Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXYDQ2KJ3N5M42ASCP748Y

Run Details

Duration:
17.7s
Cost:
$0.008135
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain fell in sheets that turned the London streets into rivers of neon and shadow. Detective Harlow Quinn moved through it with the efficiency of someone who'd spent two decades chasing people through worse weather than this. Her worn leather watch caught the glow of a traffic light as she checked the time—11:47 PM. The suspect had bolted from the Raven's Nest seven minutes ago, and Quinn had been on his heels ever since. She'd been nursing a drink at the bar for two hours, watching. Watching the way the bartender moved, watching the patrons who came and went through a door marked "Private," watching for anything that might connect this place to the operation she'd been building a case against for eighteen months. When the suspect—a lean man with wire-rimmed glasses and nervous hands—spotted her, recognition flickered across his face like a fault line cracking open. He'd bolted. Now his trainers splashed through puddles on Old Compton Street, his dark jacket a blur in the downpour. Quinn kept pace, her breathing steady and controlled. Her lungs didn't burn. Her legs didn't fail. This was what her body had been trained for, what it had been honed into across nearly two decades of Metropolitan Police service. The suspect took a hard left onto Charing Cross Road, his slip-on trainers losing traction on the wet pavement. He nearly went down, caught himself against the shuttered window of a bookshop, kept moving. Quinn closed the distance. She could almost read the panic radiating from him now—in the way his head snapped back to check her position, in the jerking quality of his movements. He wasn't a runner. That much was obvious. A runner had rhythm, had pacing. This man was pure adrenaline and desperation. The street opened up before them, the bulk of the British Museum looming dark and monolithic to their left. The suspect's breath came in ragged gasps now. Quinn matched his pace without effort, her own breathing still measured, still under control. Let him tire himself out. Let him make a mistake. But then he turned down a narrow alley she hadn't anticipated, cutting between buildings toward the sound of the Underground. His feet found the stairs before she could stop him, and he descended into darkness with the kind of blind panic that only came when a person had nowhere else to go. Quinn took the stairs after him, her eyes adjusting to the dim emergency lighting. The station was closed—the security gates locked up for the night—but the suspect had already disappeared deeper into the tunnels. The sound of his footsteps echoed off the tiled walls, multiplying themselves until Quinn couldn't tell if there was one set or a dozen. She navigated by instinct and training, moving through the main platform toward the tunnel mouth. The air changed here, becoming thick and strange. Electric, almost. The kind of air that came before a summer storm, heavy with pressure and static electricity. Except there was no summer storm underground. There was just this sudden wrongness that made the hair on the back of her neck stand up. The suspect's footsteps had stopped. Quinn slowed her approach, her hand moving instinctively toward the Glock holstered at her hip. She pushed through the tunnel entrance, her eyes straining against the darkness. The emergency lighting didn't penetrate this far. She pulled out her torch, thumbed it on. The beam caught him first—pressed against the tunnel wall about fifty meters ahead, his chest heaving. Beyond him, the tunnel opened into something that shouldn't exist. A cavern. Impossibly large, impossibly detailed. Lanterns hung from chains that disappeared into shadow above. Market stalls lined the space in organized rows, their wares glinting with an oily iridescence that made Quinn's eyes water. People moved between them with deliberate purpose, their features too indistinct in the flickering light to quite make out. The suspect's mouth opened. For a moment, she thought he might call out for help. Instead, he turned and bolted straight into the Market. Quinn's hand tightened on her torch. Her other hand rested on her weapon. She'd made a career out of calculated risks, out of knowing exactly which odds she could beat. This was not an odds situation. This was the kind of moment that had cost her partner Morris his life three years ago—the moment when the case stopped being about crime and started being about something else entirely. Something that didn't follow the rules. Something that didn't answer to jurisdiction or procedure. She took a step forward. The air changed again, becoming almost solid. Her breath caught. The lantern light seemed to pulse, casting everything into alternating shadow and glow. Faces turned toward her from the Market—faces that registered her presence with an intensity that felt almost physical. A woman in a coat covered in what looked like bones. A man whose skin seemed to shimmer with iridescence. Others, too many to process, all watching. The suspect had stopped running. He stood at the edge of the Market proper, gesturing frantically toward her, saying something she couldn't hear over the strange hum that seemed to emanate from the space itself. Quinn's jaw clenched. She could go back up. She could call for backup, get a warrant, handle this properly. Officially. The way she'd been trained to handle things. Or she could follow the suspect into the Market and find out what connection ran between this place and the Raven's Nest. What connection ran between this place and the death of Morris, and the supernatural element that had haunted her understanding of that case ever since. Her boot found the cavern floor. The moment she stepped fully into the Market's light, the temperature dropped. Her breath came out in white plumes. The crowd shifted, conversations stopping mid-sentence as they watched the woman in the soaked coat and the weapon at her hip move deeper into their space. The suspect backed away slowly, his hands raised, still trying to communicate something with frantic gestures. Behind him, a man emerged from between two market stalls—tall, composed, with the bearing of someone who'd seen enough of the world's strange corners to be surprised by nothing. The man's eyes locked onto Quinn's with unsettling directness. "Detective," he said, his voice carrying across the Market with strange clarity. "You're following the wrong person."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1071
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1071
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"looming"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count2
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"navigated"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"calculated"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
11
word"jaw clenched"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"looming"
2"measured"
3"footsteps"
4"echoed"
5"navigated"
6"electric"
7"glinting"
8"calculated"
9"pulse"
10"intensity"
11"jaw clenched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1058
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.91% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1051
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.14
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Market"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow1
Quinn12
Raven2
Nest2
Old1
Compton1
Street1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Charing1
Cross1
Road1
British1
Museum1
Underground1
Glock1
Market7
Morris2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Police"
4"Museum"
5"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Old"
2"Compton"
3"Street"
4"Charing"
5"Cross"
6"Road"
7"Market"
globalScore0.929
windowScore1
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like bones"
1"hum that seemed to emanate from the space itself"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1058
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean46
std23.8
cv0.517
sampleLengths
075
175
257
365
421
551
652
758
866
947
1080
1115
129
1382
145
1568
1635
1728
1847
1951
2045
219
2217
92.73% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences84
matches
0"been trained"
1"been honed"
2"was closed"
3"been trained"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs173
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences85
ratio0.094
matches
0"Her worn leather watch caught the glow of a traffic light as she checked the time—11:47 PM."
1"When the suspect—a lean man with wire-rimmed glasses and nervous hands—spotted her, recognition flickered across his face like a fault line cracking open."
2"She could almost read the panic radiating from him now—in the way his head snapped back to check her position, in the jerking quality of his movements."
3"The station was closed—the security gates locked up for the night—but the suspect had already disappeared deeper into the tunnels."
4"The beam caught him first—pressed against the tunnel wall about fifty meters ahead, his chest heaving."
5"This was the kind of moment that had cost her partner Morris his life three years ago—the moment when the case stopped being about crime and started being about something else entirely."
6"Faces turned toward her from the Market—faces that registered her presence with an intensity that felt almost physical."
7"Behind him, a man emerged from between two market stalls—tall, composed, with the bearing of someone who'd seen enough of the world's strange corners to be surprised by nothing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1064
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03101503759398496
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.013157894736842105
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean12.45
std8.24
cv0.662
sampleLengths
016
122
217
320
412
538
623
72
818
98
104
114
1223
1319
1415
154
1627
174
184
196
207
2119
228
2314
245
255
2620
2732
2814
2920
3024
3115
328
332
3416
357
3618
375
3815
3912
407
418
4216
4310
442
454
469
4720
4819
494
54.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.38823529411764707
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners33
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"Impossibly large, impossibly detailed."
1"Instead, he turned and bolted"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences80
matches
0"Her worn leather watch caught"
1"She'd been nursing a drink"
2"Her lungs didn't burn."
3"Her legs didn't fail."
4"He nearly went down, caught"
5"She could almost read the"
6"He wasn't a runner."
7"His feet found the stairs"
8"She navigated by instinct and"
9"She pushed through the tunnel"
10"She pulled out her torch,"
11"Her other hand rested on"
12"She'd made a career out"
13"She took a step forward."
14"Her breath caught."
15"He stood at the edge"
16"She could go back up."
17"She could call for backup,"
18"Her boot found the cavern"
19"Her breath came out in"
ratio0.263
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences80
matches
0"The rain fell in sheets"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn moved through"
2"Her worn leather watch caught"
3"The suspect had bolted from"
4"She'd been nursing a drink"
5"Quinn kept pace, her breathing"
6"Her lungs didn't burn."
7"Her legs didn't fail."
8"This was what her body"
9"The suspect took a hard"
10"He nearly went down, caught"
11"Quinn closed the distance."
12"She could almost read the"
13"He wasn't a runner."
14"That much was obvious."
15"A runner had rhythm, had"
16"This man was pure adrenaline"
17"The street opened up before"
18"The suspect's breath came in"
19"Quinn matched his pace without"
ratio0.8
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Now his trainers splashed through"
ratio0.013
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The rain fell in sheets that turned the London streets into rivers of neon and shadow."
1"Detective Harlow Quinn moved through it with the efficiency of someone who'd spent two decades chasing people through worse weather than this."
2"Quinn took the stairs after him, her eyes adjusting to the dim emergency lighting."
3"The kind of air that came before a summer storm, heavy with pressure and static electricity."
4"Market stalls lined the space in organized rows, their wares glinting with an oily iridescence that made Quinn's eyes water."
5"Faces turned toward her from the Market—faces that registered her presence with an intensity that felt almost physical."
6"He stood at the edge of the Market proper, gesturing frantically toward her, saying something she couldn't hear over the strange hum that seemed to emanate from…"
7"What connection ran between this place and the death of Morris, and the supernatural element that had haunted her understanding of that case ever since."
8"Behind him, a man emerged from between two market stalls—tall, composed, with the bearing of someone who'd seen enough of the world's strange corners to be surp…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, his voice carrying across the Market with strange clarity"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.9381%