Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXT5B6RJHK6XNRG93GDA4J

Run Details

Duration:
1m 23s
Cost:
$0.191655

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past midnight, three sharp raps that cut through the silence of Eva's flat like gunshots. Rory froze, chopsticks halfway to her mouth, takeaway container balanced on her knee. Nobody visited Eva this late. Nobody who meant well, anyway. She set the food aside and crept to the door, avoiding the squeaky floorboard near the kitchen. Through the peephole, a familiar figure waited in the dim hallway—platinum hair catching the fluorescent light, shoulders set in that particular way that meant trouble. Lucien. Her pulse kicked up despite herself. Three months since she'd seen him last, three months since that disaster in Whitechapel when everything had gone sideways. She'd told him to stay away. Made it crystal clear. The deadbolts clicked open one by one under her reluctant fingers. "You've got some nerve showing up here." She kept the door chained, opening it just enough to glare through the gap. His heterochromatic eyes found hers immediately—the amber one gleaming, the black one unreadable as always. A bruise darkened his left cheekbone, fresh enough to still show purple at the edges. "Bonsoir to you too, ma chère." "Don't." She tightened her grip on the doorframe. "Whatever you're selling, I'm not buying." "I'm not selling anything." He shifted his weight, and she caught the slight wince he tried to hide. "I need—" "Let me guess. A place to lie low? Someone to patch you up? Maybe a convenient alibi for whatever mess you've stumbled into this time?" His jaw tightened. "If I had anywhere else to go—" "But you don't." She laughed, short and bitter. "Because you've burned every bridge in London except this one, and here you are with matches in your pocket." "Rory." Just her name, but the way he said it—low and rough around the edges—made something twist in her chest. "Please." She'd never heard him say please before. Not once in all the months they'd worked together, through all the close calls and impossible escapes. Her resolve wavered. Behind her, Ptolemy meowed, winding between her legs to peer at their visitor. "Even the cat has better sense than you." But she was already unhooking the chain. He stepped inside, favoring his left leg, and she caught the metallic scent of blood beneath his expensive cologne. The charcoal suit that usually fit him like a second skin hung wrong, jacket torn at the shoulder seam. "Shoes off. Eva will kill us both if you track blood on her carpet." He complied without argument—another warning sign. Lucien never did anything without at least token resistance. She watched him ease out of the leather oxfords, noticed how his hands shook slightly as he set them by the door. "Kitchen. Now." He followed her through the maze of books and research materials, careful not to disturb Eva's precisely chaotic system. In the harsh light of the kitchen, he looked worse. The bruise was just the beginning—split lip, dried blood at his temple, knuckles scraped raw. "Sit." She pointed at a chair. "And don't touch anything." "Where's Eva?" "Cambridge. Some manuscript turned up at the university library." She pulled the first aid kit from under the sink, the one Eva kept stocked for exactly these kinds of midnight emergencies. "She'll be gone all week, which means you've got until Sunday to find somewhere else to be." "Generous of you." "It's Tuesday night. That gives you four days." She set the kit on the table with more force than necessary. "Take off the jacket." He shrugged out of it slowly, each movement calculated to hide how much it hurt. Beneath, his usually pristine white shirt was torn and bloodstained. She sucked in a breath at the slash across his ribs, too clean to be anything but a blade wound. "Who?" "Does it matter?" "It does if they're planning to follow you here." She snapped on latex gloves, started cleaning the wound with practiced efficiency. He hissed at the antiseptic's sting. "They won't." "Because they're dead, or because you lost them?" His silence was answer enough. "Christ, Lucien." She pressed gauze to the wound harder than strictly necessary. "What happened to being careful? To keeping a low profile?" "Plans change." "Plans change," she repeated. "That's all you've got?" "Would you prefer the long version? It involves the Valdris family, a stolen grimoire, and a double-cross that went triple." He caught her wrist as she reached for the medical tape. "I didn't mean to come here." She stared at where his fingers circled her wrist, just below the crescent scar. His touch was light, careful, but it burned all the same. "Let go." He did, immediately. "I'm sorry." "For which part? Showing up bleeding on Eva's doorstep? Nearly getting me killed in Whitechapel? Or—" "All of it." The black eye caught the light strangely, seeming to swallow it whole. "Every bloody thing since the night we met." "That's a lot to be sorry for." "I'm aware." She taped the gauze in place, movements sharp and efficient. The familiar routine helped steady her hands, gave her something to focus on besides the way his breath caught when she leaned close. "The leg next. Those trousers are ruined anyway." "They're Armani." "They're scrap fabric now." She grabbed scissors from the kit. "Unless you'd rather bleed out for the sake of Italian tailoring." He stood, unbuckled his belt with one hand while bracing against the table with the other. She kept her eyes firmly on the medical supplies, organizing things that didn't need organizing. "Rory." "There's a gash on your thigh. Looks deep." She knelt beside his chair, started cutting away the bloodied fabric. Professional. Clinical. Absolutely not noticing the way muscle moved under skin, or remembering— "It wasn't supposed to happen like that. In Whitechapel." "Wasn't supposed to happen at all, if I recall." She cleaned the wound, pleased her voice came out steady. "You said it was a simple pickup. In and out, twenty minutes tops." "I miscalculated." "You lied." "I withheld certain details." "Like the part where the Ferryman's crew would be waiting? Or where the package was cursed?" The wound was deep but clean. She started suturing, each stitch precise. "I could have died that night." "But you didn't." "No thanks to you." "Every thanks to me." His hand clenched on the table edge. "Who do you think led them away from you?" Her hands stilled. "What?" "The Ferryman's boys. They were tracking the curse mark, following anyone who'd touched the package. I made sure they followed me instead of you." "You said you ran the opposite direction because—" "Because I'm a coward who saves his own skin? Yes, well." He laughed, short and humorless. "Easier to let you think that than explain why I couldn't let them near you." She finished the last stitch, tied it off with unnecessary force. "Don't." "Don't what?" "Don't pretend you did it for noble reasons. You needed me alive for the next job, that's all." "Is that what you tell yourself?" She stood abruptly, stripped off the gloves. "It's the truth." "The truth." He caught her hand as she turned away. "You want the truth? Fine. I took that meeting knowing it was a trap. Knew the package was cursed, knew the Ferryman would come for it. I took it anyway because Valdris had leverage—information about your ex, about what really happened in Cardiff." The words hit like physical blows. She yanked her hand free, stumbled back against the counter. "You knew about Evan?" "I know he hurt you. Know you ran to London with bruises that weren't from any accident." His eyes—both of them—were focused on her with an intensity that made her chest tight. "Valdris had photos. Documents. Things that would have led him straight to you." "So you what? Made a deal?" "I burned it all." He stood, favoring the injured leg. "Every photo, every paper trail. Then I took his cursed package and ran, knowing full well what would happen." "Why?" The word came out cracked. "Why would you—" "You know why." The kitchen felt too small suddenly, the air too thin. She could hear Ptolemy scratching at his post in the living room, could smell the antiseptic and blood and that damned cologne he always wore. "I told you to stay away." "You did." "I meant it." "I know." But he stepped closer anyway, and she didn't move back. Couldn't seem to remember why she should. "This doesn't change anything." Her voice barely a whisper. "I know that too." His hand came up slowly, giving her time to pull away. She didn't. His fingers ghosted along her jaw, thumb brushing the corner of her mouth. "Lucien." "Tell me to leave." His forehead rested against hers, careful of his injuries. "Say the word and I'll go. Find somewhere else to bleed." She should. Should push him away, show him the door, go back to her cold takeaway and pretend he'd never knocked. Should protect herself the way she'd learned to, walls built high and strong after Evan, after everything. Instead, she fisted her hands in his ruined shirt and pulled him down to her. The kiss tasted like blood and bad decisions. His split lip caught against hers, making him hiss, but he didn't pull back. If anything, he pressed closer, one hand tangling in her hair while the other braced against the counter, caging her in.
