"She had wrapped it in the cuff of her coat and told herself it was nothing—old metal warming from the body, nerves over a silly old thing."
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"She checked her phone; the lock screen announced a time that made no sense, minutes stretched into hours and then rewound as if the world had hiccupped."
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"She had come for a reason: the pulse in the pendant, for one, and the scrap of handwriting left in the bottom of a takeaway bag from Yu-Fei's—Isolde's grove—middle of the night—if you want to see it."
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"The wildflowers at her feet were shining like eyes; their petals caught light she could not place and hummed faintly as if vibrating with a note beneath hearing."
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"She wanted to laugh—out loud, bright and ridiculous—and the laugh died in her mouth because there was no movement but the edges of sight kept twitching."
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"A sound scraped the air—too high and even to be a human voice."
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"Something shifted at the edge of the clearing—no shape, more a suggestion of movement—leaves lifting as if a hand had passed across them."
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"Something laughed beneath a branch—so soft it could have been the sound of damp fabric rubbing—and the laugh had layers, like a chorus sung in very small voices."
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"Her own breathing sounded wrong—too loud, too wet—amplified by something that made the small noises of the night giant."
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"Everything outside it belonged to one logic; inside, another law held."
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"For a moment the grove inverted—stems like bones, sky the colour of old spoons; then it settled like a breath released."
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"They were not human eyes—no pupil she recognised—but they held motion."
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"Time shifted perceptibly; the watch on her wrist crawled forward then snapped back."
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"Somewhere, something tapped a code on wood—three taps, two, three—as though making a list and then erasing it."
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"A small, thin hand—or the suggestion of one—emerged, knuckles pale, tapered fingers curved like the root of a fern."
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"The pendant screamed—no, not screamed, a sharp lighting of heat—and a pain like hunger pressed at her sternum."
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"Something touched her arm—light, grazing, not heavy enough to lay a hand but precise enough to make the hairs along her forearm stand like a row of soldiering cilia."
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"The standing stones rose like ribs from the earth, ancient oaks wrapped around them as if protecting something small and dangerous."
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"The air smelled of moss and something sweet and coppery that made the back of her tongue tingle."
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"Her scar itched under the strap of her bag as if something small and patient had noticed her."
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"At her first step inside the circle, birds that had slept in the deeper branches woke and listened, one calling once and then quiet."
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"The wildflowers at her feet were shining like eyes; their petals caught light she could not place and hummed faintly as if vibrating with a note beneath hearing…"
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"Carved symbols she had not noticed at the entrance crawled across the weathered faces in ink-thin relief: lines that did not belong to oak grain, words that see…"
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"Not faces in the pattern of knots, but real faces, small and close, eyes closed, mouths moving as if chanting."
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"When she tried to catch what they said with her ears her skull filled with soundless letters, a script of pressure that pushed against her teeth."
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"Her shadow stretched long and wrong and then doubled beside her, a second silhouette that moved a beat out of sync."
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"Her own breathing sounded wrong—too loud, too wet—amplified by something that made the small noises of the night giant."
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"Somewhere, something tapped a code on wood—three taps, two, three—as though making a list and then erasing it."
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"At the farthest stone something moved with the deliberation of things that had been awake a long time."
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"The standing stones cast shadows that stepped and repositioned themselves, arranging a corridor that pointed at her."