| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory stepped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.565 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |
| 77.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1539 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.27% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1539 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "sentinels" | | 8 | "down her spine" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "clenching" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "vibrated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 135 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 135 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 145 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 22 | | totalWords | 1524 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove follows the logic of a dream. If you want to leave, stop trying to find the door." | | 1 | "SILAS’S PLACE." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.96% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 1417 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.34 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 4 | | Rory | 19 | | Richmond | 2 | | London | 2 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 3 | | Hel | 3 | | Eva | 2 | | Silas | 3 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Hel-leak | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Great-Dane-sized | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Hel-leak" | | 5 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.83 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like Eva’s, but the cadence was wr" | | 1 | "felt like wet sponge, dragging at her b" |
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| 68.77% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.312 | | wordCount | 1524 | | matches | | 0 | "Not folding inward for the night, but clenching like tiny, many-fingered fists" | | 1 | "not toward the phantom stones, but toward the darkest part of the treeline" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 26.74 | | std | 19.1 | | cv | 0.715 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 80 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 54 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 57 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 58 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 59 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 50 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 40 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 50 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 46 | | 42 | 43 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 49 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 41 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 38 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | |
| 33.33% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 240 | | matches | | 0 | "were reading" | | 1 | "was reacting" | | 2 | "was fighting" | | 3 | "was pushing" | | 4 | "was coming" | | 5 | "wasn't glowing" |
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| 64.04% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 145 | | ratio | 0.028 | | matches | | 0 | "The Richmond grove didn't just swallow sound; it seemed to digest it." | | 1 | "It wore a tattered delivery jacket—the Golden Empress logo faded and torn." | | 2 | "It didn't fall; it plummeted like a stone, landing in a crouch without making a sound." | | 3 | "She could hear its breath—a rhythmic huff-huff-huff that smelled of rot and old honey." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1432 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "tiny, many-fingered fists." | | 1 | "foul, sulphurous yellow light." |
| | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.03212290502793296 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008379888268156424 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 145 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 145 | | mean | 10.51 | | std | 5.69 | | cv | 0.542 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 35.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.2620689655172414 | | totalSentences | 145 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 84.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, the words dying" | | 1 | "She checked her phone." | | 2 | "It wasn't the light crack" | | 3 | "It was the deliberate, heavy" | | 4 | "She tucked a strand of" | | 5 | "She felt a prickle of" | | 6 | "She turned in a slow" | | 7 | "It hadn't moved like a" | | 8 | "It had flowed, a liquid" | | 9 | "It sounded like Eva’s, but" | | 10 | "It came from the ground" | | 11 | "She stumbled, catching herself before" | | 12 | "She looked down at the" | | 13 | "She reached into her jacket" | | 14 | "She gripped it until the" | | 15 | "Her own eyes." | | 16 | "It wore a tattered delivery" | | 17 | "Its jaw unhinged further than" | | 18 | "It spoke her names like" | | 19 | "It didn't fall; it plummeted" |
| | ratio | 0.339 | |
| 22.99% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 111 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain of the" | | 1 | "The deep crimson gemstone thrummed" | | 2 | "she whispered, the words dying" | | 3 | "The Richmond grove didn't just" | | 4 | "The air tasted of ozone" | | 5 | "She checked her phone." | | 6 | "The screen remained black, the" | | 7 | "The clearing opened up before" | | 8 | "Rory stepped into the centre," | | 9 | "A twig snapped." | | 10 | "The sound came from the" | | 11 | "It wasn't the light crack" | | 12 | "It was the deliberate, heavy" | | 13 | "She tucked a strand of" | | 14 | "Silence answered her." | | 15 | "The trees stood like sentinels," | | 16 | "She felt a prickle of" | | 17 | "The Heartstone grew hotter, a" | | 18 | "She turned in a slow" | | 19 | "The grove looked different than" |
| | ratio | 0.874 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "To her left, an ancient" | | 1 | "Even in the dead of" | | 2 | "If you want to leave," |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 25.59% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The deep crimson gemstone thrummed against her collarbone, a frantic, rhythmic heat that mirrored her own pulse." | | 1 | "The air tasted of ozone and crushed wildflowers, a sickly sweet cloying scent that made her stomach turn." | | 2 | "The Heartstone grew hotter, a searing point of contact on her skin that warned of a Hel portal nearby." | | 3 | "The vowels were too long, the tone flat and melodic, as if someone were reading lyrics they didn't understand." | | 4 | "But the face they belonged to was a ruin of pale, translucent skin stretched over a skull that was slightly too wide." | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant began to vibrate, a low-frequency hum that vibrated in Rory’s teeth." | | 6 | "The grass blackened and curled as a rift opened, a vertical slit in reality that bled a foul, sulphurous yellow light." | | 7 | "It rose slowly, its limbs unfolding with sickening wet clicks." | | 8 | "The ground felt like wet sponge, dragging at her boots, lengthening the distance to the exit." | | 9 | "She could hear its breath—a rhythmic huff-huff-huff that smelled of rot and old honey." | | 10 | "The wood felt warm, buzzing with the protective glamours that kept the mundane world out and the nightmares in." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, the words dying the moment they left her lips" | | 1 | "Rory muttered, her voice trembling" | | 2 | "Rory said, her voice a reedy thin whistle" | | 3 | "the mimic hissed, its voice fracturing" | | 4 | "Silas said, his voice a gravelly rumble" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "the mimic whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "she screamed (scream)" | | 4 | "Rory spat (spit)" | | 5 | "the mimic hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.478 | | leniency | 0.957 | | rawRatio | 0.545 | | effectiveRatio | 0.522 | |