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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXYHM5K7XNXWBBBN061FPR
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.5 397B A17B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
6m 32s
Cost:
$0.004446
Provider:
AtlasCloud
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
92.35%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
77.05%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
99.35%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
50.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
31.31%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
19.05%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
25.71%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
54.29%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
88.3035%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The door swung inward before
Rory could engage the lock.
Lucien Moreau filled the narrow
frame, the scent of expensive tobacco and cold rain clinging to his charcoal suit. He did not step inside.
He simply waited, one gloved
hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane.
Rory gripped the edge of
the door, her knuckles white. You cannot be here.
London is a small city
for those who
know
where to
look
. He stepped forward. She stepped back.
The heel of her boot
caught on the uneven floorboard of the hallway, a
familiar
trip hazard in the cramped space above Silas' bar.
The smell of stale beer
and fried onions drifted up through the floorboards, mixing with the crisp, sterile aroma radiating from Lucien.
He closed the door behind
him with a soft click, engaging the chain himself. Three deadbolts would not keep him out. She knew that. Why did you come? Business.
He moved past her into
the living area. His movement was fluid, predatory, the cane tapping a
rhythmic
beat against the worn wooden floor. He stopped by the window, looking out at the street below, though the curtains
were drawn
.
He turned then, the heterochromatic
eyes catching the dim light from the kitchen. One amber, one black. Like a spoiled coin. You
look
well, Rory. For someone who vanished without a word. I left a note.
A text message saying do
not follow me is not a note.
It is a declaration of
war.
He walked towards the small
table cluttered with delivery receipts and law textbooks. He picked up a pen, twirled it between gloved fingers, and set it down again. Precise. Deliberate. I am not at war. No. You are in hiding. There is a difference. Rory crossed her arms, protecting the left wrist where the crescent scar hid beneath her sleeve.
She felt the phantom itch
of it whenever he was near. He knew about the scar. He knew about the accident. He knew about everything she had
tried to
bury in Cardiff. What do you want, Lucien? The cane tapped once. Hard. Evan is in London. The air left the room. Rory did not flinch. She had trained herself not to flinch around him, around anyone who smelled of power and danger. But the name hit her like a physical blow to the sternum. He is dead. People like Evan do not die. They evolve. He has made inquiries. About you. About the Golden Empress. About this building. Lucien moved closer. The distance between them shrank until she could see the weave of his tailored jacket, the sharp line of his jaw. He smelled of danger, but also of safety. A paradox she had spent six months trying to forget. Why tell me? Because you owe me. I paid you. You paid for information. You did not pay for protection. He reached out. Rory tensed, ready to strike, ready to run. He did not touch her face. He touched her sleeve. He pulled the fabric back
slightly
, exposing the pale skin of her wrist. The crescent scar gleamed white in the low light. His gloved thumb brushed the edge of it. A
electric
shock ran up her arm, settling heavy in her chest. You left something behind when you ran. I left everything behind. Not everything. He released her arm. The fabric snapped back into place. He turned away, walking towards the kitchen counter where a knife block sat next to a bowl of fruit. He ignored the knives. He picked up an apple, red and shiny, and tossed it in his hand. He knows you are here. He knows you work delivery. He knows your routes. Then I will quit. You cannot quit a shadow. Lucien bit into the apple. The crunch sounded like a bone breaking in the
silence
. He chewed
slowly
, watching her over the rim of the fruit. I require your assistance. I am not a fixer. I deliver noodles. You studied law. You
know
how to read contracts. You
know
how to find loopholes. You
know
how to lie to a judge without blinking. That was a lifetime ago. It was yesterday. Time is relative when you are running. He dropped the apple core into the bin. It landed with a wet thud. There is a package. It needs to be moved from Brick Lane to Kensington. Tonight. No. It is not a request. Rory stepped into his space. She was a head shorter, but she held her ground. She looked up into those mismatched eyes, searching for the demon beneath the suit. She found only cold calculation. You said Evan is here. You said I am in danger.
Now you want me to
run errands for you? I want you to survive.
If you help me, I
keep him away. If you refuse... He let the sentence hang. The threat was unnecessary. They both knew the stakes. Lucien Moreau did not make empty promises.
If he said he would
keep Evan away, he would.
If he said he would
walk away, he would leave her to the wolves. What is in the package? Something that belongs to me. Why use me?
Because Evan is looking for
a man in a suit with a cane. He is not looking for a delivery girl on a scooter. Lucien checked a platinum
watch
on his wrist. The metal gleamed against the dark fabric of his sleeve. We leave in ten minutes. I did not say yes. You said yes when you opened the door. He turned towards the hallway, the cane sweeping out to hook around the leg of a chair, pulling it out of his path without looking. Efficient. Ruthless. Get your jacket. The night is cold. Rory stood frozen. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird trapped in a cage. She looked at the door, then at the man who held her life in his gloved hands. She thought of Evan. She thought of the blood on the floor of her old flat in Cardiff. She thought of the way Lucien had looked at her that night, before she ran. She walked to the coat rack. She pulled down her leather jacket.
If this goes wrong, I
am leaving you there. Lucien smiled. It did not reach his eyes. If this goes wrong, Rory, there will be nowhere left to go. A heavy thud came from the floor below. Silas' bar. Glass
shattered
. Voices shouted, muffled by the ceiling. Not the usual Friday night brawl. This
was organised
. Sharp. Violent. Lucien's head snapped towards the ceiling. The amber eye widened. The black eye remained still. He is early. He moved to the door, hand going to the cane handle. The mechanism clicked. The blade slid free an inch, catching the light. Stay behind me. The front door shuddered. A heavy boot kicked the wood from the other side. The chain rattled. The lock groaned. Rory backed away, her hand finding the heavy ceramic vase on the table. Lucien stood before the door, straight backed, ready. Open it, he whispered. What? Open the door. Before they break it down. The wood splintered around the lock. Another kick. Rory lunged forward and threw the lock. She stepped back. The door flew open. Three men stood in the hallway. Black masks. Heavy coats. Silver knives in their hands. Lucien stepped forward, the blade of his cane humming in the air. Gentlemen. You are late. The lead man raised his knife. Lucien moved faster. Steel met steel. Sparks flew in the dim hallway. Rory gripped the vase. She waited for her opening. The fight spilled into the room, knocking over the table. The receipts scattered like snow. One of the men broke away from Lucien. He turned towards her. He raised the knife. Rory swung.
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2/19/2026, 12:28:12 PM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
1
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
0
tagDensity
1
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
92.35%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1307
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"slowly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
77.05%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1307
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"familiar"
count
1
1
word
"rhythmic"
count
1
2
word
"electric"
count
1
3
word
"silence"
count
1
4
word
"efficient"
count
1
5
word
"shattered"
count
1
highlights
0
"familiar"
1
"rhythmic"
2
"electric"
3
"silence"
4
"efficient"
5
"shattered"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
197
matches
(empty)
99.35%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
5
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
197
filterMatches
0
"look"
1
"know"
2
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"tried to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
198
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
25
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1307
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
2
unquotedAttributions
1
matches
0
"Open it, he whispered."
50.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
60
wordCount
1303
uniqueNames
13
maxNameDensity
1.15
worstName
"You"
maxWindowNameDensity
3.5
worstWindowName
"You"
discoveredNames
Rory
13
Moreau
2
Lucien
14
Cardiff
2
London
2
Evan
6
Golden
1
Empress
1
Brick
1
Lane
1
Kensington
1
Friday
1
You
15
persons
0
"Rory"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Lucien"
3
"Evan"
4
"You"
places
0
"Cardiff"
1
"London"
2
"Brick"
3
"Lane"
4
"Kensington"
globalScore
0.924
windowScore
0.5
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
87
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"sounded like a bone breaking in the silenc"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1307
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
198
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
84
mean
15.56
std
15.86
cv
1.019
sampleLengths
0
48
1
10
2
4
3
12
4
66
5
10
6
4
7
1
8
61
9
11
10
4
11
18
12
30
13
5
14
9
15
48
16
5
17
5
18
4
19
38
20
3
21
21
22
42
23
3
24
4
25
3
26
10
27
63
28
7
29
4
30
2
31
47
32
14
33
4
34
5
35
26
36
4
37
8
38
25
39
5
40
10
41
14
42
15
43
1
44
5
45
34
46
20
47
16
48
45
49
5
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
197
matches
0
"were drawn"
1
"was organised"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
257
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
198
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
102
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
2
adverbRatio
0.0196078431372549
lyAdverbCount
1
lyAdverbRatio
0.00980392156862745
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
198
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
198
mean
6.6
std
4.66
cv
0.706
sampleLengths
0
10
1
19
2
5
3
14
4
10
5
4
6
12
7
3
8
3
9
24
10
22
11
14
12
7
13
3
14
4
15
1
16
8
17
16
18
16
19
13
20
4
21
4
22
4
23
7
24
4
25
12
26
6
27
13
28
15
29
1
30
1
31
5
32
1
33
4
34
4
35
16
36
11
37
5
38
5
39
11
40
5
41
4
42
1
43
4
44
5
45
4
46
17
47
12
48
3
49
6
31.31%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
37
diversityRatio
0.29292929292929293
totalSentences
198
uniqueOpeners
58
19.05%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
175
matches
0
"Then I will quit."
ratio
0.006
25.71%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
85
totalSentences
175
matches
0
"He did not step inside."
1
"He simply waited, one gloved"
2
"You cannot be here."
3
"He stepped forward."
4
"She stepped back."
5
"He closed the door behind"
6
"She knew that."
7
"He moved past her into"
8
"His movement was fluid, predatory,"
9
"He stopped by the window,"
10
"He turned then, the heterochromatic"
11
"You look well, Rory."
12
"I left a note."
13
"It is a declaration of"
14
"He walked towards the small"
15
"He picked up a pen,"
16
"I am not at war."
17
"You are in hiding."
18
"She felt the phantom itch"
19
"He knew about the scar."
ratio
0.486
54.29%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
142
totalSentences
175
matches
0
"The door swung inward before"
1
"Lucien Moreau filled the narrow"
2
"He did not step inside."
3
"He simply waited, one gloved"
4
"Rory gripped the edge of"
5
"You cannot be here."
6
"London is a small city"
7
"He stepped forward."
8
"She stepped back."
9
"The heel of her boot"
10
"The smell of stale beer"
11
"He closed the door behind"
12
"She knew that."
13
"He moved past her into"
14
"His movement was fluid, predatory,"
15
"He stopped by the window,"
16
"He turned then, the heterochromatic"
17
"You look well, Rory."
18
"I left a note."
19
"A text message saying do"
ratio
0.811
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
10
totalSentences
175
matches
0
"Because you owe me."
1
"Now you want me to"
2
"If you help me, I"
3
"If you refuse..."
4
"If he said he would"
5
"If he said he would"
6
"Because Evan is looking for"
7
"If this goes wrong, I"
8
"If this goes wrong, Rory,"
9
"Before they break it down."
ratio
0.057
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
46
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
1
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
88.3035%