| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.583 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1130 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.35% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1130 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "resonated" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "mosaic" | | 6 | "crystal" | | 7 | "fractured" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "fragmented" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "electric" | | 13 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1114 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 929 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.94 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 5 | | Aurora | 18 | | Isolde | 10 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Half-Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.531 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 34.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if acknowledging her presence" | | 1 | "something between music and shattering glass" | | 2 | "something like sunset, though she couldn't d" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 6 | | per1kWords | 5.386 | | wordCount | 1114 | | matches | | 0 | "not temperature exactly, but something deeper, as though reality itself bent around her s" | | 1 | "not arranged by human hands, but grown" | | 2 | "Not the shimmer of heat, but something else" | | 3 | "Not threatening, not yet, but present" | | 4 | "not yet, but present" | | 5 | "not the standing stones that marked the boundary, but seven pillars of black rock streaked with silver, arranged i" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 30.94 | | std | 21.57 | | cv | 0.697 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 76 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 72 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 66 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 54 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 52 | | 31 | 54 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 48 | | 34 | 51 | | 35 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 164 | | matches | | 0 | "was wearing" | | 1 | "were marking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.115 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pushed through a veil of hanging willow branches, and the air shifted—not temperature exactly, but something deeper, as though reality itself bent around her skin." | | 1 | "The sky burned amber-warm, though no sun hung in it—the light radiated from everywhere and nowhere at once." | | 2 | "Aurora's fingers found the Fae-Forged blade at her hip—the moonsilver dagger Isolde had pressed into her hands outside the park." | | 3 | "Soft grass gave way to a mosaic of stones—not arranged by human hands, but grown that way, as though ancient magic had convinced the earth to form a path." | | 4 | "Its water moved wrong—flowing upward in places, spiraling in slow whirlpools that defied gravity." | | 5 | "The wildflowers parted to reveal a grove within the grove—massive ancient oaks, their trunks wider than a car, their roots rising above the ground like wooden arthritic fingers." | | 6 | "It pulsed with warmth—faint but unmistakable." | | 7 | "A sound drifted across the clearing—something between music and shattering glass." | | 8 | "The crystal-laced stones beneath their feet glowed brighter with each step, and Aurora realized they were marking a trail—recording her passage." | | 9 | "She could taste it now—sweet like honey, metallic like blood, electric like the moment before a thunderstorm breaks." | | 10 | "At its center stood a stone circle—not the standing stones that marked the boundary, but seven pillars of black rock streaked with silver, arranged in a perfect formation." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 945 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.0328042328042328 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009523809523809525 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 11.6 | | std | 6.94 | | cv | 0.598 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 79.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 87.72% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, they settled over Aurora" | | 1 | "Sometimes ignorance felt safer than" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Her pale lavender eyes reflected" | | 1 | "She pocketed it." | | 2 | "She pushed the feeling aside" | | 3 | "Its water moved wrong—flowing upward" | | 4 | "She didn't ask for clarification." | | 5 | "They circled the stream, and" | | 6 | "She didn't remember reaching for" | | 7 | "It pulsed with warmth—faint but" | | 8 | "Her breath came faster." | | 9 | "They turned deeper into the" | | 10 | "She could taste it now—sweet" | | 11 | "They emerged into another clearing," |
| | ratio | 0.158 | |
| 78.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora pushed through a veil" | | 2 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 3 | "Isolde glided forward without disturbing" | | 4 | "The boundary dissolved as they" | | 5 | "The grove opened before them," | | 6 | "Nothing prepared you for this." | | 7 | "The sky burned amber-warm, though" | | 8 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion," | | 9 | "Blues that tasted sweet." | | 10 | "Purples that hummed at frequencies" | | 11 | "The flora didn't obey natural" | | 12 | "Mushrooms tall as a person" | | 13 | "Each step she took released" | | 14 | "Nyx's form grew more distinct" | | 15 | "A fact stated as simply" | | 16 | "Her pale lavender eyes reflected" | | 17 | "Aurora checked her phone." | | 18 | "The screen's date flickered once," | | 19 | "She pocketed it." |
| | ratio | 0.763 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pushed through a veil of hanging willow branches, and the air shifted—not temperature exactly, but something deeper, as though reality itself bent around…" | | 1 | "Behind her, Nyx moved between the shadows cast by dying afternoon light, their form flickering at the edges of perception." | | 2 | "Flowering vines wound up impossibly thin silver birches that shouldn't have existed in Richmond Park." | | 3 | "Cold against her palm, it thrummed with a pulse that matched her heartbeat." | | 4 | "Soft grass gave way to a mosaic of stones—not arranged by human hands, but grown that way, as though ancient magic had convinced the earth to form a path." | | 5 | "Where Aurora stepped, those crystals brightened momentarily, as if acknowledging her presence." | | 6 | "Its water moved wrong—flowing upward in places, spiraling in slow whirlpools that defied gravity." | | 7 | "At its center stood a stone circle—not the standing stones that marked the boundary, but seven pillars of black rock streaked with silver, arranged in a perfect…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde observed (observe)" | | 2 | "Nyx advised (advise)" | | 3 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |