Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXT47QRGH531H8MW7XEWA7

Run Details

Duration:
56.9s
Cost:
$0.046958
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The transition wasn't a tear or a doorway. It felt like stepping off a curb and landing in deep water, the air suddenly thick enough to swim through. Aurora stumbled, her boots finding traction on ground that was too soft, spongy like soaked moss. She gasped, expecting the damp chill of London fog, but inhaled a lungful of scent so rich it made her gag. Roasted meat. Spun sugar. Spilled wine. She wiped a hand across her mouth and looked up. The sky was wrong. No clouds, no sun, just a bruised, expansive dome of warm amber light that cast everything in a sepia haze. Aurora clutched her chest. Beneath her jacket, the Heartstone pendant hammered a frantic rhythm against her sternum, burning hot enough to sting. Isolde stood a few feet away, her silver hair reflecting the amber sky like polished chrome. She smoothed the front of her dress, her pale lavender eyes scanning the horizon with a look that wasn't quite fear, but certainly wasn't comfort. "The Veil is thin, but I did not expect the weave to unravel so completely." Isolde’s voice carried a musical lilt that seemed to vibrate in the heavy air. "We are far from the Thames, Rory." Aurora pulled the moonsilver dagger from her belt. The leaf-shaped blade hummed, the metal biting cold against her palm, a stark contrast to the oppressive humidity. "Where are we?" A silhouette elongated on the ground near Aurora’s feet, stretching impossibly long despite the diffuse lighting. The shadow pooled, rose, and solidified into a towering humanoid shape. Nyx. The edges of their form smoked, trailing wisps of darkness that vanished into the golden light. "Dymas," Nyx whispered. The sound wasn't spoken; it arrived directly in Aurora's ear, carried on a phantom breeze. "The Garden of Excess. Prince Belphegor keeps a tidy yard." Aurora turned in a slow circle. They stood at the edge of what looked like a vineyard, but the scale was monstrous. Grapevines thick as tree trunks twisted around obsidian trellises, laden with fruit the size of melons. The grapes shimmered with an iridescent purple sheen, pulsing slowly as if pumping blood. "Gluttony," Aurora said, the word tasting sour. "I remember the briefing." Nyx glided forward, their feet making no sound, merely sliding over the terrain. "Briefings are ink on paper. This is the reality. Do not let the beauty fool you, little lawyer. The soil here is fertilized with want." They began to walk, pushed forward by the sheer unease of standing still. The path wound between the gargantuan vines. Aurora watched where she stepped, avoiding the tangled roots that looked too much like arthritic fingers clutching the earth. Beside her, Isolde moved with an eerie grace. Aurora glanced back at the Fae’s wake; the mossy grass sprang back instantly, leaving not a single footprint or indentation. "The air," Aurora muttered, rubbing her throat. "It’s greasy." Isolde plucked a leaf from a passing branch. She didn't tear it; the stem released its hold with a wet pop. "The atmosphere is designed to sustain appetite, not life. It keeps the metabolism racing, the hunger sharp. A perpetual state of starvation amidst plenty." Aurora watched Isolde bring the leaf to her nose, sniff it, and toss it aside. The leaf hit the ground and dissolved into black sludge. "Do not touch what grows here with bare skin," Isolde advised, wiping her fingers on her skirt. "The flora is... eager." The path opened up, revealing a sprawling orchard that defied botany. Trees with bark like cracked caramel bore apples that glowed like embers. Pears dripped a golden nectar that pooled on the ground, creating sticky, sweet-smelling puddles that swarmed with insects larger than Aurora’s hand. The buzzing sound was low and rhythmic, like a chant. Aurora’s stomach lurched, a sudden, violent pang of hunger seizing her gut. It wasn't normal hunger. It was a hollow, scraping ache that demanded immediate satisfaction. Her eyes locked onto a low-hanging fruit, its skin glistening with dew. Nyx’s hand—cold, incorporeal, feeling like mist—clamped around her wrist. "Focus, Aurora." The violet glow of Nyx's eyes flared within the shadow of their cowl. "The fruit is a lie. It will turn to ash in your mouth, but by then, you will have sold a piece of your will to swallow it." Aurora jerked her arm back, shaking her head to clear the fog. The hunger remained, a dull roar in the back of her mind. "I’m fine. Just... blood sugar." "This place weaponizes biology," Nyx noted, drifting closer to a tree but keeping a respectful distance. "We should keep moving. The Masters of the feast do not take kindly to uninvited guests lingering in the pantry." "Where is the exit?" Aurora asked. She tapped the Heartstone. "This thing is trying to burrow through my ribs. It means a portal is close, right?" "Close is a relative term in the Hells," Isolde said. She pointed a slender finger toward a structure rising above the tree line in the distance. "The architecture suggests a gathering place. Where there are gatherings, the Veil is often worn thin by the passage of souls." They marched toward the structure. As they went deeper, the sickening sweetness of the air intensified. The ground began to change, the soft moss replaced by tiles of polished marble, cracked and overgrown with sugary moss. They entered a clearing dominated by a pavilion. The roof was supported by pillars carved to resemble human figures holding up the sky, their faces twisted in expressions of ecstatic agony. Beneath the canopy sat a table long enough to seat fifty, groaning under the weight of a feast that looked freshly laid. Roast boars with apples in their mouths, towers of shellfish, tiered cakes that defied gravity, and depressed silver platters overflowing with exotic fruits. Steam still rose from the meats. But the chairs were empty. Aurora approached the table, the Fae-Forged blade held tight. The silence here was heavy, pressing against her eardrums. "Where is everyone?" she whispered. Isolde walked to the head of the table. She ran a hand over the back of a high velvet chair. "Consuming. Or being consumed. Time behaves poorly here. This feast may have been laid a century ago, or five minutes ago." Nyx dissolved into a puddle of shadow and zipped under the table, re-emerging on the other side. "No traps. Physically, at least. But the magic woven into this wood is old. It compels the sitter to remain." Aurora looked at the spread. Her hunger spiked again, aggressive and painful. A platter of oysters smelled like the ocean, fresh and briney, cutting through the sugar-rot of the air. Her mouth watered. She took a step toward the table. "Aurora," Isolde said sharply. Aurora froze. She looked down at the table. On the plate nearest to her, a single bone lay amidst the sauce. It wasn't an animal bone. It was a human phalanx, polished clean, teeth marks visible on the calcium. She recoiled, backing into the hard line of Nyx’s solid form. "The ingredients," Nyx murmured, their voice lacking any surprise. "Did you think the Master Chemists of Dymas used beef? The souls bartered here are seasoned, marinated in their own vices, and served." "That’s..." Aurora swallowed bile. "That’s efficient." "It's hell," Nyx corrected. A sound echoed from the far side of the clearing—a wet, tearing noise, followed by a heavy thud. Aurora spun around, raising the dagger. The amber light flickered, casting long, dancing shadows that seemed to grab at their ankles. "Something is watching," Aurora said. The hair on her arms stood up. The Heartstone was burning so hot it felt like a brand against her skin. Isolde’s eyes went wide, the lavender shifting to a stormy grey. She stepped back, her feet hovering an inch off the marble. "Not watching, Rory. Hunting." From the dense thicket behind the pavilion, the trees parted. A creature lumbered into the amber light. It was massive, shaped vaguely like a boar but hairless, its skin pink and glistening with oil. It had multiple sets of eyes, small and beady, scattered across its forehead, and its tusks were jagged shards of metal—rusty iron and gold. It snorted, a cloud of yellow steam erupting from its snout. It didn't look at the food. It looked at them. "Iron," Isolde hissed, retreating further. "Its tusks." "I see them." Aurora shifted her stance, dropping her center of gravity. The delivery girl in her gauged the distance, the terrain. The fighter in her tightened her grip on the moonsilver. "Nyx?" "I cannot touch it," Nyx said, their form growing indistinct, blending with the darker patches of the pavilion. "It is bound in iron. It will disrupt my form." "Right. Of course." Aurora let out a breath, the sickly sweet air filling her lungs. "Isolde, get back. Nyx, find me a flank." The creature pawed the ground, cracking the marble tiles. It squealed—a high, piercing sound like metal on a grindstone—and charged. The ground shook with the impact of its hooves, jarring Aurora’s teeth. She didn't retreat. She waited, watching the beast close the distance, the smell of rancid grease rolling off it in waves. "Welcome to Dymas," she muttered, and braced for the collision.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said sharply [sharply]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.476
leniency0.952
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.048
87.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1551
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"completely"
2"slowly"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1551
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"unravel"
count1
3
word"lilt"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count1
7
word"pumping"
count1
8
word"racing"
count1
9
word"amidst"
count2
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"lurched"
count1
13
word"pang"
count1
14
word"glistening"
count2
15
word"structure"
count2
16
word"marble"
count3
17
word"weight"
count1
18
word"silence"
count1
19
word"velvet"
count1
20
word"efficient"
count1
21
word"echoed"
count1
22
word"flickered"
count1
23
word"dancing"
count1
24
word"disrupt"
count1
25
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"scanning"
2"unravel"
3"lilt"
4"stark"
5"oppressive"
6"shimmered"
7"pumping"
8"racing"
9"amidst"
10"rhythmic"
11"stomach"
12"lurched"
13"pang"
14"glistening"
15"structure"
16"marble"
17"weight"
18"silence"
19"velvet"
20"efficient"
21"echoed"
22"flickered"
23"dancing"
24"disrupt"
25"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences114
matches(empty)
92.73% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences114
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1540
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1208
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.99
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
London1
Heartstone3
Aurora24
Nyx11
Isolde11
Fae2
Fae-Forged1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"London"
1"Fae"
globalScore0.507
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"felt like stepping off a curb and landi"
1"quite fear, but certainly wasn't comfort"
2"lilt that seemed to vibrate in the heavy air"
3"looked like a vineyard, but the scale was"
4"as if pumping blood"
5"smelled like the ocean, fresh and briney,"
6"shadows that seemed to grab at their ankles"
7"felt like a brand against her skin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1540
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean29.06
std16.75
cv0.577
sampleLengths
065
16
234
322
441
536
626
73
844
928
1052
1111
1238
1367
149
1545
1625
1721
1855
1938
209
2143
2229
2336
2426
2547
2636
2753
2829
295
3018
315
3241
3337
3440
354
3639
3711
3832
396
404
4118
4221
4326
4426
4558
4621
477
4833
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"was supported"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs219
matches
0"was burning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences136
ratio0.051
matches
0"The sound wasn't spoken; it arrived directly in Aurora's ear, carried on a phantom breeze."
1"Aurora glanced back at the Fae’s wake; the mossy grass sprang back instantly, leaving not a single footprint or indentation."
2"She didn't tear it; the stem released its hold with a wet pop."
3"Nyx’s hand—cold, incorporeal, feeling like mist—clamped around her wrist."
4"A sound echoed from the far side of the clearing—a wet, tearing noise, followed by a heavy thud."
5"It had multiple sets of eyes, small and beady, scattered across its forehead, and its tusks were jagged shards of metal—rusty iron and gold."
6"It squealed—a high, piercing sound like metal on a grindstone—and charged."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1219
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy, pressing against her"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.02871205906480722
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.009023789991796555
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean11.32
std6.55
cv0.578
sampleLengths
08
120
216
321
42
52
62
710
84
920
104
1118
1216
1325
1429
157
168
1718
183
1916
2011
211
2216
233
2415
2510
266
2716
2816
2914
307
314
3213
3325
3413
357
3619
378
3820
397
402
418
4213
4324
4415
4510
4617
474
4811
4912
43.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3161764705882353
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.73% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences103
matches
0"It felt like stepping off"
1"She gasped, expecting the damp"
2"She wiped a hand across"
3"She smoothed the front of"
4"They stood at the edge"
5"They began to walk, pushed"
6"She didn't tear it; the"
7"It wasn't normal hunger."
8"It was a hollow, scraping"
9"Her eyes locked onto a"
10"She tapped the Heartstone."
11"She pointed a slender finger"
12"They marched toward the structure."
13"They entered a clearing dominated"
14"She ran a hand over"
15"Her hunger spiked again, aggressive"
16"Her mouth watered."
17"She took a step toward"
18"She looked down at the"
19"It wasn't an animal bone."
ratio0.311
3.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences103
matches
0"The transition wasn't a tear"
1"It felt like stepping off"
2"Aurora stumbled, her boots finding"
3"She gasped, expecting the damp"
4"She wiped a hand across"
5"The sky was wrong."
6"Aurora clutched her chest."
7"Isolde stood a few feet"
8"She smoothed the front of"
9"Isolde’s voice carried a musical"
10"Aurora pulled the moonsilver dagger"
11"The leaf-shaped blade hummed, the"
12"A silhouette elongated on the"
13"The shadow pooled, rose, and"
14"The edges of their form"
15"The sound wasn't spoken; it"
16"Aurora turned in a slow"
17"They stood at the edge"
18"Grapevines thick as tree trunks"
19"The grapes shimmered with an"
ratio0.913
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Aurora stumbled, her boots finding traction on ground that was too soft, spongy like soaked moss."
1"The edges of their form smoked, trailing wisps of darkness that vanished into the golden light."
2"The grapes shimmered with an iridescent purple sheen, pulsing slowly as if pumping blood."
3"Nyx glided forward, their feet making no sound, merely sliding over the terrain."
4"Aurora watched where she stepped, avoiding the tangled roots that looked too much like arthritic fingers clutching the earth."
5"The path opened up, revealing a sprawling orchard that defied botany."
6"Pears dripped a golden nectar that pooled on the ground, creating sticky, sweet-smelling puddles that swarmed with insects larger than Aurora’s hand."
7"It was a hollow, scraping ache that demanded immediate satisfaction."
8"Roast boars with apples in their mouths, towers of shellfish, tiered cakes that defied gravity, and depressed silver platters overflowing with exotic fruits."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Aurora said, the word tasting sour"
1"Nyx murmured, their voice lacking any surprise"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
2"Isolde advised (advise)"
3"Nyx noted (note)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
6"Nyx corrected (correct)"
7"Isolde hissed (hiss)"
8"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.429
69.2390%