Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXTYEMNNK9M8V6HR1R2K6H

Run Details

Duration:
10.2s
Cost:
$0.004520
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The distinctive green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest flickered above, casting a sickly hue across the wet pavement. Rain, a steady British drizzle, slicked the Soho street. Rory pushed through the heavy oak door, the low hum of conversation and clinking glasses a familiar embrace. She shucked off her rain-damp jacket, hanging it on a peg near the entrance. The usual crowd populated the dimly lit bar. Old maps and faded black-and-white photographs covered the walls, each one a silent witness to countless whispered secrets and shared laughter. Silas, his grey-streaked auburn hair glinting under the warm glow of the overhead lights, polished a glass behind the bar. A silver signet ring caught the light on his right hand as he worked. He looked up, a faint smile touching his lips. “Evening, Rory,” a warm rumble from Silas. “Thought you were done for the night.” “Just finished my last delivery,” Rory said, pushing a stray strand of black hair from her face. “Figured I’d grab a quick one before heading up.” She moved to her usual stool at the corner of the bar, the subtle ache in her left knee from a full day on her feet a familiar companion. She ordered a sparkling water with lime. The scent of aged wood, stale beer, and something faintly metallic, always present in the Nest, filled her nostrils. She watched Silas, his slight limp as he moved, a testament to old battles. He set her drink down, ice clinking. “Slow night,” he observed, leaning against the counter. Rory nodded, tracing the condensation on her glass. “Almost a relief after the day I’ve had. Ran into a rather… colourful character down on Drury Lane. Demanded I deliver his spring rolls in a top hat.” Silas let out a low chuckle. “Never a dull moment, is there?” A sudden chill snaked its way up Rory’s spine, a sense of being watched. She slowly turned her head. A man sat several stools down, his back to her, but something about the set of his shoulders, the dark curve of his hair, snagged at a forgotten memory. He wore a heavy, dark coat, its collar turned up. The bar’s dim lighting threw shadows across him, obscuring his features. He turned slowly, a deliberate motion, and met her gaze. Recognition, a jolt of ice water to the gut, slammed into Rory. Evan. His eyes, once a vibrant green she remembered, now seemed dulled, almost opaque. A scar, thin and white, slashed across his left eyebrow. His face, once smooth, was now etched with a weary maturity that went beyond his years. The boy she knew was gone, replaced by a ghost. A tremor ran through her. Her breath caught in her throat. She gripped her glass, her knuckles white. He offered a tight, almost grim, smile. “Rory?” His voice, a low rasp, sent another shiver through her. It was the same voice, yet harsher, like gravel on stone. “Evan,” she managed, the name a foreign taste on her tongue. The sound of it invoked a flood of fragmented images: laughter, promises, the cold grip of fear. He rose from his stool, his movements stiff, almost hesitant, as if the years had settled into his bones. He walked towards her, each step a further erosion of the distance between them, a closer inspection of her past. She felt a phantom pain on her left wrist, remembering the small crescent-shaped scar hidden beneath her sleeve. He stopped a polite distance away, his hands shoved into his pockets. “It’s been a while.” “Years,” Rory replied, her voice flat. She kept her gaze steady, unwilling to let him see the tumult churning inside her. “London suits you,” he said, his eyes scanning her face, lingering on her bright blue eyes, her straight black hair. A flicker, something she couldn't quite decipher, crossed his face. “I’m doing well,” she stated, a subtle defiance in her tone. He nodded slowly, a ghost of his former self. “I heard.” He paused, as if searching for the right words. “I… I’ve changed, Rory.” “I can see that,” she said, her gaze unwavering. The harsh lines etched around his eyes, the hollows in his cheeks, spoke volumes she didn’t want to hear. A sigh escaped him. “You always could see through me, couldn’t you?” He offered another one of his tight, sad smiles. “Always knew what I was thinking.” “Some things are hard to forget,” Rory said, a bitter edge to her voice. He flinched, a subtle tightening of his jaw. “I deserved that,” he conceded, his gaze drifting to the scarred surface of the bar. “And more.” The silence stretched between them, heavy and weighted with unspoken history. The clinking of glasses, the low murmur of conversation, seemed to fade into the background. It was just them, suspended in a moment that felt both endless and fleeting. “What are you doing here, Evan?” she finally asked, her voice laced with a mixture of curiosity and apprehension. He met her gaze, his eyes shadowed. “Passing through. Needed a drink.” He gestured around the bar. “Didn’t expect to find you in a place like this.” “I live above it,” Rory said, a small, almost imperceptible shrug of her shoulders. His eyebrows rose slightly. “You always had a knack for finding adventure.” A faint, almost imperceptible warmth entered his eyes. “Remember that time we snuck into the old abandoned theatre by the docks?” A prickle of irritation rose within Rory. He was trying to invoke nostalgia, to erase the years, to soften the edges of their shared past. “I remember a lot of things, Evan.” His smile faltered. “I know,” he whispered, the earlier confidence draining from his posture. He shifted his weight, his gaze falling to his hands. “I’ve done a lot of thinking, Rory. About… about everything.” “Has it made a difference?” she asked, her voice quiet, almost a challenge. He hesitated, then slowly raised his head. “I hope so. I’m trying. To be… better.” “Good for you,” she said, the words clipped, devoid of emotion. She wouldn’t offer him comfort, not after all this time. The memories, the fear, the pain, still resonated. He ran a hand through his dark hair, the gesture somehow alien on his changed face. “I know it’s not enough. Nothing I can say or do will ever make up for… for what I did.” Rory remained silent, watching him, her face a mask. She saw the regret in his eyes, felt the weight of it in the air between them, but it offered no balm to her old wounds. “Did you ever… hate me?” His voice was barely a whisper. Rory finally looked away, focusing on the condensation on her glass. “It’s complicated, Evan. It always was.” He nodded, a slow, solemn movement. “I understand.” He took a step back, widening the gap between them. “I won’t bother you. It was… good to see you.” His voice cracked slightly on the last few words. Before she could respond, he turned and walked back to his stool, his heavy coat a dark silhouette against the muted lights of the bar. He sat down, his back once again to her, becoming just another shadow in the corner of The Raven’s Nest. The space he left between them, once filled with tension, now felt empty, a void that had swallowed a piece of her past. Rory stared at the ripple of her reflection in the glass, the bright blue of her eyes a stark contrast to the dimness around her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
63.64% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she finally asked [finally]"
1"He gestured around [around]"
2"His voice cracked slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.579
leniency1
rawRatio0.136
effectiveRatio0.136
76.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1263
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count4
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1263
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"testament"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"sense of"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"etched"
count2
9
word"fragmented"
count1
10
word"churning"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
13
word"unwavering"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"unspoken"
count1
16
word"fleeting"
count1
17
word"apprehension"
count1
18
word"warmth"
count1
19
word"weight"
count2
20
word"resonated"
count1
21
word"whisper"
count1
22
word"tension"
count1
23
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"glinting"
3"testament"
4"tracing"
5"chill"
6"sense of"
7"eyebrow"
8"etched"
9"fragmented"
10"churning"
11"scanning"
12"flicker"
13"unwavering"
14"silence"
15"unspoken"
16"fleeting"
17"apprehension"
18"warmth"
19"weight"
20"resonated"
21"whisper"
22"tension"
23"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences88
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1258
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.58% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1027
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.17
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest3
British1
Soho1
Silas4
Rory12
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.916
windowScore1
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed dulled almost opaque"
1"quite decipher, crossed his face"
2"as if searching for the right words"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1258
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean32.26
std20.37
cv0.631
sampleLengths
089
143
214
355
447
58
636
712
869
972
1025
1122
1228
1357
1416
1521
1630
1711
1824
1928
2027
2114
2225
2340
2419
2527
2614
2733
2832
2934
3013
3115
3229
3336
3435
3511
3617
3737
3893
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs156
matches
0"was trying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences102
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1032
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.035852713178294575
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.011627906976744186
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean12.33
std6.42
cv0.52
sampleLengths
019
19
218
314
48
521
620
714
89
97
107
1117
1238
137
1419
1514
167
178
188
1928
206
216
2214
235
2429
2510
2611
2710
2812
291
3013
3110
3216
3310
345
356
367
377
3811
3911
4011
4117
4219
4320
4418
4512
464
476
4815
4920
52.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3431372549019608
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences87
matches
0"She shucked off her rain-damp"
1"He looked up, a faint"
2"She moved to her usual"
3"She ordered a sparkling water"
4"She watched Silas, his slight"
5"He set her drink down,"
6"he observed, leaning against the"
7"She slowly turned her head."
8"He wore a heavy, dark"
9"He turned slowly, a deliberate"
10"His eyes, once a vibrant"
11"His face, once smooth, was"
12"Her breath caught in her"
13"She gripped her glass, her"
14"He offered a tight, almost"
15"His voice, a low rasp,"
16"It was the same voice,"
17"she managed, the name a"
18"He rose from his stool,"
19"He walked towards her, each"
ratio0.586
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences87
matches
0"The distinctive green neon sign"
1"Rory pushed through the heavy"
2"She shucked off her rain-damp"
3"The usual crowd populated the"
4"Silas, his grey-streaked auburn hair"
5"A silver signet ring caught"
6"He looked up, a faint"
7"a warm rumble from Silas"
8"Rory said, pushing a stray"
9"She moved to her usual"
10"She ordered a sparkling water"
11"The scent of aged wood,"
12"She watched Silas, his slight"
13"He set her drink down,"
14"he observed, leaning against the"
15"Rory nodded, tracing the condensation"
16"Silas let out a low"
17"A sudden chill snaked its"
18"She slowly turned her head."
19"A man sat several stools"
ratio0.966
57.47% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"Before she could respond, he"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He rose from his stool, his movements stiff, almost hesitant, as if the years had settled into his bones."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Rory replied, her voice flat"
1"He paused, as if searching for the right words"
2"she said, her gaze unwavering"
3"he conceded, his gaze drifting to the scarred surface of the bar"
4"he whispered, the earlier confidence draining from his posture"
5"she asked, her voice quiet, almost a challenge"
6"she said, the words clipped, devoid of emotion"
44.74% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"she stated (state)"
2"he conceded (concede)"
3"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.342
leniency0.684
rawRatio0.308
effectiveRatio0.211
74.4601%