything in your life. You just changed uniforms." Aurora looked up, her gaze piercing. "I saw the news last week. The Prague file leak. They mentioned a consultant." Silas stiffened, his hand pausing on a nearby bottle. "Rumours. Bad ones." "People don't leak rumours about specific operational details, Silas. They leak facts." She swirled the liquid in her glass. "You're still in it. Just deeper in the shadows." "And you're still observant. A dangerous trait for a delivery driver." Silas moved away from the bar, limping toward a stool near the end where the light was poorest. He gestured for her to follow. "Sit. Before you fall over from exhaustion." Aurora hesitated, then walked over, the stool creaking under her weight. She watched him settle, the careful way he positioned his injured leg. "Why did you never come up? In three years, Si. You live below me. You check the locks on my door twice a week. But you never knocked for a cup of tea." "You needed space." Silas stared at a photograph on the wall—a blurred image of a bridge in Vienna. "You left Evan. You left your family. You left the law. You wanted to be nobody. I respected that." "Did you?" Aurora's voice sharpened. "Or did you just watch from the sidelines like it was one of your operations? Wait for the asset to stabilize before making contact?" "Don't twist this." Silas turned to face her, his expression hardening. "I gave you a roof. I gave you a job reference when Yu-Fei asked. I kept my mouth shut when your father called looking for you." "My father called?" Aurora's grip tightened on the glass, knuckles whitening. "When?" "Six months after you arrived. Then again last Christmas." Silas watched her closely. "He sounded... broken, Rory. Your mother too. They think you're dead." "They think what I want them to think is easier than the truth." Aurora looked down at her hands. "Evan would have found me if I went home. He has friends in the force. You know how it works." "I know how it works better than most." Silas reached out, his hand hovering near her arm before pulling back. "But isolation isn't protection. It's a cage. You've built a very pretty cage for yourself up there. Delivery routes. Late shifts. Silence." "It keeps me alive." "Does it?" Silas leaned in, his voice dropping to a whisper. "Look at you. You flinch when the door opens. You scan exits before you sit down. You drink whiskey like it's water. That isn't living, Rory. That's surviving. And there's a difference." Aurora slammed the glass down, liquid sloshing over the rim. "What do you want from me? An apology for not being the happy law student you remembered? That girl got beaten down an alleyway behind a club in London because she trusted the wrong man. She doesn't exist anymore." "I don't want the girl from Cardiff." Silas's eyes held a depth of sorrow that surprised her. "I want my friend. The one who could talk her way out of a speeding ticket and make me laugh until my sides hurt. I miss her." The admission hung in the air, heavy and raw. The jazz track ended, replaced by the hum of the refrigerator and the distant wail of a siren outside. Aurora looked at Silas, really looked at him, seeing the lines around his eyes that hadn't been there five years ago, the grey that had claimed more of his hair. Time had taken its toll on him too, though he wore it with more dignity. "I'm not sure I know how to be her anymore," Aurora whispered, the anger draining out of her, leaving only exhaustion. "I forgot how." "You don't forget." Silas signaled to the bar, pouring himself a small measure of the same whiskey. He didn't offer it to her this time; he just held it. "You bury it. Under layers of fear and routine. But it's still there." "Eva tries," Aurora said, thinking of the friend who had urged her to flee. "She calls. I don't always answer." "Because answering means admitting you're still here. Still human." Silas took a sip. "Regret is a heavy thing to carry alone, Rory. It doubles in weight every year you leave it unchecked." "I didn't have a choice." "We always have a choice." Silas tapped his signet ring against the glass. "Even when the options are all terrible. You chose safety over connection. I chose silence over interference. Look where it got us." Aurora traced the small scar on her wrist again, the memory of the childhood accident surfacing unbidden. A fall from a tree. A father rushing to help. A time when pain meant comfort was coming, not more pain. "I'm scared, Si." "I know." Silas nodded slowly. "I've been scared since Prague. Every day. You learn to walk with it. You don't let it drive." The door to the bar opened, a gust of cold wind swirling through the room along with a couple of tourists seeking shelter from the rain. Silas straightened automatically, his posture shifting into something more alert, more authoritative. The moment of vulnerability snapped shut like a trap. "Right," Silas said, his voice returning to its usual brisk tone, though his eyes remained soft. "Shift starts in twenty minutes for the dinner rush. Yu-Fei will have your head if you're late delivering those dumplings to Shoreditch." Aurora stood up, the stool scraping against the floor. She finished her drink in one go, the heat spreading through her chest. "Yeah. Can't keep the customers waiting." "Rory." Silas stopped her before she could turn away. "The flat above. The door is unlocked. Always has been. If you ever want to come down for more than just a drink... or if you want to stop hiding... the offer stands. No conditions." Aurora paused, her hand on the door handle. She looked back at him, the green neon light from outside casting long shadows across his face. For a second, the mask slipped, and she saw the old Silas, the mentor who had taught her how to spot a tail and how to trust her gut. "Thanks, Si," she said, her voice rough. "I'll think about it." "Think fast," Silas replied, turning back to wipe down the counter. "Time doesn't wait for anyone." Aurora pushed out into the rain, the cold hitting her face like a slap. She pulled her collar up, checking the street left and right out of habit, then started walking toward the bike parked under the awning. Behind her, through the fogged window, she saw Silas watching, a solitary figure in a room full of ghosts, before he turned away to serve the next customer.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:25:47.966Z" 2/19/2026, 12:25:47 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Silas nodded slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.42
leniency0.841
rawRatio0.034
effectiveRatio0.029
87.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1661
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"very"
2"really"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1661
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"traced"
count2
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"solitary"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"scanned"
2"weight"
3"glinting"
4"warmth"
5"traced"
6"silence"
7"whisper"
8"solitary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1650
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount904
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.65
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Prague1
Aurora18
Silas24
Vienna1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Vienna"
globalScore0.173
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1650
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean35.87
std18.99
cv0.529
sampleLengths
092
187
228
329
439
542
635
713
854
936
104
1125
1237
1332
1412
1528
1642
1756
1837
1929
2037
2112
2224
2339
2442
254
2643
2749
2844
2973
3024
3142
3220
3332
345
3535
3641
3723
3847
3938
4028
4144
4254
4311
4416
4566
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs157
matches
0"was coming"
64.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences109
ratio0.028
matches
0"The movement brought the scent of sandalwood and gun oil—a phantom smell from his past life that never quite washed off."
1"\"You needed space.\" Silas stared at a photograph on the wall—a blurred image of a bridge in Vienna."
2"He didn't offer it to her this time; he just held it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount911
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.025246981339187707
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008781558726673985
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean15.14
std8.49
cv0.561
sampleLengths
023
111
231
327
421
520
629
717
822
96
108
1110
1211
1315
1424
1517
1618
177
1826
196
203
2112
221
2310
2421
2523
2623
2713
284
2912
3013
317
3230
3318
3414
359
363
3719
389
3929
406
417
4211
4312
4433
4518
4619
475
4824
4911
67.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.45871559633027525
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners50
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences69
matches
0"She scanned the room, her"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
2"He paused, the glass hovering"
3"She offered a tight smile"
4"He set the glass down"
5"She approached the bar, leaning"
6"He slid it across the"
7"She swirled the liquid in"
8"He gestured for her to"
9"She watched him settle, the"
10"He didn't offer it to"
11"She finished her drink in"
12"She looked back at him,"
13"she said, her voice rough"
14"She pulled her collar up,"
ratio0.217
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences69
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Rain slicked the cobblestones, reflecting"
2"Aurora pushed open the heavy"
3"She scanned the room, her"
4"Silas stood behind the polished"
5"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
6"A slight limp marked his"
7"He paused, the glass hovering"
8"Silas said, his voice a"
9"Aurora stepped forward, water pooling"
10"She offered a tight smile"
11"He set the glass down"
12"She approached the bar, leaning"
13"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
14"Silas reached for a bottle"
15"He slid it across the"
16"Aurora wrapped her hands around"
17"Silas leaned forward, resting his"
18"The movement brought the scent"
19"Aurora took a long swallow,"
ratio0.971
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Silas stood behind the polished bar, polishing a glass with a rag that looked cleaner than most tablecloths in the city."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Aurora took, the whiskey biting her throat"
1"Aurora looked up, her gaze piercing"
2"Silas turned, his expression hardening"
3"Aurora's grip tightened, knuckles whitening"
4"Silas reached out, his hand hovering near her arm before pulling back"
5"Silas leaned in, his voice dropping to a whisper"
6"Aurora whispered, the anger draining out of her, leaving only exhaustion"
7"she said, her voice rough"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.087
leniency0.174
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.029
79.3441%