| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde corrected gently [gently]" | | 1 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" | | 2 | "they said finally [finally]" | | 3 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" | | 4 | "they replied cryptically [cryptically]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.438 | | leniency | 0.875 | | rawRatio | 0.357 | | effectiveRatio | 0.313 | |
| 75.61% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1025 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1025 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "racing" | | 2 | "flicker" | | 3 | "anticipation" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "charged" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "dancing" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "depths" | | 13 | "intensity" | | 14 | "grave" | | 15 | "tension" | | 16 | "could feel" | | 17 | "pulse" | | 18 | "loomed" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "couldn't help but" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "couldn't help but smile" | | 1 | "sent a chill down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1011 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 816 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.33 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 4 | | Isolde | 7 | | Anticipation | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Rory | 19 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Eva | 4 | | Nyx | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.336 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "light that seemed to emanate from everywhere and nowhere at once" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.989 | | wordCount | 1011 | | matches | | 0 | "not the Grove above, but something else entirely" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 92.62% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 25.92 | | std | 12.29 | | cv | 0.474 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 42 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 35 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 42 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 44 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 155 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted different here—thicker, like breathing through honey." | | 1 | "\"Welcome,\" she said, though her pale lavender eyes betrayed a flicker of something—concern?" | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets that shimmered with internal light, roses with petals like crushed velvet that shifted between crimson and black." | | 3 | "Rory felt it then—a subtle pressure against her mind, like fingertips brushing against her thoughts." | | 4 | "The surface reflected not the Grove above, but something else entirely—flashes of crimson sky, twisted landscapes, faces twisted in silent screams." | | 5 | "She'd heard stories—whispers of a realm of excess and indulgence, where the line between pleasure and pain blurred into something dangerous." | | 6 | "Images flashed across it—a city skyline, familiar and yet wrong, buildings twisted into grotesque shapes, streets flowing with something thick and dark." | | 7 | "Then she saw it—a hand, pale and slender, reaching up from the depths." | | 8 | "Rory could feel eyes on her—curious, hungry, ancient." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 829 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.038600723763570564 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014475271411338963 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 11.76 | | std | 5.65 | | cv | 0.481 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 72.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4418604651162791 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 49.75% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she saw it—a hand," |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers tightened around the" | | 1 | "they whispered, voice barely audible" | | 2 | "she said, though her pale" | | 3 | "She reached out to touch" | | 4 | "She stiffened, hand instinctively going" | | 5 | "they murmured, not turning back" | | 6 | "They followed Nyx between two" | | 7 | "She'd heard stories—whispers of a" | | 8 | "She crouched at the edge," | | 9 | "It grasped at the air," | | 10 | "They crouched where the hand" | | 11 | "they said finally, voice tight" | | 12 | "She whirled, hand going to" | | 13 | "she murmured to Nyx, who" | | 14 | "they replied cryptically" |
| | ratio | 0.224 | |
| 19.70% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's boots crunched against the" | | 1 | "The air tasted different here—thicker," | | 2 | "Her fingers tightened around the" | | 3 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" | | 4 | "they whispered, voice barely audible" | | 5 | "Isolde stood at the center," | | 6 | "she said, though her pale" | | 7 | "Rory stepped forward, boots sinking" | | 8 | "The clearing opened up before" | | 9 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets" | | 10 | "Trees with silver bark twisted" | | 11 | "Eva breathed, her voice catching" | | 12 | "She reached out to touch" | | 13 | "Isolde corrected gently" | | 14 | "Rory felt it then—a subtle" | | 15 | "She stiffened, hand instinctively going" | | 16 | "The metal was cold even" | | 17 | "Nyx drifted ahead, their form" | | 18 | "they murmured, not turning back" | | 19 | "Rory exchanged a glance with" |
| | ratio | 0.881 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 46.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers tightened around the Heartstone pendant at her throat, its warmth pulsing in time with her racing heartbeat." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets that shimmered with internal light, roses with petals like crushed velvet that shifted between crimson and blac…" | | 2 | "Trees with silver bark twisted upward, their branches forming natural archways that led deeper into the Grove." | | 3 | "They followed Nyx between two massive oaks, their roots forming natural steps that led downward into a hollow." | | 4 | "The air grew heavier here, charged with an energy that made Rory's skin prickle." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva breathed, her voice catching" | | 1 | "they murmured, not turning back" | | 2 | "Nyx said, their form solidifying as they turned to face her," | | 3 | "they said finally, voice tight" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Eva breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Isolde corrected gently (correct)" | | 3 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.406 | | leniency | 0.813 | | rawRatio | 0.462 | | effectiveRatio | 0.375 | |