| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1146 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.01% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1146 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "synthetic" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "shattered" | | 10 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 131 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1140 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1109 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.9 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | October | 2 | | Park | 1 | | June | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Rory | 10 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Golden" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "June" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed narrower than when she'd entered" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1140 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 40.71 | | std | 34.86 | | cv | 0.856 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 101 | | 1 | 123 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 87 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 79 | | 13 | 65 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 57 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 97 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 67 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 69 | | 27 | 29 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 202 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.24% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 131 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bruised the darkness with impossible color—bluebells and poppies and foxgloves that had no business blooming outside June, especially not in the Richmond brownfield." | | 1 | "London lay three hundred yards east—but no planes groaned overhead." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 179 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 4 | | adverbRatio | 0.0223463687150838 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00558659217877095 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 131 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 131 | | mean | 8.7 | | std | 6.22 | | cv | 0.715 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 40.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.24427480916030533 | | totalSentences | 131 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 64.07% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "She stumbled onto the grass," | | 1 | "She checked her phone." | | 2 | "She thumbed the power button." | | 3 | "She pocketed the device." | | 4 | "Her breath plumed in silver" | | 5 | "She had followed its pull" | | 6 | "It burned now." | | 7 | "It cooked her skin through" | | 8 | "Her shadow stretched across the" | | 9 | "It stretched toward the standing" | | 10 | "She snapped her head around." | | 11 | "She rubbed the ridge of" | | 12 | "She wasn't alone." | | 13 | "She walked deeper." | | 14 | "She passed between two stones." | | 15 | "They smelled of copper and" | | 16 | "They brushed against her delivery" | | 17 | "She swatted them away." | | 18 | "They left pollen stains on" | | 19 | "She hadn't walked back." |
| | ratio | 0.39 | |
| 6.61% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 107 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pushed through the gap" | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant struck her" | | 2 | "She stumbled onto the grass," | | 3 | "Richmond Park stretched beyond the" | | 4 | "She checked her phone." | | 5 | "The screen died as she" | | 6 | "She thumbed the power button." | | 7 | "She pocketed the device." | | 8 | "Her breath plumed in silver" | | 9 | "Wildflowers bruised the darkness with" | | 10 | "Rory touched the pendant through" | | 11 | "The crimson gemstone throbbed against" | | 12 | "She had followed its pull" | | 13 | "The benefactor who'd slipped the" | | 14 | "It burned now." | | 15 | "It cooked her skin through" | | 16 | "Rory moved toward the center" | | 17 | "Her shadow stretched across the" | | 18 | "The shadow continued moving." | | 19 | "It stretched toward the standing" |
| | ratio | 0.907 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 31.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bruised the darkness with impossible color—bluebells and poppies and foxgloves that had no business blooming outside June, especially not in the Ric…" | | 1 | "The crimson gemstone throbbed against her palm, matching her pulse, then outracing it." | | 2 | "The benefactor who'd slipped the silver chain under her door hadn't included instructions, only the stone and a note that read: When it burns, find the grove." | | 3 | "The city had evacuated its noise, leaving a vacuum that rang with high-pitched silence." | | 4 | "They left pollen stains on her sleeves that glowed faintly, like crushed fireflies, burning phosphorescent holes in the fabric." | | 5 | "The oak trees leaned inward, branches knitting a canopy that blocked the moon, creating a dome of wood and leaf." | | 6 | "Composed of angles that made her eyes water when she tried to trace them, geometry that belonged to different physics." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |