Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXV013SQNS7YD73YRPYSDV

Run Details

Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.017826
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement, turning the London streets into slick mirrors that fractured the neon glow of shop signs. Detective Harlow Quinn pushed through the downpour, her lungs burning with the effort. Water streamed off her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair, stinging her brown eyes. She wiped her face with the back of a gloved hand and kept moving. Her boots slapped against the wet concrete, the rhythm steady, precise. Military precision kept her upright when exhaustion begged her to stop. Ahead, the suspect darted around a corner into Camden High Street. The figure moved with an unnatural grace, slipping between pedestrians without breaking stride. Quinn drew her torch and swept the beam across the alleyway mouth. Darkness swallowed the light. She holstered the torch and drew her weapon. The metal felt cold against her palm. Stop right there. Her voice cut through the sound of falling water. The runner didn't slow. Quinn surged forward, her legs pumping. She checked her worn leather watch on her left wrist. Twenty minutes since the sighting at The Raven's Nest. Too long. She lost DS Morris three years ago because she hesitated at a threshold just like this. She would not make that mistake again. The suspect vanished into the shadow of an abandoned Tube station entrance. Rust covered the iron gates, but a section stood ajar. Quinn approached the gap, her breath coming in sharp white clouds. The air here smelled different. Less exhaust, more ozone and dried herbs. She holstered her weapon and pushed the gate open. It groaned on hinges that should have seized years ago. Steps led down into the earth. The sound of the city faded, replaced by a low hum that vibrated in her teeth. Quinn descended, her hand trailing along the damp tiled wall. Graffiti covered the surface, but the symbols shifted when she looked away. She blinked and focused on the bottom of the stairs. A heavy steel door blocked the tunnel. A man stood guard beside it. He wore a coat made of patches stitched from different fabrics, none of them human. He held a staff topped with a glowing amber stone. Quinn stopped five paces from him. Her hand hovered near her hip. You cannot pass. The guard's voice sounded like grinding stones. Quinn squared her shoulders, her sharp jaw set tight. I'm police. Open the door. The guard laughed, a dry sound like leaves skittering on pavement. He tapped the staff against the ground. Sparks flew from the impact. The Met has no jurisdiction here. This is the Veil Market. Quinn stepped closer. The light from the amber stone illuminated the lines on her face. She needed to see what lay beyond that door. The suspect had come this way. She knew it. I saw a man enter. He's wanted for questioning. Many enter. Few leave. The guard extended a hand. A bone token rested in his palm, white and carved with runes. He slipped it into a slot on the wall. The steel door shuddered and began to slide open. Warm light spilled out, carrying the scent of spiced smoke and something coppery. Quinn caught a glimpse of stalls lining a vast cavernous space beneath the Tube tracks. People in hooded cloaks bartered over cages that moved on their own. She needed to follow. The evidence she sought lived in that market. The truth about Morris lived there. Quinn reached for her badge, then stopped. A badge meant nothing here. The guard watched her, his eyes devoid of whites. You lack the token. Quinn assessed the gap. The door opened wide enough for one person. The guard stood to the side, not blocking the path but watching her intent. She could rush him. She could slip through before the mechanism closed. She calculated the distance. Three metres. Her speed versus his staff. I don't need a token to walk through a door. You need one to walk out. Quinn glanced at the tunnel behind her. The rain waited above. Safety waited above. Down here, the rules of physics bent. She thought of the files on her desk. The impossible autopsies. The disappearances that stopped when the moon reached its peak. This market moved every full moon. If she walked away, it would vanish until the next cycle. Eighteen years of service told her to wait for backup. The ghost of Morris told her to move. She tightened her grip on her jacket lapel. Open it. The guard shook his head. He raised the staff. The amber stone flared brighter. I will not repeat the warning, Detective Quinn. He knew her name. Quinn didn't flinch. She stepped into the light spilling from the cavern. The heat hit her face, drying the rain on her skin instantly. The hum grew louder, resonating in her chest. She looked past the guard into the market. Shadows danced between the stalls. Somewhere in that crowd, the suspect waited. You know who I am. Then you know I don't turn back. The guard lowered the staff slightly. He studied her face, looking for fear. He found none. He stepped aside, clearing the path but keeping the staff ready. Enter then. But the market takes payment from all who walk its floors. Quinn checked her watch again. The second hand ticked forward. She holstered her weapon and adjusted her collar. She placed one foot over the threshold. The air inside felt thick, resistant, like walking through water. She looked back at the guard one last time. I'll pay what I owe. She stepped fully into the Veil Market. The steel door began to close behind her with a heavy thud. The sound of the rain vanished completely. Quinn stood in the centre of the concourse. Traders shouted prices in languages she didn't recognise. A cage nearby rattled, containing something that scratched at the bars. She pulled her notebook from her pocket and flipped it open. The pages remained dry despite the humidity. She walked past a stall selling jars of bottled smoke. The vendor, a woman with skin like bark, watched her pass. Quinn kept her eyes forward. She scanned the crowd for the suspect's coat. The crowd parted for her, sensing the steel in her posture. She moved through the throng, her boots clicking on the stone floor. A hand grabbed her elbow. Quinn spun, grabbing the wrist and twisting it back. A young man grimaced, his olive skin pale under the market lights. He wore a Saint Christopher medallion around his neck. He held up his free hand in surrender. Easy. You're drawing attention. Quinn released his arm. She recognised him from the files. Tomás Herrera. Former paramedic. You're out of your depth, Doc. Tomás rubbed his wrist. He glanced at the guards patrolling the perimeter. You need to leave. Now. I'm not leaving. Tomás stepped closer, lowering his voice. He smelled of antiseptic and dried blood. This isn't Soho. You can't arrest anyone here. They'll eat you alive. Quinn looked past him toward the deeper sections of the market. Lights flickered above stalls selling forbidden alchemy. Then I'll shoot them. Tomás shook his head. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a small cloth bundle. He pressed it into her hand. Put this in your mouth. Don't swallow. Quinn looked at the bundle, then at Tomás. She untied the string. Dried leaves sat inside. She looked up, but Tomás had already turned away, melting into the crowd. She tucked the bundle into her pocket. She continued forward. The path led to a raised platform where a figure stood overlooking the market. The suspect. He waited for her. Quinn climbed the steps. Her heart rate remained steady. She reached the top of the platform. The suspect turned. He wore a mask made of porcelain. He held a box in his hands. You followed me. The voice was distorted, mechanical. Quinn stopped two metres away. She kept her hands visible. Give me the box. It doesn't belong to you. It belongs to the victims. The suspect tilted his head. He opened the box. Inside, a blue light pulsed. Quinn recognised the energy signature from the Morris case files. Her hand twitched toward her holster. The suspect closed the box with a snap. You want the truth, Detective? I want justice. Justice is a currency we don't trade here. The suspect stepped back toward the edge of the platform. A drop lay behind him, leading into the dark tunnels beyond the market. Quinn took a step forward. The floor vibrated beneath her feet. The market prepared to move. She had minutes before the location shifted. Open the box. The suspect laughed. He held the box over the edge. Come and take it. Quinn lunged. The suspect dropped the box. It fell into the darkness. Quinn stopped at the edge and looked down. The blue light faded as it fell. She turned back to the suspect, but he was gone. Only the mask remained on the floor. She picked it up. The porcelain felt warm. She pocketed the mask and scanned the crowd below. Tomás Herrera watched her from the shadows of a stall. He nodded once, then vanished. Quinn descended the steps. She needed to find the box before the market moved. She pushed through the traders. A creature with too many eyes barred her path. It hissed, baring rows of needle teeth. Quinn didn't slow. She shoulder-checked the creature and kept moving. It stumbled but did not follow. She reached the area where the box should have landed. Nothing lay on the tracks. She knelt and ran her hand over the gravel. Her fingers brushed against metal. She pulled out a small device. It hummed in her hand. She recognised the technology. It matched the gear found on Morris's body. She stood up and pocketed the device. The lights above flickered. The ground shook. The market began to shift. Quinn turned toward the exit. The steel door stood closed. The guard was gone. She ran toward the door. It remained solid. She pounded on the metal. Open up. No answer. The hum grew to a roar. The stalls began to dissolve into mist. Quinn looked for another way out. A tunnel mouth opened to her left. Dark air rushed from it. She sprinted toward the tunnel. The floor behind her crumbled into void. She jumped into the tunnel just as the platform collapsed. She landed on concrete and rolled. She stood up and brushed off her trousers. She was in a service corridor. Dust covered the walls. A single bulb flickered overhead. She walked down the corridor. At the end, a ladder led up. She climbed. Her muscles burned. She pushed open the manhole cover at the top. Rain greeted her face. She pulled herself out onto the street. Camden High Street stood empty. The sun began to rise over the rooftops. Quinn checked her watch. Morning. She looked at the device in her hand. It stopped humming. She closed her fist around it and started walking. Her car waited two streets over. She needed to process the evidence. She needed to understand what the box contained. She needed to find Tomás Herrera. He knew more than he said. She reached her car and unlocked the door. She sat in the driver's seat and placed the device on the dashboard. She started the engine. The heater blew cold air. She watched the device. It remained inert. She put the car in gear and drove away from the curb. The city woke up around her. Normal life resumed. She merged into traffic. Her phone buzzed in her pocket. She ignored it. She focused on the road. The device lay silent. She gripped the steering wheel. Her knuckles turned white. She drove toward the precinct.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
94.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1969
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1969
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"pumping"
count1
2
word"vibrated"
count2
3
word"calculated"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count2
5
word"flickered"
count3
6
word"porcelain"
count2
7
word"mechanical"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"pumping"
2"vibrated"
3"calculated"
4"scanned"
5"flickered"
6"porcelain"
7"mechanical"
8"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences296
matches(empty)
94.59% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences296
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences296
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1966
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions86
wordCount1966
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity1.63
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow1
Quinn32
Camden2
High2
Street2
Raven1
Nest1
Morris5
Tube2
Met1
Veil2
Market2
Detective3
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera3
Doc1
Soho1
Tomás8
You10
Open4
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Tube"
4"Met"
5"Market"
6"Detective"
7"Saint"
8"Christopher"
9"Herrera"
10"Tomás"
11"You"
12"Open"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
2"High"
3"Street"
4"Raven"
5"Veil"
6"Soho"
globalScore0.686
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences164
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like grinding stones"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.509
wordCount1966
matches
0"not blocking the path but watching her intent"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences296
matches
0"make that mistake"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean27.31
std25.91
cv0.949
sampleLengths
080
155
23
363
464
554
650
73
816
95
1023
1111
1233
139
144
1575
1639
174
1849
1910
206
2177
228
232
2414
258
2656
2712
2827
2913
3044
315
3271
3357
3443
354
3614
376
3812
395
403
4113
4212
4318
444
4522
467
4759
4833
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences296
matches
0"wanted"
1"was gone"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs400
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences296
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1969
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.017267648552564754
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0030472320975114273
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences296
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences296
mean6.64
std3.19
cv0.481
sampleLengths
019
113
212
314
411
511
611
713
812
94
108
117
123
139
144
156
1610
179
182
1916
207
2112
2210
2311
245
257
269
2710
286
2916
3010
3112
3210
337
346
3515
3610
376
386
393
407
419
422
433
4411
457
465
476
485
493
38.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats34
diversityRatio0.20945945945945946
totalSentences296
uniqueOpeners62
47.96% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences278
matches
0"Somewhere in that crowd, the"
1"Then you know I don't"
2"Then I'll shoot them."
3"Only the mask remained on"
ratio0.014
31.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount131
totalSentences278
matches
0"She wiped her face with"
1"Her boots slapped against the"
2"She holstered the torch and"
3"Her voice cut through the"
4"She checked her worn leather"
5"She lost DS Morris three"
6"She would not make that"
7"She holstered her weapon and"
8"It groaned on hinges that"
9"She blinked and focused on"
10"He wore a coat made"
11"He held a staff topped"
12"Her hand hovered near her"
13"You cannot pass."
14"He tapped the staff against"
15"She needed to see what"
16"She knew it."
17"I saw a man enter."
18"He's wanted for questioning."
19"He slipped it into a"
ratio0.471
4.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount253
totalSentences278
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn pushed through"
1"Water streamed off her closely"
2"She wiped her face with"
3"Her boots slapped against the"
4"Military precision kept her upright"
5"The figure moved with an"
6"Quinn drew her torch and"
7"Darkness swallowed the light."
8"She holstered the torch and"
9"The metal felt cold against"
10"Her voice cut through the"
11"The runner didn't slow."
12"Quinn surged forward, her legs"
13"She checked her worn leather"
14"She lost DS Morris three"
15"She would not make that"
16"The suspect vanished into the"
17"Quinn approached the gap, her"
18"The air here smelled different."
19"Less exhaust, more ozone and"
ratio0.91
17.99% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences278
matches
0"If she walked away, it"
ratio0.004
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rain hammered the pavement, turning the London streets into slick mirrors that fractured the neon glow of shop signs."
1"A cage nearby rattled, containing something that scratched at the bars."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.3856%