Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXXRNZDH6NFTKXD0CRE3FW

Run Details

Duration:
42.3s
Cost:
$0.102675

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Quinn's breath misted in the cold November air as she pressed her back against the brick wall of a Camden alleyway. Rain hammered the pavement, turning the narrow passage into a river of black water that soaked through her boots. Twenty meters ahead, her suspect—a gaunt man in a torn peacoat—glanced over his shoulder before ducking around the corner. She pushed off the wall and followed, her footsteps splashing through puddles that reflected the amber streetlights above. Three weeks of surveillance on the Raven's Nest had finally paid off. The man had emerged from the bar's back entrance carrying a leather satchel that reeked of something chemical, something wrong. When he'd spotted her unmarked car, he'd bolted. "Control, this is Quinn." She spoke into her radio as she ran. "In foot pursuit of IC1 male, heading east on Inverness Street toward Camden High Street." Static crackled back. The rain was interfering with the signal. The suspect vaulted over a chain-link fence into a construction site. Quinn followed, her hands scraping against the wet metal as she hauled herself over. She landed hard on the other side, mud splattering up her trousers. The man was already sprinting across the torn-up ground, weaving between excavators and concrete barriers. A flash of lightning illuminated the site, throwing skeletal shadows from the construction equipment. In that split second of brightness, Quinn saw where he was headed—a boarded-up entrance to what looked like an old Tube station, the boards recently pried loose. "Don't go down there," she muttered, but the suspect disappeared through the gap. Quinn reached the entrance and stopped. The wooden boards had been pulled back to reveal a descending staircase, its depths swallowed by darkness. A musty smell wafted up, mixed with something else—incense, herbs, and that same chemical tang from the satchel. She tried her radio again. "Control, suspect has entered abandoned Tube access at—" She checked the faded sign above the entrance. "Camden Deep Level Shelter. Requesting backup." Only static answered. Rain drummed on the corrugated metal overhang above the entrance. Quinn touched the worn leather watch on her wrist, a habit when making decisions. Morris would have charged in without hesitation. Morris would have— She cut off the thought and drew her torch, its beam cutting through the darkness below. The stairs were slick with moisture and something that might have been moss. Or mold. Graffiti covered the walls, but underneath the modern tags, she could make out older symbols carved into the tile—circles, triangles, characters from no alphabet she recognized. A distant sound echoed up from below. Voices. Many voices. Quinn descended, her free hand trailing along the wall for balance. The temperature dropped with each step, and her breath came out in visible puffs despite the exertion of the chase. After what felt like a hundred steps, the staircase opened into a wider tunnel. She swept her torch across the space. The platform of an old Tube station stretched before her, but it had been transformed. Makeshift stalls lined the tracks where trains once ran. Lanterns hung from ropes strung across the arched ceiling, casting dancing shadows. People—if they were people—moved between the stalls, examining wares spread on moth-eaten carpets and rickety tables. The Veil Market. She'd heard whispers of it during her investigation, dismissed them as criminal folklore. But here it was, a bazaar of the impossible. Her suspect was halfway across the platform, pushing through the crowd. Quinn started after him, then stopped. Without backup, without knowing the terrain or the players, pursuing him into this crowd would be suicide. But if she waited for reinforcement that might never come, she'd lose him. A woman at the nearest stall turned toward her, and Quinn's blood went cold. The woman's eyes were solid black, no whites, no pupils. She smiled, revealing teeth filed to points. "Copper in the Market," the woman called out in a sing-song voice. "Copper in the Market without a token." Heads turned. Conversations died. The cheerful chaos of commerce ground to a halt as dozens of eyes—human and otherwise—fixed on Quinn. The suspect had stopped running. He stood at the far end of the platform, watching her with a smile that didn't reach his eyes. He'd led her here. This wasn't a chase—it was a trap. "You need an invitation to shop here, Detective," a man said, stepping out from behind a stall selling bottled lights. Actual lights, trapped in glass like fireflies. "A bone token, specifically." Quinn's hand moved to her ASP baton. "I'm Metropolitan Police. This is—" "This is nowhere," the man interrupted. "You have no authority in nowhere." The crowd began to close in, not threatening exactly, but curious. Like predators deciding if prey was worth the effort. Quinn's radio crackled with static, useless this far underground. Her mobile would be the same.
total_cost0.102675

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount820
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount820
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"depths"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"dancing"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"depths"
2"charged"
3"echoed"
4"dancing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood went cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords805
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
74.76% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount731
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn11
November1
Camden1
Raven1
Nest1
Static1
Tube2
Veil1
Market1
Heads1
Actual1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Static"
4"Heads"
5"Actual"
places(empty)
globalScore0.748
windowScore0.833
59.09% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like an old Tube station, the boar"
1"felt like a hundred steps, the staircas"
75.78% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.242
wordCount805
matches
0"not threatening exactly, but curious"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean32.2
std16.91
cv0.525
sampleLengths
060
158
227
310
452
541
613
741
827
93
1034
1157
1210
1345
1459
1525
1647
1731
1819
1921
2035
2131
2212
2312
2435
89.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences68
matches
0"was headed"
1"been pulled"
2"been transformed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs128
matches
0"was interfering"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences74
ratio0.108
matches
0"Twenty meters ahead, her suspect—a gaunt man in a torn peacoat—glanced over his shoulder before ducking around the corner."
1"In that split second of brightness, Quinn saw where he was headed—a boarded-up entrance to what looked like an old Tube station, the boards recently pried loose."
2"A musty smell wafted up, mixed with something else—incense, herbs, and that same chemical tang from the satchel."
3"Morris would have—"
4"Graffiti covered the walls, but underneath the modern tags, she could make out older symbols carved into the tile—circles, triangles, characters from no alphabet she recognized."
5"People—if they were people—moved between the stalls, examining wares spread on moth-eaten carpets and rickety tables."
6"The cheerful chaos of commerce ground to a halt as dozens of eyes—human and otherwise—fixed on Quinn."
7"This wasn't a chase—it was a trap."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount746
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.01742627345844504
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005361930294906166
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean10.88
std5.97
cv0.549
sampleLengths
022
119
219
318
412
520
68
712
815
93
107
1111
1214
1312
1415
1514
1627
1713
186
1917
2018
215
2216
236
243
2510
2614
277
283
2916
3013
312
3226
337
341
352
3611
3720
3814
397
4015
419
4212
4316
443
4513
469
4711
486
4917
74.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4864864864864865
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners36
52.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"Only static answered."
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences63
matches
0"She pushed off the wall"
1"She spoke into her radio"
2"She landed hard on the"
3"she muttered, but the suspect"
4"She tried her radio again."
5"She checked the faded sign"
6"She cut off the thought"
7"She swept her torch across"
8"She'd heard whispers of it"
9"Her suspect was halfway across"
10"She smiled, revealing teeth filed"
11"He stood at the far"
12"He'd led her here."
13"Her mobile would be the"
ratio0.222
63.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences63
matches
0"Detective Quinn's breath misted in"
1"She pushed off the wall"
2"The man had emerged from"
3"She spoke into her radio"
4"Static crackled back."
5"The rain was interfering with"
6"The suspect vaulted over a"
7"Quinn followed, her hands scraping"
8"She landed hard on the"
9"The man was already sprinting"
10"A flash of lightning illuminated"
11"she muttered, but the suspect"
12"Quinn reached the entrance and"
13"The wooden boards had been"
14"A musty smell wafted up,"
15"She tried her radio again."
16"She checked the faded sign"
17"Rain drummed on the corrugated"
18"Quinn touched the worn leather"
19"Morris would have charged in"
ratio0.794
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She pushed off the wall and followed, her footsteps splashing through puddles that reflected the amber streetlights above."
1"The man had emerged from the bar's back entrance carrying a leather satchel that reeked of something chemical, something wrong."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She spoke (speak)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"the man interrupted (interrupt)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.5
81.9777%