Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
193
glossingSentenceCount
24
matches
0
"quite a creature and wasn’t quite a wind"
1
"quite a wind"
2
"moonlight that seemed to pool inside the Fae blade’s slender edge"
3
"as if tasting words rather than air"
4
"looked like a painting whose frame had gr"
5
"as if listening to a wind that carried voices"
6
"not quite a person and not quite a shadow"
7
"not quite a shadow"
8
"as if coaxing an answer from a stubborn friend"
9
"tasted like hot copper and rain on a furn"
10
"as if touching a boundary that should not be touched"
11
"as if addressing a stubborn child and not a sentient boundary"
12
"eyes that seemed to see through the body’s effort to walk"
13
"breath that seemed to gather wind from all sides of the grove"
14
"something like warmed skin, a scent that fil"
15
"not quite feel solid yet seemed to hold cold and calm in their chest"
16
"looked like frost meeting dawn"
17
"quite a greeting and not merely a gesture of caution either"
18
"looked like a painting where the frame ha"
19
"felt like a kiss, cool and strangely re"
20
"place that seemed to be the grove’s core in this new world"
21
"as if paying homage to a pattern only the grove could remember"
22
"something like a cosmic breath—slow, even, i"
23
"sounded like distant rain but was warmer,"
24
"as if agreeing with a decision made"
25
"not quite of any sun or moon, but of that moment’s own truth—the moment when they knew they had found a place where their choices mattered, not just their courage"
"“Light here isn’t light; it’s a rumor of light.” They paused, listening to the hush of the grove as if the trees themselves held their breath."
1
"“The Grove keeps company with time, and time keeps company with silence. Walk carefully; the silence hears us.”"
2
"The ground beneath them changed—soft moss gave way to plates of lichen flat as mirrors, reflecting the trio in pale, distorted shapes."
3
"The standing stones—one ash-white, another copper-bronze, and a third the color of old wood—stood in a circle around a pool that did not seem to exist in any normal sense of space."
4
"“Look how the reflection doesn’t match the surface. It’s not about what’s below; it’s about what lies between.”"
5
"The grove’s air had a tang of citrus and something else—metallic, almost sweet, like the scent of coins left to age in a lantern."
6
"The corridor did not smell like earth or water; it had a scent of electric rain and something older than weather—the ancient somewhere that hinted at a memory before memory found its place in time."
7
"The blade stayed cold to the touch, always cold, a sensation that was somehow a reminder of boundaries—those invisible lines you could feel more than see."
8
"“The gate does not accept fear; it feeds on resolve.”"
9
"It did not address them with words; it showed them, through images that leaped and vanished in the blink of an eye."
10
"Then, in the exact moment Rory asked for it, the world muffled and suddenly expanded—the corridor widened, revealing a narrow arch bordered by living vines that glowed with a pale, luminescent blue."
11
"The arch did not cast a shade of its own; it cast possibility."
12
"The borders between the old grove and this new space did not disappear; they thinned, presenting a threshold that could be crossed only if one was willing to cross with open hands and a clear resolve."
13
"The air grew thick with the resonance of distant bells—no bells, exactly, but the sound of chimes that might be heard in dreams rather than in waking life, a chorus of glassy, pure tones that pressed gently at the edges of perception."
14
"A figure stepped from the luminosity ahead—a silhouette of a person, then another, then a cluster, all moving with a kind of patient inevitability that suggested they did not hurry, that they belonged to a rhythm older than fear."
15
"The luminous beings before them did not rush to answers; instead they began to move in a slow, ceremonial choreography, guiding the group along a path that curved around a central garden of pale flora that looked almost unreal in its perfection."
16
"The group could hear every subtle sound—paper-thin rustle of leaves, the soft sigh of a distant spring—yet nothing crowded their sense."
17
"The Fae blade remained sheathed; the pendant burned a little warmer when they drew near the heart of the place, a place that seemed to be the grove’s core in this new world."
18
"It spoke in memory—images of the grove as it once existed and as it would be if it chose to bear this moment."
19
"The images did not threaten; they offered a corridor of possibility that lay like a field of light at the edge of sight."
20
"Nyx looked toward the edge of the terrace, where the first hint of the sun—no, not sun, but a radiance that existed only here—began to creep in through a break in the sky."
21
"The Seer’s voice rose in a cadence that didn’t belong to any one person’s voice but to the grove itself, a ring of sound that settled over them like a shawl—thin, warm, and almost sacred."
22
"The corridor behind the arch began to shimmer with more tangible shapes—faint doors lined along an invisible hall, a gallery of possibilities rather than mere ground."
23
"The air thrummed with something like a cosmic breath—slow, even, inexorable."
24
"And then, in a moment that felt both inevitable and brand new, the tree’s light released a click in the air—a soft, decisive sound like a latch moving in a lock."
25
"They did not lose their footing; the grove held them with a sure, almost maternal grace."
26
"The corridor beyond it did not vanish; it settled into a new shape, ready to be walked by someone who carried the heart of the grove in their chest."
27
"The other side held its own kind of wonder—a city of pale stone, a quiet population of beings whose eyes carried centuries in their glimmer, and a horizon braided with roads that curved away toward secrets the grove wished to keep safe."
28
"Nyx moved with a slow, comfortable ease that was both a relief and a warning—their presence like a shaded harbor in a seashell of glow."
29
"The Heartstone Pendant’s warmth settled into a steady, approving glow that bathed Rory in a light not quite of any sun or moon, but of that moment’s own truth—the moment when they knew they had found a place where their choices mattered, not just their courage."
30
"The grove’s boundary faded behind them not to vanish, but to become a part of their memory—only a memory that would shape every decision made from here on."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
161
technicalSentenceCount
59
matches
0
"The standing stones—one ash-white, another copper-bronze, and a third the color of old wood—stood in a circle around a pool that did not seem to exist in any no…"
1
"Rory stepped closer to the pool, the Heartstone Pendant at her neck warming against her skin, a quiet pulse that softened the line between her heartbeat and the…"
2
"Nyx slipped a hand into the shadow near the pool, fingers brushing air as if it were a fabric."
3
"The Heartstone Pendant glowed with a faint inner glow, its crimson gleam pulsing in time with the breath of the grove, a patient thing that did not hurry and di…"
4
"The pool’s surface peeled back at the edge, revealing instead a corridor, a corridor of light that stretched sideways, not down, and seemed to bend the air arou…"
5
"Rory kept her gaze fixed on the corridor, feeling the pendant warm again, feeding warmth into her chest in a way that felt almost protective, like a small anima…"
6
"The ground did not vanish, but it softened, becoming a pale glassy surface that reflected every movement with a patient, unblinking precision."
7
"She set one boot in front of the other, the blade at her hip catching a glimmer of moonlight that seemed to pool inside the Fae blade’s slender edge."
8
"The blade stayed cold to the touch, always cold, a sensation that was somehow a reminder of boundaries—those invisible lines you could feel more than see."
9
"The air thinned, as if the grove allowed only a restricted number of heartbeats to pass through and no more."
10
"The boundaries between worlds whispered against their skins in a way that made Rory’s scar flash a memory of something she hadn’t looked at in years, a crescent…"
11
"The words traveled through Nyx’s shadow and Isolde’s quiet scent of ozone and lavender, then back to her own ears as though she’d spoken aloud inside her skull."
12
"Nyx stepped forward exactly to Rory’s side, their shadow reconstituting into a humanoid silhouette that breathed in unison with Rory’s own lungs."
13
"The corridor’s glow thickened, a slow pulse that thickened the air around them into something more tangible, a membrane that felt almost like a skin."
14
"They passed a shallow pool of water that reflected all three of them but did not reveal their exact faces."
15
"Nyx heard it too and stepped closer to her, their own form turning toward the sound as if listening to a wind that carried voices."
16
"Isolde’s fingers traced tiny sigils in the air, a slow, patient dance that did not hurry the pace but pressed it forward, as if the grove itself required someth…"
17
"A light, not a sound, a soft incandescence in the shape of a figure that stood taller than any of them, not quite a person and not quite a shadow."
18
"The Heartstone Pendant warmed again, and a line of warmth crawled up the chain toward her collarbone, warming the skin over the scar that she never wore with mu…"
19
"The warmth spread, and she felt something inside loosen, a knot that had lived there since Cardiff, since leaving behind the ex-lover and the fear that followed…"
20
"The figure moved, a wavering silhouette that flowed like spilled ink but kept its shape with a stubborn constancy."
21
"The Heartstone Pendant gave a deeper thrumming now, a rhythm that beat with something ancient and patient, a rhythm that asked for patience from the one who wor…"
22
"Nyx folded a hand into a dark head, the other resting against the stone circle, as if touching a boundary that should not be touched."
23
"The standing stones hummed, a low vibration that tickled the skin at the edge of perception."
24
"Then, in the exact moment Rory asked for it, the world muffled and suddenly expanded—the corridor widened, revealing a narrow arch bordered by living vines that…"
25
"Beyond it lay a space that did not resemble the grove or the park’s ordinary lanes, but a threshold into something that might have existed long before either of…"
26
"Rory shifted the blade at her hip, testing its weight as if to reassure herself of its usefulness."
27
"The blade, cold as moonlight, drifted into a slight glow when it neared the arch, and a soft sigh came from somewhere in the air, a sound that did not belong to…"
28
"It carried a memory of things that had not yet happened, a sense of new roads that could be taken or left to rust in the dust of time."
29
"Within the arch’s reach, the world beyond did not look like a different place so much as a more careful place: a city built of pale stone that breathed, streets…"
30
"The air was cooler and richer, carrying the scent of crushed herbs and something like warmed skin, a scent that filled the lungs and memory with a soft, intimat…"
31
"Their form stretched, a living shadow that did not quite feel solid yet seemed to hold cold and calm in their chest."
32
"The borders between the old grove and this new space did not disappear; they thinned, presenting a threshold that could be crossed only if one was willing to cr…"
33
"The Heartstone Pendant’s glow intensified, its warmth now a steady, almost domestic presence at Rory’s sternum, as if the stone expected to be invited to share …"
34
"The air grew thick with the resonance of distant bells—no bells, exactly, but the sound of chimes that might be heard in dreams rather than in waking life, a ch…"
35
"Rory nodded slightly, her eyes scanning the unfamiliar horizon, turning over the possibility of what lay ahead like a coin in her palm."
36
"They wore clothing that looked as if the fabric had sprouted from the earth itself and grown into something wearable: vines and leaf-veined leather, threads of …"
37
"The eyes that regarded them held a pale brightness, a sort of clarity that felt almost new and ancient at the same time."
38
"The luminescent figure stepped closer, and with it, the air settled into a deeper quiet that pressed against their skins as if all the world were listening for …"
39
"Nyx reached out a hand, letting the shadow touch the air, and the air gave back in a way that felt like a kiss, cool and strangely reassuring."
40
"The luminous beings before them did not rush to answers; instead they began to move in a slow, ceremonial choreography, guiding the group along a path that curv…"
41
"The group moved forward another few steps, and the central area opened up into a circular terrace, its surface a mosaic of living tiles that shifted and rearran…"
42
"In the middle of the terrace stood a single tree, its branches bare of leaves yet alive with the same pale glow that clung to the corridor’s edges."
43
"The tree’s trunk carried scars that didn’t look like damage so much as weathered histories, rings of time visible on its bark and spiraling in unexpected direct…"
44
"She did, with the other two at her side, Nyx’s shadow stretching to fill the space behind them, Isolde’s eyes searching the tree as if it might divulge the futu…"
45
"The grove’s boundary stones hummed with a quiet power, approving or denying with a resonance that echoed through her chest."
46
"She steadied herself and breathed out slowly, the breath turning to a ring of fog that hovered for a moment in front of her lips, then dissolved into the air."
47
"The Seer’s voice rose in a cadence that didn’t belong to any one person’s voice but to the grove itself, a ring of sound that settled over them like a shawl—thi…"
48
"She looked at Nyx, who met her gaze with a stare that might have been an invitation or a warning, and then at Isolde, whose features blurred just a fraction in …"
49
"The grove exhaled again, or perhaps it exhaled for the first time in a long while, and the terrace’s living tiles rearranged themselves into a pathway that led …"
50
"Rory’s hand rested on the blade’s sheath a moment longer, then lifted, not to draw, but to test the air with the tiny, careful movement of someone who knew that…"
51
"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed in time with the tree as if the grove and the stone shared a singular, stubborn heartbeat."
52
"And then, in a moment that felt both inevitable and brand new, the tree’s light released a click in the air—a soft, decisive sound like a latch moving in a lock…"
53
"She spoke, not loudly, but with a calm certainty that could have withstood the most furious storm."
54
"The other side held its own kind of wonder—a city of pale stone, a quiet population of beings whose eyes carried centuries in their glimmer, and a horizon braid…"
55
"Rory found herself breathing easier, the weight of years and fear lifting in a way that felt almost ceremonial, as if the grove had granted them a small rite of…"
56
"Nyx moved with a slow, comfortable ease that was both a relief and a warning—their presence like a shaded harbor in a seashell of glow."
57
"The Heartstone Pendant’s warmth settled into a steady, approving glow that bathed Rory in a light not quite of any sun or moon, but of that moment’s own truth—t…"
58
"They stood together for a heartbeat longer, the weight of the blade, the warmth of the pendant, and the memory of the boundary stone’s quiet hum anchoring them …"