Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXVGDEHF66HTYE9V4VEXP4

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Duration:
4m 24s
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow Quinn stepped off the maintenance ladder and onto the cracked tiles of the abandoned Camden Tube station. Dust motes danced in the beam of her torch, illuminating graffiti that shifted when viewed from the corner of her eye. The air tasted of copper and ozone, thick enough to coat the back of her throat. She adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist, the familiar weight grounding her against the unnatural chill seeping from the tunnel walls. This was the Veil Market, a place that shouldn't exist according to any Metropolitan Police database. DS Miller waited near the perimeter tape, his face pale under the harsh glow of portable floodlights. He kicked at a loose cable on the ground. "Place gives me the willies, Guv." Harlow ignored the comment and ducked under the tape. Her boots crunched on broken glass and scattered papers. A body lay sprawled near the old ticket barriers, surrounded by chalk outlines that shimmered with a faint, iridescent powder. "Victim identified?" "John Doe. No wallet, no phone. Just this." Miller held up an evidence bag containing a small brass compass. The casing bore a patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with protective sigils that hurt to look at directly. Harlow took the bag. The needle inside twitched, vibrating against the glass. She turned the compass over in her gloved hand. The metal felt warm, pulsing with a rhythm that matched her own heartbeat. "Suicide," Miller stated. "Overdose likely. No signs of struggle. Market folk are weird, you know how it is." "Suicide doesn't explain the burn marks on the floor." Harlow crouched beside the body. The chalk outlines weren't standard police markings. They formed a complex geometric pattern around the deceased's head. She ran a finger near the edge of the design without touching it. The air hummed. "Ritual stuff. Maybe he botched it." Miller shrugged. "Open and shut. We bag him, we leave. I don't like standing down here longer than we have to." Harlow stood and wiped her hand on her trousers. She pulled the Veil Compass from the evidence bag, ignoring Miller's protest. The moment the brass casing touched her skin, the needle spun wildly before locking onto a specific point in the tunnel darkness. "Someone moved the body." "CSI says he fell right there." "CSI doesn't know how this market works." Harlow pointed the compass toward the tunnel ceiling. The needle remained fixed on the dark void above the tracks. "This thing points to rifts. Portals. If he died here, the energy would be residual. Static." She walked toward the body again, holding the compass low. The needle swung away from the ceiling and pointed directly at the victim's chest. "See that?" "See what?" "The needle. It's not pointing at a rift. It's pointing at him." Harlow knelt beside the corpse again. She lifted the victim's left hand. The skin was cold, waxy. Underneath the fingernails, dark residue clung to the cuticles. "He was holding something when he died. Something magical." "Drugs." "Focus, Miller." Harlow snapped the words out. She examined the chalk lines again. The geometry was imperfect. One line broke near the victim's shoulder. "This circle was interrupted. Someone stepped through it while he was still alive." Miller crossed his arms. "You think someone pushed him into a portal?" "I think he was murdered, and the killer tried to hide the body using the market's own rules." Harlow stood and walked the perimeter of the chalk design. Her shadow stretched long across the tiles, distorting against the curved tunnel walls. "The Veil Market moves every full moon. Tonight is the night. If the body stays here when the market shifts, it gets lost in the ether. No evidence, no crime scene." "That's a lot of theory for a dead junkie." Harlow stopped at the break in the chalk line. She pulled a magnifying glass from her pocket and inspected the tile. A faint scuff mark marred the surface, leading away from the body toward the maintenance shaft. "Look at the dust." She gestured to the floor. "It's undisturbed everywhere except this path. Someone dragged him here after he died. The blood pool is wrong. It's too uniform. It was poured." Miller stepped closer, shining his torch on the dark stain. The light revealed a slight variation in viscosity near the edges. "Staged," Miller admitted. "Staged to look like a ritual gone wrong." Harlow tucked the compass into her jacket pocket. The brass warmed against her ribs. "The killer wanted us to think this was supernatural so we'd walk away. They counted on us being out of our depth." "So who moves a body in a supernatural black market without getting seen?" "Someone who knows the schedule." Harlow checked her watch. The hands ticked louder than usual. "Someone who knew the market would vanish in two hours." She walked toward the maintenance shaft where the scuff marks led. The darkness beyond the floodlights seemed to press inward, heavy and suffocating. Her partner Morris had died three years ago under similar circumstances. No body, no explanation, just a gap in the record books she couldn't fill. This felt the same. The silence of the tunnel pressed against her eardrums. "Quinn, we need backup." Miller's voice sounded distant. "This is beyond us." "We don't have time for backup." Harlow drew her service weapon. The metal felt cold compared to the compass. "The killer is still here. They couldn't have left without triggering the sensors at the entrance." "We swept the entrance. No one left." "Then they are hiding." Harlow moved toward the shaft. The compass in her pocket vibrated harder, burning against her side. She stopped and pulled it out. The needle spun faster, blurring into a silver disc. It pointed straight down the shaft. "Down there?" Miller raised his torch. The beam cut through the dust but failed to penetrate the deeper darkness. "Down there." "That leads to the old Victorian sewers. It's a maze." "It leads to where he was killed." Harlow holstered the weapon and drew a flashlight from her belt. She clicked it on. The beam revealed fresh footprints in the grime. Size ten, heavy tread. Military grade. "Boots," Miller noted. "Professional." Harlow stepped onto the first rung of the ladder leading down. The iron groaned under her weight. She paused and looked back at Miller. "You stay here. Secure the scene. If the market shifts, I need you to hold the perimeter." "You're going down alone?" "I work better alone." Harlow descended into the dark. The air grew colder with every rung. The smell of ozone faded, replaced by the stench of stagnant water and decay. The compass vibrated so hard her hand shook. She reached the bottom and stepped onto the wet concrete of the sewer tunnel. Water lapped at her boots. The beam of her torch caught something glinting on the wall ahead. A symbol, painted in the same iridescent powder as the chalk circle. It matched the sigils on the compass face. She moved closer, keeping her back to the wall. The water rippled without wind. Something moved in the periphery of the light. "Show yourself." Silence answered. The compass needle locked onto the symbol on the wall. It wasn't just a mark. It was a door. The air in front of the symbol shimmered like heat haze. Harlow reached out, her fingers inches from the distortion. The heat radiating from the rift singed her skin. A voice echoed from the darkness behind her. "I wouldn't touch that if I were you." Harlow spun, weapon raised. A figure stood in the shadows, obscured by the gloom. The compass needle swung wildly, pointing at the stranger. "Police. Step into the light." The figure laughed, a dry, rasping sound. They stepped forward, revealing a worn leather satchel slung over their shoulder. Curly red hair caught the edge of the torchlight. Green eyes glinted behind round glasses. "Detective Quinn. You're out of your depth." "Eva Kowalski." Harlow kept the gun steady. "You're supposed to be at the museum." "And you're supposed to be dead." Eva tucked a curl of hair behind her left ear. Her hand trembled. "That compass isn't a toy. It doesn't point to rifts. It points to hunters." Harlow glanced at the compass. The needle stopped spinning. It pointed directly at Harlow's own chest.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1393
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1393
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"database"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count2
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"standard"
count1
7
word"complex"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"vibrated"
count2
10
word"glinting"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"gloom"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"chill"
3"database"
4"shimmered"
5"etched"
6"standard"
7"complex"
8"silence"
9"vibrated"
10"glinting"
11"echoed"
12"gloom"
13"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences143
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1393
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
35.42% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount960
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.29
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Quinn1
Camden1
Tube1
Veil2
Market1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Miller12
Harlow22
Compass1
Morris1
Eva1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Miller"
2"Harlow"
3"Morris"
4"Eva"
places
0"Compass"
globalScore0.354
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1393
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean24.88
std20.47
cv0.823
sampleLengths
095
126
26
338
42
540
634
718
847
927
1043
114
126
1342
1424
152
162
1747
181
1937
2012
2172
229
2337
2433
2521
263
2744
2813
2925
3061
3112
3235
337
3441
3519
362
3710
3836
393
4042
414
424
4353
4454
452
4650
478
488
4923
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs164
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences143
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount960
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.016666666666666666
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00625
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean9.74
std5.59
cv0.574
sampleLengths
018
121
216
324
416
517
69
76
89
99
1020
112
1219
1321
144
158
169
1713
183
1915
2014
217
2210
2313
243
258
2619
279
2812
2922
304
316
3215
3311
3416
3510
3614
372
382
3918
406
415
429
439
441
457
466
474
487
4913
53.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.35664335664335667
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners51
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences104
matches
0"She adjusted the worn leather"
1"He kicked at a loose"
2"Her boots crunched on broken"
3"She turned the compass over"
4"They formed a complex geometric"
5"She ran a finger near"
6"She pulled the Veil Compass"
7"She walked toward the body"
8"She lifted the victim's left"
9"She examined the chalk lines"
10"Her shadow stretched long across"
11"She pulled a magnifying glass"
12"She gestured to the floor"
13"She walked toward the maintenance"
14"Her partner Morris had died"
15"She stopped and pulled it"
16"It pointed straight down the"
17"She clicked it on."
18"She paused and looked back"
19"She reached the bottom and"
ratio0.26
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences104
matches
0"Harlow Quinn stepped off the"
1"Dust motes danced in the"
2"The air tasted of copper"
3"She adjusted the worn leather"
4"This was the Veil Market,"
5"DS Miller waited near the"
6"He kicked at a loose"
7"Harlow ignored the comment and"
8"Her boots crunched on broken"
9"A body lay sprawled near"
10"Miller held up an evidence"
11"The casing bore a patina"
12"Harlow took the bag."
13"The needle inside twitched, vibrating"
14"She turned the compass over"
15"The metal felt warm, pulsing"
16"Harlow crouched beside the body"
17"The chalk outlines weren't standard"
18"They formed a complex geometric"
19"She ran a finger near"
ratio0.942
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Dust motes danced in the beam of her torch, illuminating graffiti that shifted when viewed from the corner of her eye."
1"This was the Veil Market, a place that shouldn't exist according to any Metropolitan Police database."
2"The casing bore a patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with protective sigils that hurt to look at directly."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
75.93% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Miller stated (state)"
1"Harlow snapped (snap)"
2"Miller admitted (admit)"
3"Miller noted (note)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.074
leniency0.148
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.148
82.7171%