Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXXJNS22W0PPRGPCYD384B

Run Details

Duration:
1m 23s
Cost:
$0.001599
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered against the glass awning above the entrance, turning the cobblestones outside into slick black mirrors. Rory pulled the collar of her jacket tighter, tucking her chin down against the chill. The heavy brass handle of the front door groaned under her weight as she pushed inside, the bell above it chiming a sharp, discordant note that cut through the low murmur of conversation. The Raven’s Nest smelled the same as it always had—oak polish, stale tobacco, and the distinct, sharp aroma of a gin press. The green neon sign casting a flickering glow near the door pulsed in rhythm with the city’s heartbeat outside. Rory paused, shaking a damp umbrella on the mat, and scanned the room. She was twenty minutes late, and Yu-Fei wouldn’t care about the rain, but she knew better than to walk in looking disheveled. The room was a cavern of dark mahogany walls hung with old maps of London and black-and-white photographs that seemed to stare back from the gloom. She weaved through the knot of smoke in the center of the bar, stepping over the legs of patrons lost in the amber glow of their pints. A figure sat in the corner booth near the back wall. He was nursing a single scotch, his grey-streaked auburn hair pulled back loosely from his face, revealing a beard that had thickened with age. The signet ring on his right hand caught the dim light, a bright flash of silver. Silas. Rory’s steps faltered. She knew him. She knew his silhouette better than she knew the back of her own hand. He looked up then, his hazel eyes moving over her rain-slicked hair, the box of delivery food forgotten in her grip. Recognition dawned in the crinkles at the corners of his eyes, followed by a slow, heavy weight that settled into the lines of his forehead. He didn’t wave. He didn’t smile. He simply set the glass down with a soft *thud* and watched her cross the distance. "You look taller than I remember," Silas said, his voice a gravelly baritone that seemed to resonate in the empty space between them. "I take the bus," Rory replied, stepping into the booth opposite him. "And I stopped growing in the ninth grade." "Stubborn." "Always." Silas reached for the bottle, pouring a fresh measure with a practiced hand. The amber liquid hissed into the crystal glass. He slid it across the wood toward her. "Yu-Fei says hello. She sends her regards." "Tell her I’m keeping the tips this week." "I will." He leaned back, his leg shifting slightly in a way that spoke of a long ago pain finally settling in. " Cardiff." "Sort of." "You didn't come to the funeral." Rory’s fingers tightened around the cool condensation on her glass. The delivery box sat on the seat next to her, the heat from the curry inside radiating through the cardboard. "I was in Dublin." "Voluntarily?" "I needed a change of air." A silence stretched between them, thick and heavy, filled only by the distant sizzle of the kitchen in the back and the murmur of a poker game on the other side of the bar. Rory looked down at the curry. It was ordinary. It was the mundane she had fled towards. But looking at Silas, the memory of the past felt like a fracture in the pavement she was walking on. "You were the one who told me to run," Silas said suddenly, his gaze dropping to the box in her hand. "Years ago. When you showed up at my door at two in the morning, soaking wet and refusing to go back to Brendan’s." He paused, his thumb tracing the rim of his own glass. "You asked if I had a ride to London. I told you to take the Tube, but I walked you to the station." Rory exhaled, a long, shuddering breath that felt like it cracked her ribs. "I didn't want to go to Cardiff." "I know." "But I didn't want you to get dragged into it, either." Rory’s voice dropped. "I knew what he was capable of." Silas snorted softly. "People rarely believe their friends about those things until it’s too late. They think they can love the crazy out of a person." "It took longer than I thought." "Life usually does." Rory lifted the glass to her lips. The whiskey burned, a sharp, clean heat that cut through the melancholy fog in her chest. She didn't drink often. Not anymore. Not since Evan took it away. But tonight, the liquid warmth was something she needed. "You've changed, Rory." The statement hung in the air, unasked but undeniable. It wasn't about the hair or the height, though he had noticed those too. It was the way her shoulders sat—hunched just a fraction, defensive even when she was sitting still. The way her eyes darted around the room, checking exits before anyone else noticed the people around them. "I had to," she said, not looking at him. "The old Rory wouldn't survive this city." "The old Rory had her father’s temper and her mother’s patience." Silas leaned forward, resting his elbows on the table, his voice dropping an octave. "She was smart. But she had trust issues, too. She let people in too easy, didn't she?" Rory flinched. "Don't." "Stop me if you don't want to hear it." She remained silent, staring into the swirl of amber liquid. "She told me once she wanted to be a lawyer," Silas continued, his tone conversational, almost casual, but the gaze he directed at her was devastatingly sharp. "Save the world one petition at a time. I asked her why she wanted to take the weight of the world on her shoulders." He tilted his head, studying the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist that peeked out from the cuff of her jacket. "I told her she should just live in the moment. Be a kid for a bit longer." Rory’s hand curled into a fist under the table. "I was a kid, Silas. I was just a kid." "You’re still here." He gestured vaguely with his glass toward the back of the bar, toward the bookshelf that led to the private room. "There’s a life waiting for you up there. The spare room. The view. I could fix the door." "It's fine where I am." "Is it?" Silas fixed her with a hard look. "You’re living over a bar you barely remember, working double shifts on a bike in the rain because you’re terrified to go home. Terrified to sleep. Terrified that if you close your eyes, you’ll see him." Rory gripped the edge of the table until her knuckles turned white. The pulse in her temple hammered. She wanted to shout that she was fine, that she had her job, that she had her freedom. She wanted to tell him that leaving was the only choice she had ever made for herself. But as she looked at the ring on Silas’s finger—the symbol of a life she had never touched—and the maps on the walls that charted the borders of nations she had never crossed, the lie died in her throat. "You don't know anything about me anymore," she whispered. "I know that you’re hurting," Silas countered softly. "And I know that you’re brave. You ran from a monster and you didn't look back. That takes more courage than I ever had. But bravery isn't a shield, Rory. Sometimes it just means you get tired of standing in the rain." The delivery box rustled. Rory finally looked down at it. The curry had gone cold. The purpose of her visit, the excuse she had built, felt trivial in the face of this fragile, shattering moment. She pulled the box toward her, but instead of taking a burger, she pushed it to the side. She reached into her pocket and pulled out her keys, the metal jingling softly. She placed them on the table, right next to Silas’s whiskey glass. "I'm not moving in tonight," she said, her voice steady, her eyes finally meeting his. "But I won't be back tomorrow." "Rory—" "Not the apartment upstairs. I don't want it right now." She stood up, brushing the wrinkles from her jeans. "I’m going for a walk. Just for a bit." Silas didn't try to stop her. He simply looked at the keys, then back up at her. The tension in his shoulders seemed to dissolve, replaced by a rare, grandfatherly approval. "Good for you," he said. He raised his glass in a mock salute. "Go clear your head. The rain’s let up." Rory nodded, grabbing her bike helmet from the hook by the door. She paused at the threshold, the cool night air rushing in to meet her. "You're right about one thing," she said. "I'm tired." She pushed the door open, the bell chiming cheerfully behind her. She stepped out into the street, the lights of the city buzzing overhead, and began to walk away from the light, toward the dark, carrying the weight of her history like a backpack full of stones. It was heavy, but she was the one carrying it.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:27:41.118Z" 2/19/2026, 12:27:41 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.15% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"He leaned back [back]"
1"Silas said suddenly [suddenly]"
2"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
3"Silas countered softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.346
leniency0.692
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.154
80.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1543
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count3
highlights
0"loosely"
1"slightly"
2"suddenly"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1543
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"weight"
count4
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"crystal"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"weight"
2"pulsed"
3"scanned"
4"gloom"
5"crystal"
6"silence"
7"tracing"
8"warmth"
9"pulse"
10"tension"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
58.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"try to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1533
ratio0.001
matches
0"thud"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1082
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Yu-Fei1
London1
Rory14
Silas13
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Evan"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.853
windowScore0.833
39.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"photographs that seemed to stare back from the gloom"
1"felt like a fracture in the pavement sh"
2"felt like it cracked her ribs"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1533
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"shout that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean28.92
std25.08
cv0.867
sampleLengths
065
176
253
351
41
566
622
723
820
91
101
1136
128
1324
142
156
1634
171
186
1971
2078
2120
222
2321
2426
256
263
2744
283
2958
3016
3142
323
339
3410
3590
3619
3742
385
3945
4092
419
4250
4335
4444
4521
461
4728
4831
4921
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
87.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs177
matches
0"was nursing"
1"was walking"
2"was sitting"
70.83% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences119
ratio0.025
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled the same as it always had—oak polish, stale tobacco, and the distinct, sharp aroma of a gin press."
1"It was the way her shoulders sat—hunched just a fraction, defensive even when she was sitting still."
2"But as she looked at the ring on Silas’s finger—the symbol of a life she had never touched—and the maps on the walls that charted the borders of nations she had never crossed, the lie died in her throat."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1092
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03388278388278388
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.0173992673992674
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean12.88
std9.62
cv0.747
sampleLengths
017
115
233
322
419
513
622
726
827
911
1024
1116
121
133
143
1514
1621
1725
183
193
2016
2123
2212
238
241
251
2613
278
288
297
308
3122
322
332
346
3510
3620
374
381
396
4034
416
423
438
4420
4521
4634
4723
4813
497
36.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.2605042016806723
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences79
matches
0"She was twenty minutes late,"
1"She weaved through the knot"
2"He was nursing a single"
3"She knew him."
4"She knew his silhouette better"
5"He looked up then, his"
6"He didn’t wave."
7"He didn’t smile."
8"He simply set the glass"
9"He slid it across the"
10"He leaned back, his leg"
11"It was ordinary."
12"It was the mundane she"
13"He paused, his thumb tracing"
14"She didn't drink often."
15"It wasn't about the hair"
16"It was the way her"
17"she said, not looking at"
18"She remained silent, staring into"
19"He tilted his head, studying"
ratio0.43
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences79
matches
0"Rory pulled the collar of"
1"The heavy brass handle of"
2"The Raven’s Nest smelled the"
3"The green neon sign casting"
4"Rory paused, shaking a damp"
5"She was twenty minutes late,"
6"The room was a cavern"
7"She weaved through the knot"
8"A figure sat in the"
9"He was nursing a single"
10"The signet ring on his"
11"Rory’s steps faltered."
12"She knew him."
13"She knew his silhouette better"
14"He looked up then, his"
15"Recognition dawned in the crinkles"
16"He didn’t wave."
17"He didn’t smile."
18"He simply set the glass"
19"Silas said, his voice a"
ratio0.937
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The room was a cavern of dark mahogany walls hung with old maps of London and black-and-white photographs that seemed to stare back from the gloom."
1"He was nursing a single scotch, his grey-streaked auburn hair pulled back loosely from his face, revealing a beard that had thickened with age."
2"Recognition dawned in the crinkles at the corners of his eyes, followed by a slow, heavy weight that settled into the lines of his forehead."
3"Rory exhaled, a long, shuddering breath that felt like it cracked her ribs."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Silas said suddenly, his gaze dropping to the box in her hand"
1"He paused, his thumb tracing the rim of his own glass"
2"she said, not looking at him"
3"she said, her voice steady, her eyes finally meeting his"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas continued (continue)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.173
leniency0.346
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.077
71.8277%