Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXY7YJ76C39PD4AAH17GY8

Run Details

Duration:
18.3s
Cost:
$0.007311
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain smeared the neon green light of the sign across the slick pavement of Dean Street. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air tasted of floor wax and expensive peat. Silas polished a highball glass with an intensity that suggested he was trying to rub a hole through the crystal. His hazel eyes flicked toward the door every time the brass bell chimed, a relic of a habit he couldn't quite shake despite the limp that now defined his stride. Aurora sat at the corner of the mahogany bar, her fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. She stared into a pint of dark ale, the black surface reflecting the flickering shadows of the maps pinned to the walls. The door creaked. A man stepped in, shedding a soaked trench coat with a coordinated shrug. He scanned the room, his gaze snagging on the black-haired woman hunched over her drink. He froze. The dampness from his coat seeped into the floorboards, forming a dark halo around his boots. "Rory?" The name sounded like a ghost's inhalation. Aurora didn't move at first. She gripped her glass until her knuckles turned the color of parchment. She turned her head slowly, the shoulder-length strands of her hair catching the amber glow of the backbar. "Julian." The man took three careful steps forward. He looked leaner than the boy she remembered from Cardiff, his face hollowed out by the sort of nights that didn't end with sleep. He reached for a stool two seats away, hesitating until she gave a microscopic nod. "I heard you went to London. I didn't think I'd find you in a place like this." Julian gestured to the maps, the muted jazz, the heavy silence that Silas curated like a museum exhibit. "It’s quiet. People don't ask about your father’s court cases here." Aurora took a sip of her ale, the bitterness grounding her. "I like the noise. It helps me think." Julian flagged Silas down. Silas didn't rush. He moved with the deliberate, uneven rhythm of his injured knee, his silver signet ring catching the light. "Scotch. Neat. Whatever you have that burns the most." Silas poured the liquid without a word, his expression a mask of professional indifference that didn't quite hide the way his eyes cataloged Julian’s frayed cuffs and the nervous tic in his jaw. He slid the glass across the wood and retreated to the far end of the bar. "You look different, Rory. Harder. The last time I saw you, you were wearing a graduation gown and crying because your mother wanted you to clerk for the High Court." Aurora’s laugh was a dry, brittle thing. She looked at Julian’s hands. They were stained with ink and tobacco, shaking just enough to notice. "The law is a cage built out of paperwork. I found I preferred the streets. I deliver food now. I ride a bike through the rain and make sure people get their dumplings while they're still hot. It’s honest. It doesn't require lying to a jury." Julian downed half his scotch in a single gulp. He winced as the alcohol hit his throat. "Honest. Is that what we’re calling it? You were going to be the best of us. You had that way of looking at a problem—like it was a puzzle you’d already solved ten minutes ago. Now you’re spending your nights in a basement bar in Soho hiding from the world." "I'm not hiding. I’m living. There’s a difference." She turned her stool to face him fully. The bright blue of her eyes seemed to pierce through the dim light, stripping away the years. "What happened to the novel, Julian? The one that was going to change the way people thought about the Welsh working class? You look more like a man who writes obituaries for a local rag." Julian flurried a hand through his hair, which was thinning at the temples. "I write copy for an insurance firm. I describe the tragedy of flooded basements and fender benders in ways that make people feel safe enough to pay their premiums. It pays for a flat in Ealing that smells like damp and old take-out." He leaned in, the smell of rain and cheap tobacco trailing him. "I saw Evan. Back home. A month ago." The name hit the table like a lead weight. Aurora’s hand went back to her wrist, her thumb digging into the crescent scar. "I don't care about Evan." "He asked about you. He looked... normal. That’s the terrifying part, isn't it? He’s a partner at the firm now. Everyone loves him. They still talk about you like you were the one who grew cold and walked away without a word." "They talk because they don't know how to see. It’s easier to blame the person who leaves than the one who stays and rots." Silas moved past them to adjust a framed photograph on the wall—a black and white shot of a bridge in Prague. The silent presence of the older man seemed to remind them both of the weight of the room. This wasn't a place for shouting. It was a place for the slow, agonizing extraction of truth. "I should have said something then," Julian whispered. "I saw the way he gripped your arm at that party. I saw the way you stopped laughing when he entered a room. I stayed quiet because I didn't want to ruin the evening." "You stayed quiet because it was comfortable." Aurora’s voice didn't rise. It stayed flat, precise, and lethal. "We all stayed quiet. That’s how the time passes. You wait for the right moment to speak, and then you realize the moment was five years ago and the person you were talking to doesn't exist anymore." Julian finished his drink and signaled for another. "Is this it then? We just sit here and catalog our failures while a man with a limp watches us? I thought if I ran into you, there’d be some kind of spark. A reminder of why we liked each other." "We liked each other because we were young and shared the same delusions about the future. Now we’re just two people who know better." She stood up. The movement was fluid, athletic. She reached for her jacket, a utility coat that bore the faint smell of sesame oil and exhaust. "You should go back to Ealing, Julian. Don't come looking for the Rory who liked Sylvia Plath and drank cheap cider in Bute Park. She’s buried under about three years of London grime." "You can't just walk away from everything we were." "Watch me. It’s the one thing I’ve become an expert at." Julian grabbed her sleeve. It was a desperate, clumsy gesture. Silas was across the bar in an instant, his hand resting on the wood, the silver ring glinting under the green neon glare. He didn't say a word, but the threat was there, etched into the lines of his face. Julian let go as if scalded. He looked at his hands, then at the empty glass. "You’re cold, Laila." He used the name she hadn't heard since her father’s house. "No. I’m just focused. There’s a difference." She walked toward the door. The bell chimed, a sharp, clear sound that cut through the jazz. She didn't look back at the man on the stool, or at Silas, who was already wiping down the spot where her glass had been. The rain was still falling. It washed the neon green off the asphalt, turning the world back into shades of grey. Aurora shouldered her bag and stepped into the flow of the city, leaving the ghost of Cardiff behind in the shadows of the bar. Julian stared at his reflection in the backbar mirror. He looked for the boy he used to be and found only the tired lines around his eyes. He reached for his second scotch, his fingers searching for the warmth the room refused to provide. "Another one?" Silas asked. "Make it a double." "The first one didn't fix it. The second one won't either." Silas poured the drink anyway. He knew better than most that sometimes the only thing you can do for a man is let him drown in a controlled environment. Outside, the city breathed. It didn't care about the years lost or the words unsaid. It only cared about the next delivery, the next rainstorm, and the people who were strong enough to move through the dark without a map. Aurora pedaled her bike into the wind, her heart keeping a steady, unsentimental beat against the ribs of the night. The Raven’s Nest grew quiet again. The maps on the wall didn't show the way home; they only showed where people had been before they got lost. Julian sat alone, the weight of the mahogany bar pressing down on his soul, while the green light of the sign flickered, faded, and hissed against the cold London air. He stayed until the ice melted in his glass, turning the expensive scotch into a pale, tasteless tea. He looked at the seat she had vacated. A single pearl of condensation remained on the wood, catching the light for a second before it joined the rest of the moisture and disappeared. "She’s gone, isn't she?" Julian asked the room. Silas didn't look up from the register. "She was gone long before she walked through that door." The man in the trench coat stood up, his bones aching with the sudden realization that time wasn't a river you could swim back up. It was a one-way street, and he was walking the wrong way in the rain. He pushed through the door, the bell tolling his departure, leaving only the scent of wet wool and the muffled sound of a distant siren to fill the gap. Silas turned off the green neon sign. The room plunged into a soft, natural darkness. He picked up the discarded glass, his limp heavy as he moved toward the sink. He thought about Prague. He thought about the people he’d left in the snow. Then he thought about the girl with the black hair and the delivery bike, and he wondered if she knew that the hardest part wasn't leaving, but the moment you realized there was nowhere left to go.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:28:02.902Z" 2/19/2026, 12:28:02 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.094
leniency0.188
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1731
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1731
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"cataloged"
count1
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"comfortable"
count1
9
word"reminder"
count1
10
word"glinting"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"crystal"
2"flicked"
3"tracing"
4"scanned"
5"silence"
6"cataloged"
7"weight"
8"comfortable"
9"reminder"
10"glinting"
11"etched"
12"warmth"
13"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1725
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1144
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.14
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Dean1
Street1
Raven2
Nest2
Cardiff2
Silas12
Julian13
Prague2
Aurora8
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Julian"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Dean"
1"Street"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
4"London"
globalScore0.932
windowScore0.667
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite shake despite the limp that now defined his stride"
1"sounded like a ghost's inhalation"
2"quite hide the way his eyes cataloged Julian’s frayed cuffs and the nervous tic in his jaw"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1725
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"knew that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean27.38
std20.22
cv0.738
sampleLengths
079
141
249
31
442
51
646
717
818
911
1011
118
1225
139
1449
1530
1624
1746
1817
1950
208
2125
2235
2313
2443
2512
268
2723
285
2942
3024
3156
3242
337
3410
3537
368
3741
3824
3926
4033
419
4211
4350
4416
453
4611
477
4842
4945
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
60.38% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs191
matches
0"was trying"
1"was thinning"
2"was walking"
3"wasn't leaving"
93.60% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences116
ratio0.017
matches
0"Silas moved past them to adjust a framed photograph on the wall—a black and white shot of a bridge in Prague."
1"The maps on the wall didn't show the way home; they only showed where people had been before they got lost."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1149
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.024369016536118365
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006092254134029591
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean14.87
std10.67
cv0.717
sampleLengths
016
113
220
330
419
522
63
713
815
92
1016
111
127
135
1412
1518
161
177
1824
1915
2017
2118
2211
2311
248
254
263
2718
289
2933
3016
3130
327
335
3412
3546
369
378
3850
398
408
4117
4235
4313
4443
4512
468
479
4814
495
40.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.23275862068965517
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners27
39.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Then he thought about the"
ratio0.012
43.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences84
matches
0"His hazel eyes flicked toward"
1"She stared into a pint"
2"He scanned the room, his"
3"She gripped her glass until"
4"She turned her head slowly,"
5"He looked leaner than the"
6"He reached for a stool"
7"He moved with the deliberate,"
8"He slid the glass across"
9"She looked at Julian’s hands."
10"They were stained with ink"
11"He winced as the alcohol"
12"She turned her stool to"
13"He leaned in, the smell"
14"It was a place for"
15"It stayed flat, precise, and"
16"She stood up."
17"She reached for her jacket,"
18"It was a desperate, clumsy"
19"He didn't say a word,"
ratio0.44
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences84
matches
0"Rain smeared the neon green"
1"Silas polished a highball glass"
2"His hazel eyes flicked toward"
3"Aurora sat at the corner"
4"She stared into a pint"
5"The door creaked."
6"A man stepped in, shedding"
7"He scanned the room, his"
8"The dampness from his coat"
9"The name sounded like a"
10"Aurora didn't move at first."
11"She gripped her glass until"
12"She turned her head slowly,"
13"The man took three careful"
14"He looked leaner than the"
15"He reached for a stool"
16"Julian gestured to the maps,"
17"Aurora took a sip of"
18"Julian flagged Silas down."
19"Silas didn't rush."
ratio0.964
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
72.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Silas poured the liquid without a word, his expression a mask of professional indifference that didn't quite hide the way his eyes cataloged Julian’s frayed cuf…"
1"She reached for her jacket, a utility coat that bore the faint smell of sesame oil and exhaust."
2"Silas was across the bar in an instant, his hand resting on the wood, the silver ring glinting under the green neon glare."
3"It only cared about the next delivery, the next rainstorm, and the people who were strong enough to move through the dark without a map."
4"He pushed through the door, the bell tolling his departure, leaving only the scent of wet wool and the muffled sound of a distant siren to fill the gap."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Julian whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.094
leniency0.188
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.063
80.3228%