Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXY0CATN8A2P1RZ7RYH2P0

Run Details

Duration:
41.9s
Cost:
$0.009472
Provider:
Venice

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Richmond Park dissolved into a bruised tapestry of shadows and ancient bark as Rory pushed deeper into the thicket. The air here tasted different—heavier, metallic, like the aftermath of a summer storm. She pulled her jacket tighter around her chest, the thin fabric doing little to ward off the chill that seeped through her jeans and settled deep in her marrow. She shouldn’t be here. Not tonight. Logic screamed that wandering into a secluded pocket of the park after midnight was the epitome of stupidity, yet the Heartstone Pendant hanging against her sternum had been burning a rhythm into her skin for the last hour. A steady, insistent thrum that dragged her away from the safety of the main roads and toward the old oak standing stones. Rory stepped over a gnarled root that resembled a skeletal hand clutching at the earth. The boundary line. Legend claimed these trees marked the edge of Isolde’s grove, a place where the fabric of the world wore thin. She hesitated, fingers brushing the cool silver of the chain. The crimson gemstone nestled within, usually dormant, now glowed with a faint, sickly inner light. It wasn’t the warmth of comfort; it was the heat of a fever. "Just a delivery run," she muttered to the empty darkness. "Go in, check the coordinates, get out." Her voice sounded flat, swallowed instantly by the towering oaks. She crossed the threshold. The shift in atmosphere hit her like a physical blow. The ambient noise of London—the distant hum of traffic, the sirens, the constant drone of the city—severed abruptly. Silence rushed in to fill the void, thick and suffocating. Rory crouched, running a hand over the ground. Wildflowers. Poppies, bluebells, and things she couldn’t name carpeted the clearing in vibrant, chaotic colour. They bloomed with a vitality that defied the season, their petals opening wide as if drinking in the pale moonlight. Beautiful, but wrong. They grew too close together, fighting for space, their stems intertwining in a knot that looked less like nature and more like a tangled barricade. She checked her watch. The second hand stuttered, jerking between ticks before freezing entirely. Great. A twig snapped to her left. Rory spun around, heartbeat kicking up a notch. "Eva?" No answer. The bushes stood still, their leaves motionless in the windless air. She scanned the periphery of her vision, searching for the tell-tale shape of a person crouching in the undergrowth. Nothing. Just the interlocking branches of the oaks, twisting together to form a canopy that blotted out the stars. She turned back to the centre of the grove, and her breath caught. The wildflowers had shifted. Not by much—just inches—but the geometry of the clearing had changed. The patch of red poppies that had been near her boot was now nearer the stone circle. She stared hard, counting the petals, trying to map the pattern in her mind. Had she misremembered? Sleep deprivation played tricks on the brain, twisting memories like taffy. She took a step back. The crunch of dry leaves underfoot sounded like a gunshot in the silence. Another sound. Soft, wet, rhythmic. Like bare feet padding on damp moss. Rory narrowed her eyes, focusing on the darkness between two massive stones. "I know someone is there." Silence again. Then, a rustle. Directly behind her. She whipped around, fists raised in a defensive stance, but the space was empty. The air shimmered slightly, a heat haze rising from the ground despite the freezing temperature. The pendant against her chest flared hot, searing her skin. She cursed under her breath and unclipped the chain, holding the Heartstone out like a talisman. The crimson light cast long, dancing shadows across the grass, distorting the shape of the trees until they looked like looming giants. The stone pulsed faster. *Thrum-thrum-thrum.* A whisper brushed against her ear, too close to be the wind. *...Laila...* Rory froze. That name. She hadn’t heard it in years, not since she left Cardiff. Not since Evan. "I don't know who you are," she said, her voice steady even as her hands trembled. "But I'm leaving." She turned toward the boundary stones. The path she had taken was gone. Where the gnarled root had marked the entrance, thick brambles now formed an impenetrable wall, thorns glistening with a dark, viscous liquid. Panic, cold and sharp, pricked at the back of her neck. She turned in a slow circle. The grove felt smaller. The trees leaned inward, their branches lowering, narrowing the sky. The sound of breathing came from everywhere at once. A low, guttural inhale and exhale that vibrated in her teeth. Rory gripped the Heartstone until her knuckles turned white. She needed to think. There was always a way out. Always a logic to the chaos, even if it was buried under layers of magic and madness. "Time moves differently," she whispered, reciting the lore she’d half-read in old texts. "An hour inside can be minutes outside. Or days." If she couldn't find the exit, she had to wait it out. Or make her own. She scanned the ground again. The wildflowers. They were all turning. Slowly, imperceptibly, the heads of the flowers were rotating on their stems, tracking her. Every single one of them pointed toward the centre of the grove. Toward her. A mound of earth near the largest stone shifted. Rory took a step back, her heel catching on a exposed root. She stumbled, catching herself before she hit the ground. From the darkness beneath the oak, something slid forward. It wasn't a person. It was a shape, a coalescence of shadow and twig, roughly humanoid but elongated. Its limbs were too long, the joints bending in ways that made her stomach turn. It moved without sound, gliding over the flowers that crushed instantly beneath its mass. Rory scrambled backward, keeping her eyes fixed on the entity. The Heartstone in her hand blazed crimson, casting the creature in stark relief. It had no face. Just a smooth, pale surface where eyes and a mouth should be. She bumped into something hard and cold behind her. Another standing stone. She was trapped against the rock. The thing stopped. It tilted its head, listening. Rory held her breath. She could smell it now—ozone and rotting earth. The pendant’s heat became unbearable. She looked down at the stone in her palm. The light wasn't just shining outward; it was pulling inward. The gemstone seemed to be a black hole dragging the light from the grove into its centre. The creature took a step forward. It raised a hand, the fingers stretching, lengthening into sharp, wooden spines. "Back off," Rory snarled, swinging the chain. The pendant lashed out, the crimson gem grazing the creature's limb. A shriek split the air—not from the creature, but from the trees themselves. The wood groaned and cracked as if in pain. The shadow-thing recoiled, its featureless face contorting. Rory didn't wait to see if it would recover. She bolted toward the thicket of brambles that blocked the entrance. She had no weapon, no tools, just adrenaline and desperation. She hit the wall of thorns hard, brambles tearing at her jacket and scraping her skin. She ignored the sting, the sharp thorns digging into her palms, and clawed her way through the foliage. The breathing sound grew louder, turning into a roar of wind. She threw her weight against a particularly dense patch, felt branches snap, and tumbled forward onto the damp grass of Richmond Park. The air rushed back into her lungs—cold, city air, smelling of exhaust and wet pavement. She gasped, rolling onto her back and staring up at the sky. The moon was there. The stars. Normal. Quiet. She scrambled to her feet, looking back at where she had fallen. The oak trees stood tall and menacing in the distance, but there was no grove. No glowing flowers. No wall of brambles. Just an empty field leading to the woods. Rory looked down at her hand. The silver chain lay tangled in her fingers, the Heartstone Pendant dark and cold. On the back of her hand, a thin scratch welled with blood, matching the crescent scar on her left wrist. She looked at the woods again. The silence felt different now. Not empty, but waiting. She turned and ran toward the distant streetlights, not looking back until the neon glow of a sign washed over her, chasing the shadows away.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1417
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1417
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"tapestry"
count1
1
word"aftermath"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"silence"
count4
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count2
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"searing"
count1
10
word"dancing"
count1
11
word"looming"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"trembled"
count1
15
word"glistening"
count1
16
word"vibrated"
count1
17
word"stomach"
count1
18
word"stark"
count1
19
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"tapestry"
1"aftermath"
2"chill"
3"warmth"
4"silence"
5"chaotic"
6"scanned"
7"rhythmic"
8"shimmered"
9"searing"
10"dancing"
11"looming"
12"pulsed"
13"whisper"
14"trembled"
15"glistening"
16"vibrated"
17"stomach"
18"stark"
19"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences142
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1406
ratio0.001
matches
0"Thrum-thrum-thrum."
1"...Laila..."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1366
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park2
Rory13
Heartstone5
Pendant2
Isolde1
London1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Richmond2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
3"Isolde"
4"Evan"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Richmond"
globalScore1
windowScore1
71.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences95
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if drinking in the pale moonlight"
1"sounded like a gunshot in the silence"
2"looked like looming giants"
57.75% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.422
wordCount1406
matches
0"not from the creature, but from the trees themselves"
1"Not empty, but waiting"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean27.04
std18
cv0.666
sampleLengths
061
166
276
317
410
542
671
715
86
99
1051
1113
1260
1318
1412
1517
168
1739
1843
1912
201
2118
2219
2335
2431
2520
2636
2722
2816
2937
302
3130
329
3347
3423
3516
3618
378
3812
3941
4018
4118
4229
4330
4434
4511
4622
4727
488
4942
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences142
matches
0"was gone"
1"was buried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs226
matches
0"were rotating"
1"was pulling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences147
ratio0.054
matches
0"The air here tasted different—heavier, metallic, like the aftermath of a summer storm."
1"It wasn’t the warmth of comfort; it was the heat of a fever."
2"The ambient noise of London—the distant hum of traffic, the sirens, the constant drone of the city—severed abruptly."
3"Not by much—just inches—but the geometry of the clearing had changed."
4"She could smell it now—ozone and rotting earth."
5"The light wasn't just shining outward; it was pulling inward."
6"A shriek split the air—not from the creature, but from the trees themselves."
7"The air rushed back into her lungs—cold, city air, smelling of exhaust and wet pavement."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1377
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"different—heavier, metallic, like"
1"faint, sickly inner light."
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.030501089324618737
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.008714596949891068
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean9.56
std6.43
cv0.672
sampleLengths
019
113
229
34
42
538
622
715
83
920
1010
1115
1213
1310
147
1510
164
1710
1818
1910
208
211
2214
2320
243
2525
264
2710
281
296
308
311
322
3311
3419
351
3618
3713
384
3911
4017
4114
423
4311
445
4513
462
473
487
4912
46.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3401360544217687
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences126
matches
0"Just the interlocking branches of"
1"Soft, wet, rhythmic."
2"Then, a rustle."
3"Directly behind her."
4"Always a logic to the"
5"Slowly, imperceptibly, the heads of"
6"Just a smooth, pale surface"
7"Just an empty field leading"
ratio0.063
77.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences126
matches
0"She pulled her jacket tighter"
1"She shouldn’t be here."
2"She hesitated, fingers brushing the"
3"It wasn’t the warmth of"
4"she muttered to the empty"
5"Her voice sounded flat, swallowed"
6"She crossed the threshold."
7"They bloomed with a vitality"
8"They grew too close together,"
9"She checked her watch."
10"She scanned the periphery of"
11"She turned back to the"
12"She stared hard, counting the"
13"She took a step back."
14"She whipped around, fists raised"
15"She cursed under her breath"
16"She hadn’t heard it in"
17"she said, her voice steady"
18"She turned toward the boundary"
19"She turned in a slow"
ratio0.357
51.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences126
matches
0"Richmond Park dissolved into a"
1"The air here tasted different—heavier,"
2"She pulled her jacket tighter"
3"She shouldn’t be here."
4"Logic screamed that wandering into"
5"A steady, insistent thrum that"
6"Rory stepped over a gnarled"
7"The boundary line."
8"Legend claimed these trees marked"
9"She hesitated, fingers brushing the"
10"The crimson gemstone nestled within,"
11"It wasn’t the warmth of"
12"she muttered to the empty"
13"Her voice sounded flat, swallowed"
14"She crossed the threshold."
15"The shift in atmosphere hit"
16"The ambient noise of London—the"
17"Silence rushed in to fill"
18"Rory crouched, running a hand"
19"Poppies, bluebells, and things she"
ratio0.817
39.68% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"If she couldn't find the"
ratio0.008
37.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"She pulled her jacket tighter around her chest, the thin fabric doing little to ward off the chill that seeped through her jeans and settled deep in her marrow."
1"A steady, insistent thrum that dragged her away from the safety of the main roads and toward the old oak standing stones."
2"Rory stepped over a gnarled root that resembled a skeletal hand clutching at the earth."
3"They bloomed with a vitality that defied the season, their petals opening wide as if drinking in the pale moonlight."
4"They grew too close together, fighting for space, their stems intertwining in a knot that looked less like nature and more like a tangled barricade."
5"She scanned the periphery of her vision, searching for the tell-tale shape of a person crouching in the undergrowth."
6"Just the interlocking branches of the oaks, twisting together to form a canopy that blotted out the stars."
7"The trees leaned inward, their branches lowering, narrowing the sky."
8"Slowly, imperceptibly, the heads of the flowers were rotating on their stems, tracking her."
9"Its limbs were too long, the joints bending in ways that made her stomach turn."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice steady even as her hands trembled"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Rory snarled (snarl)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.667
75.9153%