| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1040 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1040 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "crystalline" | | 2 | "profound" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "predator" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "comforting" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "throbbed" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "scanning" | | 13 | "spectral" | | 14 | "whisper" | | 15 | "oppressive" | | 16 | "gloom" | | 17 | "flicker" | | 18 | "wavering" | | 19 | "lurch" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.02% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1032 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 1030 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.29 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 3 | | Carter | 1 | | London | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 47.26% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like a storm in the stillness" | | 1 | "looked like spilled oil, or old blood" | | 2 | "seemed impossible a stick-figure drawn in pitch, its form a wavering distortion in the air" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.907 | | wordCount | 1032 | | matches | | 0 | "not the peaceful quiet of a hidden place, but the held breath of a predator" | | 1 | "not of honey and night-stock but of decay" | | 2 | "Not like a person rising, but like a piece of paper crumpled" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 88.63% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 64.5 | | std | 29.68 | | cv | 0.46 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 78 | | 2 | 80 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 68 | | 5 | 74 | | 6 | 97 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 67 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 95 | | 13 | 79 | | 14 | 76 | | 15 | 104 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | | |
| 43.19% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.035 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment, Aurora Carter felt the damp London chill on her cheeks; the next, she passed between two of the standing stones and the air turned crystalline and still." | | 1 | "The sound had no source; it was simply there, weaving through the stillness, curling around her ears." | | 2 | "She pulled out her phone, less for help—there was never a signal here—and more for the mundane reality of its light." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1038 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "usual steady, comforting warmth." |
| | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.030828516377649325 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011560693641618497 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 12 | | std | 6.13 | | cv | 0.511 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 41.86% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.313953488372093 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 80.32% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it throbbed, a frantic," | | 1 | "Then, with a slow, disjointed" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 46.51% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "It was not the peaceful" | | 1 | "Their heads drooped on bruised-looking" | | 2 | "She moved towards the centre" | | 3 | "Her fingers went to the" | | 4 | "It did not pulse with" | | 5 | "She pulled her hand away" | | 6 | "She catalogued the rational explanations," | | 7 | "Her own breathing sounded like" | | 8 | "She swept her gaze across" | | 9 | "Their gnarled bark, carved by" | | 10 | "She blinked hard, and they" | | 11 | "Her mind was making monsters" | | 12 | "It had to be." | | 13 | "It was a wet, penetrating" | | 14 | "She refused to turn around" | | 15 | "She made her movements slow," | | 16 | "It was faint, barely there," | | 17 | "It was not a language" | | 18 | "Her voice was a trespass," | | 19 | "Her hand strayed to the" |
| | ratio | 0.434 | |
| 44.34% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks of Richmond" | | 1 | "The distant hum of the" | | 2 | "Tonight, that silence felt different." | | 3 | "It was not the peaceful" | | 4 | "Moonlight, thin and sharp as" | | 5 | "The wildflowers, usually a riot" | | 6 | "Their heads drooped on bruised-looking" | | 7 | "Aurora’s boots sank into the" | | 8 | "The ground felt wrong, spongy" | | 9 | "She moved towards the centre" | | 10 | "Her fingers went to the" | | 11 | "The silver chain was cold" | | 12 | "It did not pulse with" | | 13 | "She pulled her hand away" | | 14 | "A sharp crack echoed from" | | 15 | "Aurora froze, her head snapping" | | 16 | "A fox, her mind supplied" | | 17 | "A deer straying from the" | | 18 | "She catalogued the rational explanations," | | 19 | "The grove simply returned to" |
| | ratio | 0.831 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 74.18% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The distant hum of the city vanished, swallowed by a profound silence that was the Fae Grove’s first and most unsettling trick." | | 1 | "She swept her gaze across the perimeter, scanning the monolithic stones that ringed the clearing." | | 2 | "Grotesque faces leered from the wood grain, hollow eyes and gaping mouths that were not there a moment before." | | 3 | "It was slick, viscous, catching the torchlight with a greasy sheen that drank the brightness rather than reflected it." | | 4 | "It straightened to a height that seemed impossible, a stick-figure drawn in pitch, its form a wavering distortion in the air." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |