| 12.50% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the seer said simply [simply]" | | 1 | "she said cryptically [cryptically]" | | 2 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.188 | | effectiveRatio | 0.188 | |
| 73.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1324 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "cautiously" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "softly" | | 5 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 9.37% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1324 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "depths" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "otherworldly" | | 6 | "fascinating" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "almost alive" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "traced" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "crystal" | | 13 | "unreadable" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "stomach" | | 16 | "predator" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 27.03% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1329 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.69% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 1096 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.19 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 10 | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Aurora | 13 | | Symbols | 2 | | Grove | 4 | | Stonehenge | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Symbols" | | 4 | "Blade" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.907 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 74.24% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "trees that seemed to lean in, listening" | | 1 | "looked like living leather, its pages flu" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.01 | | wordCount | 1329 | | matches | | 0 | "not difficult, but different" | | 1 | "not threatening but curious" | | 2 | "not their current surroundings, but glimpses of other places - a desert under three moons, a cit" | | 3 | "not the curious creatures from before, but something older, hungrier" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | |
| 57.06% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 36.92 | | std | 12.91 | | cv | 0.35 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 55 | | 20 | 55 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 36 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 39 | | 35 | 20 |
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| 95.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "were covered" | | 1 | "was bound" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 188 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.156 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed instantly - no longer the crisp London winter, but something thicker, sweeter, heavy with the scent of night-blooming jasmine." | | 1 | "Isolde stood beside the stones, her silver hair catching the moonlight that filtered through branches that shouldn't have been there - massive oaks with leaves of silver and gold, their trunks twisted into impossible spirals." | | 2 | "Beside her, Nyx shifted from shadow to solid form - a tall humanoid silhouette of living darkness, faintly glowing violet eyes fixed on their surroundings." | | 3 | "The clearing stretched before them, larger than it should have been, wildflowers blooming in impossible colors - blues so deep they seemed to drink the light, purples that shimmered like oil on water." | | 4 | "Aurora followed, each step feeling like walking through water - not difficult, but different." | | 5 | "Above, the sky was wrong - stars in patterns she'd never seen, constellations that shifted when she wasn't looking directly at them." | | 6 | "Symbols had begun to appear on its bark - glowing runes that spiraled upward, changing as they climbed." | | 7 | "The Heartstone pendant grew hot against her skin, and she pulled it out, watching as its crimson depths showed glimpses of something - shadows moving, faces she almost recognized, a city of impossible architecture beneath an amber sky." | | 8 | "Shapes formed - deer with antlers of crystal, foxes with fur that shimmered like starlight, birds with feathers of pure light." | | 9 | "Nyx paused, their shadow-form stretching to examine a pool of water that reflected not their current surroundings, but glimpses of other places - a desert under three moons, a city of towers reaching into storm clouds, a forest where the trees sang." | | 10 | "Symbols glowed across its cover - the same symbols from the ancient tree, but arranged in patterns that made her head ache to look at them too long." | | 11 | "An image formed - a young woman with silver hair, standing in a grove much like this one, holding a blade that glowed with moonlight." | | 12 | "Shapes moved in the shadows - not the curious creatures from before, but something older, hungrier." | | 13 | "The air filled with the scent of ozone and something else - the coppery tang of blood." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1094 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.03473491773308958 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013711151736745886 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 14.77 | | std | 7.68 | | cv | 0.52 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 38 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 42 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 56.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.37777777777777777 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 46.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, slowly, the creature dissolved" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "She touched it instinctively, feeling" | | 1 | "They reached out to touch" | | 2 | "they murmured, their whisper-voice carrying" | | 3 | "She knelt to touch it," | | 4 | "She traced one of the" | | 5 | "she said cryptically" | | 6 | "she whispered, recognizing the vision" | | 7 | "They watched the newcomers with" | | 8 | "she asked, her voice steady" | | 9 | "she said softly" | | 10 | "It moved with a predator's" | | 11 | "they said, their voice carrying" |
| | ratio | 0.167 | |
| 8.61% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's boots crunched on frost-covered" | | 1 | "The air changed instantly -" | | 2 | "Aurora whispered, her breath forming" | | 3 | "Isolde stood beside the stones," | | 4 | "the seer said simply" | | 5 | "The Heartstone pendant at Aurora's" | | 6 | "She touched it instinctively, feeling" | | 7 | "The clearing stretched before them," | | 8 | "Isolde continued, her voice carrying" | | 9 | "Nyx moved forward first, their" | | 10 | "They reached out to touch" | | 11 | "they murmured, their whisper-voice carrying" | | 12 | "Aurora followed, each step feeling" | | 13 | "The ground beneath her feet" | | 14 | "She knelt to touch it," | | 15 | "The air hummed with magic," | | 16 | "A breeze carried whispers in" | | 17 | "Nyx said, pointing to the" | | 18 | "Symbols had begun to appear" | | 19 | "Isolde approached the tree, her" |
| | ratio | 0.903 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 14.29% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde stood beside the stones, her silver hair catching the moonlight that filtered through branches that shouldn't have been there - massive oaks with leaves …" | | 1 | "The clearing stretched before them, larger than it should have been, wildflowers blooming in impossible colors - blues so deep they seemed to drink the light, p…" | | 2 | "Moss-covered stones formed a natural amphitheater, and at its center stood an ancient tree, its branches heavy with fruit that glowed like captured stars." | | 3 | "She knelt to touch it, and the moss pulsed beneath her fingers, a gentle heartbeat rhythm that matched her own." | | 4 | "A breeze carried whispers in languages she didn't recognize, words that brushed against her mind like moth wings." | | 5 | "Shapes formed - deer with antlers of crystal, foxes with fur that shimmered like starlight, birds with feathers of pure light." | | 6 | "Nyx paused, their shadow-form stretching to examine a pool of water that reflected not their current surroundings, but glimpses of other places - a desert under…" | | 7 | "An image formed - a young woman with silver hair, standing in a grove much like this one, holding a blade that glowed with moonlight." | | 8 | "The shadows coalesced into something massive, something with too many eyes and teeth that glowed like embers." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora whispered, her breath forming clouds in the strange air" | | 1 | "they murmured, their whisper-voice carrying on the wind" | | 2 | "Nyx said, their whisper-voice tight with warning" | | 3 | "she asked, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her stomach" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde continued (continue)" | | 2 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Isolde suggested (suggest)" | | 5 | "they explained (explain)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.375 | |