| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 80.33% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1017 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.25% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1017 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfect" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "sentinels" | | 5 | "silk" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "otherworldly" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1008 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 1008 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.69 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Aurora | 7 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | October | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "October" | | 4 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them" | | 1 | "felt like minutes only to emerge hours" | | 2 | "quite lungs" | | 3 | "felt like a brand against her chest" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1008 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "carry that much" | | 1 | "looked that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 38.77 | | std | 19.76 | | cv | 0.51 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 62 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 58 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 48 | | 25 | 54 |
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| 96.49% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "were anchored" | | 1 | "was trapped" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "were hunting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her jacket tighter and checked her phone—no signal." | | 1 | "Between them, wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours—violet petals that caught moonlight like silk, white blossoms that glowed with their own cold luminescence." | | 2 | "Her footsteps, which had crunched clearly on fallen leaves moments before, now fell silent on soft grass that felt wrong beneath her feet—too springy, too alive." | | 3 | "Time moved differently here—she'd experienced that before, stepping in for what felt like minutes only to emerge hours later." | | 4 | "Definitely breathing, but wrong somehow—too deep, too wet, like air passing through something that wasn't quite lungs." | | 5 | "This time she didn't turn toward the sound—she'd learned that looking directly at whatever moved there only made it disappear." | | 6 | "In its place came something worse—the soft whisper of many feet moving through grass." | | 7 | "Even if that reason was becoming clearer with each passing second—and none of those reasons were good." |
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| 87.68% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1017 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.05408062930186824 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01966568338249754 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 12.6 | | std | 7.48 | | cv | 0.593 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 64.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.425 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Perhaps the distortion affected more" | | 1 | "Definitely breathing, but wrong somehow—too" | | 2 | "Instead, she let her peripheral" | | 3 | "Only the sound of breathing" |
| | ratio | 0.055 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 1 | "Her footsteps, which had crunched" | | 2 | "She'd been here twice before," | | 3 | "She spun toward the movement," | | 4 | "They were anchored in earth," | | 5 | "She'd come here because it" | | 6 | "She backed toward the centre" | | 7 | "She could see twenty of" | | 8 | "It had led her here," | | 9 | "She stood perfectly still, listening." | | 10 | "They were hunting." | | 11 | "She could feel it in" | | 12 | "She was alone, truly alone," | | 13 | "She wanted to tear it" | | 14 | "It had brought her here" |
| | ratio | 0.205 | |
| 83.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The taxi's headlights swept across" | | 1 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant beneath her" | | 3 | "The gates stood locked, as" | | 4 | "Years of delivering takeaways to" | | 5 | "The park's perimeter held fewer" | | 6 | "The pendant's warmth intensified." | | 7 | "Aurora stepped between the stones." | | 8 | "The air changed instantly, becoming" | | 9 | "Her footsteps, which had crunched" | | 10 | "She'd been here twice before," | | 11 | "The grove had felt otherworldly" | | 12 | "Butterflies had danced between impossible" | | 13 | "Tonight felt different." | | 14 | "Aurora pulled out her phone's" | | 15 | "The pendant grew warmer still," | | 16 | "Something moved at the edge" | | 17 | "She spun toward the movement," | | 18 | "The grove stretched before her," | | 19 | "The numbers didn't make sense." |
| | ratio | 0.753 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, sweeping her dying torch" | | 1 | "Even if that reason was" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 26.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Ancient oak standing stones rose like dark sentinels, their bark scarred with symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them." | | 1 | "Between them, wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours—violet petals that caught moonlight like silk, white blossoms that glowed with their own cold luminescen…" | | 2 | "The air changed instantly, becoming thicker, sweeter, carrying the scent of flowers that shouldn't exist in October." | | 3 | "Her footsteps, which had crunched clearly on fallen leaves moments before, now fell silent on soft grass that felt wrong beneath her feet—too springy, too alive…" | | 4 | "Butterflies had danced between impossible blooms while golden sunlight filtered through leaves that rustled with voices speaking languages she almost understood…" | | 5 | "Something that might have been breathing, if breathing could carry that much hunger." | | 6 | "Definitely breathing, but wrong somehow—too deep, too wet, like air passing through something that wasn't quite lungs." | | 7 | "The footsteps blended together like rain on leaves, creating a susurrus of movement that made her skin crawl." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |