Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXTA355PC18ZBDHR3V00Y2

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Duration:
36.8s
Cost:
$0.023313

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The taxi's headlights swept across the Richmond Park gates before disappearing into the London night, leaving Aurora alone with the metallic click of her boots on wet pavement. She pulled her jacket tighter and checked her phone—no signal. Perfect. The Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt pulsed with that familiar warmth, the reason she'd dragged herself out here at half past eleven on a Tuesday. The gates stood locked, as expected, but she'd come prepared. Years of delivering takeaways to every corner of London had taught her which security cameras had blind spots and where maintenance crews left convenient gaps in fencing. The park's perimeter held fewer secrets than most people imagined. Twenty minutes of careful navigation brought her to the grove's edge. Ancient oak standing stones rose like dark sentinels, their bark scarred with symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them. Between them, wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours—violet petals that caught moonlight like silk, white blossoms that glowed with their own cold luminescence. The pendant's warmth intensified. Aurora stepped between the stones. The air changed instantly, becoming thicker, sweeter, carrying the scent of flowers that shouldn't exist in October. Her footsteps, which had crunched clearly on fallen leaves moments before, now fell silent on soft grass that felt wrong beneath her feet—too springy, too alive. She'd been here twice before, both times during daylight hours. The grove had felt otherworldly then too, but in a way that suggested magic rather than menace. Butterflies had danced between impossible blooms while golden sunlight filtered through leaves that rustled with voices speaking languages she almost understood. Tonight felt different. Aurora pulled out her phone's torch, but the beam seemed to die just feet from her position, swallowed by darkness that pressed against the light like a living thing. The pendant grew warmer still, almost hot now against her skin. Something moved at the edge of her vision. She spun toward the movement, but found only flowers swaying in windless air. The grove stretched before her, perhaps fifty metres across, bordered by more standing stones that formed a rough circle. In daylight, she'd counted twelve of them. Now, sweeping her dying torch beam around the perimeter, she counted fourteen. Then sixteen. The numbers didn't make sense. Standing stones didn't multiply. They were anchored in earth, roots deep as any tree. Aurora forced herself to breathe slowly, to think. Time moved differently here—she'd experienced that before, stepping in for what felt like minutes only to emerge hours later. Perhaps the distortion affected more than duration. A sound drifted from somewhere behind the trees. Not wind through leaves or the settling of ancient wood. Something else. Something that might have been breathing, if breathing could carry that much hunger. Aurora's hand found the pendant through her shirt. The crimson stone pulsed with heat that bordered on painful now. She'd come here because it had been pulling her, growing warmer each night for a week until she couldn't ignore its summons. But standing alone in this flower-scented darkness, she began to question the wisdom of following mysterious magical artifacts into isolated places. The breathing sound came again, closer now. Definitely breathing, but wrong somehow—too deep, too wet, like air passing through something that wasn't quite lungs. She backed toward the centre of the grove, keeping her failing torch beam moving in slow arcs. The wildflowers seemed to turn as she passed, their faces following her movement like sunflowers tracking daylight. But these flowers had no faces, just petals and stems and that unnatural luminescence that made her skin crawl. The standing stones were definitely multiplying. She could see twenty of them now, maybe more, their dark forms rising from grass that hadn't been there when she'd entered. The grove was expanding, stretching outward in all directions, and she was trapped at its heart like prey in a web. Something rustled in the flowers to her left. This time she didn't turn toward the sound—she'd learned that looking directly at whatever moved there only made it disappear. Instead, she let her peripheral vision catch glimpses of motion. Something pale. Something that moved with too many joints. The pendant had grown so hot it felt like a brand against her chest. Through her shirt, she could see its crimson glow, pulsing in rhythm with her accelerated heartbeat. It had led her here, but to what? The grove showed no signs of any portal to Hel, no tears in reality that might explain the pendant's reaction. Only flowers. Only stones. Only the sound of breathing that came from everywhere and nowhere. Aurora's torch flickered once, twice, then died completely. Darkness rushed in like water filling a broken dam, absolute except for the faint glow of impossible flowers and the angry red pulse of the pendant against her skin. She stood perfectly still, listening. The breathing had stopped. In its place came something worse—the soft whisper of many feet moving through grass. Bare feet, by the sound, padding silently in a wide circle around her position. How many? Impossible to tell. The footsteps blended together like rain on leaves, creating a susurrus of movement that made her skin crawl. They were hunting. She could feel it in the way they moved, patient and deliberate, tightening their circle with predatory precision. Whatever they were, they weren't human. The gaits were wrong, too fluid, suggesting forms that bent in ways human bodies couldn't manage. Aurora reached for her phone, knowing before she looked that the screen would show no signal. The device felt cold and dead in her hands, its battery drained by whatever force permeated this place. She was alone, truly alone, with things that moved like hunters in the dark. The pendant's heat had become unbearable. She wanted to tear it off, to throw it as far as she could into the surrounding darkness, but something held her back. It had brought her here for a reason. Even if that reason was becoming clearer with each passing second—and none of those reasons were good.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
80.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1017
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"completely"
2"perfectly"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1017
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"sentinels"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count2
7
word"otherworldly"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"pulsed"
2"familiar"
3"warmth"
4"sentinels"
5"silk"
6"footsteps"
7"otherworldly"
8"flickered"
9"pulse"
10"whisper"
11"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
71.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1008
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount1008
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London2
Aurora7
Heartstone1
Tuesday1
October1
Hel1
persons
0"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"October"
4"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them"
1"felt like minutes only to emerge hours"
2"quite lungs"
3"felt like a brand against her chest"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1008
matches(empty)
83.33% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"carry that much"
1"looked that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean38.77
std19.76
cv0.51
sampleLengths
064
147
257
34
448
548
63
740
88
951
102
1153
1233
1362
1424
1553
1649
1747
1858
1915
2042
214
2251
2343
2448
2554
96.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"were anchored"
1"was trapped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs167
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"were hunting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences80
ratio0.1
matches
0"She pulled her jacket tighter and checked her phone—no signal."
1"Between them, wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours—violet petals that caught moonlight like silk, white blossoms that glowed with their own cold luminescence."
2"Her footsteps, which had crunched clearly on fallen leaves moments before, now fell silent on soft grass that felt wrong beneath her feet—too springy, too alive."
3"Time moved differently here—she'd experienced that before, stepping in for what felt like minutes only to emerge hours later."
4"Definitely breathing, but wrong somehow—too deep, too wet, like air passing through something that wasn't quite lungs."
5"This time she didn't turn toward the sound—she'd learned that looking directly at whatever moved there only made it disappear."
6"In its place came something worse—the soft whisper of many feet moving through grass."
7"Even if that reason was becoming clearer with each passing second—and none of those reasons were good."
87.68% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1017
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.05408062930186824
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.01966568338249754
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean12.6
std7.48
cv0.593
sampleLengths
028
110
21
325
410
527
610
711
824
922
104
115
1217
1326
1410
1517
1621
173
1829
1911
208
2113
2219
237
2412
252
265
274
2810
298
3019
317
328
3310
342
3513
368
3711
3822
3921
407
4117
4217
4317
4419
456
4622
4721
488
4920
64.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.425
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences73
matches
0"Perhaps the distortion affected more"
1"Definitely breathing, but wrong somehow—too"
2"Instead, she let her peripheral"
3"Only the sound of breathing"
ratio0.055
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences73
matches
0"She pulled her jacket tighter"
1"Her footsteps, which had crunched"
2"She'd been here twice before,"
3"She spun toward the movement,"
4"They were anchored in earth,"
5"She'd come here because it"
6"She backed toward the centre"
7"She could see twenty of"
8"It had led her here,"
9"She stood perfectly still, listening."
10"They were hunting."
11"She could feel it in"
12"She was alone, truly alone,"
13"She wanted to tear it"
14"It had brought her here"
ratio0.205
83.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences73
matches
0"The taxi's headlights swept across"
1"She pulled her jacket tighter"
2"The Heartstone pendant beneath her"
3"The gates stood locked, as"
4"Years of delivering takeaways to"
5"The park's perimeter held fewer"
6"The pendant's warmth intensified."
7"Aurora stepped between the stones."
8"The air changed instantly, becoming"
9"Her footsteps, which had crunched"
10"She'd been here twice before,"
11"The grove had felt otherworldly"
12"Butterflies had danced between impossible"
13"Tonight felt different."
14"Aurora pulled out her phone's"
15"The pendant grew warmer still,"
16"Something moved at the edge"
17"She spun toward the movement,"
18"The grove stretched before her,"
19"The numbers didn't make sense."
ratio0.753
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"Now, sweeping her dying torch"
1"Even if that reason was"
ratio0.027
26.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Ancient oak standing stones rose like dark sentinels, their bark scarred with symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them."
1"Between them, wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours—violet petals that caught moonlight like silk, white blossoms that glowed with their own cold luminescen…"
2"The air changed instantly, becoming thicker, sweeter, carrying the scent of flowers that shouldn't exist in October."
3"Her footsteps, which had crunched clearly on fallen leaves moments before, now fell silent on soft grass that felt wrong beneath her feet—too springy, too alive…"
4"Butterflies had danced between impossible blooms while golden sunlight filtered through leaves that rustled with voices speaking languages she almost understood…"
5"Something that might have been breathing, if breathing could carry that much hunger."
6"Definitely breathing, but wrong somehow—too deep, too wet, like air passing through something that wasn't quite lungs."
7"The footsteps blended together like rain on leaves, creating a susurrus of movement that made her skin crawl."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.9877%