| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.727 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.88% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1232 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.95% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1232 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "oppressive" | | 3 | "surreal" | | 4 | "pounding" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "vibrated" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "resolving" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "dancing" | | 12 | "synchronized" | | 13 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "appeared to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1225 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1187 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.26 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 3 | | Rory | 15 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.868 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 14.13% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed deeper than before, twisting into shapes that vanished when she focused on them" | | 1 | "melody that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere" | | 2 | "seemed farther away than before, the path twisting and turning as if the grove itself worked against her" | | 3 | "as if struggling against some unseen force" | | 4 | "appeared unchanged just a clearing surrounded by ancient oaks, with no sign of the figures that had pursued her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.816 | | wordCount | 1225 | | matches | | 0 | "Not one of the faceless entities from before, but a woman with eyes like starlight" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.32% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 33.11 | | std | 13.93 | | cv | 0.421 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 58 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 43 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 45 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 49 |
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| 98.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "been closed" | | 1 | "was lined" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 202 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 34.01% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached the ancient oak and noticed something she hadn't seen before—a symbol carved into its bark, matching the pattern on the pendant." | | 1 | "A man—or what appeared to be a man—with eyes that reflected no light." | | 2 | "The air grew thick with the scent of ozone and something else—something ancient and wrong." | | 3 | "The Fae Grove appeared unchanged—just a clearing surrounded by ancient oaks, with no sign of the figures that had pursued her." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1194 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.038525963149078725 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010887772194304857 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 11.67 | | std | 5.16 | | cv | 0.442 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 41.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3142857142857143 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the pounding of her" | | 1 | "Only silence answered." | | 2 | "Just flowers and trees." | | 3 | "Still wrong, but recognizably human" |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "She stepped between the standing" | | 2 | "she whispered to herself, the" | | 3 | "Its faint crimson glow intensified," | | 4 | "She pulled it out, holding" | | 5 | "She needed to find what" | | 6 | "She froze, extinguishing her torch." | | 7 | "She held her breath, listening." | | 8 | "Her fingers instinctively touched the" | | 9 | "she called into the darkness" | | 10 | "She clicked the torch back" | | 11 | "She followed its pull toward" | | 12 | "she muttered, though she didn't" | | 13 | "Its crimson glow illuminated her" | | 14 | "She reached the ancient oak" | | 15 | "she said, her voice steady" | | 16 | "It was beautiful and terrible," | | 17 | "she called, backing away toward" | | 18 | "She pressed the pendant against" | | 19 | "She turned and ran, the" |
| | ratio | 0.242 | |
| 25.66% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter pushed through the" | | 1 | "The crescent moon offered little" | | 2 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 3 | "The pendant had been pulsing" | | 4 | "The air grew heavy as" | | 5 | "Rory paused, her breath fogging" | | 6 | "Something felt wrong." | | 7 | "The usual chorus of nocturnal" | | 8 | "She stepped between the standing" | | 9 | "The temperature dropped several degrees." | | 10 | "The wildflowers that should have" | | 11 | "she whispered to herself, the" | | 12 | "The Heartstone Pendant grew warmer" | | 13 | "Its faint crimson glow intensified," | | 14 | "She pulled it out, holding" | | 15 | "The gemstone pointed deeper into" | | 16 | "Rory ventured further into the" | | 17 | "Time moved differently in the" | | 18 | "An hour here could mean" | | 19 | "She needed to find what" |
| | ratio | 0.869 | |
| 50.51% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Rory could respond, the" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 25.76% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The air grew heavy as she approached the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary." | | 1 | "The wildflowers that should have been closed at night instead stood open, their petals shimmering with an unnatural sheen in the torchlight." | | 2 | "Her fingers instinctively touched the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a childhood habit that surfaced in moments of stress." | | 3 | "The pendant's warmth spread up her arm, a tingling sensation that raised the hairs on her neck." | | 4 | "It was beautiful and terrible, a sound that made her want to weep and scream simultaneously." | | 5 | "The figure smiled, revealing teeth that were too sharp, too numerous." | | 6 | "The standing stones seemed farther away than before, the path twisting and turning as if the grove itself worked against her." | | 7 | "The pendant grew hotter with each step, its light flickering as if struggling against some unseen force." | | 8 | "The Fae Grove appeared unchanged—just a clearing surrounded by ancient oaks, with no sign of the figures that had pursued her." | | 9 | "Before Rory could respond, the woman vanished, leaving nothing but a scattering of luminescent dust that caught the moonlight before dissolving into nothing." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice steady despite the quickening of her pulse" | | 1 | "Rory replied, her voice shaking despite her efforts to remain calm" | | 2 | "the woman said, her voice carrying clearly across the distance" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.727 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |