| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.94% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1417 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 15.31% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1417 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "tapestry" | | 1 | "aftermath" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "chaotic" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "dancing" | | 11 | "looming" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "trembled" | | 15 | "glistening" | | 16 | "vibrated" | | 17 | "stomach" | | 18 | "stark" | | 19 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "knuckles turned white" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 142 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 147 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1406 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | 0 | "Thrum-thrum-thrum." | | 1 | "...Laila..." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1366 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.95 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 2 | | Rory | 13 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 2 | | Isolde | 1 | | London | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Richmond | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 71.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if drinking in the pale moonlight" | | 1 | "sounded like a gunshot in the silence" | | 2 | "looked like looming giants" |
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| 57.75% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.422 | | wordCount | 1406 | | matches | | 0 | "not from the creature, but from the trees themselves" | | 1 | "Not empty, but waiting" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 27.04 | | std | 18 | | cv | 0.666 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 76 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 71 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 60 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 47 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 41 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 30 | | 44 | 34 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 42 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 226 | | matches | | 0 | "were rotating" | | 1 | "was pulling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 147 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here tasted different—heavier, metallic, like the aftermath of a summer storm." | | 1 | "It wasn’t the warmth of comfort; it was the heat of a fever." | | 2 | "The ambient noise of London—the distant hum of traffic, the sirens, the constant drone of the city—severed abruptly." | | 3 | "Not by much—just inches—but the geometry of the clearing had changed." | | 4 | "She could smell it now—ozone and rotting earth." | | 5 | "The light wasn't just shining outward; it was pulling inward." | | 6 | "A shriek split the air—not from the creature, but from the trees themselves." | | 7 | "The air rushed back into her lungs—cold, city air, smelling of exhaust and wet pavement." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1377 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "different—heavier, metallic, like" | | 1 | "faint, sickly inner light." |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.030501089324618737 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008714596949891068 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 147 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 147 | | mean | 9.56 | | std | 6.43 | | cv | 0.672 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 46.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.3401360544217687 | | totalSentences | 147 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the interlocking branches of" | | 1 | "Soft, wet, rhythmic." | | 2 | "Then, a rustle." | | 3 | "Directly behind her." | | 4 | "Always a logic to the" | | 5 | "Slowly, imperceptibly, the heads of" | | 6 | "Just a smooth, pale surface" | | 7 | "Just an empty field leading" |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 77.14% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 1 | "She shouldn’t be here." | | 2 | "She hesitated, fingers brushing the" | | 3 | "It wasn’t the warmth of" | | 4 | "she muttered to the empty" | | 5 | "Her voice sounded flat, swallowed" | | 6 | "She crossed the threshold." | | 7 | "They bloomed with a vitality" | | 8 | "They grew too close together," | | 9 | "She checked her watch." | | 10 | "She scanned the periphery of" | | 11 | "She turned back to the" | | 12 | "She stared hard, counting the" | | 13 | "She took a step back." | | 14 | "She whipped around, fists raised" | | 15 | "She cursed under her breath" | | 16 | "She hadn’t heard it in" | | 17 | "she said, her voice steady" | | 18 | "She turned toward the boundary" | | 19 | "She turned in a slow" |
| | ratio | 0.357 | |
| 51.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 103 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park dissolved into a" | | 1 | "The air here tasted different—heavier," | | 2 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 3 | "She shouldn’t be here." | | 4 | "Logic screamed that wandering into" | | 5 | "A steady, insistent thrum that" | | 6 | "Rory stepped over a gnarled" | | 7 | "The boundary line." | | 8 | "Legend claimed these trees marked" | | 9 | "She hesitated, fingers brushing the" | | 10 | "The crimson gemstone nestled within," | | 11 | "It wasn’t the warmth of" | | 12 | "she muttered to the empty" | | 13 | "Her voice sounded flat, swallowed" | | 14 | "She crossed the threshold." | | 15 | "The shift in atmosphere hit" | | 16 | "The ambient noise of London—the" | | 17 | "Silence rushed in to fill" | | 18 | "Rory crouched, running a hand" | | 19 | "Poppies, bluebells, and things she" |
| | ratio | 0.817 | |
| 39.68% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "If she couldn't find the" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 37.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her jacket tighter around her chest, the thin fabric doing little to ward off the chill that seeped through her jeans and settled deep in her marrow." | | 1 | "A steady, insistent thrum that dragged her away from the safety of the main roads and toward the old oak standing stones." | | 2 | "Rory stepped over a gnarled root that resembled a skeletal hand clutching at the earth." | | 3 | "They bloomed with a vitality that defied the season, their petals opening wide as if drinking in the pale moonlight." | | 4 | "They grew too close together, fighting for space, their stems intertwining in a knot that looked less like nature and more like a tangled barricade." | | 5 | "She scanned the periphery of her vision, searching for the tell-tale shape of a person crouching in the undergrowth." | | 6 | "Just the interlocking branches of the oaks, twisting together to form a canopy that blotted out the stars." | | 7 | "The trees leaned inward, their branches lowering, narrowing the sky." | | 8 | "Slowly, imperceptibly, the heads of the flowers were rotating on their stems, tracking her." | | 9 | "Its limbs were too long, the joints bending in ways that made her stomach turn." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice steady even as her hands trembled" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Rory snarled (snarl)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |