Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXVDWGP7GJH3X336TJRRD7

Run Details

Duration:
1m 23s
Cost:
$0.008739
Provider:
WandB

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter pushed through the thick undergrowth of Richmond Park, the beam of her torch cutting through the darkness. The crescent moon offered little illumination, casting twisted shadows across the path. She clutched the Heartstone Pendant beneath her jacket, feeling its faint warmth against her palm. The pendant had been pulsing more insistently all day, leading her here to the Fae Grove. The air grew heavy as she approached the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary. Rory paused, her breath fogging in the chill night air. Something felt wrong. The usual chorus of nocturnal creatures had fallen silent, leaving only the crunch of gravel under her boots. She stepped between the standing stones, and the atmosphere shifted. The temperature dropped several degrees. The wildflowers that should have been closed at night instead stood open, their petals shimmering with an unnatural sheen in the torchlight. "This is definitely the place," she whispered to herself, the sound swallowed by the oppressive quiet. The Heartstone Pendant grew warmer against her skin. Its faint crimson glow intensified, casting red shadows across her knuckles. She pulled it out, holding it like a compass. The gemstone pointed deeper into the grove. Rory ventured further into the clearing, torch beam sweeping across the surreal landscape. Time moved differently in the Fae Grove, and she had no intention of staying long. An hour here could mean minutes or days outside. She needed to find what had drawn the pendant and leave. A twig snapped somewhere to her left. She froze, extinguishing her torch. Darkness enveloped her, save for the pendant's glow. She held her breath, listening. Nothing. Just the pounding of her own heart. Her fingers instinctively touched the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a childhood habit that surfaced in moments of stress. "Hello?" she called into the darkness. "Is someone there?" Only silence answered. She clicked the torch back on, sweeping the beam across the tree line. The shadows seemed deeper than before, twisting into shapes that vanished when she focused on them. The pendant's warmth spread up her arm, a tingling sensation that raised the hairs on her neck. She followed its pull toward the center of the grove, where an ancient oak tree stood alone among the wildflowers. As she approached, something flickered at the edge of her vision. Rory spun around, torch beam slicing through the darkness. Nothing. Just flowers and trees. "You're imagining things," she muttered, though she didn't believe it. The pendant grew hot, almost uncomfortable. Its crimson glow illuminated her face in eerie red light. She reached the ancient oak and noticed something she hadn't seen before—a symbol carved into its bark, matching the pattern on the pendant. Rory reached out to touch it, but stopped. A low hum vibrated through the air, resonating in her bones. The wildflowers began to sway, though no wind blew. "Show yourself," she said, her voice steady despite the quickening of her pulse. The hum grew louder, resolving into a melody that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere. It was beautiful and terrible, a sound that made her want to weep and scream simultaneously. The pendant burned against her skin now, its glow bright enough to light the entire clearing. From the corner of her eye, movement. Rory turned to see a figure standing at the edge of the grove, just beyond the standing stones. Human-shaped but wrong, its limbs too long, its face featureless in the torchlight. "What do you want?" she called, backing away toward the oak. The figure tilted its head, then took a step forward. As it crossed the boundary into the grove, its form shifted, resolving into something more solid. Still wrong, but recognizably human now. A man—or what appeared to be a man—with eyes that reflected no light. The pendant's heat intensified, becoming painful. Rory clutched it in her fist, the chain biting into her fingers. The melody grew louder, seeming to emanate from the figure itself. "You shouldn't have come here," the figure said, its voice layered with hundreds of others speaking at once. "I had no choice," Rory replied, her voice shaking despite her efforts to remain calm. "The pendant brought me." The figure smiled, revealing teeth that were too sharp, too numerous. "It always does." Another figure emerged from the darkness beyond the stones. Then another. Soon, the entire perimeter was lined with them, each as wrong as the first. Rory pressed her back against the ancient oak, scanning the clearing for an escape route. The pendant blazed in her hand, its crimson light casting long, dancing shadows. The wildflowers at her feet began to wither and turn black. The figures advanced slowly, their movements synchronized, their voices merging into that terrible, beautiful melody. The air grew thick with the scent of ozone and something else—something ancient and wrong. Rory's eyes darted around the clearing, looking for anything that might help. The symbol on the oak tree glowed faintly, pulsing in time with the pendant. An idea formed in her mind, desperate and likely foolish, but better than standing still. She pressed the pendant against the symbol on the oak. The effect was immediate and violent. A shockwave of crimson energy exploded outward, throwing the figures back. The melody turned into a collective shriek of rage and pain. Rory didn't wait to see more. She turned and ran, the pendant still clutched in her hand, its light guiding her through the darkness. The standing stones seemed farther away than before, the path twisting and turning as if the grove itself worked against her. Time stretched and compressed around her, minutes feeling like hours then seconds again. Behind her, the figures recovered, their movements now hurried, their voices raised in a chorus of anger. The ground shook with their advance. The wildflowers crumbled to dust beneath their feet. Rory pushed herself faster, lungs burning, legs aching. The pendant grew hotter with each step, its light flickering as if struggling against some unseen force. The standing stones receded into the distance, then suddenly rushed closer as the grove's strange time distortion shifted. She burst through the standing stones, stumbling and falling onto the grass beyond. The sounds of pursuit ceased immediately. The night air of Richmond Park felt cool and normal compared to the grove's oppressive atmosphere. Rory pushed herself up and turned to look back. The Fae Grove appeared unchanged—just a clearing surrounded by ancient oaks, with no sign of the figures that had pursued her. The pendant in her hand had cooled, its crimson glow faded to a faint shimmer. But as she stared, a figure emerged from between the standing stones. Not one of the faceless entities from before, but a woman with eyes like starlight and hair made of shadows. She extended a hand toward Rory, palm upward. "The game has begun," the woman said, her voice carrying clearly across the distance. Before Rory could respond, the woman vanished, leaving nothing but a scattering of luminescent dust that caught the moonlight before dissolving into nothing. Rory looked down at the pendant in her hand. Its faint glow pulsed once, warmth spreading through her fingers. She closed her fist around it, the silver chain cool against her skin. The moon climbed higher in the sky, indifferent to what had just transpired in the hidden grove.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.727
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1232
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1232
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"warmth"
count3
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"oppressive"
count2
3
word"surreal"
count1
4
word"pounding"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"resolving"
count2
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"dancing"
count1
12
word"synchronized"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"chill"
2"oppressive"
3"surreal"
4"pounding"
5"silence"
6"flickered"
7"vibrated"
8"pulse"
9"resolving"
10"scanning"
11"dancing"
12"synchronized"
13"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
86.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences102
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
2"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1225
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1187
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.26
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Fae3
Grove3
Rory15
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.868
windowScore0.833
14.13% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"seemed deeper than before, twisting into shapes that vanished when she focused on them"
1"melody that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere"
2"seemed farther away than before, the path twisting and turning as if the grove itself worked against her"
3"as if struggling against some unseen force"
4"appeared unchanged just a clearing surrounded by ancient oaks, with no sign of the figures that had pursued her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.816
wordCount1225
matches
0"Not one of the faceless entities from before, but a woman with eyes like starlight"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
77.32% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean33.11
std13.93
cv0.421
sampleLengths
062
147
237
316
435
548
654
79
832
937
1025
1110
1239
1328
1413
1548
1638
1711
1845
1929
2018
2119
2214
2325
2439
2530
2641
2738
2858
2931
3043
3135
3245
3340
3414
3523
3649
98.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences102
matches
0"been closed"
1"was lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
34.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences105
ratio0.038
matches
0"She reached the ancient oak and noticed something she hadn't seen before—a symbol carved into its bark, matching the pattern on the pendant."
1"A man—or what appeared to be a man—with eyes that reflected no light."
2"The air grew thick with the scent of ozone and something else—something ancient and wrong."
3"The Fae Grove appeared unchanged—just a clearing surrounded by ancient oaks, with no sign of the figures that had pursued her."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1194
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.038525963149078725
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.010887772194304857
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean11.67
std5.16
cv0.442
sampleLengths
019
112
215
316
416
510
63
718
810
95
1022
1116
128
1311
149
157
1613
1715
189
1911
207
215
228
235
241
257
2621
276
283
293
3013
3116
3217
3320
3411
359
361
374
3810
396
4010
4123
428
4311
449
4513
4616
4716
4816
497
41.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3142857142857143
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences99
matches
0"Just the pounding of her"
1"Only silence answered."
2"Just flowers and trees."
3"Still wrong, but recognizably human"
ratio0.04
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences99
matches
0"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
1"She stepped between the standing"
2"she whispered to herself, the"
3"Its faint crimson glow intensified,"
4"She pulled it out, holding"
5"She needed to find what"
6"She froze, extinguishing her torch."
7"She held her breath, listening."
8"Her fingers instinctively touched the"
9"she called into the darkness"
10"She clicked the torch back"
11"She followed its pull toward"
12"she muttered, though she didn't"
13"Its crimson glow illuminated her"
14"She reached the ancient oak"
15"she said, her voice steady"
16"It was beautiful and terrible,"
17"she called, backing away toward"
18"She pressed the pendant against"
19"She turned and ran, the"
ratio0.242
25.66% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences99
matches
0"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
1"The crescent moon offered little"
2"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
3"The pendant had been pulsing"
4"The air grew heavy as"
5"Rory paused, her breath fogging"
6"Something felt wrong."
7"The usual chorus of nocturnal"
8"She stepped between the standing"
9"The temperature dropped several degrees."
10"The wildflowers that should have"
11"she whispered to herself, the"
12"The Heartstone Pendant grew warmer"
13"Its faint crimson glow intensified,"
14"She pulled it out, holding"
15"The gemstone pointed deeper into"
16"Rory ventured further into the"
17"Time moved differently in the"
18"An hour here could mean"
19"She needed to find what"
ratio0.869
50.51% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"Before Rory could respond, the"
ratio0.01
25.76% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The air grew heavy as she approached the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary."
1"The wildflowers that should have been closed at night instead stood open, their petals shimmering with an unnatural sheen in the torchlight."
2"Her fingers instinctively touched the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a childhood habit that surfaced in moments of stress."
3"The pendant's warmth spread up her arm, a tingling sensation that raised the hairs on her neck."
4"It was beautiful and terrible, a sound that made her want to weep and scream simultaneously."
5"The figure smiled, revealing teeth that were too sharp, too numerous."
6"The standing stones seemed farther away than before, the path twisting and turning as if the grove itself worked against her."
7"The pendant grew hotter with each step, its light flickering as if struggling against some unseen force."
8"The Fae Grove appeared unchanged—just a clearing surrounded by ancient oaks, with no sign of the figures that had pursued her."
9"Before Rory could respond, the woman vanished, leaving nothing but a scattering of luminescent dust that caught the moonlight before dissolving into nothing."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, her voice steady despite the quickening of her pulse"
1"Rory replied, her voice shaking despite her efforts to remain calm"
2"the woman said, her voice carrying clearly across the distance"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.727
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
75.8558%