Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXX5BPWK5ERAD5BE4APA61

Run Details

Duration:
2m 27s
Cost:
$0.000995
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had turned the cobbled yard of the derelict warehouse into a shallow, oily mirror. Detective Harlow Quinn stood under the crime scene tape, the worn leather watch on her left wrist tight against her skin. Her breath plumed in the cold air, each exhale a sharp punctuation mark. The warehouse wasn’t the scene; it was the decoy. The real locus was the rusted service hatch yawning open beside a stack of crumbling pallets, leading down into the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. She ducked under the tape, her movements crisp with military precision. The uniformed officer at the hatch nodded, his face pale under the stark glow of the portable lights. “It’s down there, Detective.” The air that rose from the hatch was a different temperature—warmer, carrying a scent of damp earth, ozone, and something else, something metallic and sharp, like lightning-struck stone. The narrow, tiled stairwell was lit by battery-powered lanterns, their light casting long, dancing shadows on the vintage subway posters peeling from the walls. At the bottom, the platform opened up into a cavernous, echoing dark. The crime scene team’s lights carved out a pool of artificial day around a single, incongruous spot. A body lay sprawled near the edge of the platform, a man in a dark coat. But it was the other figure that caught Quinn’s eye first. Eva Kowalski stood a few respectful meters back from the tape, her hands buried deep in the pockets of a long, dun-colored coat. Her curly red hair was damp, plastered in tendrils against her freckled neck. She was tucking a strand anxiously behind her left ear as she stared at the scene, her round glasses reflecting the scene lights, making her eyes unreadable. “Miss Kowalski,” Quinn said, her voice flat. “Fancy meeting you in a place like this.” Eva jumped, whirling around. The worn leather satchel at her hip swung heavily, full of books. “Detective. They… they called me in. As a consultant. The body… there were items on it. They thought the Museum might have some insight.” “Items.” Quinn moved past her, her sharp jaw set. She approached the body, nodding to the Scene of Crime Officer who was photographing the area. The victim was male, late thirties, his face frozen in an expression of profound shock, not fear. His coat was open, and on the concrete beside his outstretched hand lay a small, ornate object. A compass. Quinn crouched, careful not to touch. The casing was brass, tarnished with a patina of verdigris. The face was etched with intricate, swirling sigils that seemed to shift in the uneven light. It was the Veil Compass from the file, the one her own sources had whispered about. The needle, she noted, wasn’t pointing north. It was quivering, pointing insistently at a section of the grimy tiled wall twenty feet away. “Cause of death?” she asked the SOC officer without looking up. “Initial assessment is cardiac arrest. No obvious wounds, no signs of a struggle. We found that,” he gestured with his chin at the compass, “clutched in his hand. Prints are smudged, probably just his. Wallet says his name is Alistair Finch. No criminal record. Works—worked—as a low-level archivist at the National Archives.” Cardiac arrest. In a disused Tube station. With a supernatural compass in his hand. Quinn’s mind ticked through the facts, each one a gear that didn’t mesh with the next. “He was looking for something,” Eva’s voice came from just behind her shoulder. Quinn hadn’t heard her approach. “Or someone. The compass… it’s a tracker. It doesn’t point to cardinal directions. It points to sources of concentrated supernatural energy. Rifts. Portals.” “A portal. Here.” Quinn stood, brushing imaginary dirt from her trousers. She scanned the wall the needle indicated. It was blank, identical to every other section of stained, cracked Edwardian tile. “The Veil Market,” Eva said, her voice dropping to a whisper, as if the very name was dangerous. “It’s scheduled to move locations tonight. It exists in interstitial spaces—abandoned stations, closed libraries, forgotten crypts. It moves every full moon. This station… it’s a documented former location. He must have been trying to find the new entrance. You need a bone token to get in. Did you find one on him?” The SOC officer shook his head. “No token. Just the compass, his wallet, keys, and a train ticket from earlier today.” “So he didn’t get in,” Quinn reasoned. “He came down here, compass led him to a wall, and his heart gave out. Case closed. Fright, or excitement, or a pre-existing condition.” The words tasted like ash in her mouth. They were the official words, the words that would get the file stamped and sent down to Records. The same kind of words that had been written about her partner, DS Morris, three years ago. *Unexplained circumstances.* “But the compass is still active,” Eva pointed out, her green eyes intense behind her glasses. She hadn’t moved to tuck her hair back; she was focused entirely on the artifact. “If the Market had already moved on, if this was just a dead location, the needle would have settled. Or pointed somewhere else. It’s still seeking. It’s quivering because what it’s seeking is… close. But not *there*.” She gestured at the blank wall. Quinn looked from Eva’s earnest, freckled face to the compass, then back to the wall. She walked away from the body, her footsteps echoing in the vast space. She stopped a few feet from the indicated section and turned, looking back at the scene. From this angle, the lighting was different. The portable lights cast the body and the platform into high relief, but the wall opposite was in deeper shadow. And there, she saw it. Not on the wall the compass pointed to, but on the platform edge directly opposite it. A subtle scuff mark on the grime, a place where the dust had been recently disturbed in a perfect, small circle. She walked back, her mind working. She looked at the body’s position, the direction he was facing, the outflung arm. He hadn’t been looking at the wall. He had been facing *away* from it. He had been standing right where that scuff mark was. “He wasn’t trying to get in,” Quinn said, her voice low. “He was already out.” Eva frowned. “What?” “Look at him. He’s facing the stairs. The exit. The compass is in his hand, but he dropped it. He was running. Or staggering.” She pointed to the scuff mark. “He was standing right there. And then he collapsed.” “So he came out of the Market…” “And something came out with him,” Quinn finished. She turned to the blank wall. The compass needle quivered. “The portal isn’t on the wall. The compass isn’t pointing *at* the wall. It’s pointing *through* it. The Market entrance is on the other side of this platform. He used it, came back out, and whatever followed him… it didn’t need a bone token.” The SOC officer stared between the two women. “You’re saying he was chased by something that… came out of a wall?” “I’m saying the evidence doesn’t add up to a simple cardiac arrest,” Quinn said, her tone leaving no room for debate. “No token on the body means he either lost it, or never had one to begin with. But he had the compass, which means he knew what he was looking for. He found it. And then he died the moment he left.” She thought of Morris, his face in her memory, the last radio transmission full of static and a sound like breaking glass. *Unexplained circumstances.* “It wasn’t his heart that killed him. It was whatever crossed over with him. Something that leaves no physical mark.” Eva’s hand went to her satchel strap, gripping it tightly. “A psychic shock. A soul-drain. There are… entities in the lore that feed on life force, not blood. They can’t cross certain thresholds unless invited or anchored to a living host. He could have been the anchor, just long enough to get clear.” Quinn met her gaze. The archivist’s theory fit the cold, illogical facts. No wound, no struggle, just terror and a stopped heart. An invisible killer that walked out of a hidden market. She looked back at the scuff mark on the platform, then at the compass, its needle still trembling, pointing at nothing and everything. “Bag the compass as evidence,” she told the SOC officer, her voice devoid of inflection. “Full toxicology panel. I want every inch of this platform swept, especially that section.” She pointed to the scuff mark. “And I want a canvas of every occult shop, every New Age bookstore, every damn fortune teller within five miles. This man was an archivist. He didn’t just wake up and decide to find a supernatural black market. Someone pointed him here.” The officer nodded, already turning to give orders. Eva was still staring at the wall, her face pale. “It’s still here, isn’t it?” Eva whispered. “The Market. It didn’t move. It’s right on the other side of that.” The needle of the compass, now being placed carefully into an evidence bag, gave one last, violent shudder before lying still.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The words tasted like [like]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.543
leniency1
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.053
87.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1545
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"anxiously"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"anxiously"
1"very"
2"tightly"
3"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1545
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"dancing"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count2
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"profound"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"quivered"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"dancing"
2"echoing"
3"unreadable"
4"profound"
5"etched"
6"intricate"
7"scanned"
8"whisper"
9"footsteps"
10"perfect"
11"quivered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords8
totalWords1536
ratio0.005
matches
0"Unexplained circumstances."
1"there"
2"away"
3"at"
4"through"
5"Unexplained circumstances."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.61% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount967
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn14
Tube2
Camden1
Kowalski1
Eva10
Scene1
Crime1
Officer1
Veil1
Compass1
Cardiac1
Edwardian1
Records1
Morris2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Officer"
5"Cardiac"
6"Morris"
places
0"Scene"
1"Compass"
2"Records"
globalScore0.776
windowScore0.833
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sigils that seemed to shift in the uneven light"
1"tasted like ash in her mouth"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.651
wordCount1536
matches
0"Not on the wall the compass pointed to, but on the platform edge directly opposite it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean43.89
std25.61
cv0.584
sampleLengths
084
133
252
356
463
515
640
759
82
971
1011
1152
1230
1341
1431
1570
1621
1776
1874
1944
2069
2144
2215
233
2439
257
2662
2721
28107
2953
3055
3177
3218
3320
3421
84.86% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences86
matches
0"was lit"
1"was etched"
2"been written"
3"was focused"
4"being placed"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs144
matches
0"was tucking"
1"was photographing"
2"wasn’t pointing"
3"was quivering"
4"was facing"
57.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences101
ratio0.03
matches
0"The warehouse wasn’t the scene; it was the decoy."
1"The air that rose from the hatch was a different temperature—warmer, carrying a scent of damp earth, ozone, and something else, something metallic and sharp, like lightning-struck stone."
2"She hadn’t moved to tuck her hair back; she was focused entirely on the artifact."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount971
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02368692070030896
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010298661174047374
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean15.21
std11.44
cv0.752
sampleLengths
016
121
213
39
425
511
618
74
828
924
1012
1117
1216
1311
1423
1513
1627
177
188
194
2012
2124
229
2316
2417
2517
262
276
2810
2916
3016
317
3216
3311
3452
352
365
377
3816
3913
405
4123
4211
437
4413
4518
4652
476
4815
497
47.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3564356435643564
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
76.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences78
matches
0"Her breath plumed in the"
1"She ducked under the tape,"
2"Her curly red hair was"
3"She was tucking a strand"
4"She approached the body, nodding"
5"His coat was open, and"
6"It was the Veil Compass"
7"It was quivering, pointing insistently"
8"she asked the SOC officer"
9"he gestured with his chin"
10"She scanned the wall the"
11"It was blank, identical to"
12"They were the official words,"
13"She hadn’t moved to tuck"
14"She gestured at the blank"
15"She walked away from the"
16"She stopped a few feet"
17"She walked back, her mind"
18"She looked at the body’s"
19"He hadn’t been looking at"
ratio0.359
11.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences78
matches
0"The rain had turned the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood under"
2"Her breath plumed in the"
3"The warehouse wasn’t the scene;"
4"The real locus was the"
5"She ducked under the tape,"
6"The uniformed officer at the"
7"The air that rose from"
8"The narrow, tiled stairwell was"
9"The crime scene team’s lights"
10"A body lay sprawled near"
11"Eva Kowalski stood a few"
12"Her curly red hair was"
13"She was tucking a strand"
14"Quinn said, her voice flat"
15"Eva jumped, whirling around."
16"The worn leather satchel at"
17"Quinn moved past her, her"
18"She approached the body, nodding"
19"The victim was male, late"
ratio0.897
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She approached the body, nodding to the Scene of Crime Officer who was photographing the area."
1"Quinn’s mind ticked through the facts, each one a gear that didn’t mesh with the next."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice flat"
1"Eva pointed out, her green eyes intense behind her glasses"
2"Quinn said, her voice low"
3"Quinn said, her tone leaving no room for debate"
4"she told, her voice devoid of inflection"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.057
75.9746%