| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 72.07% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 358 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 2.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 358 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "charged" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "sense of" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 28 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 28 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 349 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.31% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 326 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.53 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Nyx | 3 | | Grove | 3 | | Aurora | 5 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.733 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 20 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "luminescence that seemed to breathe" | | 1 | "felt like a negotiation" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 349 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 30 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.77% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 11 | | mean | 31.73 | | std | 14.62 | | cv | 0.461 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 28 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.83% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 64 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 30 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove materialized around them—a landscape that defied every natural law Aurora had ever known." | | 1 | "The moonsilver dagger felt cold—always cold—a constant reminder of Isolde's cryptic warning about the Grove's nature." | | 2 | "The Grove wasn't a place to be conquered or explored, but a living entity that would allow—or deny—their passage." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 333 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 12 | | adverbRatio | 0.036036036036036036 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015015015015015015 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 30 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 30 | | mean | 11.63 | | std | 7.01 | | cv | 0.602 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 1 |
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| 96.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.6333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 30 | | uniqueOpeners | 19 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 25 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 25 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 20.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 25 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's fingers traced the outline" | | 1 | "The air around them felt" | | 2 | "The Grove materialized around them—a" | | 3 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors," | | 4 | "Nyx whispered, their voice like" | | 5 | "Aurora nodded, her hand instinctively" | | 6 | "The moonsilver dagger felt cold—always" | | 7 | "A moment stretched, contracted." | | 8 | "Sunlight flickered like a faulty" | | 9 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 10 | "A pathway of moss-covered stones" | | 11 | "Iridescent insects darted between luminous" | | 12 | "Aurora's question hung in the" | | 13 | "Nyx's form rippled." | | 14 | "Something moved at the edge" | | 15 | "A flutter of silver." | | 16 | "A hint of pale lavender." | | 17 | "Isolde, perhaps, watching from the" | | 18 | "Each step felt like a" | | 19 | "The Grove wasn't a place" |
| | ratio | 0.88 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 25 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 15 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors, their petals shimmering with an inner luminescence that seemed to breathe." | | 1 | "Sunlight flickered like a faulty lamp, casting shadows that moved independently of any visible source." | | 2 | "A pathway of moss-covered stones wound between towering trees whose branches intertwined overhead, creating a canopy that blocked any sense of sky or direction." | | 3 | "Iridescent insects darted between luminous flowers, their wings leaving trails of light that hung in the air like forgotten whispers." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |