Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXT4B2P95D8QA07N933022

Run Details

Duration:
8.2s
Cost:
$0.003947
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora traced the faint crescent scar on her left wrist, her eyes scanning the twisting branches of the ancient oaks. A shimmer in the air, barely discernible, marked the true entrance. Nyx, a living shadow, melted from the nearby trees. Isolde, silver hair luminous, waited, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the shifting distortion. "The way now opens," Isolde’s voice, a rustling of autumn leaves, drifted through the still air. "Be wary, the path tests all who walk it." She placed a cool, leaf-shaped dagger of moonsilver into Aurora's hand. The Fae-Forged Blade was cold to the touch, a faint luminescence already tracing its edge, even in the dappled sunlight. Aurora nodded, gripping the hilt. The Heartstone Pendant, a deep crimson jewel, pulsed a faint warmth against her collarbone. Isolde had explained it would guide them, a constant reminder of the unseen portals they now sought. Nyx extended a slender, shadowed arm, a gesture both protective and guiding. "The other side… it calls to a part of me I thought forgotten." A whisper of wind carried their words, a sound both ancient and sorrowful. Aurora stepped forward, the shimmering distortion like heat rising from tarmac. Cool air washed over her, carrying the scent of unknown blossoms and something metallic, like distant rain on copper. The world around her blurred for a heartbeat, then snapped into impossible clarity. They stood on a path of black, polished stone that seemed to drink the light. Above, the sky fractured into a thousand hues: warm amber bled into deep violet, then fractured again into streaks of emerald and gold. No sun burned there, but an omnipresent luminescence, as if the light itself emanated from the very air. Gigantic trees, their bark like hammered bronze, soared into the sky, their broad, metallic leaves swaying with a sound like chimes. Each leaf was etched with intricate, luminescent patterns that shifted and re-wove themselves with every gentle breeze. "Dymas," Isolde murmured, her voice laced with an ancient reverence. “Gluttony.” The air thrummed with a low, resonant hum, a sound that vibrated not just in their ears, but in their bones. A sweet, cloying aroma hung heavy, a dizzying blend of unknown spices, rich fruits, and something deeper, more decadent, like roasted meat and fermented wines. Nyx solidified slightly, their form shimmering. "The air itself… it tastes of indulgence." They inhaled deeply, a silent sigh escaping their shadowy lips. To their right, a vineyard stretched, not with familiar grapes, but with fruit the size of small pumpkins, their skins iridescent, shimmering with inner light. Tendrils of vine, thick as a man’s arm, coiled along silver trellises, laden with the impossible bounty. Beyond the vineyard, colossal fountains surged with liquids that weren't water – one fountained a rich, dark substance, thick as molasses, another a pale, sparkling amber, giving off a scent of fermented honey. Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing against a colossal bloom, vibrant magenta petals unfurling to reveal a pistil that glowed with soft, internal light. It felt cool, smooth, surprisingly robust. A tiny chime echoed as her fingers brushed it. "Even the flora sings here," Aurora breathed, a sense of wonder overcoming her initial apprehension. Further along the path, grand structures emerged from behind the impossibly tall trees. Arches of polished obsidian intersected with delicate filigree of gold, reaching towards the multi-hued sky. Pillars carved with swirling patterns of leaves and vines supported roofs of mother-of-pearl tiles, reflecting the strange light in a prismatic dance. They seemed to shimmer with a perpetual heat haze, alive with an unseen energy. A low growl, like a contented rumble, vibrated from one of the grand buildings. The scent of roasted something intensified, rich and savory, a tantalizing promise. "These are the kitchens," Isolde announced, her voice soft. "Where Hel-bound souls, contracted from Earth, craft their masterpieces." Nyx recoiled slightly, their form flickering. "Souls… of mortals?" A hint of an ancient sadness laced their voice. "Their craft is highly valued here," Isolde said, her gaze fixed on the magnificent structures. "They seek perfection in taste, in presentation. Nothing less." As they moved deeper into Dymas, the path widened into a broad, sweeping avenue. The very ground seemed to vibrate with a low, rhythmic beat, like a distant drum. They heard murmurs, hushed whispers of voices, soft laughter, the clinking of unseen glasses. The air grew heavier, thick with the scents of a thousand different confections and savories. Ahead, a grand plaza unfolded, dominated by a towering structure that resembled a colossal honeycomb, its facets glowing with inner light, each cell a window into a banquet hall within. Smaller, exquisite pavilions dotted the plaza, each emanating a specific aroma: one of dark cocoa and rich liqueurs, another of crisp citrus and exotic herbs, a third of smoked meats and fiery spices. "A feast is always in progress," Isolde elaborated, her hands clasped before her. "A celebration of excess, of flavor, of sensation." A procession of figures emerged from one of the honeycomb’s facets. They moved with a languid grace, their forms shifting, not quite human, adorned in robes of shimmering silk and velvet, their faces partially obscured by ornate masks of carved wood and polished bone. They carried silver platters piled high with glistening delicacies, their movements slow, deliberate, as if each step was part of a grand, ancient ritual. One of the masked figures seemed to pause, its head tilting slightly, a faint, inquiring gaze lingering in their direction. Aurora felt a shiver trace her spine. The Heartstone Pendant, against her skin, pulsed a little faster, a warmth blossoming on her chest. Nyx’s shadow-form contracted, their fingers flexing. "Do they truly not see us?" "We are not yet invited to their feast," Isolde replied. "We are but phantoms in their periphery, unless we choose otherwise." Aurora tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade. The blade, despite its coldness, felt like an anchor in this surreal landscape. She took a deep breath, the rich, intoxicating air filling her lungs. This place was beautiful, terrifying, and utterly compelling. It promised everything and nothing.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:25:48.137Z" 2/19/2026, 12:25:48 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"They inhaled deeply [deeply]"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.647
