| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.54% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1445 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 72.32% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1445 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinel" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "carried the weight" | | 6 | "crystal" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.40% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 140 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1435 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1181 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.51 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Silas | 6 | | Fae | 6 | | Hel | 1 | | Memories | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Three | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Memories" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1435 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 28.7 | | std | 14.5 | | cv | 0.505 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 59 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 56 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 49 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 49 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 35 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 28 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 41 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 37 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 199 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't feeling" | | 1 | "wasn't looking" |
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| 40.82% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 140 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "The night sounds of the park—distant traffic, the rustle of nocturnal creatures—had faded to an eerie silence." | | 1 | "But the other part—the part that had seen too much in the past few weeks, that had watched Silas bleed out on a warehouse floor, that had held a dying woman's hand as she whispered secrets about Fae and Hel—that part wasn't feeling particularly rational." | | 2 | "Like someone—or something—moving through the trees behind me." | | 3 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets that glowed with an inner light, roses the color of fresh blood, lilies as black as the night sky." | | 4 | "The Fae—for what else could they be?—laughed." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1191 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.038623005877413935 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005037783375314861 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 140 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 140 | | mean | 10.25 | | std | 7.18 | | cv | 0.701 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 45 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 58.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.4 | | totalSentences | 140 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 94.34% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the wind had died" | | 1 | "Of course there wasn't." | | 2 | "Instead, I stepped forward." |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 80.38% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "I'd found the twin oaks" | | 1 | "My phone had died an" | | 2 | "I'd forgotten to charge it" | | 3 | "It carried notes of something" | | 4 | "I inhaled deeply, trying to" | | 5 | "I whirled around, heart hammering" | | 6 | "My voice came out steadier" | | 7 | "I was alone in a" | | 8 | "I turned back to the" | | 9 | "I hadn't told anyone about" | | 10 | "I didn't look back this" | | 11 | "I couldn't afford to show" | | 12 | "Its trunk was wider than" | | 13 | "I reached up to touch" | | 14 | "It carried the weight of" | | 15 | "I spun around, searching for" | | 16 | "I demanded, trying to keep" | | 17 | "Their eyes were the same" | | 18 | "they said, their voice like" | | 19 | "I clutched the pendant tighter." |
| | ratio | 0.349 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain of the" | | 1 | "Moonlight filtered through the dense" | | 2 | "That's how long I'd been" | | 3 | "The pages had been brittle" | | 4 | "I'd found the twin oaks" | | 5 | "The thirty paces had turned" | | 6 | "My phone had died an" | | 7 | "I'd forgotten to charge it" | | 8 | "The kind of answers that" | | 9 | "The air here tasted different." | | 10 | "Cleaner, somehow, despite the earthy" | | 11 | "It carried notes of something" | | 12 | "I inhaled deeply, trying to" | | 13 | "That's all it would take" | | 14 | "A twig snapped behind me." | | 15 | "I whirled around, heart hammering" | | 16 | "Nothing but darkness and trees." | | 17 | "The night sounds of the" | | 18 | "My voice came out steadier" | | 19 | "I was alone in a" |
| | ratio | 0.717 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 36.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Moonlight filtered through the dense canopy overhead, casting shifting shadows across the ancient oak markers that stood sentinel at the edge of the grove." | | 1 | "The part that had spent years studying law, building cases, finding logical explanations for everything." | | 2 | "But the other part—the part that had seen too much in the past few weeks, that had watched Silas bleed out on a warehouse floor, that had held a dying woman's h…" | | 3 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets that glowed with an inner light, roses the color of fresh blood, lilies as black as the night sky." | | 4 | "Tall and slender, with skin the color of moonlight and hair that flowed like liquid silver." | | 5 | "Their eyes were the same impossible violet as the glowing flowers, and when they smiled, I saw rows of teeth that were just a little too sharp to be human." | | 6 | "Of the way he'd looked at me in his final moments, his eyes filled with something that might have been regret." |
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| 95.59% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "I demanded, trying to keep my voice steady" |
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| 32.35% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "I demanded (demand)" | | 1 | "they continued (continue)" | | 2 | "the Fae agreed (agree)" | | 3 | "they agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.441 | | leniency | 0.882 | | rawRatio | 0.267 | | effectiveRatio | 0.235 | |