Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXYWMEV6PDTP70AD0JM79W

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Duration:
34.2s
Cost:
$0.030666
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bass-heavy thrum of some electronic track rattled the bottles behind the bar as Rory shouldered through the Friday night crowd at The Raven's Nest. She'd come down for a quick drink before collapsing into bed, her legs aching from twelve hours of weaving through London traffic on Eva's ancient bicycle, delivering takeaway to people who never looked her in the eye. She claimed her usual spot at the far end of the counter where the brass rail had worn smooth from decades of elbows. Silas caught her eye from across the bar, already reaching for the whisky before she'd opened her mouth. "Rough day?" "They're all rough." She pulled off her helmet, ran fingers through sweat-dampened hair. "But at least the tips were decent." He set the glass in front of her with that economical movement he had, nothing wasted. The signet ring on his right hand caught the amber light from the hanging fixtures. "Woman at table six keeps looking over here," he said quietly. Rory's hand froze halfway to the glass. Something in his tone made the hair on her neck stand up. "Blonde. Early twenties. Been nursing a gin and tonic for the last hour." Rory turned slowly on her stool. The crowd shifted, and through the gap she saw her. Megan Davies sat alone at a corner table, her champagne-blonde hair cut in one of those sharp bobs that cost more than Rory made in a week. She wore a cream blazer over a silk blouse, the kind of outfit that belonged in a boardroom, not a Soho bar that smelled like old wood and spilled lager. Their eyes met across the crowd. Megan's face shifted through surprise, recognition, something else Rory couldn't quite parse. Then she raised her hand in a small wave. "Fuck." Rory picked up her whisky and drained it. "Friend of yours?" "Was. Long time ago." She set the glass down harder than intended. "Cardiff." Megan stood, smoothing her skirt. She navigated the crowd with the same careful precision she'd used walking home from pubs twelve years ago, counting her steps, monitoring her posture, always aware of who was watching. "Rory Carter." Megan stopped a careful distance away, like they were acquaintances bumping into each other at a supermarket rather than best friends who'd once shared everything from clothes to secrets to boys. "Jesus. I didn't know you were in London." "Yeah, well." Rory gestured at the bar, at herself, at the whole mess of her life. "Here I am." "You look—" Megan caught herself. "Like I've been run over? Cheers." Rory signalled to Silas for another. "You look like you're about to prosecute someone for insider trading." A flicker of something crossed Megan's face. Pain, maybe. Or irritation. "Solicitor, actually. Corporate law." She set her bag on the bar, a designer thing with subtle logos Rory vaguely recognized from shop windows she'd never entered. "Clifford Chance. Made junior partner last month." "Congratulations." The word tasted like copper. Silas placed the second whisky in front of Rory and gave her a look that said he was watching, that he'd step in if needed. She gave him the smallest shake of her head. "Can I—" Megan gestured at the empty stool beside her. Rory shrugged. Megan sat, arranged herself with that same careful precision. Up close, Rory could see the makeup, expertly applied to hide the shadows under her eyes. The manicured nails. The tennis bracelet at her wrist that caught the light when she moved. "So," Megan said. "Delivery driver?" "Bike courier. Restaurant called the Golden Empress. The owner's decent, pays me cash, doesn't ask questions." "Right." Megan twisted the bracelet around her wrist. "That's... good." The silence stretched between them, filled with years and distance and all the things they weren't saying. Someone fed the jukebox and Bowie started singing about changes, which felt obscenely on the nose. "Remember when we said we'd take over London together?" Megan's laugh came out brittle. "Get a flat in Camden, go to all the clubs, make our mark on the world." "I remember you said that. I was going to write." Rory traced a finger through the condensation on her glass. "Going to be the next great something-or-other. Probably would've starved in a garret being all tragic and artistic." "You were brilliant, though. That short story you wrote, the one about the girl who collected other people's memories? The lecturer said it was the best thing she'd read in twenty years." "Yeah, well. Turns out being brilliant at twenty doesn't mean shit when you're twenty-five and hiding from your ex in a flat above a bar." Megan's head snapped up. "Evan?" "Who else?" "Christ, Rory." Megan's hand moved toward her, then stopped, hovering in the space between them. "I didn't know. I would have—" "What? Sent a card?" The words landed like a slap. Megan withdrew her hand, wrapped it around her abandoned gin and tonic instead. "That's not fair." "Isn't it?" Rory turned to face her fully. "You got into LSE, remember? Full scholarship, everything you'd worked for. And you just... vanished. Changed your number, your email. I tried to find you for months, Meg. Months." "I know." Megan's voice dropped to barely above a whisper. "I know, and I'm sorry. I just—I couldn't bring Cardiff with me. Any of it." "Including me." "Especially you." Megan met her eyes, and there it was, the weight they'd been circling around. "Because you knew me. The real me. The girl whose dad drank himself unconscious every Friday, whose mum pretended everything was fine while he broke furniture and promises. You knew I shoplifted that blazer for my interview, that I'd practised my accent for hours to sound less Valley, less poor, less everything I actually was." Her fingers tightened around the glass. "You knew all my ugly parts, and I couldn't—I needed to be someone else. Someone clean. Someone who'd always been headed for places like Clifford Chance, who'd never nicked eyeliner from Boots or snogged Jamie Morrison behind the cricket pavilion just to feel something other than afraid." Rory stared at her old friend's carefully constructed face, this stranger wearing Megan's features. "So you erased yourself." "I built myself. There's a difference." But Megan's voice wavered on the last word. "Is there?" Rory picked up her whisky, didn't drink it. "Because from where I'm sitting, you just swapped one performance for another. At least when we were seventeen, you knew who you were pretending for." Megan flinched. Good. Let her feel something other than satisfied with her partner-track position and her expensive haircut. "And what about you?" Megan's voice gained an edge. "Delivering Chinese food, living in some grotty flat, running away from your ex instead of pressing charges like your barrister father could've helped you do. Is that better? Is that more authentic?" The whisky in Rory's hand trembled. "At least I'm not pretending to be something I'm not." "Aren't you?" Megan leaned closer. "Where's the girl who was going to write novels? Who had opinions about everything and wasn't afraid to argue with professors twice her age? You think I'm the only one who changed?"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"The word tasted like [like]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.426
leniency0.852
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.074
87.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"navigated"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"constructed"
count1
8
word"wavered"
count1
9
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"navigated"
2"flicker"
3"silence"
4"traced"
5"whisper"
6"weight"
7"constructed"
8"wavered"
9"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1194
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount683
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity3.07
worstName"Megan"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Megan"
discoveredNames
Rory17
Friday1
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Eva1
Davies1
Soho1
Megan21
Silas3
Bowie1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Davies"
3"Megan"
4"Silas"
5"Bowie"
places
0"Friday"
1"Raven"
2"London"
3"Soho"
globalScore0
windowScore0
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like old wood and spilled lager"
1"quite parse"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1194
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"watching, that he'd"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean22.11
std16.42
cv0.742
sampleLengths
062
141
22
320
431
511
619
713
816
957
1027
119
123
1313
1435
1541
1619
175
1823
1911
2033
216
2234
2310
2443
255
2616
2710
2833
2930
3038
3132
3225
335
342
3521
364
3719
383
3937
4025
412
4271
436
4447
4514
464
4714
4835
4918
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
24.56% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs114
matches
0"was watching"
1"was watching"
2"weren't saying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences92
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount687
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.034934497816593885
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.011644832605531296
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean12.98
std10.53
cv0.812
sampleLengths
025
137
223
318
42
513
67
716
815
911
107
1112
1213
136
1410
1527
1630
176
1812
199
209
213
2212
231
245
2530
2633
278
2816
293
305
3112
3211
337
342
352
3626
377
386
3925
409
4110
422
439
4416
453
4613
473
482
4916
96.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.6304347826086957
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners58
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"Then she raised her hand"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences55
matches
0"She'd come down for a"
1"She claimed her usual spot"
2"She pulled off her helmet,"
3"He set the glass in"
4"he said quietly"
5"She wore a cream blazer"
6"Their eyes met across the"
7"She set the glass down"
8"She navigated the crowd with"
9"She set her bag on"
10"She gave him the smallest"
11"Her fingers tightened around the"
ratio0.218
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences55
matches
0"The bass-heavy thrum of some"
1"She'd come down for a"
2"She claimed her usual spot"
3"Silas caught her eye from"
4"She pulled off her helmet,"
5"He set the glass in"
6"The signet ring on his"
7"he said quietly"
8"Rory's hand froze halfway to"
9"Something in his tone made"
10"Rory turned slowly on her"
11"The crowd shifted, and through"
12"Megan Davies sat alone at"
13"She wore a cream blazer"
14"Their eyes met across the"
15"Megan's face shifted through surprise,"
16"Rory picked up her whisky"
17"She set the glass down"
18"Megan stood, smoothing her skirt."
19"She navigated the crowd with"
ratio0.927
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She'd come down for a quick drink before collapsing into bed, her legs aching from twelve hours of weaving through London traffic on Eva's ancient bicycle, deli…"
1"Megan Davies sat alone at a corner table, her champagne-blonde hair cut in one of those sharp bobs that cost more than Rory made in a week."
2"She navigated the crowd with the same careful precision she'd used walking home from pubs twelve years ago, counting her steps, monitoring her posture, always a…"
3"Silas placed the second whisky in front of Rory and gave her a look that said he was watching, that he'd step in if needed."
4"The tennis bracelet at her wrist that caught the light when she moved."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.037
leniency0.074
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.9726%