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
65.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1018
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count3
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"truly"
3"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1018
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"fractured"
count2
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count2
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count1
14
word"apprehension"
count1
15
word"dance"
count1
16
word"tantalizing"
count1
17
word"rhythmic"
count1
18
word"structure"
count1
19
word"silk"
count1
20
word"velvet"
count1
21
word"glistening"
count1
22
word"surreal"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"scanning"
2"tracing"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"reminder"
6"whisper"
7"fractured"
8"etched"
9"intricate"
10"vibrated"
11"familiar"
12"echoed"
13"sense of"
14"apprehension"
15"dance"
16"tantalizing"
17"rhythmic"
18"structure"
19"silk"
20"velvet"
21"glistening"
22"surreal"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
98.12% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences62
matches
0"a sense of wonder"
1"felt a shiver"
50.69% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1012
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount902
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora8
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Further1
Nyx5
Isolde8
Dymas1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Dymas"
globalScore1
windowScore1
20.69% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"stone that seemed to drink the light"
1"not quite human, adorned in robes of shimmering silk and velvet, their faces partially obscured by ornate masks of carved wood and polished bone"
2"felt like an anchor in this surreal lan"
2.37% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.976
wordCount1012
matches
0"not just in their ears, but in their bones"
1"not with familiar grapes, but with fruit the size of small pumpkins, their skins iridescen"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean40.48
std21.53
cv0.532
sampleLengths
054
156
236
338
443
594
611
746
823
975
1039
1115
1264
1326
1418
1518
1624
1758
1863
1921
2068
2143
2212
2321
2446
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs139
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences68
ratio0.015
matches
0"Beyond the vineyard, colossal fountains surged with liquids that weren't water – one fountained a rich, dark substance, thick as molasses, another a pale, sparkling amber, giving off a scent of fermented honey."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount907
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cool, leaf-shaped dagger"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.024255788313120176
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009922822491730982
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean14.88
std7.04
cv0.473
sampleLengths
020
111
29
314
416
520
620
75
814
917
1012
1126
1211
1319
1413
1515
1623
1718
1821
1917
2010
211
2221
2325
246
2517
2625
2717
2833
2924
306
319
3215
3313
3415
3522
3614
3714
3812
399
409
416
4212
4315
449
4514
4615
4714
4815
4930
77.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners34
54.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Further along the path, grand"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences61
matches
0"She placed a cool, leaf-shaped"
1"They stood on a path"
2"They inhaled deeply, a silent"
3"It felt cool, smooth, surprisingly"
4"They seemed to shimmer with"
5"They heard murmurs, hushed whispers"
6"They moved with a languid"
7"They carried silver platters piled"
8"She took a deep breath,"
9"It promised everything and nothing."
ratio0.164
50.16% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences61
matches
0"Aurora traced the faint crescent"
1"A shimmer in the air,"
2"Nyx, a living shadow, melted"
3"Isolde, silver hair luminous, waited,"
4"Isolde’s voice, a rustling of"
5"She placed a cool, leaf-shaped"
6"The Fae-Forged Blade was cold"
7"Aurora nodded, gripping the hilt."
8"The Heartstone Pendant, a deep"
9"Isolde had explained it would"
10"Nyx extended a slender, shadowed"
11"A whisper of wind carried"
12"Aurora stepped forward, the shimmering"
13"The world around her blurred"
14"They stood on a path"
15"Each leaf was etched with"
16"Isolde murmured, her voice laced"
17"The air thrummed with a"
18"A sweet, cloying aroma hung"
19"Nyx solidified slightly, their form"
ratio0.82
81.97% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"To their right, a vineyard"
ratio0.016
17.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Each leaf was etched with intricate, luminescent patterns that shifted and re-wove themselves with every gentle breeze."
1"Beyond the vineyard, colossal fountains surged with liquids that weren't water – one fountained a rich, dark substance, thick as molasses, another a pale, spark…"
2"Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing against a colossal bloom, vibrant magenta petals unfurling to reveal a pistil that glowed with soft, internal light."
3"Ahead, a grand plaza unfolded, dominated by a towering structure that resembled a colossal honeycomb, its facets glowing with inner light, each cell a window in…"
4"They moved with a languid grace, their forms shifting, not quite human, adorned in robes of shimmering silk and velvet, their faces partially obscured by ornate…"
5"They carried silver platters piled high with glistening delicacies, their movements slow, deliberate, as if each step was part of a grand, ancient ritual."
6"One of the masked figures seemed to pause, its head tilting slightly, a faint, inquiring gaze lingering in their direction."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"They inhaled deeply, a silent sigh escaping their shadowy lips"
1"Aurora breathed, a sense of wonder overcoming her initial apprehension"
2"Isolde announced, her voice soft"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
2"Isolde announced (announce)"
3"Isolde elaborated (elaborate)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.353
leniency0.706
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.471
73.7726%