Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXXAJMEAC3B1ET3CSTD4BE

Run Details

Duration:
9.1s
Cost:
$0.004462
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped through the shimmering distortion. The world shifted. One moment, the damp, earthy smell of Richmond Park filled her nostrils. The next, an aroma of rich spices and exotic fruits, heavy and sweet, overwhelmed her senses. Her boots, still caked with London mud, now rested on a path paved with iridescent cobblestones, each one catching the light and swirling with inner hues. "Blimey," a voice from behind her breathed. It was Nyx, their shadowy form coalescing into a more solid shape, though still a silhouette against the warm amber sky. "Not exactly the local chippy, is it?" The sky. Rory tilted her head back. Not blue, not grey, not even twilight. It was a perpetual sunset, a warm amber glow that infused everything with a permanent golden hour. Great, sprawling vineyards, heavy with plump, jewel-toned grapes unlike any she had ever seen, climbed gentle hills in the distance. Orchards laden with fruits glowing with their own inner light stretched as far as the eye could see. The air was thick and humid, a comforting warmth without being stifling. Isolde, her silver hair a luminous contrast to the golden light, moved with an otherworldly grace beside Rory. "Welcome, Rory Carter," Isolde’s voice, a melodic whisper, carried on the sweet air. "This is Dymas, the realm of Gluttony." She swept her hand in a gesture that encompassed the extravagant landscape. “A place of… abundance.” Rory felt a faint pulse from the Heartstone Pendant resting beneath her shirt. It grew warmer, a steady thrum against her skin, confirming their location. This was it. Not some dusty library or forgotten cellar, but an actual, honest-to-gods other world. A Hel realm. They followed the path, the cobblestones humming subtly beneath their feet. Giant trees, their bark a mosaic of greens and purples, bore fruits resembling crystalline geodes, shedding soft, jewel-toned light onto the ground. Flowers the size of dinner plates, their petals unfurling in slow, deliberate movements, released clouds of sparkling pollen that drifted lazily in the air. The sounds were equally alien. A low, continuous thrum vibrated through the ground, like a distant, massive drum. Birdsong was replaced by delicate chimes, as if crystal bells rang in the fruit-laden branches. "What's that smell?" Rory picked up a plum-like fruit from a low-hanging branch. It was soft, yielding almost liquid under her thumb. The aroma was intensely sweet, like candied violets and caramel. "A nectar-fruit,” Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes observing Rory with an unnerving intensity. "Delectable, if one is accustomed to its... potency." Nyx, who had been observing a butterfly with wings like stained glass, solidified further, their head cocked. “Potency for whom, I wonder?” Rory took a cautious bite. The flavour exploded on her tongue, overwhelming her senses with sweetness, a burst of energy that made her skull tingle. She felt a sudden, profound sense of well-being, a dizzying surge of euphoria. It was intoxicating. Her body felt light, almost weightless. “Woah,” she managed, slightly breathless. “That’s… something.” Isolde’s lips, a faint purplish hue, curved into a knowing smile. "The fruits of Dymas are tailored to stimulate and satisfy every craving. A dangerous allure for those without discipline." Rory, still buzzing from the fruit, felt her thoughts drift towards a second bite, a third. The world around her seemed to shimmer with even greater vibrancy, the colours more intense, the scents even more captivating. A part of her, the cool-headed, rational part, registered a flicker of concern. This was too good. Too easy. "Easy now, Rory," Nyx’s whisper-like voice cut through the haze. Their shadowy hand touched her arm, cool and grounding. The touch sent a jolt through her, clearing the sweetness-induced fog. "Don't go getting lost in the sauce before we even get to the kitchen." Rory blinked, the intense euphoria receding slightly. She looked at the half-eaten fruit in her hand, then tossed it away, a sudden, almost chilling clarity washing over her. She gripped the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip, its cold moonsilver a comforting anchor. “Right. Staying sharp,” she muttered, shaking her head to clear the last vestiges of the fruit’s effect. They continued their walk, the path widening as they moved deeper into the landscape. The hum beneath their feet grew stronger, now accompanied by a faint orchestral swell that seemed to emanate from the very air itself. They rounded a bend, and the source of the subtle music became clear. Before them stretched a grand plaza, paved with gold-flecked obsidian. In the centre, a fountain sprayed not water, but streams of shimmering, liquid light that pulsed with rainbow colours. Around the plaza, grand structures of polished, bone-white stone rose, intricate carvings depicting feasts and figures reveling in acts of unbridled indulgence adorning their facades. Huge archways, draped with living vines bearing glowing, bell-shaped flowers, beckoned them inside. A low murmur of voices, laughter, and clinking sounds drifted from within the buildings. "Prince Belphegor's palace," Isolde indicated the central, largest structure, its spires piercing the amber sky. "Where the grandest feasts are prepared." The plaza bustled with activity. Figures moved with a languid grace, some shimmering like heat haze, others appearing as solid as humans, but with subtle differences – elongated limbs, skin that glowed faintly, or eyes that held an ancient, hungry intelligence. They wore lavish, flowing garments woven from threads that seemed to capture and scatter light. They carried goblets filled with glowing, iridescent liquids and small plates piled high with impossibly delicate pastries. A scent, richer and more complex than anything Rory had encountered so far, wafted towards them. A blend of roasting meats, sweet spices, fermentation, and something else – something ancient and primal, like the smell of deep earth and blooming night flowers. Rory’s stomach rumbled despite herself. “They certainly know how to live it up here,” she observed. No one seemed to notice their arrival, or if they did, they paid them no mind, too engrossed in their own pleasures. Nyx’s form wavered slightly, as if their essence found the sheer opulence both fascinating and repulsive. “A feast for the senses, indeed. But what, I wonder, is the price of admission?” One of the figures, tall and slender with skin like polished jade, passed close by them. They carried a crystal flute from which emanated a stream of soft, melodious notes. As they walked, blooming flowers sprang up in their wake from the obsidian paving, only to wither and dissipate into glittering dust moments later. Rory watched, mesmerised. This was far beyond anything she’d ever imagined. Not a barren wasteland or a fiery pit, but a realm of impossible beauty and seductive excess. Each sensation, from the ambient hum to the clinking of crystal, from the sweet air to the ever-present thrum of the Heartstone, reaffirmed the reality of it all. They were truly here. And finding what they came for would not be as simple as just asking politely.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
94.74% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she managed slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.474
leniency0.947
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.105
69.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1164
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"intensely"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count3
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"intensely"
2"slightly"
3"very"
4"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1164
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"comforting"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"otherworldly"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"mosaic"
count1
6
word"crystalline"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count3
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"profound"
count1
11
word"sense of"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
13
word"chilling"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count1
15
word"intricate"
count1
16
word"structure"
count1
17
word"complex"
count1
18
word"stomach"
count1
19
word"wavered"
count1
20
word"fascinating"
count1
highlights
0"comforting"
1"warmth"
2"otherworldly"
3"whisper"
4"pulse"
5"mosaic"
6"crystalline"
7"vibrated"
8"crystal"
9"intensity"
10"profound"
11"sense of"
12"flicker"
13"chilling"
14"pulsed"
15"intricate"
16"structure"
17"complex"
18"stomach"
19"wavered"
20"fascinating"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
71.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1150
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1035
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Nyx4
Rory12
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Hel1
Isolde5
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.92
windowScore1
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"swell that seemed to emanate from the very air itself"
1"threads that seemed to capture and scatter light"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.609
wordCount1150
matches
0"Not some dusty library or forgotten cellar, but an actual, honest-to-gods other world"
1"not water, but streams of shimmering, liquid light"
2"Not a barren wasteland or a fiery pit, but a realm of impossible beauty"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
90.95% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean46
std21.54
cv0.468
sampleLengths
063
135
281
354
444
590
632
722
822
947
107
1130
1255
1344
1442
1517
1650
1781
1821
1973
2047
2133
2231
2354
2475
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"was replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs165
matches(empty)
78.65% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences89
ratio0.022
matches
0"Figures moved with a languid grace, some shimmering like heat haze, others appearing as solid as humans, but with subtle differences – elongated limbs, skin that glowed faintly, or eyes that held an ancient, hungry intelligence."
1"A blend of roasting meats, sweet spices, fermentation, and something else – something ancient and primal, like the smell of deep earth and blooming night flowers."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1048
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"soft, jewel-toned light"
1"polished, bone-white stone"
2"glowing, bell-shaped flowers,"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.035305343511450385
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.013358778625954198
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean12.92
std6.95
cv0.538
sampleLengths
06
13
212
316
426
57
621
77
82
95
107
1117
1220
1318
1412
1518
1613
1719
184
1913
2012
213
2213
233
2411
2522
2624
275
2813
2915
3013
319
3210
3314
348
3517
365
375
3820
3913
403
416
425
432
4411
4519
4616
4720
4813
494
71.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.449438202247191
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences77
matches
0"Her boots, still caked with"
1"It was Nyx, their shadowy"
2"It was a perpetual sunset,"
3"She swept her hand in"
4"It grew warmer, a steady"
5"They followed the path, the"
6"It was soft, yielding almost"
7"She felt a sudden, profound"
8"It was intoxicating."
9"Her body felt light, almost"
10"she managed, slightly breathless"
11"Their shadowy hand touched her"
12"She looked at the half-eaten"
13"She gripped the Fae-Forged Blade"
14"she muttered, shaking her head"
15"They continued their walk, the"
16"They rounded a bend, and"
17"They wore lavish, flowing garments"
18"They carried goblets filled with"
19"They carried a crystal flute"
ratio0.273
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences77
matches
0"Rory stepped through the shimmering"
1"The world shifted."
2"The next, an aroma of"
3"Her boots, still caked with"
4"a voice from behind her"
5"It was Nyx, their shadowy"
6"Rory tilted her head back."
7"It was a perpetual sunset,"
8"Orchards laden with fruits glowing"
9"The air was thick and"
10"Isolde, her silver hair a"
11"Isolde’s voice, a melodic whisper,"
12"She swept her hand in"
13"Rory felt a faint pulse"
14"It grew warmer, a steady"
15"This was it."
16"A Hel realm."
17"They followed the path, the"
18"Flowers the size of dinner"
19"The sounds were equally alien."
ratio0.818
64.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"Before them stretched a grand"
ratio0.013
26.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"It was a perpetual sunset, a warm amber glow that infused everything with a permanent golden hour."
1"Flowers the size of dinner plates, their petals unfurling in slow, deliberate movements, released clouds of sparkling pollen that drifted lazily in the air."
2"Birdsong was replaced by delicate chimes, as if crystal bells rang in the fruit-laden branches."
3"Nyx, who had been observing a butterfly with wings like stained glass, solidified further, their head cocked."
4"The flavour exploded on her tongue, overwhelming her senses with sweetness, a burst of energy that made her skull tingle."
5"The hum beneath their feet grew stronger, now accompanied by a faint orchestral swell that seemed to emanate from the very air itself."
6"Figures moved with a languid grace, some shimmering like heat haze, others appearing as solid as humans, but with subtle differences – elongated limbs, skin tha…"
7"Nyx’s form wavered slightly, as if their essence found the sheer opulence both fascinating and repulsive."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"behind her breathed (breathe)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"she observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.316
75.5073%