Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXWDMH56A4GNY002PG7CBQ

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Duration:
26.2s
Cost:
$0.002926
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the London pavement, turning the city into a watercolor painting of blurred lights and dark corners. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed through puddles as she rounded the corner, her sharp jaw set in determination. The suspect—a man she'd been tracking for weeks—disappeared into an alleyway just ahead. Quinn's worn leather watch on her left wrist reflected the streetlights as she checked the time. Three hours past midnight. The streets were empty except for them. She followed him into the narrow passage between buildings, the brick walls slick with moisture. The alley dead-ended at a rusted metal door marked with faded graffiti. But it wasn't closed. It was slightly ajar, darkness beyond. Where had he gone? Quinn drew her weapon, her military precision evident in every calculated movement. She pushed the door open with her foot, revealing a set of concrete stairs descending into darkness. The air grew colder as she descended, the sounds of the rain muffled above. The stairs ended at another door, this one solid steel with no handle. Just a small indentation in the center. A bone token, she realized. An entry requirement. From the shadows above, a figure emerged. Tomás Herrera, his olive skin glistening with rain, his warm brown eyes wide with concern. "Detective Quinn, you shouldn't be down here." His hand instinctively went to the scar running along his left forearm, a habit when he was nervous. "Tommy." Quinn lowered her weapon slightly. "What are you doing here?" "The same as you, I imagine. Following trouble." He adjusted his Saint Christopher medallion around his neck. "That door leads to the Veil Market. It's not a place for someone like you." "Someone like me?" "Human. Police. Unaware of what's really happening in this city." Herrera stepped closer. "I lost my license because I tried to help people in places like this. Don't make the same mistake." The metal door suddenly creaked open from within. A figure stood silhouetted against dim light from beyond. "Coming, Detective? Or are you going to stand there chatting all night?" The voice was familiar—the suspect. Quinn didn't hesitate. She pushed past Herrera and through the doorway, her weapon raised again. The Veil Market unfolded before her in the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Stalls lined the platform, selling items that defied explanation. Glowing vials, ancient books, talismans that seemed to pulse with energy. The air hummed with whispered conversations in languages she didn't recognize. Her suspect moved through the crowd, his identity obscured by the dim lighting and strange atmosphere. Quinn followed, keeping her distance but never losing sight of him. The market was a labyrinth of supernatural commerce. A woman with glowing eyes offered her a small bottle filled with swirling smoke. A man with scaled hands displayed a collection of knives that seemed to bend light around them. "Detective Quinn." She turned to find Herrera at her side, having followed her inside. "You shouldn't have come here," he whispered, his voice barely audible over the market's strange hum. "These people don't take kindly to police." "Then why are you here?" "Because unlike you, I know how to navigate this world. I provide services they need." He gestured to the stalls around them. "Off-the-books medical care mostly. Sometimes other things." Her suspect glanced back, spotting her. He broke into a run, disappearing down a corridor marked with flickering emergency lights. Quinn gave chase, Herrera reluctantly following behind. The corridor led to another chamber, this one filled with cages containing creatures she couldn't identify—some with multiple eyes, others with wings that seemed too large for their bodies. The suspect reached a dead end—a brick wall that appeared to have no exit. But as Quinn approached, she saw him press his hand against a specific brick. The wall shimmered, revealing a hidden passage. "Stop! Police!" Quinn shouted. The suspect turned, his face finally visible in the dim light. It was DS Morris, her former partner, who had died three years ago under unexplained circumstances. "Harlow," he said, his voice unchanged. "You shouldn't have come here." "Morris? But how...?" Quinn lowered her weapon, confusion washing over her face. "I saw your body. I identified you." "You saw what they wanted you to see." Morris gestured to the passage behind him. "Come with me. I can explain everything." Herrera caught up to them, grabbing Quinn's arm. "Detective, no. We don't know what's through there. It could be a trap." Morris smiled, a familiar expression that once comforted her but now sent chills down her spine. "It's not a trap, Tommy. I've been waiting for her to find me." Quinn stood frozen at the threshold of the hidden passage, her mind racing. Three years of grief, of unanswered questions, of supernatural origins she couldn't explain. And now her dead partner stood before her, offering answers in an underground market beneath Camden. The passage behind Morris glowed with an unnatural light, revealing nothing but darkness beyond. The market continued its business around them, oblivious to the confrontation in this hidden corner of the abandoned Tube station. "What's on the other side, Morris?" Quinn asked, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her. "The truth, Harlow. About what really happened that night. About why I had to disappear." He extended his hand. "But once you cross, there's no going back to the world you know." Herrera stepped in front of her, positioning himself between Quinn and the passage. "Detective, think about this. This is exactly how people get pulled into places they can't escape from. I've seen it happen before." Quinn looked from Herrera's concerned face to Morris's expectant one. The worn leather watch on her wrist ticked steadily, marking each passing second of her indecision. The rain continued to fall above, a distant reminder of the world she knew, while before her lay the unknown—a truth she had spent three years pursuing. Her decision would determine everything.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
