Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXTE6A2S5YMM7THQRZRXYG

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Duration:
43.4s
Cost:
$0.004508
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose against the night sky like blackened teeth. Rory counted them twice. Seven oaks, twisted into shapes no natural growth could produce, their trunks carved with symbols she almost recognised. Almost. The patterns slipped away whenever she tried to focus on them, sliding to the edge of her vision like oil on water. She checked her phone. 11:47 PM. The message had been clear: come to the grove at midnight. Come alone. Come if you want answers about the pendant. The Heartstone hung cold against her collarbone, a dead weight on its silver chain. No pulse. No warmth. Whatever had drawn her here, the stone itself seemed indifferent to it now. Richmond Park had been easy enough to navigate in daylight. She'd made this walk a dozen times, knew the paths, knew which gates locked at dusk and which stayed open for the deer. But tonight the familiar routes had unravelled behind her like thread from a spool, and by the time she'd found the ancient oaks marking the grove's boundary, she'd been walking for forty minutes longer than she should have. The message had come from an unknown number. No name. No identification. Just coordinates and those five words: answers about the pendant. She should have deleted it. Should have blocked the number and gone to bed and shown up for her delivery shift tomorrow like none of this had ever happened. Instead, she stood at the edge of a clearing she'd never seen before, watching her breath fog in air that smelled of summer flowers and wet copper. Wildflowers carpeted the ground between the stones. Bluebells. Foxglove. Things with white petals that glowed faintly in the darkness, their stems bending toward her like they were watching. Watching. Rory shook the thought away. Plants didn't watch. Plants didn't have eyes. But something did. She felt it between her shoulder blades, that prickle of awareness that someone was standing just behind her, close enough to touch. She spun, fist raised, heart hammering against her ribs. Empty grass. Empty stones. Empty trees. "Hello?" Her voice came out thin. Reedy. It didn't echo the way it should have in an open space. Instead, the sound seemed to sink into the earth, swallowed by the flowers and the dark. The pendant stayed cold. No portal nearby, then. No Hel breach. Just her and the wind and the growing certainty that she'd made a terrible mistake. She turned back toward the way she'd come. The path was gone. Rory blinked. Rubbed her eyes. Blinked again. The standing stones formed a perfect circle around her now. Seven trunks, equally spaced, each one facing her with those carved symbols writhing across their bark. She must have walked deeper into the grove without realising it. Sleepwalking. Autopilot. Something. But she hadn't moved. She was certain she hadn't moved. The flowers at her feet had grown taller. She stepped back, and her heel caught on something soft. She stumbled, caught herself, looked down. A doll. No — a figure. A crude humanoid shape woven from twigs and bound with what looked like hair. Human hair. Its head was turned toward her, and where its face should have been, someone had painted a single eye in red. The pendant flared hot against her chest. Rory scrambled backward, putting distance between herself and the thing on the ground. Her hand found the stone through her shirt, fingers wrapping around its familiar weight. It pulsed now, a steady beat like a second heart, and its crimson glow threw long shadows across the clearing. Shadows that moved wrong. She watched one of them detach itself from the base of a standing stone. It crept toward her across the flowers, shapeless and dark, and where it passed, the petals turned black and curled. Another shadow pulled free from the tree to her left. Then another. Then another. They didn't have eyes. They didn't have faces. But she felt them looking all the same — felt their attention like fingers dragging across her skin, cold and curious and hungry in a way that had nothing to do with food. Rory backed up until her shoulders hit oak bark. The shadows spread across the clearing, pooling between the stones, cutting off every direction of escape. The pendant burned now. She could feel its heat through her shirt, could see its glow intensifying, turning the shadows around her into sharp-edged silhouettes that flinched back from its light. One of them lunged. Rory threw herself sideways. The shadow passed through the space where she'd been standing, and where it touched the ground, the earth hissed and smoked. She ran. The grove shouldn't have been that large. She'd seen the whole of it from the boundary — a clearing maybe fifty feet across, ringed by seven trees. But she ran for thirty seconds, forty, a full minute, and the standing stones never got any closer. The wildflowers tangled around her ankles. Branches grabbed at her hair. The shadows kept pace behind her, silent and patient, like they knew something she didn't. Like they knew she wasn't going anywhere. Her phone buzzed in her pocket. Rory didn't stop running. She pulled it out, glanced at the screen, and nearly tripped over her own feet. The message was from her own number. YOU BROKE THE RULES, it read. YOU CAME ALONE. But she had come alone. She'd followed the instructions exactly. The second message came through before she could process the first. YOU WERE NEVER ALONE. The shadows closed in. Rory felt them before she saw them — that cold pressure building at the edges of her vision, that certainty that something was breathing right beside her ear. She spun, pendant raised, and its crimson light caught the edge of something that made her blood lock in her veins. A face. A face hanging in the darkness, disconnected from any body, watching her with eyes that reflected no light at all. It smiled, and its smile was too wide, too sharp, too full of teeth that belonged in no human mouth. "Found you," it whispered. The Heartstone blazed. Rory's vision went white. When it cleared, she was alone again. The face was gone. The shadows had retreated to the bases of the standing stones, and the grove was silent save for her own ragged breathing. But the flowers at her feet had all turned black. And standing in the centre of the clearing, exactly where she'd been standing moments before, was another twig figure. Bound with hair. Painted with a single red eye. This one was holding a tiny silver chain. Rory's hand flew to her throat. The pendant was gone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1111
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1111
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"navigate"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"navigate"
4"familiar"
5"echo"
6"perfect"
7"pulsed"
8"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences124
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1114
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1111
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Park1
Hel1
Rory10
Empty3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
places
0"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed indifferent to it now"
1"looked like hair"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1114
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean18.57
std17.06
cv0.919
sampleLengths
011
145
227
331
471
522
629
727
828
91
1012
113
1231
136
141
1534
1626
178
184
197
2040
2110
228
2316
2443
257
2647
274
2834
2910
302
312
3241
3325
3431
354
3625
372
3871
397
406
4119
427
439
4410
4511
464
474
4849
492
96.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences124
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
2"was gone"
31.65% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs198
matches
0"were watching"
1"was standing"
2"wasn't going"
3"was breathing"
4"was holding"
51.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences125
ratio0.032
matches
0"No — a figure."
1"But she felt them looking all the same — felt their attention like fingers dragging across her skin, cold and curious and hungry in a way that had nothing to do with food."
2"She'd seen the whole of it from the boundary — a clearing maybe fifty feet across, ringed by seven trees."
3"Rory felt them before she saw them — that cold pressure building at the edges of her vision, that certainty that something was breathing right beside her ear."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1108
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.032490974729241874
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004512635379061372
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean8.91
std7.77
cv0.872
sampleLengths
011
14
218
31
422
54
62
711
82
98
1014
112
122
1313
1410
1523
1638
178
182
192
2010
215
2224
2327
247
251
261
2719
281
295
303
314
323
3322
349
352
362
372
381
395
401
4112
4216
434
444
453
4615
478
484
492
50.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.376
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences98
matches
0"Just coordinates and those five"
1"Instead, she stood at the"
2"Instead, the sound seemed to"
3"Just her and the wind"
ratio0.041
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences98
matches
0"She checked her phone."
1"She'd made this walk a"
2"She should have deleted it."
3"She felt it between her"
4"She spun, fist raised, heart"
5"Her voice came out thin."
6"It didn't echo the way"
7"She turned back toward the"
8"She must have walked deeper"
9"She was certain she hadn't"
10"She stepped back, and her"
11"She stumbled, caught herself, looked"
12"Its head was turned toward"
13"Her hand found the stone"
14"It pulsed now, a steady"
15"She watched one of them"
16"It crept toward her across"
17"They didn't have eyes."
18"They didn't have faces."
19"She could feel its heat"
ratio0.296
87.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences98
matches
0"The standing stones rose against"
1"Rory counted them twice."
2"The patterns slipped away whenever"
3"She checked her phone."
4"The message had been clear:"
5"The Heartstone hung cold against"
6"Whatever had drawn her here,"
7"Richmond Park had been easy"
8"She'd made this walk a"
9"The message had come from"
10"She should have deleted it."
11"Wildflowers carpeted the ground between"
12"Things with white petals that"
13"Rory shook the thought away."
14"Plants didn't watch."
15"Plants didn't have eyes."
16"She felt it between her"
17"She spun, fist raised, heart"
18"Her voice came out thin."
19"It didn't echo the way"
ratio0.745
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Things with white petals that glowed faintly in the darkness, their stems bending toward her like they were watching."
1"But she felt them looking all the same — felt their attention like fingers dragging across her skin, cold and curious and hungry in a way that had nothing to do…"
2"She could feel its heat through her shirt, could see its glow intensifying, turning the shadows around her into sharp-edged silhouettes that flinched back from …"
3"She spun, pendant raised, and its crimson light caught the edge of something that made her blood lock in her veins."
4"A face hanging in the darkness, disconnected from any body, watching her with eyes that reflected no light at all."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"it whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
83.5045%