Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXV0G0YBKHG1W03DT3BSR5

Run Details

Duration:
1m 16s
Cost:
$0.007168
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the asphalt, turning the London street into a slick obsidian mirror. Harlow Quinn pumped her arms, her boots hammering the pavement with a rhythm that belonged on a drill field, not a midnight pursuit. The suspect—a hooded figure clutching a heavy canvas satchel—vaulted a bollard and scrambled over the bonnet of a parked taxi. "Police! Stop running!" Harlow didn't shout. She didn't have the breath. The words barely left her throat before she was moving again, muscles coiling and releasing. The hood slipped between two buildings, heading away from the bright lights of the West End. Harlow checked her wrist. The worn leather of her watch strap was dark with water. 02:14. The city was asleep, but the streets were awake with the hunt. She followed the splashing echoes into an alleyway choked with refuse bags. The smell of rot and stale beer assaulted her nose. The suspect was fast, unnaturally so, gaining distance with every turn. Harlow grit her teeth, jawline tightening. She wouldn't lose this one. Not like Morris. The hooded figure skidded around a corner, slipping on wet cobblestones but recovering instantly. Harlow pushed harder, ignoring the burn in her calves. They were heading north, toward the sprawl of Camden. The ambient noise of the city faded, replaced by the howl of wind and the relentless drumming of the storm. The suspect ducked through a gap in a construction fence, disappearing into the shadows of the old railway arches. Harlow blasted through the tarpaulin a second later. The air down here tasted different. Ozone and wet iron. "End of the line!" The alley dead-ended against a rusted metal door that looked like it hadn't opened since the Blitz. The suspect spun around, chest heaving, eyes wide and darting. He held the satchel against his chest like a shield. Harlow slowed, her hand drifting to the grip of her service weapon. She kept it holstered, but the threat was clear. Rain dripped from the end of her nose. "Hand it over." "You don't know what you're doing, Quinn." The voice was distorted, wet. Not the kid she expected. Someone older. Someone who knew her name. She took a step forward. "I know you're fleeing a crime scene. I know you're covered in blood that isn't yours. Put the bag on the ground." The suspect smiled. A crooked, broken thing. "I'm not the one bleeding." He reached into his pocket. Harlow drew her weapon, aiming center mass. "Hand out. Slow." The suspect pulled his hand out. A white disc sat in his palm. A coin. No, a token. Carved from bone. He slammed it against the rusted door. A sound like a cracking whip echoed through the archway. The metal door didn't swing open; it dissolved. The rust flaked away into ash, the iron turning translucent as mist. Beyond it lay not a storage room, but a set of concrete stairs spiralling down into darkness. Harlow froze. Her finger tightened on the trigger. This wasn't right. This wasn't physics. "See you on the other side, Detective." The suspect stepped through the mist and vanished. Harlow stood there, the rain soaking her salt-and-pepper hair, plastering it to her skull. Her heart hammered against her ribs, but her mind was cold, sharp. She looked at the space where the door used to be. The opening shimmered, a violet haze hanging in the air. From the depths below, sounds drifted up. Not the noise of a train station. Chanting. The hiss of steam. The low murmur of a hundred voices in a language she couldn't place. She holstered her weapon. If she called this in, they'd send a mental health team. They'd suspend her. They'd bury the file. She looked at her watch again. 02:16. "Damn it." She stepped through the haze. The chill hit her instantly, cutting through her clothes like she was naked. The stairs were steep, lit by flickering bulbs that buzzed with an angry electric hum. The air was thick with the scent of sulfur, burning sage, and copper. Harlow descended, hand hovering over her holster. The concrete walls gave way to rough-hewn brick. This was deep. Deeper than the Tube. The stairs opened into a cavernous space. An abandoned station platform, but repurposed. Harlow pressed her back against a brick pillar and scanned the area. It was a market. Stalls carved out of scrap metal and old shipping containers lined the platform. Strange glowing fungi hung from the ceiling in wire baskets, casting long, dancing shadows. Figures moved between the stalls—some human, others... not. A man with the head of a bull inspected a jar of floating eyeballs. A woman with skin like polished obsidian haggled over a knife that seemed to absorb the light around it. Harlow swallowed hard. Her brain scrambled for a rational explanation. Gas leak. Hallucination. Mass hysteria. Then she saw him. The suspect was fifty yards away, exchanging the bone token for a small vial of glowing blue liquid from a stall vendor. And standing next to him, looking bored and unbothered by the nightmare unfolding around him, was Tomás Herrera. Harlow knew Tomás. Everyone in the precinct knew the dropout paramedic who ran with the bad crowds. She had arrested him twice for possession, both times charges dropped for lack of evidence. He was leaning against a tent pole, picking at his fingernails. The Saint Christopher medallion around his neck caught the purple light, glinting gold. Tomás looked up. His warm brown eyes locked onto Harlow's position across the platform. He didn't panic. He didn't run. He just raised an eyebrow and nudged the suspect. The suspect stiffened, grabbing the vial and bolting toward a tunnel on the far side. Tomás pushed off the pole, moving with a loose, easy grace that Harlow had never seen in the interrogation room. He didn't chase the suspect. He walked straight toward her. Harlow stepped out from the pillar, weapon drawn but held low. "Stay where you are, Herrera." He stopped five feet away. Up close, he looked different. Tired. But the scar running down his left forearm seemed to pulse. "Detective Quinn." His voice was calm. Casual. "You're a long way from Soho." "You're under arrest. Accessory to..." She waved the gun vaguely at the bull-headed man. "...whatever the hell this is." Tomás glanced at the bull-man, then back at her. He smiled sadly. "This isn't a jurisdiction you want to claim, Harlow." "Don't call me Harlow." She advanced, cuffs in her left hand. "Turn around. Hands behind your back." "If I do that, you won't make it back up the stairs." He gestured to the market around them. "The Veil doesn't like uniforms. It doesn't like laws." "The Veil?" "This place. The Market." He looked at the tunnel where the suspect had fled. "Your runner bought something he shouldn't have. Something that burns." "I don't care what he bought. I care about the body I found two hours ago. The one that was drained of blood." Tomás’s expression flickered. A crack in the armor. "That wasn't us." "Then who?" "The collectors. And if you go down that tunnel after him, you'll become inventory." He stepped closer, ignoring the gun barrel pressed against his chest. "Go back, Quinn. Walk up the stairs. Forget the door." Harlow looked at the tunnel. The suspect was getting away. The killer was getting away. She looked at Tomás. She saw the medic he used to be, buried under layers of secrets. "I can't do that." Tomás sighed. He reached into his jacket pocket. Harlow tensed, finger tightening on the trigger. He pulled out a card. A playing card. The Queen of Swords, but the queen had three eyes. He tucked it into her breast pocket. "For luck." He shoved her. Hard. Harlow stumbled back, boots scuffing the dirty platform. "Go!" She regained her balance, but Tomás was already gone. He melted into the crowd, disappearing behind a stall selling cursed teeth. Harlow stood alone in the swirling chaos of the Veil Market. The card in her pocket felt like it was burning a hole through her shirt. The suspect was vanishing into the dark tunnel ahead. The entrance behind her was the only way back to the real world. She checked her watch. 02:18. Harlow looked at the tunnel. She looked at the stairs. She holstered her weapon, turned her back on the exit, and walked into the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1414
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sadly"
count1
highlights
0"sadly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1414
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"echoes"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"depths"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"electric"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"dancing"
count1
8
word"glinting"
count1
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"echoes"
1"echoed"
2"shimmered"
3"depths"
4"chill"
5"electric"
6"scanned"
7"dancing"
8"glinting"
9"eyebrow"
10"pulse"
11"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences152
matches(empty)
95.86% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences152
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences176
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1405
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.17% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1211
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
London1
Quinn1
West1
End1
Morris1
Camden1
Blitz1
Tube1
Tomás9
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Harlow22
Casual1
Queen1
Swords1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Harlow"
7"Queen"
places
0"London"
1"West"
2"End"
3"Market"
globalScore0.592
windowScore0.833
64.77% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like it hadn't opened since the Bl"
1"knife that seemed to absorb the light around it"
2"felt like it was burning a hole through"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.712
wordCount1405
matches
0"not a storage room, but a set of concrete stairs spiralling down into darkness"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences176
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean18.49
std16.62
cv0.899
sampleLengths
057
13
239
328
447
552
627
710
84
937
1029
113
127
1317
1427
157
165
1712
183
1921
207
2147
2214
237
248
2579
2622
277
282
295
3041
3122
3213
3312
344
3568
3615
374
3822
3918
4056
4129
4215
4330
4411
455
4622
4713
4819
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs217
matches
0"were heading"
1"was burning"
2"was vanishing"
94.16% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences176
ratio0.017
matches
0"The suspect—a hooded figure clutching a heavy canvas satchel—vaulted a bollard and scrambled over the bonnet of a parked taxi."
1"The metal door didn't swing open; it dissolved."
2"Figures moved between the stalls—some human, others..."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1220
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.021311475409836064
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005737704918032787
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences176
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences176
mean7.98
std5.39
cv0.675
sampleLengths
014
123
220
33
43
55
615
716
84
911
101
1112
1212
1310
1411
156
165
173
1814
199
209
2120
2219
238
246
254
264
2717
2810
2910
3012
319
328
333
347
355
365
372
385
395
4022
413
424
435
445
457
463
476
487
492
37.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.3063583815028902
totalSentences173
uniqueOpeners53
24.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences137
matches
0"Then she saw him."
ratio0.007
85.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences137
matches
0"She didn't have the breath."
1"She followed the splashing echoes"
2"She wouldn't lose this one."
3"They were heading north, toward"
4"He held the satchel against"
5"She kept it holstered, but"
6"She took a step forward."
7"He reached into his pocket."
8"He slammed it against the"
9"Her finger tightened on the"
10"Her heart hammered against her"
11"She looked at the space"
12"She holstered her weapon."
13"They'd suspend her."
14"They'd bury the file."
15"She looked at her watch"
16"She stepped through the haze."
17"It was a market."
18"Her brain scrambled for a"
19"She had arrested him twice"
ratio0.336
11.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount123
totalSentences137
matches
0"Rain lashed against the asphalt,"
1"Harlow Quinn pumped her arms,"
2"The suspect—a hooded figure clutching"
3"Harlow didn't shout."
4"She didn't have the breath."
5"The words barely left her"
6"The hood slipped between two"
7"Harlow checked her wrist."
8"The worn leather of her"
9"The city was asleep, but"
10"She followed the splashing echoes"
11"The smell of rot and"
12"The suspect was fast, unnaturally"
13"Harlow grit her teeth, jawline"
14"She wouldn't lose this one."
15"The hooded figure skidded around"
16"Harlow pushed harder, ignoring the"
17"They were heading north, toward"
18"The ambient noise of the"
19"The suspect ducked through a"
ratio0.898
36.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences137
matches
0"If she called this in,"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Harlow Quinn pumped her arms, her boots hammering the pavement with a rhythm that belonged on a drill field, not a midnight pursuit."
1"The alley dead-ended against a rusted metal door that looked like it hadn't opened since the Blitz."
2"The stairs were steep, lit by flickering bulbs that buzzed with an angry electric hum."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.4264%