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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXV59KDYXBVF0PDCXBXTAE
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Model:
Gemini 2.5 Flash
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
10.0s
Cost:
$0.005139
Provider:
Google AI Studio
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
82.03%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
32.61%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
18.42%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
76.08%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
49.02%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
8.24%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
75.5466%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The sharp clang of a
dropped pint glass cut through the usual hum of voices at The Raven's Nest.
Aurora, perched on a stool
at the far end of the bar, flinched. Not even Silas's impressive collection of old maps and photographs could muffle the sound.
She nursed her gin and
tonic, the ice clinking a lonely rhythm as she watched the new bartender mop up the spilled lager with a less-than-enthusiastic sweep.
A figure detached itself from
the shadows near the entrance, moving with a
familiar
, almost exaggerated grace. Rory’s breath hitched. No, it couldn’t be. Not here, not now.
Her grip tightened around her
glass. "Fancy seeing you here, Laila,"
the man drawled, his voice
a low rumble that
managed to
cut through the bar's din. Rory spun on her stool.
Her gaze snagged on his
eyes first, still the same piercing hazel, though now underscored by faint lines that hadn't been there before. His hair, once a wild, dark mop, was tamed, slicked back, with threads of silver at the temples, catching the dim green neon glow from above the doorway. He wore a tailored suit, a
stark
contrast to the worn band t-shirts she remembered.
A silver signet ring gleamed
on his right hand, a new addition to the Silas she once knew. "Silas,"
she managed, her voice a
thin
whisper
.
She pushed a loose strand
of black hair behind her ear. "It's Aurora now. You know that."
He offered a slow, almost
predatory smile, the kind that never quite reached his eyes. "Right. Aurora. Always reinventing yourself, weren't you?"
He took the stool beside
her, the movement fluid despite the slight limp she now noticed in his left leg. The scent of expensive cologne, woodsmoke, and something else, something sharp and metallic, clung to him. "And you, it seems,"
she retorted, gesturing vaguely at
his attire. "Lost the leather jacket, then? Thought it was practically part of your skin."
Silas chuckled, a dry, humorless
sound. "Youthful indiscretions. One grows up."
He nodded at her drink
. "Still chasing ghosts?" "Still avoiding them," Rory corrected, taking a long sip. The gin tasted bitter,
suddenly
. "What brings the illustrious Silas Blackwood to a den of... well, this?"
She waved a hand around
the dimly lit bar. His gaze swept the room, lingering on the old maps. "Business. Always business."
He signalled the bartender, who
hurried over with an evident deference. "Scotch, neat. The good stuff." "Since when is 'business' a suit and a secret backroom, Si?"
she pressed, her voice lower
now. She remembered a different backroom, filled with cheap beer and loud music, not
clandestine
meetings.
He turned to her, a
flicker
of something
unreadable
in his hazel eyes. "People change, Aurora. Circumstances change. The world keeps spinning."
He tapped the silver signet
ring against the dark wood of the bar. "Some of us learn to spin with it." "Or get spun out,"
she murmured, thinking of her
own flight from Cardiff, the ghost of Evan still lurking in the corners of her mind. "Regrets?"
he asked, without preamble
. The directness of it, after years of
silence
,
felt like a punch
. "Doesn't everyone have them?" "Some more potent than others." He took the glass from the bartender with a curt nod. The amber liquid glowed under the weak light. "Like leaving everything behind, perhaps? A clean slate, they call it." "It wasn't a choice, not
really
,"
Rory said, her voice tight
. "You know what it was." Silas raised an
eyebrow
, a
familiar
gesture that used to soothe her, now merely an unsettling question mark. "Do I? All I remember is a sudden departure. A hasty retreat." "I was fleeing, Silas. Not retreating." The distinction felt vital, even if it
sounded like a weak excuse
. His words chipped away at the neat narrative she had built for herself. "A subtle difference, to be sure," he conceded, taking a slow sip of his scotch. "From what I hear, you've settled nicely. Delivery girl. Above a pub."
His gaze strayed upwards, as if he could see through the ceiling to her flat
. The intimacy of that observation, the knowledge of her life,
felt like an invasion
. "It works," she said defensively. "It's honest. Unlike some." A low chuckle escaped him. "Honesty is subjective, Laila. Remember that old adage? The truth is rarely pure and never simple." He swirled the amber liquid in his glass. "What about Eva? Still in touch with your oldest friend?" The casual mention of Eva, another ghost from her past, made her skin prickle. "Yes, of course. She's doing well." "Good. Always liked Eva. Practical girl." He paused, his gaze fixed on some point beyond her shoulder. "Always the one to pick up the pieces, wasn't she?" The
unspoken
accusation
hung heavy in the air
. Rory felt a
familiar
heat rise in her cheeks. "She helped me when no one else would." "And you let her,"
Silas countered, his voice still low, but with an underlying edge
. "Some bonds are stronger than others, even across distance." "What are you even doing here, Silas?" she demanded, pushing her glass away. This conversation was twisting into something ugly, something she hadn't anticipated. "It's not just 'business', is it?" He finally turned to her, his hazel eyes locking onto hers, and for a
fleeting
moment, she saw the Silas she had known, a flash of vulnerability, before it
was swallowed
by the practiced authority of another man. "Perhaps I wanted to see if the old flame still burned,"
he said, not answering her question at all
. "There's no flame, Silas. Not anymore. Not for us."
She stood, the stool scraping loudly across the floor
. This conversation, this unexpected reunion, had poisoned the quiet comfort of her evening. Silas merely watched her, a ghost of a smile playing on his lips. "Perhaps not. But some embers, Aurora, glow for a
very
long time." He lifted his glass, a silent toast to
unspoken
regrets and the wreckage of their shared past. "Do consider visiting the hidden back room, sometime. For old times' sake. It's
truly
rather fetching, now." His words, an invitation couched in a challenge, made her pause. She saw the distinctive green neon sign above the entrance, its light spilling onto the rain-slicked pavement. The streetlights painted long, skeletal shadows of the Soho buildings. He knew about the hidden room. Of course, he did. He owned the place, or at least, he presented himself as if he did. The thought made a
chill
run
down her spine
. Rory turned and walked towards the door, the scent of woodsmoke and expensive cologne clinging to her as she left the bar.
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2/19/2026, 12:26:21 PM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
25
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"His gaze strayed upwards [upwards]"
1
"she said defensively [defensively]"
dialogueSentences
42
tagDensity
0.595
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.08
effectiveRatio
0.08
82.03%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1113
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
1
adverb
"really"
count
1
2
adverb
"very"
count
1
3
adverb
"truly"
count
1
highlights
0
"suddenly"
1
"really"
2
"very"
3
"truly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
32.61%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1113
totalAiIsms
15
found
0
word
"familiar"
count
3
1
word
"stark"
count
1
2
word
"whisper"
count
1
3
word
"clandestine"
count
1
4
word
"flicker"
count
1
5
word
"unreadable"
count
1
6
word
"silence"
count
1
7
word
"eyebrow"
count
1
8
word
"unspoken"
count
2
9
word
"fleeting"
count
1
10
word
"chill"
count
1
11
word
"down her spine"
count
1
highlights
0
"familiar"
1
"stark"
2
"whisper"
3
"clandestine"
4
"flicker"
5
"unreadable"
6
"silence"
7
"eyebrow"
8
"unspoken"
9
"fleeting"
10
"chill"
11
"down her spine"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"hung heavy in the air"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
68
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
68
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"managed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
85
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
38
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1110
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
13
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
19
wordCount
806
uniqueNames
8
maxNameDensity
0.87
worstName
"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven
1
Nest
1
Silas
7
Rory
6
Cardiff
1
Evan
1
Eva
1
Soho
1
persons
0
"Silas"
1
"Rory"
2
"Evan"
3
"Eva"
places
0
"Raven"
1
"Cardiff"
2
"Soho"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
18.42%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
57
glossingSentenceCount
3
matches
0
"felt like a punch"
1
"sounded like a weak excuse"
2
"felt like an invasion"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1110
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
85
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
31
mean
35.81
std
20.89
cv
0.583
sampleLengths
0
73
1
34
2
21
3
89
4
25
5
58
6
24
7
19
8
35
9
29
10
32
11
43
12
25
13
5
14
16
15
35
16
16
17
30
18
31
19
56
20
9
21
39
22
20
23
27
24
25
25
24
26
30
27
57
28
31
29
59
30
93
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
68
matches
0
"was swallowed"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
120
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
85
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
809
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
28
adverbRatio
0.034610630407911
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.012360939431396786
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
85
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
85
mean
13.06
std
7.07
cv
0.542
sampleLengths
0
19
1
13
2
14
3
27
4
17
5
3
6
4
7
4
8
6
9
21
10
5
11
23
12
28
13
15
14
18
15
8
16
11
17
6
18
15
19
27
20
16
21
11
22
13
23
6
24
10
25
3
26
9
27
5
28
21
29
10
30
14
31
5
32
17
33
15
34
13
35
22
36
8
37
25
38
5
39
12
40
4
41
16
42
8
43
11
44
11
45
5
46
18
47
12
48
18
49
13
76.08%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.47058823529411764
totalSentences
85
uniqueOpeners
40
49.02%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
68
matches
0
"Of course, he did."
ratio
0.015
8.24%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
36
totalSentences
68
matches
0
"She nursed her gin and"
1
"Her grip tightened around her"
2
"Her gaze snagged on his"
3
"His hair, once a wild,"
4
"He wore a tailored suit,"
5
"she managed, her voice a"
6
"She pushed a loose strand"
7
"He offered a slow, almost"
8
"He took the stool beside"
9
"she retorted, gesturing vaguely at"
10
"He nodded at her drink"
11
"She waved a hand around"
12
"His gaze swept the room,"
13
"He signalled the bartender, who"
14
"she pressed, her voice lower"
15
"She remembered a different backroom,"
16
"He turned to her, a"
17
"He tapped the silver signet"
18
"she murmured, thinking of her"
19
"he asked, without preamble"
ratio
0.529
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
64
totalSentences
68
matches
0
"The sharp clang of a"
1
"Aurora, perched on a stool"
2
"She nursed her gin and"
3
"A figure detached itself from"
4
"Rory’s breath hitched."
5
"Her grip tightened around her"
6
"the man drawled, his voice"
7
"Rory spun on her stool."
8
"Her gaze snagged on his"
9
"His hair, once a wild,"
10
"He wore a tailored suit,"
11
"A silver signet ring gleamed"
12
"she managed, her voice a"
13
"She pushed a loose strand"
14
"He offered a slow, almost"
15
"He took the stool beside"
16
"The scent of expensive cologne,"
17
"she retorted, gesturing vaguely at"
18
"Silas chuckled, a dry, humorless"
19
"He nodded at her drink"
ratio
0.941
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
68
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
29
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"Her gaze snagged on his eyes first, still the same piercing hazel, though now underscored by faint lines that hadn't been there before."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
25
uselessAdditionCount
7
matches
0
"she managed, her voice a thin whisper"
1
"she pressed, her voice lower now"
2
"Rory said, her voice tight"
3
"His gaze strayed upwards, as if he could see through the ceiling to her flat"
4
"Silas countered, his voice still low, but with an underlying edge"
5
"he said, not answering her question at all"
6
"She stood, the stool scraping loudly across the floor"
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
11
fancyCount
7
fancyTags
0
"the man drawled (drawl)"
1
"she retorted (retort)"
2
"Rory corrected (correct)"
3
"she pressed (press)"
4
"she murmured (murmur)"
5
"he conceded (concede)"
6
"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences
42
tagDensity
0.262
leniency
0.524
rawRatio
0.636
effectiveRatio
0.333
75.5466%