Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXTG47T8A1355SZF5R9AD5

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Duration:
36.3s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The silver chain of the Heartstone pendant dug into my palm as I approached the stone archway. Moonlight filtered through the dense canopy overhead, casting shifting shadows across the ancient oak markers that stood sentinel at the edge of the grove. Three hours. That's how long I'd been searching through Richmond Park, following half-remembered directions from a book I'd found in Silas's office. The pages had been brittle with age, the ink faded, but the map had been clear enough. Find the twin oaks. Walk thirty paces north. Look for the standing stones. I'd found the twin oaks easily enough. The thirty paces had turned into forty, then fifty, as I'd second-guessed myself and circled back. But now, here it was. The archway. The boundary. My phone had died an hour ago, its battery unable to handle the cold. I'd forgotten to charge it before leaving the flat, too caught up in the urgency of needing answers. The kind of answers that might lie beyond this threshold. The air here tasted different. Cleaner, somehow, despite the earthy scent of damp soil and decaying leaves. It carried notes of something sweet, like honey left too long in the sun. I inhaled deeply, trying to steady my nerves. Three steps. That's all it would take to cross over. Three steps to whatever waited on the other side. A twig snapped behind me. I whirled around, heart hammering against my ribs. Nothing but darkness and trees. The night sounds of the park—distant traffic, the rustle of nocturnal creatures—had faded to an eerie silence. Even the wind had died down, leaving the branches motionless overhead. "Hello?" My voice came out steadier than I felt. "Is someone there?" No answer. Of course there wasn't. I was alone in a strange place at night, jumping at shadows. The rational part of my brain knew this. The part that had spent years studying law, building cases, finding logical explanations for everything. But the other part—the part that had seen too much in the past few weeks, that had watched Silas bleed out on a warehouse floor, that had held a dying woman's hand as she whispered secrets about Fae and Hel—that part wasn't feeling particularly rational. I turned back to the archway. The stones seemed to pulse with a faint inner light, just like the Heartstone had when I'd first touched it in Silas's office. I hadn't told anyone about that. About how it had grown warm in my hand, how it had seemed to call to something deep inside me. The pendant chose you, Silas had said. But he'd been delirious, dying. Could I trust anything he'd said in those final moments? Another sound. This time, a soft whisper of fabric against bark. Like someone—or something—moving through the trees behind me. I didn't look back this time. I couldn't afford to show fear. Not here. Not now. Instead, I stepped forward. One foot across the threshold. Then another. The air grew thick around me, heavy with the scent of honey and something else. Something ancient and powerful that made my skin prickle with awareness. The grove opened up before me. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets that glowed with an inner light, roses the color of fresh blood, lilies as black as the night sky. The standing stones formed a perfect circle, their surfaces carved with symbols I didn't recognize but that seemed to shift and change when I wasn't looking directly at them. In the center of the circle stood a single oak tree. Its trunk was wider than any tree I'd ever seen, its branches stretching up to cradle the moon in a canopy of silver leaves. At its base, something glowed with a soft, pulsing light. The Heartstone pendant grew warm against my skin, its chain tightening like a living thing. I reached up to touch it, and the glow from the tree's base intensified, casting long shadows across the grove. "Welcome, child of Earth." The voice came from everywhere and nowhere at once. It carried the weight of centuries, the rustle of leaves in a summer breeze, the whisper of secrets long buried. I spun around, searching for its source, but saw only the standing stones and the impossible flowers. "Who's there?" I demanded, trying to keep my voice steady. "Show yourself." A figure stepped out from behind one of the stones. Tall and slender, with skin the color of moonlight and hair that flowed like liquid silver. Their eyes were the same impossible violet as the glowing flowers, and when they smiled, I saw rows of teeth that were just a little too sharp to be human. "You wear the stone of Dymas," they said, their voice like wind through autumn leaves. "Few have been chosen in this age. Fewer still have dared to seek us out." I clutched the pendant tighter. "I need answers. About what's happening. About Silas. About—" "About the war that brews between realms?" They stepped closer, and I caught the scent of honey again, stronger this time. "About the Hel portal that threatens to tear your world asunder?" I froze. How did they know about that? About any of it? "I can help you," they continued, circling me slowly. "But help comes with a price. Always." "What kind of price?" I asked, though some deep instinct told me I shouldn't have. The Fae—for what else could they be?—laughed. It was a beautiful sound, like crystal chimes in a gentle breeze. But there was something underneath it. Something sharp and dangerous. "The kind that binds," they said. "The kind that cannot be broken. But you already knew that, didn't you? You've seen what happens when mortals make bargains with our kind." Memories flashed through my mind. Silas, bleeding out on the warehouse floor. The woman in the hospital, whispering about debts and prices. The way the Heartstone had called to me, chosen me. "I didn't choose this," I said, but even to my own ears, the words sounded hollow. "No," the Fae agreed. "But you're here now. And here, in this place between worlds, choices have consequences." They reached out a hand, and I saw that their fingers were too long, their nails curved and pointed like claws. In their palm rested a small object. It took me a moment to recognize it as a key. Old iron, blackened with age, its teeth jagged and unfamiliar. "This will open the way," they said. "But to use it, you must give me something in return. Something precious." I should have said no. Should have turned and run back through the archway, back to the rational world of law and logic and things that could be explained. But I'd seen too much. Lost too much. And the need for answers, for understanding, burned too hot inside me. "What do you want?" I asked. The Fae smiled again, and this time I saw something else in their eyes. Something that might have been hunger. Or need. "Your name," they said. "The true one. The one given at birth. Speak it, and the key is yours." My name. My real name. Not Rory, not Aurora, not any of the aliases I'd used over the years. The one my parents had given me. The one I'd tried so hard to leave behind. "No," I said, taking a step back. "I won't do that." The Fae's smile didn't falter. "Then you cannot have the key. And without it, you'll never find what you're looking for. Never understand the truth of what's happening." They turned as if to leave, and panic surged through me. I couldn't let them go. Couldn't let this chance slip away. "Wait," I said, and my voice cracked. "There must be another way." "There is always another way," they agreed, turning back to face me. "But it will cost you more than just your name. It will cost you a piece of your soul. A memory. A moment in time that you hold dear." I thought of Silas. Of the way he'd looked at me in his final moments, his eyes filled with something that might have been regret. Or love. "I'll do it," I said, before I could change my mind. "Whatever you want. Just tell me what I need to know." The Fae stepped closer, close enough that I could see my reflection in their violet eyes. Close enough to smell the honey and something else. Something that reminded me of blood left too long in the sun. "Then give me your hand," they said, extending their own. "And let us begin the bargain."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1445
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1445
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"sentinel"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count2
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"carried the weight"
count1
6
word"crystal"
count1
highlights
0"sentinel"
1"silence"
2"pulse"
3"whisper"
4"perfect"
5"carried the weight"
6"crystal"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
96.40% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences123
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1435
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1181
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.51
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Heartstone4
Richmond1
Park1
Silas6
Fae6
Hel1
Memories1
Rory1
Aurora1
Three3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Silas"
2"Fae"
3"Memories"
4"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1435
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences140
matches
0"saw that their"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean28.7
std14.5
cv0.505
sampleLengths
041
152
232
342
439
519
65
741
812
941
1045
1155
1222
1319
1416
1537
1659
1745
1835
194
2046
2112
2256
2330
2414
2532
2612
2716
2815
2929
3030
3132
3216
3318
3449
3520
3649
376
3822
3919
4035
4111
4228
4322
4412
4541
4627
4722
4837
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs199
matches
0"wasn't feeling"
1"wasn't looking"
40.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences140
ratio0.036
matches
0"The night sounds of the park—distant traffic, the rustle of nocturnal creatures—had faded to an eerie silence."
1"But the other part—the part that had seen too much in the past few weeks, that had watched Silas bleed out on a warehouse floor, that had held a dying woman's hand as she whispered secrets about Fae and Hel—that part wasn't feeling particularly rational."
2"Like someone—or something—moving through the trees behind me."
3"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets that glowed with an inner light, roses the color of fresh blood, lilies as black as the night sky."
4"The Fae—for what else could they be?—laughed."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1191
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.038623005877413935
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005037783375314861
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean10.25
std7.18
cv0.701
sampleLengths
017
124
22
320
417
54
64
75
87
916
105
112
122
1314
1418
1510
165
1712
1814
198
202
218
229
235
248
255
2617
2711
289
293
302
314
3212
338
3415
3545
366
3723
386
3920
407
415
4210
432
449
458
466
476
482
492
58.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners56
94.34% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences106
matches
0"Even the wind had died"
1"Of course there wasn't."
2"Instead, I stepped forward."
ratio0.028
80.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences106
matches
0"I'd found the twin oaks"
1"My phone had died an"
2"I'd forgotten to charge it"
3"It carried notes of something"
4"I inhaled deeply, trying to"
5"I whirled around, heart hammering"
6"My voice came out steadier"
7"I was alone in a"
8"I turned back to the"
9"I hadn't told anyone about"
10"I didn't look back this"
11"I couldn't afford to show"
12"Its trunk was wider than"
13"I reached up to touch"
14"It carried the weight of"
15"I spun around, searching for"
16"I demanded, trying to keep"
17"Their eyes were the same"
18"they said, their voice like"
19"I clutched the pendant tighter."
ratio0.349
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences106
matches
0"The silver chain of the"
1"Moonlight filtered through the dense"
2"That's how long I'd been"
3"The pages had been brittle"
4"I'd found the twin oaks"
5"The thirty paces had turned"
6"My phone had died an"
7"I'd forgotten to charge it"
8"The kind of answers that"
9"The air here tasted different."
10"Cleaner, somehow, despite the earthy"
11"It carried notes of something"
12"I inhaled deeply, trying to"
13"That's all it would take"
14"A twig snapped behind me."
15"I whirled around, heart hammering"
16"Nothing but darkness and trees."
17"The night sounds of the"
18"My voice came out steadier"
19"I was alone in a"
ratio0.717
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
ratio0
36.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Moonlight filtered through the dense canopy overhead, casting shifting shadows across the ancient oak markers that stood sentinel at the edge of the grove."
1"The part that had spent years studying law, building cases, finding logical explanations for everything."
2"But the other part—the part that had seen too much in the past few weeks, that had watched Silas bleed out on a warehouse floor, that had held a dying woman's h…"
3"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets that glowed with an inner light, roses the color of fresh blood, lilies as black as the night sky."
4"Tall and slender, with skin the color of moonlight and hair that flowed like liquid silver."
5"Their eyes were the same impossible violet as the glowing flowers, and when they smiled, I saw rows of teeth that were just a little too sharp to be human."
6"Of the way he'd looked at me in his final moments, his eyes filled with something that might have been regret."
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"I demanded, trying to keep my voice steady"
32.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"I demanded (demand)"
1"they continued (continue)"
2"the Fae agreed (agree)"
3"they agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.441
leniency0.882
rawRatio0.267
effectiveRatio0.235
86.7767%