69.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount994
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"suddenly"
3"reluctantly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount994
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"calculated"
count1
1
word"glistening"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"navigate"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"down her spine"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"calculated"
1"glistening"
2"familiar"
3"pulse"
4"navigate"
5"shimmered"
6"down her spine"
7"racing"
8"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences68
matches
0"t in determination"
1"was nervous"
16.81% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords985
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount749
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow1
Quinn15
Herrera8
Saint1
Christopher1
Veil1
Market1
Tube2
Camden2
Morris5
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Market"
6"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.499
windowScore0.333
59.09% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"talismans that seemed to pulse with energy"
1"knives that seemed to bend light around them"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount985
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean24.02
std13.07
cv0.544
sampleLengths
050
127
237
34
429
534
68
722
825
911
1032
113
1232
1317
1417
1515
1644
1727
1839
192
2012
2123
225
2329
2420
2536
2635
274
2827
2911
3019
3122
3221
3329
3442
3534
3616
3732
3835
3953
405
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs132
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences83
ratio0.06
matches
0"The suspect—a man she'd been tracking for weeks—disappeared into an alleyway just ahead."
1"\"Coming, Detective? Or are you going to stand there chatting all night?\" The voice was familiar—the suspect."
2"The corridor led to another chamber, this one filled with cages containing creatures she couldn't identify—some with multiple eyes, others with wings that seemed too large for their bodies."
3"The suspect reached a dead end—a brick wall that appeared to have no exit."
4"The rain continued to fall above, a distant reminder of the world she knew, while before her lay the unknown—a truth she had spent three years pursuing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount756
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.01984126984126984
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010582010582010581
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean11.87
std5.72
cv0.482
sampleLengths
019
118
213
316
44
57
615
712
84
96
104
1112
1217
1314
1413
157
165
173
187
1915
2025
216
225
2317
2415
253
2613
2719
288
299
3017
313
3212
3313
349
3511
3611
3716
3811
398
4014
4117
422
4312
4416
457
465
4722
487
496
66.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.43373493975903615
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners36
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Just a small indentation in"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences67
matches
0"She followed him into the"
1"It was slightly ajar, darkness"
2"She pushed the door open"
3"His hand instinctively went to"
4"He adjusted his Saint Christopher"
5"She pushed past Herrera and"
6"Her suspect moved through the"
7"She turned to find Herrera"
8"he whispered, his voice barely"
9"He gestured to the stalls"
10"Her suspect glanced back, spotting"
11"He broke into a run,"
12"It was DS Morris, her"
13"he said, his voice unchanged"
14"He extended his hand"
15"Her decision would determine everything."
ratio0.239
27.16% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences67
matches
0"Rain lashed against the London"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed"
2"The suspect—a man she'd been"
3"Quinn's worn leather watch on"
4"The streets were empty except"
5"She followed him into the"
6"The alley dead-ended at a"
7"It was slightly ajar, darkness"
8"Quinn drew her weapon, her"
9"She pushed the door open"
10"The air grew colder as"
11"The stairs ended at another"
12"A bone token, she realized."
13"An entry requirement."
14"Tomás Herrera, his olive skin"
15"His hand instinctively went to"
16"Quinn lowered her weapon slightly"
17"He adjusted his Saint Christopher"
18"Herrera stepped closer"
19"The metal door suddenly creaked"
ratio0.866
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She pushed the door open with her foot, revealing a set of concrete stairs descending into darkness."
1"Glowing vials, ancient books, talismans that seemed to pulse with energy."
2"The corridor led to another chamber, this one filled with cages containing creatures she couldn't identify—some with multiple eyes, others with wings that seeme…"
3"It was DS Morris, her former partner, who had died three years ago under unexplained circumstances."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he whispered, his voice barely audible over the market's strange hum"
1"he said, his voice unchanged"
2"Quinn asked, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
1"Quinn shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.143
73.7997%