Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXY7SFRPMEJEX4MHC0DKE8

Run Details

Duration:
1m 44s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora's boots crunched on frost-covered leaves as she stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, Nyx's shadow-form flowing behind her like ink in water. The air changed instantly - no longer the crisp London winter, but something thicker, sweeter, heavy with the scent of night-blooming jasmine. "Where are we?" Aurora whispered, her breath forming clouds in the strange air. Isolde stood beside the stones, her silver hair catching the moonlight that filtered through branches that shouldn't have been there - massive oaks with leaves of silver and gold, their trunks twisted into impossible spirals. "The Grove," the seer said simply. "A place between places." The Heartstone pendant at Aurora's throat pulsed with warmth, its crimson depths swirling like liquid. She touched it instinctively, feeling the familiar comfort of its presence. Beside her, Nyx shifted from shadow to solid form - a tall humanoid silhouette of living darkness, faintly glowing violet eyes fixed on their surroundings. The clearing stretched before them, larger than it should have been, wildflowers blooming in impossible colors - blues so deep they seemed to drink the light, purples that shimmered like oil on water. Moss-covered stones formed a natural amphitheater, and at its center stood an ancient tree, its branches heavy with fruit that glowed like captured stars. "Time moves differently here," Isolde continued, her voice carrying that otherworldly quality that made Aurora's skin prickle. "An hour inside can be minutes or days outside. Choose your path carefully." Nyx moved forward first, their shadow-form rippling across the ground like liquid. They reached out to touch one of the glowing fruits, but their hand passed through it as if through mist. "Fascinating," they murmured, their whisper-voice carrying on the wind. "This place exists in multiple states simultaneously." Aurora followed, each step feeling like walking through water - not difficult, but different. The ground beneath her feet was soft, like moss, but warm, almost alive. She knelt to touch it, and the moss pulsed beneath her fingers, a gentle heartbeat rhythm that matched her own. The air hummed with magic, a vibration she could feel in her bones. Above, the sky was wrong - stars in patterns she'd never seen, constellations that shifted when she wasn't looking directly at them. A breeze carried whispers in languages she didn't recognize, words that brushed against her mind like moth wings. "Look," Nyx said, pointing to the ancient tree. Symbols had begun to appear on its bark - glowing runes that spiraled upward, changing as they climbed. "These are old Fae script. Very old." Isolde approached the tree, her bare feet leaving no prints in the moss. She traced one of the symbols, and the entire tree shuddered, its glowing fruits pulsing in response. "The Grove remembers," she said cryptically. "It remembers everything that has passed through here." Aurora felt a sudden chill despite the warm air. The Heartstone pendant grew hot against her skin, and she pulled it out, watching as its crimson depths showed glimpses of something - shadows moving, faces she almost recognized, a city of impossible architecture beneath an amber sky. "Dymas," she whispered, recognizing the vision from her dreams. "The pendant is showing me Dymas." Nyx's violet eyes fixed on the pendant. "Interesting. The Heartstone is more than a simple artifact. It's a key, perhaps, or a map." The shadows around them began to shift, not threatening but curious. Shapes formed - deer with antlers of crystal, foxes with fur that shimmered like starlight, birds with feathers of pure light. They watched the newcomers with ancient, knowing eyes. "We should move deeper," Isolde suggested, already walking toward a path that hadn't been there moments before. "The Grove has much to show us, but we must be careful what we seek." The path wound through trees that seemed to lean in, listening. Flowers whispered as they passed, their voices like wind chimes. Aurora felt watched, studied, but not threatened. The Grove was old, impossibly old, and it held secrets older than human memory. Nyx paused, their shadow-form stretching to examine a pool of water that reflected not their current surroundings, but glimpses of other places - a desert under three moons, a city of towers reaching into storm clouds, a forest where the trees sang. "These are nexus points," they explained. "Places where the Veil between realms grows thin. The Grove exists at the intersection of many such points." The path opened into a smaller clearing, and here the air tasted of honey and lightning. In the center stood a stone circle, but unlike Stonehenge, these stones were covered in living vines that bloomed with flowers of every color. In the middle of the circle, floating a foot above the ground, was a book. Aurora approached it cautiously. The book was bound in what looked like living leather, its pages fluttering as if caught in a breeze only they could feel. Symbols glowed across its cover - the same symbols from the ancient tree, but arranged in patterns that made her head ache to look at them too long. "This is a memory book," Isolde said, appearing beside her. "It contains the collective memories of all who have passed through the Grove. But be warned - memories can be dangerous things. They change you." Nyx reached for the book, their shadow-hands passing through it, then solidifying to touch its cover. The moment they made contact, the book burst open, pages flipping rapidly before settling on one near the middle. An image formed - a young woman with silver hair, standing in a grove much like this one, holding a blade that glowed with moonlight. "That's you," Aurora said, pointing to the image. "But younger. Different." Isolde's expression remained unreadable. "The Grove shows us what we need to see, not necessarily what we want to see." The shadows around them deepened suddenly, and the temperature dropped. The Heartstone pendant flared bright, its crimson light pushing back against the encroaching darkness. Shapes moved in the shadows - not the curious creatures from before, but something older, hungrier. "We are not alone," Nyx said, their whisper-voice tight with warning. "Something else has entered the Grove." The memory book slammed shut with a sound like thunder, and the floating stones of the circle began to glow with an angry red light. The air filled with the scent of ozone and something else - the coppery tang of blood. Aurora gripped the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip, feeling its familiar cold weight. The blade began to glow with a soft blue light, responding to the threat. "What is it?" she asked, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her stomach. Isolde's lavender eyes were distant, seeing something beyond the physical. "The Grove has guardians," she said softly. "Ancient things bound to protect the memories contained here. They sense the pendant - they know what you are." The shadows coalesced into something massive, something with too many eyes and teeth that glowed like embers. It moved with a predator's grace, circling them slowly, testing. Nyx stepped forward, their shadow-form expanding to match the creature's size. "We mean no harm," they said, their voice carrying that strange power that made even the air listen. "We seek only knowledge." The creature paused, its ember-eyes fixing on Nyx. For a moment, the Grove held its breath. Then, slowly, the creature dissolved back into shadow, retreating to wherever it had come from. Isolde let out a breath Aurora hadn't realized she'd been holding. "The Grove accepts your presence," she said. "For now. But remember - this place chooses its own rules. We are merely guests here." The path forward had changed again, leading deeper into the Grove, toward a light that pulsed with the same rhythm as Aurora's Heartstone pendant. Whatever waited ahead, whatever secrets the Grove held, they would have to face them together. The air hummed with possibility and danger in equal measure, and Aurora knew that nothing would ever be the same.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:28:02.742Z" 2/19/2026, 12:28:02 PM
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
12.50% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"the seer said simply [simply]"
1"she said cryptically [cryptically]"
2"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.188
effectiveRatio0.188
73.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1324
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"cautiously"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"very"
2"cautiously"
3"suddenly"
4"softly"
5"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1324
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"depths"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"shimmered"
count2
5
word"otherworldly"
count1
6
word"fascinating"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"almost alive"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count2
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"chill"
count1
12
word"crystal"
count1
13
word"unreadable"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"stomach"
count1
16
word"predator"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"depths"
3"familiar"
4"shimmered"
5"otherworldly"
6"fascinating"
7"whisper"
8"almost alive"
9"could feel"
10"traced"
11"chill"
12"crystal"
13"unreadable"
14"weight"
15"stomach"
16"predator"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences74
matches
0"d with warmth"
27.03% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"listen"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1329
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.69% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1096
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Nyx10
London1
Isolde8
Heartstone4
Aurora13
Symbols2
Grove4
Stonehenge1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Isolde"
2"Aurora"
3"Symbols"
4"Blade"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.907
windowScore1
74.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"trees that seemed to lean in, listening"
1"looked like living leather, its pages flu"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.01
wordCount1329
matches
0"not difficult, but different"
1"not threatening but curious"
2"not their current surroundings, but glimpses of other places - a desert under three moons, a cit"
3"not the curious creatures from before, but something older, hungrier"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"knew that nothing"
57.06% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean36.92
std12.91
cv0.35
sampleLengths
046
113
245
351
457
530
648
747
853
933
1044
1147
1215
1323
1440
1532
1642
1742
1824
1955
2055
2135
2260
2311
2420
2540
2617
2742
2842
2936
3027
3133
3231
3334
3439
3520
95.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"were covered"
1"was bound"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs188
matches
0"wasn't looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences90
ratio0.156
matches
0"The air changed instantly - no longer the crisp London winter, but something thicker, sweeter, heavy with the scent of night-blooming jasmine."
1"Isolde stood beside the stones, her silver hair catching the moonlight that filtered through branches that shouldn't have been there - massive oaks with leaves of silver and gold, their trunks twisted into impossible spirals."
2"Beside her, Nyx shifted from shadow to solid form - a tall humanoid silhouette of living darkness, faintly glowing violet eyes fixed on their surroundings."
3"The clearing stretched before them, larger than it should have been, wildflowers blooming in impossible colors - blues so deep they seemed to drink the light, purples that shimmered like oil on water."
4"Aurora followed, each step feeling like walking through water - not difficult, but different."
5"Above, the sky was wrong - stars in patterns she'd never seen, constellations that shifted when she wasn't looking directly at them."
6"Symbols had begun to appear on its bark - glowing runes that spiraled upward, changing as they climbed."
7"The Heartstone pendant grew hot against her skin, and she pulled it out, watching as its crimson depths showed glimpses of something - shadows moving, faces she almost recognized, a city of impossible architecture beneath an amber sky."
8"Shapes formed - deer with antlers of crystal, foxes with fur that shimmered like starlight, birds with feathers of pure light."
9"Nyx paused, their shadow-form stretching to examine a pool of water that reflected not their current surroundings, but glimpses of other places - a desert under three moons, a city of towers reaching into storm clouds, a forest where the trees sang."
10"Symbols glowed across its cover - the same symbols from the ancient tree, but arranged in patterns that made her head ache to look at them too long."
11"An image formed - a young woman with silver hair, standing in a grove much like this one, holding a blade that glowed with moonlight."
12"Shapes moved in the shadows - not the curious creatures from before, but something older, hungrier."
13"The air filled with the scent of ozone and something else - the coppery tang of blood."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1094
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03473491773308958
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.013711151736745886
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean14.77
std7.68
cv0.52
sampleLengths
024
122
213
335
46
54
615
711
825
933
1024
1117
1213
1312
1420
159
167
1714
1813
1920
2013
2122
2218
238
2418
257
2613
2717
286
298
309
3138
329
336
347
3516
3611
3721
388
3917
4015
4111
4210
437
4414
4542
466
4718
4816
4924
56.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.37777777777777777
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners34
46.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Then, slowly, the creature dissolved"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences72
matches
0"She touched it instinctively, feeling"
1"They reached out to touch"
2"they murmured, their whisper-voice carrying"
3"She knelt to touch it,"
4"She traced one of the"
5"she said cryptically"
6"she whispered, recognizing the vision"
7"They watched the newcomers with"
8"she asked, her voice steady"
9"she said softly"
10"It moved with a predator's"
11"they said, their voice carrying"
ratio0.167
8.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences72
matches
0"Aurora's boots crunched on frost-covered"
1"The air changed instantly -"
2"Aurora whispered, her breath forming"
3"Isolde stood beside the stones,"
4"the seer said simply"
5"The Heartstone pendant at Aurora's"
6"She touched it instinctively, feeling"
7"The clearing stretched before them,"
8"Isolde continued, her voice carrying"
9"Nyx moved forward first, their"
10"They reached out to touch"
11"they murmured, their whisper-voice carrying"
12"Aurora followed, each step feeling"
13"The ground beneath her feet"
14"She knelt to touch it,"
15"The air hummed with magic,"
16"A breeze carried whispers in"
17"Nyx said, pointing to the"
18"Symbols had begun to appear"
19"Isolde approached the tree, her"
ratio0.903
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
14.29% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Isolde stood beside the stones, her silver hair catching the moonlight that filtered through branches that shouldn't have been there - massive oaks with leaves …"
1"The clearing stretched before them, larger than it should have been, wildflowers blooming in impossible colors - blues so deep they seemed to drink the light, p…"
2"Moss-covered stones formed a natural amphitheater, and at its center stood an ancient tree, its branches heavy with fruit that glowed like captured stars."
3"She knelt to touch it, and the moss pulsed beneath her fingers, a gentle heartbeat rhythm that matched her own."
4"A breeze carried whispers in languages she didn't recognize, words that brushed against her mind like moth wings."
5"Shapes formed - deer with antlers of crystal, foxes with fur that shimmered like starlight, birds with feathers of pure light."
6"Nyx paused, their shadow-form stretching to examine a pool of water that reflected not their current surroundings, but glimpses of other places - a desert under…"
7"An image formed - a young woman with silver hair, standing in a grove much like this one, holding a blade that glowed with moonlight."
8"The shadows coalesced into something massive, something with too many eyes and teeth that glowed like embers."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Aurora whispered, her breath forming clouds in the strange air"
1"they murmured, their whisper-voice carrying on the wind"
2"Nyx said, their whisper-voice tight with warning"
3"she asked, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her stomach"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde continued (continue)"
2"they murmured (murmur)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"Isolde suggested (suggest)"
5"they explained (explain)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.375
62.1909%