Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXY8K26G6BB5ZX496MTFTZ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.078320
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the asphalt, turning the Soho streets into a blur of neon and oil. Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots slammed against the wet pavement, jarring her knees with every stride. Ahead, the hooded figure vaulted a stack of empty crates with an irritating, fluid grace. No scramble, no hesitation. Just up and over. Quinn gritted her teeth, ignoring the stinging rain plastering her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair to her skull. She forced her legs to pump faster, breath tearing at her throat. She hit the crates, hands scrambling for purchase on the slick wood, and hauled herself over. A splinter dug into her palm. She ignored it. "Police! Stop!" The shout vanished under the roar of a passing bus. The figure didn't flinch. They hooked a left down a narrow alley, the kind that smelled of piss and stale beer even in a downpour. Quinn skidded around the corner, one hand steadying herself against the brickwork to check her momentum. Her sharp jaw set like a trap. Eighteen years on the force, decorated, respected, and she was chasing a ghost who moved faster than an Olympic sprinter. The runner wore a heavy canvas jacket that should have weighed him down, yet he danced over the uneven cobblestones of the backstreet. He reached a chain-link fence at the alley's dead end. The suspect hit the mesh. Metal shrieked. In two seconds, he was at the top, rolling over the barbed wire without a snag. Quinn reached the fence a beat later. She jammed the toe of her boot into the diamond gap. The metal bit into her sole. She climbed, military precision overriding the burn in her muscles. At the top, she didn't roll; she dropped, landing in a crouch that threw a shockwave up her spine. The suspect was already halfway down the adjacent street, heading north toward the grit of Camden. Quinn checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Midnight. The witching hour. Fitting for the bizarre cases piling up on her desk since Morris died. She pushed off the wall and resumed the sprint. The rain intensified, a curtain of gray sleet. Most civilians had fled indoors, leaving the sidewalks to the desperate and the predatory. The runner ducked into the maw of an underpass near the canal. Quinn followed, the sudden acoustic shift magnifying the slap of their footsteps. Echoes bounced off the concrete, turning the single set of fleeing steps into a phantom stampede. She reached for the radio clipped to her belt, then stopped. Calling backup meant explaining why she was chasing a vandalism suspect across three boroughs. It meant explaining the impossible physics she'd witnessed back at the Raven's Nest, where this perp had slipped out of a locked back room that had no other exit. Even Quinn couldn't explain how a grown man fit through a bookshelf gap barely an inch wide. She would finish this herself. The suspect veered suddenly, jumping a concrete barrier and sliding down a mud embankment. Quinn cursed. She vaulted the concrete, her heels digging into the soft earth. She slid, mud coating her trousers, but kept her balance. At the bottom, the canal path stretched out, dark and slick. The figure wasn't running anymore. He stood by a rusted iron door set into the brick archway of an old bridge. A heavy padlock hung from the hasp, thick with corrosion. The suspect placed a hand on the lock. A flash of blue light, sharp as a welding spark, popped in the gloom. The lock clicked open. Quinn drew her service weapon, leveling the Glock. "Hands where I can see them!" The figure didn't turn. He pulled the heavy iron door open, revealing a throat of absolute darkness. "Turn around. Now." The suspect stepped into the dark. The door began to swing shut. Quinn lunged. She caught the edge of the iron door with her left hand, the metal cold enough to burn. She wrenched it back. The rusty hinges screamed in protest. Drafts of stale air hit her face. Not the rot of the canal, but something dry and older. Dust, ozone, and singed herbs. Steps led down, cut from the same stone as the foundation. She stepped in. The door clanged shut behind her, sealing out the rain and the city noise. Silence pressed against her ears, heavy and thick. She retrieved a tactical flashlight, clicking it on. The beam cut a cone through the dust motes. Concrete stairs spiraled down, far deeper than the Tube lines usually ran. Graffiti covered the walls, but not the usual tags. These were geometric shapes, sigils drawn in charcoal and chalk that made her eyes water if she stared too long. Quinn descended. Her grip on the Glock tightened. This felt like the night Morris died. The air had that same static charge, making the hair on her arms stand up. At the bottom of the stairs, the narrow passage opened into a cavernous space. Tiled walls curved overhead—an abandoned station. The classic oxblood tiles of the frantic Edwardian era, cracked and peeling like dead skin. She moved to the edge of the platform. The tracks were gone, replaced by a smooth, cobbled floor that stretched into the darkness of the tunnel. Movement flickered ahead. The runner was fifty yards down the tunnel, walking casually now. Quinn holstered the light but kept the gun out. She stepped off the platform, the three-foot drop jarring her knees. She moved silently, rolling her steps heel-to-toe, a hunter stalking prey. A low hum vibrated through the soles of her shoes. Voices. She rounded a bend in the tunnel and stopped, pressing herself against the curved wall, obscured by the shadow of a support pillar. The tunnel widened into a vast junction. Makeshift stalls lined the walls, illuminated by lanterns that burned with flames of unnatural colors—violet, sickly green, blood orange. The Veil Market. She had heard the whispers from the snitches she leaned on. A place that moved with the moon, a place where the laws of physics were treated as suggestions. Strange figures moved between the stalls. Some looked human. Others wore heavy cloaks that bulged in the wrong places. A vendor was weighing a shimmering powder onto a brass scale. Another polished a jagged dagger that seemed to absorb the light around it. The suspect stood before a barrier—a thick velvet rope strung between two heavy stanchions, blocking the path deeper into the market. A massive figure stood guard. Quinn watched. The runner lowered his hood. A young man, pale, but with eyes that looked entirely too old for his face. He reached into his pocket and produced a small, white object. A knucklebone. The guard, a brute of a man whose skin possessed a grayish, granite texture, took the bone. He inspected it, sniffed it, then stepped aside. The runner slipped past. Quinn’s pulse hammered in her neck. This was it. The source. If the clique was involved in criminal activity, the evidence was down here. But this wasn't her jurisdiction. This wasn't even her reality. She stepped out of the shadows. The ambient noise of the market—haggling in languages she didn't recognize, the hiss of steam, the clinking of glass—died down as she approached the barrier. Heads turned. Eyes that reflected the lantern light like cats focused on her. The granite-skinned guard folded his arms. His biceps were the size of tree trunks. "Token," he rumbled. His voice sounded like grinding stones. Quinn stopped three feet from him. She kept her gun at her side, pointed at the ground, but her finger rested on the trigger guard. "Police," she said, flashing her badge with her left hand. "I'm pursuing a suspect." The guard didn't even look at the badge. He stared at her neck, then her wrist. "No token. No entry." "I'm not asking for permission." Quinn took a step forward. The guard moved with deceptive speed, blocking her path. He loomed over her, easily seven feet tall. "This is neutral ground, Lawkeeper. Your badge has no metal here." Quinn looked past him. The runner had stopped near a stall selling jars of cloudy liquid. He was watching her, a smug grin plastered on his face. He knew the rules. He knew she was powerless here. Rage, cold and sharp, spiked in her chest. Morris had died screaming because they hadn't known the rules. Because they had walked blind into a world that ate cops for breakfast. She wasn't blind anymore. "Neutral ground implies you don't take sides," Quinn said, her voice dropping to a dangerous calm. "Blocking an investigation is taking a side." The guard leaned down, his face inches from hers. His breath smelled of wet clay. "The Market protects its own. Go back to the rain, little detective. Before you lose more than just your way." She saw the threat in his eyes—solid black orbs without whites. Quinn weighed the Glock in her hand. A 9mm slug might chip him, maybe annoy him. But she saw the way the other patrons watched. They respected strength. They respected currency. She holstered the gun. A visible ripple of confusion went through the onlookers. Quinn reached into her coat pocket. She didn't have a bone token. But she had something she had found in Morris's pocket the night he died. A coin, seemingly gold, heavily scarred, stamped with a raven on one side and a skull on the other. She had carried it as a talisman of vengeance for three years. She held it up. The lantern light caught the raven's eye. The guard’s stone face shifted. A crack of surprise? Fear? "I don't have a bone," Quinn said, her voice echoing in the tunnel. "I have this." Silence stretched, tight as a bowstring. The runner’s smug grin vanished. He looked at the coin, then back to the darkness of the tunnels behind him, considering flight. The guard straightened up slowly. He looked from the coin to Quinn’s face, re-evaluating the threat level. The salt-and-pepper hair, the military bearing, the eyes that had seen enough death to fill a cemetery. "Old currency," the guard grunted. He stepped back, unhooking the velvet rope. "Dangerous currency." "I like living dangerously," Quinn lied. She didn't like it. She endured it. "The Market is open to you," the guard said, gesturing to the tunnel beyond. "But the Market takes what it is owed." Quinn stepped past him. The air grew colder on the other side of the rope. She didn't look back at the guard or the gauntlet of staring creatures. Her eyes locked on the runner, who was now scrambling backward, knocking over a stack of cages containing fluttering, winged lizards. "End of the line," Quinn said. She entered the Veil Market, the darkness swallowing the last bit of the London detective she used to be. The hunt was still on.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:28:03.559Z" 2/19/2026, 12:28:03 PM
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native_tokens_reasoning3970
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.45
leniency0.9
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1827
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1827
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"maw"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"echoes"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count2
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"loomed"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"maw"
1"footsteps"
2"echoes"
3"gloom"
4"silence"
5"flickered"
6"vibrated"
7"velvet"
8"pulse"
9"loomed"
10"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences183
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences183
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences194
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1812
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.77% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1707
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn25
Olympic1
Camden1
Morris4
Raven1
Nest1
Glock3
Tube1
Edwardian1
Veil2
Market2
Silence2
London1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Glock"
4"Tube"
5"Silence"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Market"
globalScore0.768
windowScore0.833
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences130
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like the night Morris died"
1"dagger that seemed to absorb the light around it"
2"sounded like grinding stones"
3"A coin, seemingly gold, heavily scarr"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.552
wordCount1812
matches
0"Not the rot of the canal, but something dry"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences194
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean26.26
std15.65
cv0.596
sampleLengths
053
154
22
335
466
533
653
716
836
922
1040
1171
125
1337
1442
1526
1614
1717
183
1912
2030
2134
2225
2358
2430
2535
2626
2714
2831
2911
3023
3126
323
3329
3443
3526
3635
3725
384
3934
4031
4113
4214
439
4425
4514
4620
4710
4828
4937
99.51% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences183
matches
0"were gone"
1"were treated"
2"was involved"
88.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs299
matches
0"was chasing"
1"was chasing"
2"wasn't running"
3"was weighing"
4"was watching"
54.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences194
ratio0.031
matches
0"At the top, she didn't roll; she dropped, landing in a crouch that threw a shockwave up her spine."
1"Tiled walls curved overhead—an abandoned station."
2"Makeshift stalls lined the walls, illuminated by lanterns that burned with flames of unnatural colors—violet, sickly green, blood orange."
3"The suspect stood before a barrier—a thick velvet rope strung between two heavy stanchions, blocking the path deeper into the market."
4"The ambient noise of the market—haggling in languages she didn't recognize, the hiss of steam, the clinking of glass—died down as she approached the barrier."
5"She saw the threat in his eyes—solid black orbs without whites."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1722
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.020905923344947737
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.006968641114982578
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences194
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences194
mean9.34
std5.52
cv0.591
sampleLengths
015
115
215
34
44
517
612
716
86
93
102
1110
124
1321
1416
157
1620
1723
1810
195
202
2116
227
2311
246
2510
2619
2716
2810
291
303
3113
329
338
3414
3512
3612
3716
3811
3914
4029
4117
425
4314
442
4511
4610
4711
485
4916
43.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.30412371134020616
totalSentences194
uniqueOpeners59
19.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences169
matches
0"Just up and over."
ratio0.006
89.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences169
matches
0"She forced her legs to"
1"She hit the crates, hands"
2"She ignored it."
3"They hooked a left down"
4"Her sharp jaw set like"
5"He reached a chain-link fence"
6"She jammed the toe of"
7"She climbed, military precision overriding"
8"She pushed off the wall"
9"She reached for the radio"
10"It meant explaining the impossible"
11"She would finish this herself."
12"She vaulted the concrete, her"
13"She slid, mud coating her"
14"He stood by a rusted"
15"He pulled the heavy iron"
16"She caught the edge of"
17"She wrenched it back."
18"She stepped in."
19"She retrieved a tactical flashlight,"
ratio0.325
33.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount144
totalSentences169
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots slammed"
1"Quinn gritted her teeth, ignoring"
2"She forced her legs to"
3"She hit the crates, hands"
4"A splinter dug into her"
5"She ignored it."
6"The shout vanished under the"
7"The figure didn't flinch."
8"They hooked a left down"
9"Quinn skidded around the corner,"
10"Her sharp jaw set like"
11"The runner wore a heavy"
12"He reached a chain-link fence"
13"The suspect hit the mesh."
14"Quinn reached the fence a"
15"She jammed the toe of"
16"The metal bit into her"
17"She climbed, military precision overriding"
18"The suspect was already halfway"
19"Quinn checked the worn leather"
ratio0.852
88.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences169
matches
0"Even Quinn couldn't explain how"
1"If the clique was involved"
2"Because they had walked blind"
ratio0.018
70.52% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences79
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Quinn gritted her teeth, ignoring the stinging rain plastering her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair to her skull."
1"Eighteen years on the force, decorated, respected, and she was chasing a ghost who moved faster than an Olympic sprinter."
2"The runner wore a heavy canvas jacket that should have weighed him down, yet he danced over the uneven cobblestones of the backstreet."
3"It meant explaining the impossible physics she'd witnessed back at the Raven's Nest, where this perp had slipped out of a locked back room that had no other exi…"
4"Makeshift stalls lined the walls, illuminated by lanterns that burned with flames of unnatural colors—violet, sickly green, blood orange."
5"Eyes that reflected the lantern light like cats focused on her."
6"The salt-and-pepper hair, the military bearing, the eyes that had seen enough death to fill a cemetery."
7"Her eyes locked on the runner, who was now scrambling backward, knocking over a stack of cages containing fluttering, winged lizards."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice dropping to a dangerous calm"
1"Quinn said, her voice echoing in the tunnel"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"the guard grunted (grunt)"
1"Quinn lied (lie)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.2
82.0662%