Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXXJBM38EG0W2315VPX78Q

Run Details

Duration:
3m 49s
Cost:
$0.018249
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the gap in the hawthorn hedge. The Heartstone Pendant struck her collarbone with a slap of heat that burned through the Golden Empress polo shirt. She stumbled onto the grass, trainers sinking into soil that held too much give for late October. Richmond Park stretched beyond the boundary, but here between the ancient oak standing stones, the air wore a different viscosity. She checked her phone. Eleven-fifteen PM. The screen died as she thumbed it, battery draining from eighty percent to nothing in the space of a blink. She thumbed the power button. Dead weight in her palm. She pocketed the device. Her breath plumed in silver clouds, though the grove pressed humid fingers against her face. Wildflowers bruised the darkness with impossible color—bluebells and poppies and foxgloves that had no business blooming outside June, especially not in the Richmond brownfield. Rory touched the pendant through her uniform jacket. The crimson gemstone throbbed against her palm, matching her pulse, then outracing it. She had followed its pull here from the flat above Silas' bar, abandoning the dinner rush, abandoning the moped with its insulated boxes of kung pao chicken growing cold on the pavement. The benefactor who'd slipped the silver chain under her door hadn't included instructions, only the stone and a note that read: When it burns, find the grove. It burned now. It cooked her skin through the synthetic fabric. Rory moved toward the center of the clearing. Her shadow stretched across the wildflowers, elongated and thin. She stopped. The shadow continued moving. It stretched toward the standing stones, fingers of darkness reaching for the oak bark. She snapped her head around. The shadow snapped back to her feet, docile. False. The crescent scar on her left wrist ached. She rubbed the ridge of tissue, that childhood souvenir of broken glass and Cardiff hospital antiseptic. The ache deepened to a throb that matched the pendant's rhythm. She wasn't alone. The recognition crawled up her neck, separate from the October chill. London lay three hundred yards east—but no planes groaned overhead. No traffic hissed from the A3. The city had evacuated its noise, leaving a vacuum that rang with high-pitched silence. Rory turned in a slow circle. The standing stones marked the boundary, or so the note had implied. But the gaps between them seemed narrower than when she'd entered. The hawthorn gap had sealed itself with brambles that twisted like barbed wire, humming with subsonic vibration. "Laila." The whisper came from the flowers. Rory froze. "That's not my name." "Not yet." The grove breathed the words into her ear. She walked deeper. The pendant guided her, pulling the chain taut against her neck until the links bit into her skin. She passed between two stones. They smelled of copper and old rain. On the other side, the wildflowers grew taller, knee-high, then waist-high. They brushed against her delivery jacket with the persistence of grasping hands. She swatted them away. They left pollen stains on her sleeves that glowed faintly, like crushed fireflies, burning phosphorescent holes in the fabric. A sound cracked behind her. Not a twig. Something jointed popping back into place, wet and deliberate. She spun. The standing stones stood closer. She hadn't walked back. They had walked forward. The ancient oaks creaked, wood grinding against wood with the sound of teeth gnashing, though no wind stirred the leaves. The trunks breathed. She watched them expand and contract, bark rippling like muscle. The pendant's glow intensified. The deep crimson light leaked between her fingers, illuminating the grove in monochrome red. In that light, the wildflowers weren't flowers. They were digits, reaching. Rory stepped backward. Her heel struck stone. The boundary stone hadn't been there a moment ago. She pressed against it. The oak surface yielded. It expanded and contracted, warm and damp, a ribcage under bark. She jerked away. The scar on her wrist split open. Blood welled, black in the red light, and dripped onto the soil. The ground drank it. The earth gurgled. Whispers rose from the flowers. They spoke in the cadence of her mother's Welsh lullabies, but the words were teeth and thorns, clicking and tearing. Rory clamped her hands over her ears. The sound came from inside her skull, vibrating through her jaw. She looked at the standing stones. They formed a perfect circle now, no gaps, no exits. The grove had shrunk to the size of her flat above the bar, then smaller, compressing the air. The oak trees leaned inward, branches knitting a canopy that blocked the moon, creating a dome of wood and leaf. "Carter." The voice came from behind her left shoulder. She didn't turn. Couldn't. Her vertebrae locked. "Malphora." Something moved at the edge of the crimson light. Tall. Bent. Composed of angles that made her eyes water when she tried to trace them, geometry that belonged to different physics. It stepped between the wildflowers, and the flowers bowed away, creating a path. It stepped closer, and the pendant went cold. The heat vanished. The gemstone turned to ice against her chest, frost spiderwebbing across the silver chain, crystallizing against her throat. Rory's breath stopped. The thing didn't breathe at all. It simply occupied the space where the air had been, smelling of cold storage and verdigris and the bottom of ancient wells. Her watch ticked. She glanced at it. The hands spun backward, whirring like insect wings, blurring into a solid line. Three hours lost. Three minutes gained. Time in the grove moved differently, stretched like taffy or compressed like coal into diamond. Her hair brushed her shoulder. She hadn't moved her head. The strands shifted on their own, pulled toward the thing like iron filings to a magnet. The scar on her wrist burned. She covered it with her hand. Blood seeped through her fingers, hot and slick. The thing in the dark tilted its head. The motion created a sound like wet leather tearing, like a scalp separating from skull. Rory backed against the breathing stone. The bark softened behind her, becoming yielding, becoming membrane. She pushed forward, but the wildflowers had tangled her ankles in loops of stem and petal. They weren't plants anymore. They were chains, cinching tighter with every heartbeat. The pendant shattered. The silver chain snapped with a twang that cut the air. The crimson gemstone fell into the soil and was swallowed instantly, pulled under by roots that moved like tongues. Darkness rushed in, absolute and hungry. In the black, something opened its mouth wide enough to swallow the standing stones. The breath that washed over Rory's face smelled of bluebells and blood and her mother's perfume. She reached for the scar on her wrist. Her fingers found only smooth skin. The crescent mark had moved. It pulsed now on her throat, opening into a smile.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:27:40.795Z" 2/19/2026, 12:27:40 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"synthetic"
count1
4
word"throb"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"throbbed"
2"pulse"
3"synthetic"
4"throb"
5"chill"
6"silence"
7"whisper"
8"perfect"
9"shattered"
10"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences126
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1140
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1109
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Golden1
Empress1
October2
Park1
June1
Richmond2
Cardiff1
Welsh1
Rory10
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
places
0"Golden"
1"Park"
2"June"
3"Richmond"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed narrower than when she'd entered"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1140
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean40.71
std34.86
cv0.856
sampleLengths
0101
1123
211
351
435
53
687
71
86
96
102
118
1279
1365
1429
1557
167
1797
181
1915
201
2152
2252
2367
2443
2543
2669
2729
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"was swallowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
99.24% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences131
ratio0.015
matches
0"Wildflowers bruised the darkness with impossible color—bluebells and poppies and foxgloves that had no business blooming outside June, especially not in the Richmond brownfield."
1"London lay three hundred yards east—but no planes groaned overhead."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount179
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.0223463687150838
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.00558659217877095
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean8.7
std6.22
cv0.715
sampleLengths
09
119
217
320
44
52
620
75
85
94
1015
1124
128
1313
1432
1527
163
178
188
199
202
214
2214
235
248
251
268
2716
2811
293
3011
3110
326
3314
346
3512
3611
3717
381
396
402
414
422
438
443
4518
465
477
4811
4912
40.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.24427480916030533
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
ratio0
64.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences118
matches
0"She stumbled onto the grass,"
1"She checked her phone."
2"She thumbed the power button."
3"She pocketed the device."
4"Her breath plumed in silver"
5"She had followed its pull"
6"It burned now."
7"It cooked her skin through"
8"Her shadow stretched across the"
9"It stretched toward the standing"
10"She snapped her head around."
11"She rubbed the ridge of"
12"She wasn't alone."
13"She walked deeper."
14"She passed between two stones."
15"They smelled of copper and"
16"They brushed against her delivery"
17"She swatted them away."
18"They left pollen stains on"
19"She hadn't walked back."
ratio0.39
6.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount107
totalSentences118
matches
0"Rory pushed through the gap"
1"The Heartstone Pendant struck her"
2"She stumbled onto the grass,"
3"Richmond Park stretched beyond the"
4"She checked her phone."
5"The screen died as she"
6"She thumbed the power button."
7"She pocketed the device."
8"Her breath plumed in silver"
9"Wildflowers bruised the darkness with"
10"Rory touched the pendant through"
11"The crimson gemstone throbbed against"
12"She had followed its pull"
13"The benefactor who'd slipped the"
14"It burned now."
15"It cooked her skin through"
16"Rory moved toward the center"
17"Her shadow stretched across the"
18"The shadow continued moving."
19"It stretched toward the standing"
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
ratio0
31.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Wildflowers bruised the darkness with impossible color—bluebells and poppies and foxgloves that had no business blooming outside June, especially not in the Ric…"
1"The crimson gemstone throbbed against her palm, matching her pulse, then outracing it."
2"The benefactor who'd slipped the silver chain under her door hadn't included instructions, only the stone and a note that read: When it burns, find the grove."
3"The city had evacuated its noise, leaving a vacuum that rang with high-pitched silence."
4"They left pollen stains on her sleeves that glowed faintly, like crushed fireflies, burning phosphorescent holes in the fabric."
5"The oak trees leaned inward, branches knitting a canopy that blocked the moon, creating a dome of wood and leaf."
6"Composed of angles that made her eyes water when she tried to trace them, geometry that belonged to different physics."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.1248%