Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXW6V0SN7K06E5PWK8RBPH

Run Details

Duration:
30.2s
Cost:
$0.003598
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones loomed in the moonlight as Aurora Carter slipped through the narrow gap between them. The Fae Grove stretched before her, a perfect circle of impossible wildflowers blooming in defiance of the November chill. Her breath fogged in the cold air as she checked her watch. Eleven forty-seven. Eva had sworn the pendant would be strongest here, at midnight. Rory tucked her hands deep into her jacket pockets, fingers curling around the Heartstone Pendant. The deep crimson gemstone pulsed faintly against her palm, warm despite the night's biting cold. Three days of research, two dead ends, and one cryptic message from an unknown number had led her here. The pendant had arrived in a plain brown box last Tuesday, no return address, just a note written in elegant script: "Find the gate. Richmond Park. The standing stones." A twig snapped to her left. Rory froze. Her eyes darted through the silver-lit darkness. Nothing but swaying grass and ancient oaks. The park was technically closed. She shouldn't be here. But the pendant's warmth had increased steadily all day until it became almost hot against her skin. Something was calling to it. Another rustle, this time from behind. She spun around. Her pulse thudded against her ribs. The wildflowers seemed to lean toward her, their impossible colors vibrant even in the moonlight. Blues too deep, reds too bright, purples that seemed to shimmer with their own light. "You're imagining things," she whispered to herself. The temperature dropped. Frost crystallized on the grass blades before her eyes, spreading outward in a perfect circle from where she stood. Rory exhaled sharply, watching her breath turn to white mist. A low hum vibrated through the ground beneath her feet. The pendant's warmth intensified until it was almost uncomfortable against her skin. She pulled it from her pocket. The deep crimson stone glowed with an inner light, casting bloody shadows across her face. Something moved at the edge of her vision. Tall and slender, disappearing behind one of the ancient oaks. Not human. Too tall. Too thin. "Who's there?" Her voice sounded small in the encroaching silence. The humming stopped. The grove fell utterly silent. No crickets. No wind. Nothing. Rory took a step backward, her shoulders bumping against one of the standing stones. The pendant's glow brightened until it illuminated the circle of wildflowers around her. The colors seemed too vibrant now, unnaturally so. Movement again. This time to her right. A flash of something pale between the trees. Not running. Walking. Deliberate. The temperature plummeted further. Rory shivered, pulling her jacket tighter around herself. The air grew thick, heavy with the scent of ozone and something else—something ancient and wild, like petrichor and decay. The wildflowers began to wilt before her eyes, their vibrant colors fading to gray, then black. The effect spread outward from the center of the grove, a circle of death expanding toward her. Rory clutched the pendant. "What do you want?" A whisper answered, not from any direction she could pinpoint. It seemed to come from everywhere at once. "She returns." The ground beneath her feet trembled. The standing stones vibrated with a low hum. The pendant pulsed in time with the stones, growing warmer with each beat. Another whisper, closer this time. "Malphora comes." Rory froze. No one had called her Malphora since she was a child, a name her grandmother had whispered when she thought Rory was asleep. A name from old stories, half-remembered dreams. The shadows between the trees deepened, taking on substance. Rory could almost make out shapes within them—tall, slender beings with too-long limbs and eyes that caught the moonlight. "Leave me alone." Her voice shook. A laugh, like the rustling of dry leaves. "You called us, little half-blood. You wear the key." The pendant's glow intensified until it hurt her eyes. The air crackled with static electricity. Her hair stood on end. The shadows between the trees writhed, taking form. One stepped forward. Tall as a tree, slender as a willow branch, with skin the color of birch bark and eyes like polished obsidian. Its smile revealed needle-thin teeth. "You opened the door, Aurora Carter. Now you must walk through." The ground trembled again. The standing stones began to glow with the same deep crimson as the pendant. The air shimmered between them, like heat haze on a summer road. Rory backed away until her spine pressed hard against the center stone. The pendant burned against her palm now, almost too hot to hold. "I don't understand." The being tilted its head. "But you will." It gestured toward the shimmering air between the stones. "The gate is open. The time is now." The wildflowers at her feet burst into flame, blue fire that spread outward in a perfect circle. The flames rose higher, surrounding her, cutting off any escape. The heat was intense, yet somehow cold at the same time. Rory looked from the flames to the being, then to the shimmering gate between the stones. The pendant pulsed in her hand, matching the rhythm of the standing stones' glow. "You called us," the being repeated, its voice now a chorus of whispers. "Now we answer."
created_at"2026-02-19T12:26:56.231Z" 2/19/2026, 12:26:56 PM
model"z-ai/glm-4.5" 4/5/2001, 12:00:00 AM
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native_tokens_reasoning373
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
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provider_responses
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount874
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount874
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count3
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count3
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"crystallized"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count2
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count2
10
word"trembled"
count2
11
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"perfect"
2"chill"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"pulse"
6"crystallized"
7"vibrated"
8"silence"
9"whisper"
10"trembled"
11"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
30.50% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences89
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords866
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.25% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount800
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Carter1
Fae1
Grove1
November1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Tuesday1
Malphora1
Rory11
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"November"
3"Pendant"
4"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.813
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"purples that seemed to shimmer with their own light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount866
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean24.06
std16.86
cv0.701
sampleLengths
063
178
26
347
46
539
67
732
843
924
1010
1113
1235
1319
1432
1533
168
1718
182
1927
205
212
2232
2328
246
2517
2628
2729
2811
2930
3024
313
3225
3338
3430
3516
97.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"being tilted"
1"being repeated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs112
matches
0"was calling"
83.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences97
ratio0.021
matches
0"The air grew thick, heavy with the scent of ozone and something else—something ancient and wild, like petrichor and decay."
1"Rory could almost make out shapes within them—tall, slender beings with too-long limbs and eyes that caught the moonlight."
99.96% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount799
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.04005006257822278
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007509386733416771
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean8.93
std5.89
cv0.659
sampleLengths
019
119
212
32
411
515
615
719
829
96
102
117
127
135
144
1517
165
176
183
196
2015
2115
227
233
2419
2510
2610
2712
286
2915
308
3110
322
332
342
3510
363
375
382
392
401
4114
4213
438
442
455
468
472
481
491
39.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.32989690721649484
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences76
matches
0"Her breath fogged in the"
1"Her eyes darted through the"
2"She shouldn't be here."
3"She spun around."
4"Her pulse thudded against her"
5"she whispered to herself"
6"She pulled it from her"
7"Her voice sounded small in"
8"It seemed to come from"
9"Her voice shook"
10"Her hair stood on end."
11"Its smile revealed needle-thin teeth."
12"It gestured toward the shimmering"
ratio0.171
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences76
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"The Fae Grove stretched before"
2"Her breath fogged in the"
3"Eva had sworn the pendant"
4"Rory tucked her hands deep"
5"The deep crimson gemstone pulsed"
6"The pendant had arrived in"
7"A twig snapped to her"
8"Her eyes darted through the"
9"Nothing but swaying grass and"
10"The park was technically closed."
11"She shouldn't be here."
12"Something was calling to it."
13"Another rustle, this time from"
14"She spun around."
15"Her pulse thudded against her"
16"The wildflowers seemed to lean"
17"Blues too deep, reds too"
18"she whispered to herself"
19"The temperature dropped."
ratio0.921
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rory could almost make out shapes within them—tall, slender beings with too-long limbs and eyes that caught the moonlight."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"the being repeated (be)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.286
77.6083%