Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXTS5AMQKA0TR440DY5SR3

Run Details

Duration:
1m 24s
Cost:
$0.001724
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned station tasted of iron and damp paper. Harlow Quinn adjusted the strap of her utility belt, the leather worn smooth by eighteen years on the force. Her boots crunched on the loose gravel that had accumulated over decades of neglect. To anyone else, this gloomy Tube platform beneath Camden was just another vacancy on the Council's list, a reminder of the city’s forgotten infrastructure. To Quinn, it was home. And tonight, it was a crime scene. The entrance hatch in the tiled ceiling had been pried open, leaving a jagged ring of twisted metal. Light spilled down, illuminating a cluster of crates and velvet ropes in the center of the main track. A uniformed officer, new and green around the gills, stood guard outside the perimeter, his face pale against the gloom. "Detective." Eva Kowalski pushed herself off a rusted support pillar, her knees popping. She carried the weight of a small library on her back, the leather satchel thumping rhythmically with each step. Her red curls were escaping the confines of her round glasses, tickling her freckled cheeks. She was checking her fingernails for ink stains, a nervous tic she tried to suppress. "I told you we shouldn't come without backup," Eva said, her voice low. "They’d take too long to dig up a warrant for a stakeout in an abandoned Tube station. We cut through the red tape with the Bone Token. It bought us access," Quinn replied, her gaze fixed on the center of the room. A body lay sprawled across a pallet of crates. Clothing—expensive, tailored wool—was torn, but the damage looked staged rather than fought over. "The vic?" Eva asked, sidling up. "Unknown. Probably someone who shouldn't have wandered into the Veil Market tonight. The fence location shifts with the tide, but this looks like a holdover from the last cycle." Quinn stepped over a discarded newspaper dated three years prior, the headlines describing a string of unsolved art thefts. She lowered herself into a crouch beside the body. The victim was a man, mid-forties, handsomely ruined. His eyes were wide, staring up at the peeling tin ceiling, reflecting the flickering light of a handheld lantern held by another officer. "Call it in," Quinn told the younger officer. "Run a digitization on the body. But keep the lights low for now." "Detective, look at this," the officer stammered, his voice trembling. "There’s no blood on the floor, sir. None at all. It’s like he just evaporated." Quinn ignored him. She reached out with a gloved hand and touched the man’s neck. The skin was warm. Radiating heat. "Eva, grab that medical kit from the satchel. If this is a robbery, the guy in the velvet jacket is terrible with knives. The wound is precise. A lobotomy split, straight down the spine." Eva rummaged in her bag, the clinking of glass vials cutting through the silence. She pulled out a small glass vial and uncorked it, wafting the scent of lavender and dried sage under the man’s nose. "He’s not breathing," Eva noted, her eyes narrowing behind the lenses. "And his body temperature is elevated. Too high. He’s been dead for maybe an hour, but he feels like he’s on a radiator." "Paradox," Eva whispered, stepping closer. She pointed a shaking finger at the man’s chest. "Look at the shadows. They’re not casting true. That shadow should be on the crate. It’s hovering." Quinn looked. The angle of the lantern cast the shadow of the body across the metal floor, but the top half of the shadow detached itself and floated above the chest. "Fluorescent ghouls," Quinn muttered, standing up. "Or alchemical fire retardant." She circled the body, boots clicking against the concrete. She checked the man’s pockets. Empty. His belt was unbuckled, and his jacket was tossed aside. It was staged to look like a mugging gone wrong, or a lover's quarrel. "Sheer manicured perfection," Quinn said, poking at the open wound. "If he died instantly, the contusions on his face should match the landing, but they don't. He looks like he was posed." Eva shuddered, her hand going to the satchel strap. "He was forced to look at us. At the compass." Quinn stopped. She reached into her coat pocket and withdrew the brass artifact. The Veil Compass sat heavy in her palm, the verdigris flaking off onto her gloves. She didn't need the bone token anymore; the item pulsed in response to the dead man's residual energy. "The needle is erratic," Eva observed. "The compass points to rifts," Quinn said. She spun the dial. The needle spun in a frenzy, scratching against the glass face. Then, it snapped to the right. Straight at the rusted wall of the tunnel, where a heavy steel shutter was welded shut. "You think he’s here?" the rookie asked, stepping closer. "The victim was a Shade artisan. Someone powerful," Eva said. "They don't sell what's on the black market unless they're desperate, or selling something far worse. He didn't come here to buy poisons. He came here to sell a secret." "Or hide one," Quinn countered. She walked toward the shutter. The needle drew her forward. It pressed against her finger, demanding entrance. "Harlow, wait. The barrier on that door is sealed with a blood rune. One wrong step and the door closes. It doesn't open for outsiders." Quinn didn't listen. She looked back at the body. The man’s eyes had cleared slightly, the frantic glaze fading. He wasn't staring up at the ceiling anymore. He was looking directly at the spot where the needle had stopped. At the wall. "He didn't come here," Quinn said softly. "He was brought here." "Why?" Eva asked, the leather of her satchel squeaking as she stepped forward to block the path. "Why the cruelty? Why leave him here?" "He was dumped," Quinn replied, staring at the shutter. "And the person who dumped him knows the door doesn't open from the outside unless you have a key. Or unless you know the code. And only the clique knows the code to the old Camden sector." Eva gasped, covering her mouth. "The clique. The ones you've been investigating." "The ones who killed Morris," Quinn corrected. She looked at the compass. The needle wasn't pointing at the door anymore. It was pointing at Eva. The blood froze in Quinn's veins. She stared at the brass casing, the green patina blurring under her gaze. The needle hadn't twitched toward Eva. It had been pointing at Eva the whole time. "Harlow, what are you doing?" Eva asked, stepping back, her hand drifting toward the pocket of her slacks. "Don't move, Eva." "I'm not doing anything. I'm a researcher. I'm here to help." "You're a researcher," Quinn repeated, her voice flat. "And your heart rate just spiked. You took a bone token three months ago to get into the archives. You probably took one today, too. But you didn't use it at the door. You walked through the shadows." The shutter groaned, a hydraulic hiss that hadn't been heard in decades. The rusted metal peeled back, revealing a dark void beyond. The smell of rot and sulfur wafted out, stronger than anything inside the platform. A shadow detached itself from the wall of the void and drifted toward Quinn. Eva stepped forward, pulling a small silver dagger from her sleeve. "I didn't do anything to him, Quinn! I just told you what I saw!" "He was afraid of you," Quinn said, her hand tightening around the compass until her knuckles turned white. "That's why the shadow detached itself. It doesn't like the competition." The rookie officer dropped his lantern. It shattered, sending sparks flying that ignited the dry newspaper on the floor. The fire spread quickly, a hungry yellow wave eating through the propaganda of the past. Eva looked at the fire, then at the dark opening behind Quinn, then finally at the detective. "I didn't bring him here," Eva screamed, tears welling in her eyes. "I was meeting you here!" "The clock is ticking," Quinn said, watching the shadow grow. "And the Market is about to make a move. Full moon's rising. And if we don't get out of here before the tunnel collapses, we're going down with the ship."