total_cost0.191655

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences90
tagDensity0.244
leniency0.489
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1576
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"precisely"
2"slowly"
3"really"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1576
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"crystal"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"resolve"
count1
8
word"wavered"
count1
9
word"chaotic"
count1
10
word"calculated"
count1
11
word"pristine"
count1
12
word"efficient"
count1
13
word"firmly"
count1
14
word"absolutely"
count1
15
word"intensity"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"familiar"
2"pulse"
3"crystal"
4"gleaming"
5"unreadable"
6"weight"
7"resolve"
8"wavered"
9"chaotic"
10"calculated"
11"pristine"
12"efficient"
13"firmly"
14"absolutely"
15"intensity"
16"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1566
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount947
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.42
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Whitechapel1
Ptolemy2
Professional1
Evan1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Evan"
places
0"Whitechapel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like blood and bad decisions"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1566
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs92
mean17.02
std14.19
cv0.834
sampleLengths
043
142
21
335
411
521
630
76
814
920
1025
1110
1227
1321
1427
1513
1615
1738
1814
1937
202
2144
2210
232
2448
253
2624
2745
281
293
3027
312
328
335
3422
352
368
3737
3825
392
405
4116
4223
437
442
4533
468
472
4821
4931
97.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"was torn"
1"were focused"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs177
matches(empty)
11.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences152
ratio0.046
matches
0"Through the peephole, a familiar figure waited in the dim hallway—platinum hair catching the fluorescent light, shoulders set in that particular way that meant trouble."
1"His heterochromatic eyes found hers immediately—the amber one gleaming, the black one unreadable as always."
2"\"Rory.\" Just her name, but the way he said it—low and rough around the edges—made something twist in her chest."
3"He complied without argument—another warning sign."
4"The bruise was just the beginning—split lip, dried blood at his temple, knuckles scraped raw."
5"Absolutely not noticing the way muscle moved under skin, or remembering—"
6"\"I know he hurt you. Know you ran to London with bruises that weren't from any accident.\" His eyes—both of them—were focused on her with an intensity that made her chest tight."
91.02% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount955
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.050261780104712044
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.016753926701570682
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean10.3
std7.71
cv0.749
sampleLengths
020
113
25
35
417
525
61
76
819
96
104
1111
1221
1315
1415
156
168
176
1818
192
2025
213
227
238
2419
2520
261
277
2817
293
3013
3115
3219
3319
3414
356
369
3722
382
3919
4010
4115
426
434
442
4531
4617
473
4820
494
65.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4342105263157895
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners66
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences82
matches
0"Just her name, but the"
1"Absolutely not noticing the way"
2"Instead, she fisted her hands"
ratio0.037
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences82
matches
0"She set the food aside"
1"Her pulse kicked up despite"
2"She'd told him to stay"
3"She kept the door chained,"
4"His heterochromatic eyes found hers"
5"She tightened her grip on"
6"He shifted his weight, and"
7"His jaw tightened."
8"She laughed, short and bitter"
9"She'd never heard him say"
10"Her resolve wavered."
11"He stepped inside, favoring his"
12"He complied without argument—another warning"
13"She watched him ease out"
14"He followed her through the"
15"She pointed at a chair"
16"She pulled the first aid"
17"She set the kit on"
18"He shrugged out of it"
19"She sucked in a breath"
ratio0.61
57.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences82
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory froze, chopsticks halfway to"
2"Nobody visited Eva this late."
3"Nobody who meant well, anyway."
4"She set the food aside"
5"Her pulse kicked up despite"
6"She'd told him to stay"
7"The deadbolts clicked open one"
8"She kept the door chained,"
9"His heterochromatic eyes found hers"
10"A bruise darkened his left"
11"She tightened her grip on"
12"He shifted his weight, and"
13"His jaw tightened."
14"She laughed, short and bitter"
15"She'd never heard him say"
16"Her resolve wavered."
17"He stepped inside, favoring his"
18"The charcoal suit that usually"
19"He complied without argument—another warning"
ratio0.805
60.98% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"If anything, he pressed closer,"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Through the peephole, a familiar figure waited in the dim hallway—platinum hair catching the fluorescent light, shoulders set in that particular way that meant …"
1"She kept her eyes firmly on the medical supplies, organizing things that didn't need organizing."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"The black eye caught, seeming to swallow it whole"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
1"She snapped on (snap on)"
2"She pressed (press)"
3"she repeated (repeat)"
4"He laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences90
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0.833
effectiveRatio0.111
86.6348%