Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXX1GKYDNWY307FJVSPHTN

Run Details

Duration:
12.1s
Cost:
$0.000432
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Thegreen neon sign blinked sluggishly above the door of The Raven’s Nest, casting a sickly glow onto the wet pavement outside. Inside, the air hung thick with the scent of stale beer, ozone from the jukebox, and something faintly metallic that reminded Aurora Carter of old pennies. She pushed through the heavy oak door, the bell above it jangling a discordant welcome. The low hum of conversation, punctuated by the occasional clink of glasses, enveloped her. She scanned the familiar faces—a regular nursing a pint, a couple whispering over cocktails, the bartender polishing a glass with a rag that smelled of lemon oil and something sharper. Her eyes, sharp and blue behind her glasses, missed nothing. They landed on the bar itself, where a familiar silhouette leaned against the polished mahogany, one hand resting casually on the worn surface, the other cradling a half-empty glass of amber liquid. Silas Blackwood. The name, even after all these years, still carried a weight that made her breath hitch. She’d left London, fled it really, five years ago. Left behind the law degree she’d never finished, the suffocating expectations of her father, and most painfully, Evan. Evan, with his charming smile and simmering temper. She’d taken the first job that came along, a delivery driver for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress, just to get out. The scar on her left wrist, a faint crescent moon, was a constant, ugly reminder of the night she’d slipped and cut herself on broken glass while trying to escape. It was a small price, she told herself, compared to the bruises she’d left behind. Silas turned slowly, his movements deliberate, the slight limp in his left leg a permanent fixture now. His grey-streaked auburn hair was neatly combed, the neatly trimmed beard framing a face that held the same sharp intelligence, but now it was tempered by lines of weariness and a quiet sadness that hadn’t been there before. The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted in the dim light as he pushed himself upright. His hazel eyes, sharp as ever, fixed on her, assessing, recognizing. A ghost of a smile touched his lips, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “Rory,” he said, his voice low and gravelly, the sound of it wrapping around her like a familiar, unwelcome blanket. “Long time, no see.” She didn’t move closer, didn’t offer a hug. The years hadn’t erased the distance that had grown between them, the unspoken things that hung heavy in the air. “Silas,” she replied, her voice flat, devoid of the warmth it once held. “You look… well.” “Getting by,” he said, pushing off the bar with a grunt that spoke of his injury. He walked towards her, the limp more pronounced now, the movement slow and controlled. He stopped a few feet away, his gaze sweeping over her from head to toe. “You’ve changed, Rory. Not just the hair. You’re… quieter. Harder.” She stiffened, the memory of Evan’s fists flashing behind her eyes. “Hardened,” she corrected, the word tasting bitter. “Necessary.” He nodded, a slow, understanding nod. “Necessary.” He gestured vaguely towards a stool. “Sit. Have a drink. It’s been a long time.” She hesitated, then slid onto the stool beside him. The worn leather groaned under her weight. The bar smelled of her, in a way. Of old books and secrets. “What are you doing here, Silas?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “Running a bar? That’s… unexpected.” He took a slow sip of his drink, the amber liquid disappearing. “Unexpected is my middle name.” He leaned in slightly, lowering his voice further. “The bar is a front, Rory. A front for… other things. Like the old days, in a way.” “The old days,” she echoed, the phrase tasting like ash. “You mean espionage? Spying?” “Intelligence work,” he corrected, a flicker of pride in his eyes. “Same thing, different label.” He paused, studying her face. “You’ve been quiet too long, Rory. What happened? You vanished. No calls, no letters. Just… gone.” She looked away, staring at the swirling liquid in her glass. The scar on her wrist pulsed, a phantom ache. “I had to go,” she said finally, the words coming out raw. “I couldn’t… stay.” “Evan?” he guessed, his voice gentle but insistent. “He wasn’t good for you.” She didn’t deny it. “He wasn’t anything,” she admitted, the admission heavy. “He was… a storm. And I was just a leaf.” She took a shaky breath. “I left everything behind. My life, my name, my… Rory.” Silas’s hand, rough and calloused, rested on the bar between them. “You left me too, Rory. After all these years, you just… disappeared. No goodbye. No explanation.” “There wasn’t one,” she whispered. “Not that you’d understand. Not anymore.” “Understand?” he scoffed, a bitter laugh escaping him. “I understand more than you think. I saw the signs. The way you’d flinch when someone raised their voice. The way you’d look over your shoulder. I tried to help, Rory. I tried to pull you back before it was too late.” “Too late,” she repeated, her voice thick with unshed tears. “It was always too late for me, Silas. With Evan… or with anything. I was just… broken.” She pushed her glass away, the movement abrupt. “I’m sorry I left you hanging. I’m sorry I didn’t say goodbye.” Silas’s expression softened, the lines around his eyes deepening. “You don’t need to apologize to me, Rory. Not anymore.” He took another sip, the silence stretching between them, thick and uncomfortable. “You look tired. Worn down. Like you’re carrying a weight you can’t bear.” “I am,” she confessed, the truth spilling out. “Every day. The delivery job, the flat above the bar… it’s just… noise. Background chatter. I feel… invisible. Like I’m not really here anymore.” “That’s not you,” Silas said firmly, his hazel eyes locking onto hers. “That’s the ghost of who you used to be. The Rory who ran away. The Rory who thought she could escape her past by running.” He leaned closer, his voice dropping to a near whisper. “But you can’t outrun it, Rory. Not really. Not forever. Not even here, in this bar, with me.” She stared into her empty glass, the reflection showing a face she barely recognized – the sharp cheekbones, the blue eyes dulled by fatigue, the scar a stark reminder of the past she thought she’d left behind. “What am I supposed to do, Silas?” she asked, the question hanging in the air, heavy with despair. “Just… disappear again? Start over? But where? What if Evan finds me?” Silas’s signet ring glinted as he tapped it against the bar. “You don’t have to disappear. You can fight. You can… be Rory again. The Rory who thought outside the box, who saw possibilities others missed. You still have that spark, I think. I saw it just now, when you walked in. That quick, sharp mind.” “It’s buried under delivery schedules and rent payments,” she countered, a bitter laugh escaping her. “Under the fear.” “Fear is just another obstacle,” he said, his voice gaining strength. “One you’ve overcome before. Remember Cardiff? Remember the time you…?” He trailed off, a knowing look in his eyes. “I remember,” she said, a flicker of her old self, the quick-witted Rory, flashing in her gaze. “I remember.” “Then fight,” Silas urged, his voice firm. “Don’t let the past define you. Don’t let the fear win. You’re stronger than you think, Rory. Stronger than you believe.” She looked at him, really looked at him, the man who’d been her mentor, her friend, her failed protector. The man who’d seen her at her worst and still offered a hand. The weight of time, the unspoken regret, the ghost of Evan, and the ghost of the Rory she’d been – they all pressed down on her. But for the first time in years, she didn’t feel utterly alone. She felt… seen. And for a moment, the sharp, quick mind she’d buried beneath the delivery uniform flickered back to life, a spark of defiance igniting in her blue eyes. “Okay,” she said, her voice stronger now, the old confidence returning, tempered but present. “Okay. I’ll fight. For me. For Rory.” Silas nodded, a slow, genuine smile spreading across his face, reaching his eyes. “That’s my girl.” He raised his glass. “To Rory, back in the game.” She met his gaze, the green neon sign outside flickering like a promise. “To Rory,” she echoed, the word feeling strange and new on her tongue. The past wasn’t gone, the fear wasn’t vanished, but for the first time in a long time, she felt like she might just be able to carry it. Together.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags31
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"Silas said firmly [firmly]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.544
leniency1
rawRatio0.097
effectiveRatio0.097
72.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1453
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"really"
count4
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"slightly"
4"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1453
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count3
2
word"weight"
count4
3
word"simmering"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count2
5
word"unspoken"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"echoed"
count2
9
word"flicker"
count2
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"firmly"
count1
13
word"stark"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"familiar"
2"weight"
3"simmering"
4"reminder"
5"unspoken"
6"warmth"
7"whisper"
8"echoed"
9"flicker"
10"pulsed"
11"silence"
12"firmly"
13"stark"
14"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences80
matches
0"a flicker of pride"
1"y with despair"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1450
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount988
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora1
Carter1
Blackwood1
London1
Evan4
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas8
Rory2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Blackwood"
5"Evan"
6"Yu-Fei"
7"Cheung"
8"Silas"
9"Rory"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like she might just be able to car"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1450
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean46.77
std32.86
cv0.703
sampleLengths
0148
1118
298
324
444
555
619
722
848
943
1014
1136
1235
1313
1437
1527
1611
1750
1847
1944
2032
2165
2267
2356
2418
2530
2619
2728
28121
2926
3055
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"was tempered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs154
matches(empty)
61.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences106
ratio0.028
matches
0"She scanned the familiar faces—a regular nursing a pint, a couple whispering over cocktails, the bartender polishing a glass with a rag that smelled of lemon oil and something sharper."
1"She stared into her empty glass, the reflection showing a face she barely recognized – the sharp cheekbones, the blue eyes dulled by fatigue, the scar a stark reminder of the past she thought she’d left behind."
2"The weight of time, the unspoken regret, the ghost of Evan, and the ghost of the Rory she’d been – they all pressed down on her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount991
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.035317860746720484
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.01917255297679112
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean13.68
std8.91
cv0.651
sampleLengths
021
126
215
314
430
510
632
72
816
99
1018
118
1220
1330
1415
1517
1638
1718
1811
1914
2020
214
228
2320
2413
253
2616
2714
2815
2910
3011
317
321
336
347
359
369
377
388
395
4014
415
4212
4313
4418
4510
464
4711
489
4916
61.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.42452830188679247
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences75
matches
0"She pushed through the heavy"
1"She scanned the familiar faces—a"
2"Her eyes, sharp and blue"
3"They landed on the bar"
4"She’d left London, fled it"
5"She’d taken the first job"
6"It was a small price,"
7"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
8"His hazel eyes, sharp as"
9"he said, his voice low"
10"She didn’t move closer, didn’t"
11"she replied, her voice flat,"
12"he said, pushing off the"
13"He walked towards her, the"
14"He stopped a few feet"
15"She stiffened, the memory of"
16"she corrected, the word tasting"
17"He nodded, a slow, understanding"
18"He gestured vaguely towards a"
19"She hesitated, then slid onto"
ratio0.653
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences75
matches
0"Thegreen neon sign blinked sluggishly"
1"She pushed through the heavy"
2"The low hum of conversation,"
3"She scanned the familiar faces—a"
4"Her eyes, sharp and blue"
5"They landed on the bar"
6"The name, even after all"
7"She’d left London, fled it"
8"Evan, with his charming smile"
9"She’d taken the first job"
10"The scar on her left"
11"It was a small price,"
12"Silas turned slowly, his movements"
13"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
14"The silver signet ring on"
15"His hazel eyes, sharp as"
16"A ghost of a smile"
17"he said, his voice low"
18"She didn’t move closer, didn’t"
19"The years hadn’t erased the"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She scanned the familiar faces—a regular nursing a pint, a couple whispering over cocktails, the bartender polishing a glass with a rag that smelled of lemon oi…"
1"The name, even after all these years, still carried a weight that made her breath hitch."
2"She’d taken the first job that came along, a delivery driver for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress, just to get out."
3"His grey-streaked auburn hair was neatly combed, the neatly trimmed beard framing a face that held the same sharp intelligence, but now it was tempered by lines…"
4"She looked at him, really looked at him, the man who’d been her mentor, her friend, her failed protector."
5"Silas nodded, a slow, genuine smile spreading across his face, reaching his eyes."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags31
uselessAdditionCount16
matches
0"she replied, her voice flat, devoid of the warmth it once held"
1"she corrected, the word tasting bitter"
2"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
3"he corrected, a flicker of pride in his eyes"
4"she said finally, the words coming out raw"
5"he guessed, his voice gentle but insistent"
6"he scoffed, a bitter laugh escaping him"
7"she repeated, her voice thick with unshed tears"
8"she confessed, the truth spilling out"
9"Silas said firmly, his hazel eyes locking onto hers"
10"He leaned, his voice dropping to a near whisper"
11"she asked, the question hanging in the air, heavy with despair"
12"she countered, a bitter laugh escaping her"
13"he said, his voice gaining strength"
14"Silas urged, his voice firm"
15"she echoed, the word feeling strange and new on her tongue"
9.65% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she corrected (correct)"
1"he corrected (correct)"
2"he guessed (guess)"
3"she admitted (admit)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"she repeated (repeat)"
6"she confessed (confess)"
7"Silas urged (urge)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.316
leniency0.632
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.281
70.6515%