Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXVZNPFRD4GN1NSAZ02CFD

Run Details

Duration:
47.5s
Cost:
$0.010704
Provider:
Venice

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted of copper and ozone. Rory pulled her jacket tighter, the leather creaking in the silence. Richmond Park stretched out around her, a black ocean of grass and ancient boughs, but she had crossed the invisible line ten minutes ago. The familiar hum of the city—sirens, distant traffic, the ceaseless drone of London—had evaporated. Here, the quiet was heavy. It pressed against her eardrums like deep water. She checked the glowing face of her phone. No signal. Just a pale battery icon blinking in warning. She shoved it into her pocket. The map Silas had drawn was crumpled in her hand. ‘Isolde’s Grove,’ he’d scrawled, the ink bleeding where his hand had shaken. He hadn't wanted to give it up. People didn’t come here. Not anymore. Rory looked up. The standing stones loomed out of the mist, jagged teeth biting into the night sky. They were massive oaks, really, petrified into stone by centuries of old magic or something worse. They formed a rough circle, marking the boundary. She stepped between two towering trunks. The temperature dropped. Instant frostbite against her skin. The breath hitched in her throat, fogging as she exhaled. "Okay," she whispered. The sound was swallowed by the trees. The Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt flared. A sharp spike of heat against her sternum. She clutched the silver chain through the fabric of her top, the deep crimson gem pulsing in rhythm with a second, slower heartbeat. It hadn't done that since the night Eva gave it to her. She moved deeper into the clearing. The flora was wrong. That was the only word for it. It was late October, the dead of autumn, yet the grove was a riot of colour. Foxgloves and bluebells carpeted the ground in thick, choking mats. They glowed with a faint, sickly luminescence—ultraviolet pinks and toxic greens that hurt the eyes if stared at for too long. Rory stepped carefully, placing her boots on the bare earth between the flowers. They weren't blooming; they were vibrating. A low-frequency buzz she felt in her teeth more than she heard. She paused. The pendant throbbed again. Harder. This was the spot. Silas said the energy converged here. She knelt, ignoring the damp soaking into her jeans. She brushed her thumb over the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit she couldn't break. Focus. The ground here felt soft. Too soft. Like rotting meat. A sound snapped behind her. Rory spun, hand flying to the pocket of her jacket, fingers wrapping around the handle of a tactical flashlight. Nothing. Just the standing stones, silent and judging. The mist curled around their bases like ghostly fingers. "Wind," she said aloud. Her voice sounded thin. "Just the wind in the branches." But there was no wind. The air was dead still. The leaves on the stunted trees at the perimeter didn't so much as twitch. She turned back to the ground. The Heartstone was searing now, nearly burning a hole through her shirt. She needed to dig. She needed to find what the stone was screaming at. She pulled a folding trowel from her bag. Metal bit into the earth. It came up black and wet. *Thump.* Rory froze. The trowel stopped mid-scoop. *Thump.* It came from beneath her. Not the ground shifting. A solid impact. Like a fist knocking on a door from the other side. She scrambled back, dropping the tool. It hit a stone and clattered, the noise deafening in the enclosed space. The wildflowers nearest the hole she’d made began to writhe. They weren't moving in the breeze. They were twisting, stems knotting together, petals opening wide to reveal centres that weren't pollen, but raw, red flesh. "Christ." Rory scrambled to her feet, backing away toward the southern edge of the circle. The silence broke. It started as a whisper. A thousand voices overlapping, speaking a language that scratched at the primal part of her brain. It wasn't coming from the woods. It was coming from the stones themselves. She looked up at the ancient oaks. The bark seemed to ripple. Movement in her periphery. Left. She snapped her head around. A shadow detached itself from the darkness of the tree line. It was tall, impossibly thin, with limbs that jointed in too many places. Rory didn't wait. She ran. Her boots slipped on the unnatural foliage. She skidded, catching herself on the rough bark of a standing stone. It felt warm. Warm and pulsing, like the skin of a living animal. She shoved off it, sprinting for the gap in the stones she’d entered through. The gap was gone. Where the two massive trunks had stood, there was now only a solid wall of intertwining branches, thorny and dense. The path had sealed itself. Rory slammed into the barrier, thorns tearing at her jacket, scratching her cheek. "No. No, no, no." She pounded her fist against the wood. It gave slightly, spongy and resistant, then bounced back. The whispering grew louder. It wasn't words anymore. It was laughter. High-pitched, childlike laughter that echoed from every direction. She spun around, back pressed against the living wall. The figure in the trees stepped into the clearing. It had no face. Just a smooth, pale oval where features should be. It wore a suit that looked like it had been stitched together from rags, hanging loose on its skeletal frame. Rory's hand shook as she raised the flashlight. She clicked the button. The beam hit the creature and dissolved. The light simply... stopped. It hit the thing’s chest and vanished, swallowed by the darkness radiating from it. The pendant against her chest went ice cold. The heat vanished instantly, replaced by a chill that seeped into her ribs. The thing tilted its head. It raised one long, spindly arm and pointed a finger—not at her, but at the ground beneath her feet. Rory looked down. The wildflowers were gone. The black earth was boiling. Hands—small, translucent, child-sized—were pushing up through the soil. Dozens of them. Hundreds. They grabbed at her ankles. Cold, slippery fingers clamping onto her boots. "Get off!" She kicked out, her heel connecting with something solid. A hand shattered like glass, but two more took its place. The faceless figure took a step forward. Its movement was wrong, jerky, like a film skipping frames. Rory yanked her leg free, tearing the sole of her boot. She lunged sideways, away from the grasping hands and the advancing figure. She had to climb. If the path was blocked, she went up. She grabbed a low-hanging branch from the trapped wall and hauled herself up. Thorns raked her hands, lines of fire burning across her palms. She gritted her teeth, kicking furiously at the tree trunk, finding purchase on knots and gnarls. Below, the hands were clustering, waving in the air like sea anemones. The faceless thing stopped below her. It stood at the base of the tree, looking up. Then, the bark began to move. Rory froze, hanging from the branch. The tree was groaning, wood grinding against wood. The branch she held onto thickened, the wood shifting under her grip, trying to engulf her hand. She scrambled higher, swinging her leg over a higher limb. The laughter stopped. The grove fell into a silence so absolute it rang in her ears. High in the tree, Rory clung to the trunk, her chest heaving. She looked down. The figure was gone. The hands were gone. The flowers were back, perfectly still, glowing innocently. But the standing stones had turned. Every single one of them. They were no longer facing inward. They were facing her. And in the centre of the grove, where she had been standing a moment ago, a tear in the air was opening. A slit of absolute blackness, darker than the night, wider than a man. The Heartstone pendant, dangling from her neck, began to swing on its chain. Not from her movement. It was pointing at the tear. Pulling toward it. The cold wind from the slit hit her face, carrying the smell of decay.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.333
85.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1362
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"carefully"
2"slightly"
3"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1362
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"ceaseless"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"searing"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"familiar"
2"ceaseless"
3"loomed"
4"throbbed"
5"searing"
6"whisper"
7"echoed"
8"chill"
9"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences168
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences173
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1351
ratio0.001
matches
0"Thump."
1"Thump."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1324
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park1
London1
Silas2
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Eva1
October1
Rory13
persons
0"Silas"
1"Pendant"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like it had been stitched together"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.74
wordCount1351
matches
0"not at her, but at the ground beneath her feet"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences173
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean17.32
std12.67
cv0.732
sampleLengths
056
113
224
335
442
56
618
710
850
96
1058
1131
127
1310
1429
1510
165
1719
181
1916
2014
2124
2232
238
2411
251
266
271
2823
2919
3035
311
3214
333
3434
3512
365
3729
385
3932
4014
414
4225
4313
444
4516
4619
479
489
4933
88.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences168
matches
0"was crumpled"
1"was swallowed"
2"was gone"
3"been stitched"
4"were gone"
5"was blocked"
6"was gone"
7"were gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount13
totalVerbs239
matches
0"were vibrating"
1"was searing"
2"was screaming"
3"weren't moving"
4"wasn't coming"
5"was coming"
6"were pushing"
7"were clustering"
8"was groaning"
9"were facing"
10"was opening"
11"was pointing"
60.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences173
ratio0.029
matches
0"The familiar hum of the city—sirens, distant traffic, the ceaseless drone of London—had evaporated."
1"They glowed with a faint, sickly luminescence—ultraviolet pinks and toxic greens that hurt the eyes if stared at for too long."
2"They weren't blooming; they were vibrating."
3"It raised one long, spindly arm and pointed a finger—not at her, but at the ground beneath her feet."
4"Hands—small, translucent, child-sized—were pushing up through the soil."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount111
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.009009009009009009
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences173
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences173
mean7.81
std4.99
cv0.639
sampleLengths
07
111
224
314
45
58
68
72
88
96
1010
1112
127
134
142
153
1615
1716
188
196
203
215
2210
233
247
257
268
2723
2812
296
304
317
3216
3310
3421
3513
366
3712
382
394
401
414
426
439
4419
451
465
472
483
495
39.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.28901734104046245
totalSentences173
uniqueOpeners50
87.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences153
matches
0"Just a pale battery icon"
1"Just the standing stones, silent"
2"Just a smooth, pale oval"
3"Then, the bark began to"
ratio0.026
63.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences153
matches
0"It pressed against her eardrums"
1"She checked the glowing face"
2"She shoved it into her"
3"He hadn't wanted to give"
4"They were massive oaks, really,"
5"They formed a rough circle,"
6"She stepped between two towering"
7"She clutched the silver chain"
8"It hadn't done that since"
9"She moved deeper into the"
10"It was late October, the"
11"They glowed with a faint,"
12"They weren't blooming; they were"
13"She knelt, ignoring the damp"
14"She brushed her thumb over"
15"she said aloud"
16"Her voice sounded thin."
17"She turned back to the"
18"She needed to dig."
19"She needed to find what"
ratio0.392
28.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount132
totalSentences153
matches
0"The air tasted of copper"
1"Rory pulled her jacket tighter,"
2"Richmond Park stretched out around"
3"The familiar hum of the"
4"Here, the quiet was heavy."
5"It pressed against her eardrums"
6"She checked the glowing face"
7"She shoved it into her"
8"The map Silas had drawn"
9"He hadn't wanted to give"
10"People didn’t come here."
11"Rory looked up."
12"The standing stones loomed out"
13"They were massive oaks, really,"
14"They formed a rough circle,"
15"She stepped between two towering"
16"The temperature dropped."
17"The breath hitched in her"
18"The sound was swallowed by"
19"The Heartstone Pendant beneath her"
ratio0.863
32.68% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences153
matches
0"If the path was blocked,"
ratio0.007
50.26% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"They glowed with a faint, sickly luminescence—ultraviolet pinks and toxic greens that hurt the eyes if stared at for too long."
1"They were twisting, stems knotting together, petals opening wide to reveal centres that weren't pollen, but raw, red flesh."
2"A thousand voices overlapping, speaking a language that scratched at the primal part of her brain."
3"Rory slammed into the barrier, thorns tearing at her jacket, scratching her cheek."
4"It wore a suit that looked like it had been stitched together from rags, hanging loose on its skeletal frame."
5"She gritted her teeth, kicking furiously at the tree trunk, finding purchase on knots and gnarls."
6"The branch she held onto thickened, the wood shifting under her grip, trying to engulf her hand."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.333
76.3657%