created_at"2026-02-19T12:26:09.455Z" 2/19/2026, 12:26:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.043
89.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1382
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1382
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"reminder"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count2
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"carried the weight"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"velvet"
2"gloom"
3"carried the weight"
4"silence"
5"pulsed"
6"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1379
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Then, it snapped to the right."
24.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount873
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.52
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Quinn22
Tube1
Camden1
Council1
Kowalski1
Eva18
Veil1
Compass1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Council"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.24
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1379
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean28.73
std16.37
cv0.57
sampleLengths
081
156
21
361
413
542
622
76
829
959
1021
1125
1221
1334
1436
1534
1631
1731
1810
1939
2032
2119
2246
236
2444
259
2640
2722
2825
2942
3011
3124
3246
3312
3425
3534
3618
373
3811
3946
4036
4114
4225
4329
4434
4517
4617
4740
82.13% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences91
matches
0"been pried"
1"was torn"
2"was unbuckled"
3"was tossed"
4"was staged"
5"was welded"
6"been heard"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs161
matches
0"were escaping"
1"was checking"
2"wasn't staring"
3"was looking"
4"wasn't pointing"
5"was pointing"
92.73% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences114
ratio0.018
matches
0"Clothing—expensive, tailored wool—was torn, but the damage looked staged rather than fought over."
1"She didn't need the bone token anymore; the item pulsed in response to the dead man's residual energy."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount876
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.023972602739726026
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007990867579908675
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean12.1
std8.1
cv0.67
sampleLengths
012
119
214
324
45
57
618
718
820
91
1012
1119
1215
1315
1413
1542
169
1713
186
1929
2019
219
228
2323
248
2513
2610
2715
283
2912
304
312
3234
3314
3422
3511
3623
375
389
3917
402
4129
426
434
449
455
461
4710
4814
4910
42.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3157894736842105
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners36
40.65% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Then, it snapped to the"
ratio0.012
93.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences82
matches
0"Her boots crunched on the"
1"She carried the weight of"
2"Her red curls were escaping"
3"She was checking her fingernails"
4"She lowered herself into a"
5"His eyes were wide, staring"
6"She reached out with a"
7"She pulled out a small"
8"She pointed a shaking finger"
9"She circled the body, boots"
10"She checked the man’s pockets."
11"His belt was unbuckled, and"
12"It was staged to look"
13"She reached into her coat"
14"She didn't need the bone"
15"She spun the dial."
16"She walked toward the shutter."
17"It pressed against her finger,"
18"She looked back at the"
19"He wasn't staring up at"
ratio0.317
2.68% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences82
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Harlow Quinn adjusted the strap"
2"Her boots crunched on the"
3"The entrance hatch in the"
4"Light spilled down, illuminating a"
5"A uniformed officer, new and"
6"Eva Kowalski pushed herself off"
7"She carried the weight of"
8"Her red curls were escaping"
9"She was checking her fingernails"
10"Eva said, her voice low"
11"Quinn replied, her gaze fixed"
12"A body lay sprawled across"
13"Eva asked, sidling up"
14"Quinn stepped over a discarded"
15"She lowered herself into a"
16"The victim was a man,"
17"His eyes were wide, staring"
18"Quinn told the younger officer"
19"the officer stammered, his voice"
ratio0.915
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"To anyone else, this gloomy"
1"To Quinn, it was home."
ratio0.024
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
16.30% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Eva said, her voice low"
1"the officer stammered, his voice trembling"
2"Eva noted, her eyes narrowing behind the lenses"
3"Quinn repeated, her voice flat"
4"Eva screamed, tears welling in her eyes"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"the officer stammered (stammer)"
1"Eva noted (note)"
2"Eva whispered (whisper)"
3"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
4"Eva observed (observe)"
5"Quinn corrected (correct)"
6"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
7"Eva screamed (scream)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.478
leniency0.957
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.348
78.4950%