| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "They solidified again [again]" | | 1 | "She turned away [away]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.463 | | leniency | 0.927 | | rawRatio | 0.105 | | effectiveRatio | 0.098 | |
| 85.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1376 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 12.79% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1376 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "lurching" | | 4 | "tinged" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "intricate" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "desire" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "comforting" | | 14 | "structure" | | 15 | "cascading" | | 16 | "intensity" | | 17 | "carried the weight" | | 18 | "measured" | | 19 | "crystal" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 64 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1370 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.86% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 985 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.52 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 9 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Aurora | 15 | | Hel | 1 | | Small | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | November | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.739 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared ahead its waters running silver-clear over a bed of smooth stones" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1370 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 33.41 | | std | 26.77 | | cv | 0.801 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 72 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 51 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 77 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 55 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 61 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 39 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 77 | | 29 | 103 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 53 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 94 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 67 | | 39 | 38 | | 40 | 4 |
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| 95.52% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "was planted" | | 1 | "been furnished" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 155 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "Not violently — nothing so dramatic as falling or spinning or the stomach-lurching sensation of a portal." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion — foxgloves and bluebells and roses all blooming together, heedless of season or sense." | | 2 | "No sun hung there, no moon or stars — just that warm amber glow emanating from everywhere and nowhere." | | 3 | "At its centre stood a structure that couldn't decide if it was a cottage or a ruin — walls of woven branches and living vines, roof of overlapping leaves that should have rotted but instead gleamed like emerald tiles." | | 4 | "\"But I can speak in circles until the truth means nothing. I can omit. I can redirect. My mother's blood demands honesty; my father's blood taught me how worthless honesty can be.\" She turned away, walking toward her strange dwelling." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 992 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.037298387096774195 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014112903225806451 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 14.57 | | std | 10.17 | | cv | 0.698 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 48 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 69.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.44680851063829785 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 49.02% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, reality simply rearranged itself" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "It should have rotted centuries" | | 1 | "She pulled her hand back," | | 2 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 3 | "She nodded toward the gap" | | 4 | "Their whisper-voice carried a note" | | 5 | "She hoped it would be" | | 6 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 7 | "Their bark shimmered with iridescent" | | 8 | "It felt wrong to speak" | | 9 | "She found herself swaying toward" | | 10 | "They solidified again, edges sharpening" | | 11 | "Her voice carried the weight" | | 12 | "She gestured toward the cottage-ruin," | | 13 | "She paused an arm's length" | | 14 | "She turned away, walking toward" | | 15 | "They'd come too far to" | | 16 | "She followed Isolde inside." |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 26.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Aurora traced her fingers along" | | 2 | "It should have rotted centuries" | | 3 | "Nyx drifted beside her, their" | | 4 | "She pulled her hand back," | | 5 | "A faint tingling sensation lingered" | | 6 | "Nyx's voice carried on a" | | 7 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed warm" | | 8 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 9 | "She nodded toward the gap" | | 10 | "Aurora squared her shoulders and" | | 11 | "The world shifted." | | 12 | "The next, golden light filtered" | | 13 | "The clearing stretched before her," | | 14 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 15 | "The air tasted sweet, tinged" | | 16 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" | | 17 | "Their whisper-voice carried a note" | | 18 | "Aurora drew the Fae blade" | | 19 | "The moonsilver dagger gleamed faintly" |
| | ratio | 0.868 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 46.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Their bark shimmered with iridescent patterns, greens and golds and deep violets shifting as she passed, as though the trees themselves were watching." | | 1 | "One moment they walked through dense woodland, the next they stood at the edge of an open space carpeted in pale purple flowers that swayed in a breeze Aurora c…" | | 2 | "At its centre stood a structure that couldn't decide if it was a cottage or a ruin — walls of woven branches and living vines, roof of overlapping leaves that s…" | | 3 | "Doorway shaped like an archway, hung with strings of crystals that chimed softly despite the absence of wind." | | 4 | "A woman sat before it, her silver hair cascading to her waist, her pale lavender eyes fixed on Aurora with an intensity that made her want to look away." |
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| 98.68% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "They solidified again, edges sharpening with visible effort" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.073 | | leniency | 0.146 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.098 | |